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As a gamer, playing as a monster was something I liked. Though, very few games (that I know of) had this setting. And now, DreamThree has created a series that would eventually come to be known as a cult classic in WN. A monster game protagonist in a VR universe. What else do you need? Start reading right now!
This novel is really good, it's sheer quality makes me want even faster updates, anyways here's my review. Writing Quality - ★★★★★ I've read many novels here on the platform although I'm pretty new I can defintely say that your novels are one of the best in this platform, the quality of this novel in writing is amazing. Story Development - ★★★★★ The development of your novel in my opinion is great, not too slow and not too fast. The MC isn't the strongest/OP right away but he gradually develops although not too slow which I like. Character Design - ★★★★★ Although the story hasn't finished exploring all the mysteries of the MC and his college life I can safely say that everything is consistent and good from the emotions shown to the mysteries that are yet to be revealed. Updating Stability - ★★★★ Although the updates are fast, consistent and contain quality they are not the fastest on the platform. But don't take me wrong, the updates are consistent and have quality which matters over quantity. World Background - ★★★★ VR game backgrounds are all alike/similar to each other but I frankly love what you did with the story, especially the mystery about the MC's life and who he really is, I'm looking forward to when that'll be revealed.
Firstly, I love it. Good character development and story building. I never really had the Feeling that there was missing something etc. There are rarely any grammatical error or something of that sort. Great work. But Author, are you dead? All your books are on hold for over a month. Please come back. The Readers need you. I am gonna change the Review on uploading when New contet is realised.
Author sama it's been a month did you drop the book I really like this novel please continue
Favorite novel so far with great plot, profession, and character development while still keeping our favorite MCs traits. Pls tell us when you might start continuing this again or an estimate.
As Gamer i would say it's great, the character design is pretty mysterious and i like it. Story development is great and the only thing the concerns me is the update stability otherwise it's great
Great novel love the story mc seems just the tiniest bit too op compared to other characters but it's nice to see he at least gets a bit of competition. can't wait for more chapters to read keep it up author. 👍
These MMORPG type novels are a good innovation and great ideas for the future generations to imply on. These are indirectly making the future bright by larady foreshadowing the events
This is probably my favorite novel I’ve ever read to be honest. I love the characters and the way the Mc grows stronger isn’t overwhelming for the reader to keep track of. My only problem with it is that the author doesn’t update it often. Author can I ask why this is?
Gonna be real ain’t the biggest fan of the mc but the plot hard Carrie’s the book, combining MMORPG and a monster evolution genres is pretty interesting but the comedy doesn’t really hit, for me personally, and jezz dying felt forced and kind of cringed me out with how much the mc overreacted, I personally prefer a bit more of a cold blooded mc, plus his intelligence hurts me sometimes, mc makes questionable decisions and is a bit of a scaredy cat to say the least, am only around 35 chapters in tho so hopefully gets better
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Given the prospect as well as potential it will be long one, but will you be dropping it in the middle? Otherwise reading a downgraded version of the overgeared and even not complete wil be waste of time
I love this novel. Unlike most novels on this platform, it can convey the emotions to us. Especially the MC's emotional train with his tragic past, it is a novel that you will get lost in every word. It made me wonder about the author's other novels as well. I hope the author continues to achieve the same success.
I was wondering why there is no more good VRMMORPG Novel ongoing. Moonlight sculptor is finish, waiting for a trad for taming master, so Overgeard is the only and real good one ongoing... I just find 2 new VRMMORPG with a good potential, and this one is in this two. I'm sure the author know the 3 novels above and i hope he can find an interessting original story. For the moment we can say "it's really good but a little "déjà vu"" but it It's just the beginning and it's better than most of the others VRMMORPG ongoing so give it a try and thank to the author for his work. PS : The only bad thing is the number of chapter release each week, drop the other novel ! [img=update]
Writing quality is good, won't have trouble figuring out what you're reading or lose braincells in the process, only minor errors Cliche things for the genre, MC has a lot of luck Lots of 'coincidences' happen Looks like a setup for powers coming into the real world We've also seen the term 'metahuman' but no mention of powers associated with it Just try it yourself
I love this story incredibly. The MC is OP but doesn't change how he is, at least in any negative way. I love the world building and progression, and can't wait for more. Great work author!
