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Цікаво, напевно, дружити з мавпою 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻
တစ်ချို့အချိန်တွေကုန်ဖို့အတွက်ဖတ်လို့ရတယ်ဇာတ်လမ်းကပေါ့ပေါ့ပါးပါး နဲ့အချို့ဝတ္တုနဲ့မတူဘူး။လိုအပ်ချက်တွေရှိတယ် စာရေးဆရာက အသစ်ဖြစ်လို့ထင်တယ် ဆက်ပြီးရေးနေပါအားပေးနေတယ်
read the mtl. its amazing. the guy doesn't discriminate against anyone. white black brown red green yellow. as long as it's a girl he fks. heck he even impgnates wakanda queen and okayo the head guard
Tolong penulis sertakan bahwa copy paste menulis terjemahannya karena saya sudah tahu di Palo situs Cina sama persis judulnya pahlawan bajingan chapternya 800 lebih
I have no clue what people like this... the only reason it's so long is for the word count
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background I don't know why this fic had such a High rating.. anyway I'm only here lower it so ignore this
this is not bashing or anything similar and I'll admit I don't know a lot of dc or marvel but when I look at the cover the first thing I thought was that is she an asari wearing a wig who has hollow powers 😂
the story is very good, the ease with which he gets new wives is a little exaggerated, however the novel has a good fluency, holding you to the point of reading until the end, with all that said before, if you want something to read and pass the time time and like harem, you can read without fear.
I don't really like fanfic from China because he always changes the names of characters in that world, but in my opinion this translation is pretty good because it uses names from comics
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Me gusto, voy a llenar espacio con puntos y comas .................................................................,,,,,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
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Благадару жду продолжения👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍😁👍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁👍👍😁😁👍😁😁😁😁😂👍👍😁😁😁👍👍
Ахуена жду продолжения👍👍👍👍👍 Ffggghhhhhhhhggggghhhhnununhghhhhhujjjjjjjjjjgggggyyuuioppppooiiiuhhgfdddghioooooooiiiijjjynynynyngngngnngngngngngngng
Так быстра жду продолжения👍👍👍👍👍 Dog egbegvegbegvegbeyb yvefbggcc twfbwfbwgbegbgebehbegnheajfjegmegjeyneynyenehbehefbgebgenehnrunujununuuunnegjegjeynegnybwthrqe
Благодору за главу жду продолжения👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 😁😁😁wfhfwbwfbwfbetbtehfheffbbbegbgebegbegbegneyeynegjegnegnegbfbwfbgebegheaffjwgjegjeeynegbegnegngehgehegjethy yhethtehetnegnfeneghgenegjegn
Благодаря жду продолжения👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 byenywbtbwtjwyjwynuenynwfbwfttwjtwtnntfbfwhdrqhwththtwbwbwgnegneyjeyeyjyeyh yj y uj Ununyenyenye FEHBENEYNYEN Fbagbgsbwgnj egg and Rd yh you're gonna be able to see👀 you want to know
More chapter please or l become angry 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡where is my new chapter? I am waiting for it 🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁
Until chapter 80 the story seems wonderful to me. Development is smooth and not hampered by the MC's romance or romantic interest. There are many new and interesting things that he is doing and preparing for the future, which intrigues me. I hope to see soon how he will develop his personal strength as well as technological inventions.
Sigh, you see... It's translated Chinese work... And before we got to the problem that will make you frustrated, because they whould, it's actually pretty nice read. But there is always but's. It's surprisingly boring. You see, it's was written in a cultivation-like style, when author wants badly to squeze as much chapters as he could. Meaning, he wants at least 1000 of chapters for the book. You could f7cking guess how hard making something intresting with so many chapters in mind on a very limited time. So of course the story is very useless. Gang fights - it's literally template of cultivation stories when people bring problems to mc but he himself, doesn't actually do anything. A free word count. His power growth? Forget it. Even though most of stories takes place in a modern time, we stuck in a world war 2 with mc that literally can't do anything. I whould say that harem is quite nice. Of course mc being pushover in a best Japanese style. At least not so bad, but still... So yeah, if you expect to read something actually intresting,with a progress, with intresting plot - I wouldn't recommend it. Or try to find original novel and use mtl. Because reading slow releasing translation will only leave you in disappointment. In the end, it's probably best Chinese takes on marvel/DC, but it's still pretty dull . That's all... Go away now.
