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A slightly above average fanfic in my opinion, neither bad nor good. ------------------------------------------------------- (Google translator)
This is where I cut, it’s not BAD, but being able to summon servants can quickly bloat the cast and it’s just not what I wanna focus on. Best of luck.
Just started this novel an it was going quite good.... But then when I go to the power rankings for worlds to travel to that's when I realize you really have no idea for the rankings. Like are you really ranking them by how dangerous they are or by your favorites? That really made me frustrated when some rankings should either be lower or higher. This novel is easily read able an updates are great. A GREAT novel to pass the time.
lo deje a la mitad el protagonista me parece muy débil, un verdadero jefe de dragon ball, lo derrota con el 1% de su poder se que tiene 10 años pero tiene un maquina de deseos cada año, aunque ser muy fuerte es aburrido por lo menos déjalo ser mas fuerte que su tripulación, espero que mi opinión no se tome a mal.
Haven't read the novel yet but i got a question Author-san is Mc chaotic neutral or true natural........................................ ..........................................................................
can ya add Date A Live World? there's just a really short supply of those, and the good ones even rarer........................................
It's mandricardo ,what can i say more ?one of the best and favorite of all players 3 star servant in fgo . his damage output is also insane in the game even with just one arts buffer
Woaahhh a mandricardo fic. You deserve a five just because of that!!👍🏻👏🏻👋 He might be a [⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ star servant] but he got roland’s sword ya know!! And his horse! Plus that hector’s armor or something. Durandal also has three miracles, so yeah. . . . … reinhard is the redhead pendragon yaknow.
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Very good, I like it, my only concern is that Author kun my drob it, I hope that won't happen🍀👀 [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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the novel is fine, the MC is actually op af cause he has the writer's pen which he can use to edit himself although I think it's restricted to one use per year
Revelar spoiler
Well me being the author I need to give myself my own review on my story and like all Authors give it a 5 stars, this is my third story so far where I’m writing on another one simultaneously to this one, Villainous Dimensional Chat Group, you should give that one a read too.
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Will there be a harem in this novel, there's a love of romance novel with a harem so I'm just curious if there will be harem is this story, I'm very big fan of harem story so I'm hoping there is and I will change my review ones I read enough chapter
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There's not many konosuba Fanfic I'm Exception is very high. Go on Edgelord route without caring anybody's word. They only just know how to complaint.
I really liked the idea and the system, but the unambitious MC ruins the entire plot. He spends absolutely no time training and leveling up. His excuse is that his dad wouldn't allow him to go 'camping', while he could just go in the day and come back in the night. When he cures the Dustiness wife, he is offered money but rejects it because his family financial situation is 'good'. Completely unambitious and has the humble, doormat Japanese protag vibe. Looking at the direction this is going, I dropped this.
A slightly above average fanfic in my opinion, neither bad nor good. ------------------------------------------------------- (Google translator)
This is where I cut, it’s not BAD, but being able to summon servants can quickly bloat the cast and it’s just not what I wanna focus on. Best of luck.
Just started this novel an it was going quite good.... But then when I go to the power rankings for worlds to travel to that's when I realize you really have no idea for the rankings. Like are you really ranking them by how dangerous they are or by your favorites? That really made me frustrated when some rankings should either be lower or higher. This novel is easily read able an updates are great. A GREAT novel to pass the time.
lo deje a la mitad el protagonista me parece muy débil, un verdadero jefe de dragon ball, lo derrota con el 1% de su poder se que tiene 10 años pero tiene un maquina de deseos cada año, aunque ser muy fuerte es aburrido por lo menos déjalo ser mas fuerte que su tripulación, espero que mi opinión no se tome a mal.
Haven't read the novel yet but i got a question Author-san is Mc chaotic neutral or true natural........................................ ..........................................................................
can ya add Date A Live World? there's just a really short supply of those, and the good ones even rarer........................................
It's mandricardo ,what can i say more ?one of the best and favorite of all players 3 star servant in fgo . his damage output is also insane in the game even with just one arts buffer
Woaahhh a mandricardo fic. You deserve a five just because of that!!👍🏻👏🏻👋 He might be a [⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ star servant] but he got roland’s sword ya know!! And his horse! Plus that hector’s armor or something. Durandal also has three miracles, so yeah. . . . … reinhard is the redhead pendragon yaknow.
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁👍👍🏻👍👍🏻👍👍🏻👍👍🏻👍👍🏻👍👍🏻
Very good, I like it, my only concern is that Author kun my drob it, I hope that won't happen🍀👀 [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Ótima fan-fic 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍
the novel is fine, the MC is actually op af cause he has the writer's pen which he can use to edit himself although I think it's restricted to one use per year
Revelar spoiler Well me being the author I need to give myself my own review on my story and like all Authors give it a 5 stars, this is my third story so far where I’m writing on another one simultaneously to this one, Villainous Dimensional Chat Group, you should give that one a read too.
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Will there be a harem in this novel, there's a love of romance novel with a harem so I'm just curious if there will be harem is this story, I'm very big fan of harem story so I'm hoping there is and I will change my review ones I read enough chapter
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
There's not many konosuba Fanfic I'm Exception is very high. Go on Edgelord route without caring anybody's word. They only just know how to complaint.
I really liked the idea and the system, but the unambitious MC ruins the entire plot. He spends absolutely no time training and leveling up. His excuse is that his dad wouldn't allow him to go 'camping', while he could just go in the day and come back in the night. When he cures the Dustiness wife, he is offered money but rejects it because his family financial situation is 'good'. Completely unambitious and has the humble, doormat Japanese protag vibe. Looking at the direction this is going, I dropped this.