First thing first, i only read up till' the 35 chapter. So, i can't say much. Every thing is great and has a lot of potential (it is too fast-paced for me though). Two things that irked me the most are the forced comedy and Jezzebeth's death. The forced comedy you can read it for yourself and see, it's not that bad though. The author don't give Jezze much screen time, and that sucks. When she died, we get some flashbacks of her time with the Mc. Like, if the author spend more time with her. Fleshing her out, giving her more life. The death would've been more impactful for us readers. The quality of the story would've been up a notch. I just hate characters with good potential get snuffed too early without shining.
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One of the best novels I've ever read, with a good background as well as good character development....so far so good, so keep up the good work👍💯🔥🔥🔥
Very good novel, I personally havent noticed any writing mistakes, the story is developing very well, the chracters are all interesting(imo), and the world background is good.
i've only read the first few chapters so i dont know how good this is but can someone tell me if this is inspired by overgeared bc some things seem similar to it
Great book and all, great writing with just a small amount of mistakes, only thing I havr against this novel is something that happens at chapter 22? Energy stops existing or somethingI’ honestly like to understand the reason why so and all, its almost 2 am so my brain cant understand anything, great novel tho. Keep up the good work!
I really liked this and also I'm gonna pause because I wanna read it when it hit 60 chapters so it will take long for me to finish it so yeah also please keep it up and yeah
Only read the first 20 chapters but I can tell this will be good one. The MC is funny and in my opinion experienced. I haven't seen any side characters yet but I have faith in the author that they will be good. The only negative that I have seen is there are a few typos here and there but nothing major.
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I have read about 30 chapters so far. I want to say that I really liked the development of the main character, namely that he is not immediately given a cheat ability to bend over, he also has his own problems that are interesting to watch. I also liked the purity of the update of the novel, and most of all I was struck by the author himself who can answer your question, I was very pleased as an avid MMORPG reader who has something to ask.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Bro did you got inspired by Overgeared novel your theme of starting chapters feel same as Overgeared............................................................................................................................................................................???
Flynn was a unique well established MC there is. He is great, just like the rest of the characters. Normally I don't like Gaming world novels but this one hooked me up right from the first chapter. Binge read this gem and you won't regret it.
I like the story ......................................................................................................................................
Have A Question? Ask in the comments. As for Harem/Non-harem - Yes, Harem. (read the note below synopsis.) Release schedule? 2ch/d after a few days of this review.
As a gamer, playing as a monster was something I liked. Though, very few games (that I know of) had this setting. And now, DreamThree has created a series that would eventually come to be known as a cult classic in WN. A monster game protagonist in a VR universe. What else do you need? Start reading right now!
This novel is really good, it's sheer quality makes me want even faster updates, anyways here's my review. Writing Quality - ★★★★★ I've read many novels here on the platform although I'm pretty new I can defintely say that your novels are one of the best in this platform, the quality of this novel in writing is amazing. Story Development - ★★★★★ The development of your novel in my opinion is great, not too slow and not too fast. The MC isn't the strongest/OP right away but he gradually develops although not too slow which I like. Character Design - ★★★★★ Although the story hasn't finished exploring all the mysteries of the MC and his college life I can safely say that everything is consistent and good from the emotions shown to the mysteries that are yet to be revealed. Updating Stability - ★★★★ Although the updates are fast, consistent and contain quality they are not the fastest on the platform. But don't take me wrong, the updates are consistent and have quality which matters over quantity. World Background - ★★★★ VR game backgrounds are all alike/similar to each other but I frankly love what you did with the story, especially the mystery about the MC's life and who he really is, I'm looking forward to when that'll be revealed.
Firstly, I love it. Good character development and story building. I never really had the Feeling that there was missing something etc. There are rarely any grammatical error or something of that sort. Great work. But Author, are you dead? All your books are on hold for over a month. Please come back. The Readers need you. I am gonna change the Review on uploading when New contet is realised.
Author sama it's been a month did you drop the book I really like this novel please continue
Favorite novel so far with great plot, profession, and character development while still keeping our favorite MCs traits. Pls tell us when you might start continuing this again or an estimate.
As Gamer i would say it's great, the character design is pretty mysterious and i like it. Story development is great and the only thing the concerns me is the update stability otherwise it's great
Great novel love the story mc seems just the tiniest bit too op compared to other characters but it's nice to see he at least gets a bit of competition. can't wait for more chapters to read keep it up author. 👍
These MMORPG type novels are a good innovation and great ideas for the future generations to imply on. These are indirectly making the future bright by larady foreshadowing the events
This is probably my favorite novel I’ve ever read to be honest. I love the characters and the way the Mc grows stronger isn’t overwhelming for the reader to keep track of. My only problem with it is that the author doesn’t update it often. Author can I ask why this is?