i would give this five if the story isnt so slow on development i know some might like it
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Цікаво, напевно, дружити з мавпою 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻
တစ်ချို့အချိန်တွေကုန်ဖို့အတွက်ဖတ်လို့ရတယ်ဇာတ်လမ်းကပေါ့ပေါ့ပါးပါး နဲ့အချို့ဝတ္တုနဲ့မတူဘူး။လိုအပ်ချက်တွေရှိတယ် စာရေးဆရာက အသစ်ဖြစ်လို့ထင်တယ် ဆက်ပြီးရေးနေပါအားပေးနေတယ်
read the mtl. its amazing. the guy doesn't discriminate against anyone. white black brown red green yellow. as long as it's a girl he fks. heck he even impgnates wakanda queen and okayo the head guard
Tolong penulis sertakan bahwa copy paste menulis terjemahannya karena saya sudah tahu di Palo situs Cina sama persis judulnya pahlawan bajingan chapternya 800 lebih
I have no clue what people like this... the only reason it's so long is for the word count
Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background Writing Quality Updating Stability Story Development Character Design world background I don't know why this fic had such a High rating.. anyway I'm only here lower it so ignore this
this is not bashing or anything similar and I'll admit I don't know a lot of dc or marvel but when I look at the cover the first thing I thought was that is she an asari wearing a wig who has hollow powers 😂
the story is very good, the ease with which he gets new wives is a little exaggerated, however the novel has a good fluency, holding you to the point of reading until the end, with all that said before, if you want something to read and pass the time time and like harem, you can read without fear.
I don't really like fanfic from China because he always changes the names of characters in that world, but in my opinion this translation is pretty good because it uses names from comics
Благадару жду продолжения👍👍 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁👍😁👍😁😍😍😍👍👍😊👍👍😊👍😁👍😁👍😁👍😁👍😁👍😁👍😁👍
Me gusto, voy a llenar espacio con puntos y comas .................................................................,,,,,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
Блогадарен жду продолжения👍👍👍 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁✌👍✌👍👍😍👍😍😁😁😁😁✌👍👍✌✌✌✌😁✌😁😍😍😍😍😍👍✌✌😍😍😁😁😍😍👍😍👍😍👍✌✌✌👍😍👍😍😁✌👍👍👍😍😁
Благадару ахуена жду продолжения👍👍👍👍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😁👍👍👍😁👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😍👍😍👍😍😍😁👍😍👍😍👍✌😁✌😁✌😁✌😍😍👍😍👍😁👍👍😁👍😁👍😁👍😁👍👍😁😁✌
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Благадару жду продолжения👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍😁👍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁👍👍😁😁👍😁😁😁😁😂👍👍😁😁😁👍👍
Ахуена жду продолжения👍👍👍👍👍 Ffggghhhhhhhhggggghhhhnununhghhhhhujjjjjjjjjjgggggyyuuioppppooiiiuhhgfdddghioooooooiiiijjjynynynyngngngnngngngngngngng
Так быстра жду продолжения👍👍👍👍👍 Dog egbegvegbegvegbeyb yvefbggcc twfbwfbwgbegbgebehbegnheajfjegmegjeyneynyenehbehefbgebgenehnrunujununuuunnegjegjeynegnybwthrqe
Благодору за главу жду продолжения👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 😁😁😁wfhfwbwfbwfbetbtehfheffbbbegbgebegbegbegneyeynegjegnegnegbfbwfbgebegheaffjwgjegjeeynegbegnegngehgehegjethy yhethtehetnegnfeneghgenegjegn
Благодаря жду продолжения👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 byenywbtbwtjwyjwynuenynwfbwfttwjtwtnntfbfwhdrqhwththtwbwbwgnegneyjeyeyjyeyh yj y uj Ununyenyenye FEHBENEYNYEN Fbagbgsbwgnj egg and Rd yh you're gonna be able to see👀 you want to know
More chapter please or l become angry 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡where is my new chapter? I am waiting for it 🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁🙁
Until chapter 80 the story seems wonderful to me. Development is smooth and not hampered by the MC's romance or romantic interest. There are many new and interesting things that he is doing and preparing for the future, which intrigues me. I hope to see soon how he will develop his personal strength as well as technological inventions.
Sigh, you see... It's translated Chinese work... And before we got to the problem that will make you frustrated, because they whould, it's actually pretty nice read. But there is always but's. It's surprisingly boring. You see, it's was written in a cultivation-like style, when author wants badly to squeze as much chapters as he could. Meaning, he wants at least 1000 of chapters for the book. You could f7cking guess how hard making something intresting with so many chapters in mind on a very limited time. So of course the story is very useless. Gang fights - it's literally template of cultivation stories when people bring problems to mc but he himself, doesn't actually do anything. A free word count. His power growth? Forget it. Even though most of stories takes place in a modern time, we stuck in a world war 2 with mc that literally can't do anything. I whould say that harem is quite nice. Of course mc being pushover in a best Japanese style. At least not so bad, but still... So yeah, if you expect to read something actually intresting,with a progress, with intresting plot - I wouldn't recommend it. Or try to find original novel and use mtl. Because reading slow releasing translation will only leave you in disappointment. In the end, it's probably best Chinese takes on marvel/DC, but it's still pretty dull . That's all... Go away now.
i would give this five if the story isnt so slow on development i know some might like it
Chapter 240: Year 1939