Gonna be real ain’t the biggest fan of the mc but the plot hard Carrie’s the book, combining MMORPG and a monster evolution genres is pretty interesting but the comedy doesn’t really hit, for me personally, and jezz dying felt forced and kind of cringed me out with how much the mc overreacted, I personally prefer a bit more of a cold blooded mc, plus his intelligence hurts me sometimes, mc makes questionable decisions and is a bit of a scaredy cat to say the least, am only around 35 chapters in tho so hopefully gets better
Revelar spoiler Given the prospect as well as potential it will be long one, but will you be dropping it in the middle? Otherwise reading a downgraded version of the overgeared and even not complete wil be waste of time
I love this novel. Unlike most novels on this platform, it can convey the emotions to us. Especially the MC's emotional train with his tragic past, it is a novel that you will get lost in every word. It made me wonder about the author's other novels as well. I hope the author continues to achieve the same success.
I was wondering why there is no more good VRMMORPG Novel ongoing. Moonlight sculptor is finish, waiting for a trad for taming master, so Overgeard is the only and real good one ongoing... I just find 2 new VRMMORPG with a good potential, and this one is in this two. I'm sure the author know the 3 novels above and i hope he can find an interessting original story. For the moment we can say "it's really good but a little "déjà vu"" but it It's just the beginning and it's better than most of the others VRMMORPG ongoing so give it a try and thank to the author for his work. PS : The only bad thing is the number of chapter release each week, drop the other novel ! [img=update]
Writing quality is good, won't have trouble figuring out what you're reading or lose braincells in the process, only minor errors Cliche things for the genre, MC has a lot of luck Lots of 'coincidences' happen Looks like a setup for powers coming into the real world We've also seen the term 'metahuman' but no mention of powers associated with it Just try it yourself
I love this story incredibly. The MC is OP but doesn't change how he is, at least in any negative way. I love the world building and progression, and can't wait for more. Great work author!
First thing first, i only read up till' the 35 chapter. So, i can't say much. Every thing is great and has a lot of potential (it is too fast-paced for me though). Two things that irked me the most are the forced comedy and Jezzebeth's death. The forced comedy you can read it for yourself and see, it's not that bad though. The author don't give Jezze much screen time, and that sucks. When she died, we get some flashbacks of her time with the Mc. Like, if the author spend more time with her. Fleshing her out, giving her more life. The death would've been more impactful for us readers. The quality of the story would've been up a notch. I just hate characters with good potential get snuffed too early without shining.
Revelar spoiler One of the best novels I've ever read, with a good background as well as good character development....so far so good, so keep up the good work👍💯🔥🔥🔥
Very good novel, I personally havent noticed any writing mistakes, the story is developing very well, the chracters are all interesting(imo), and the world background is good.
i've only read the first few chapters so i dont know how good this is but can someone tell me if this is inspired by overgeared bc some things seem similar to it
Great book and all, great writing with just a small amount of mistakes, only thing I havr against this novel is something that happens at chapter 22? Energy stops existing or somethingI’ honestly like to understand the reason why so and all, its almost 2 am so my brain cant understand anything, great novel tho. Keep up the good work!
I really liked this and also I'm gonna pause because I wanna read it when it hit 60 chapters so it will take long for me to finish it so yeah also please keep it up and yeah
Only read the first 20 chapters but I can tell this will be good one. The MC is funny and in my opinion experienced. I haven't seen any side characters yet but I have faith in the author that they will be good. The only negative that I have seen is there are a few typos here and there but nothing major.
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I have read about 30 chapters so far. I want to say that I really liked the development of the main character, namely that he is not immediately given a cheat ability to bend over, he also has his own problems that are interesting to watch. I also liked the purity of the update of the novel, and most of all I was struck by the author himself who can answer your question, I was very pleased as an avid MMORPG reader who has something to ask.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Bro did you got inspired by Overgeared novel your theme of starting chapters feel same as Overgeared............................................................................................................................................................................???
Flynn was a unique well established MC there is. He is great, just like the rest of the characters. Normally I don't like Gaming world novels but this one hooked me up right from the first chapter. Binge read this gem and you won't regret it.
I like the story ......................................................................................................................................
Have A Question? Ask in the comments. As for Harem/Non-harem - Yes, Harem. (read the note below synopsis.) Release schedule? 2ch/d after a few days of this review.