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Escribe una reseñaAmazing, one of the best novel I've read recently... been looking for novel where game powers transfer to the real world with a OP MC its cool, MC is OP but to a reasonable extent
i liked the story it was engaging. i stopped reading around chapter 200 & something. i didn't like the chick he was saddled with. i didn't like all the family drama & constant being led around by the nose & guilt because he chose not to be with the chick his family had chosen. i personally skipped a lot of the family parts. i was more focused on the game aspect. & when things came to the real world he should have just left earth to deal with everything on they own to a certain extent. there definitely was no need to marry or protect the ex he didn't choose. it's a great story flawed by MC trying to be captain save a ho. (like most of these stories).
Im at chapter 46, and it’s pretty interesting. Though I do hope this family bs will mostly clear up soon, as frankly, it isn’t what I’m here to read. It’s definitely unique, and so far extremely well written, but this isn’t “My Journey To Become A Crime Boss”, but “Titan Rising Online: World Breaker”. Either way, great story and a whole lot of potential, but I just hope the story doesn’t go down a emotional rabbit hole, but stays on track.
Revelar spoilerGood Novel Concept Especially The System But Ruined By Excessive Swearing And Cursing.... Every Paragraph And Chapter Is About Mc Cursing It To Annoying...Am Not Saying It But Excessive Swearing Out Of Nowhere Is Lame It Dragged The Novel....It Like Wanting To Read An Action Novel But Instead You Get Lame Comedy And Humour In Every Chapter It Will Get Annoying,Dull And Exhaust You While Trying To Read It The Same For This Novel..... The Novel Should Be Called I Curse Too Much
I want to be frank. I love this story. I have a little problem with the mc and his instability, but the biggest i have is that the writting is bad. For me, there is some miss in the text. But the story, and the world background is insane (in the good term). I really love this story. I just hope the author can rewrite the previous chapter because they are a bit missing. (I don't know who and when some character talk, it seems some info miss... i just want that text being more readable)
*I've written this review after finishing chapter 216.* I really enjoy the world and the idea of the story, but the characters involved ruin it for me. The mc is always saying that he's the strongest and he only uses some percentage of his power and in the next fight, he whines about being powerless. When he was supposed to have shown crazy power in a fight he immediately says that other people are catching up to him. He is also a mixed bag of emotions. One second he says that he doesn't need anyone and he can take on the world by himself and he hates everybody. The next he cries to one of the many ladies that throw themselves at him that he needs love and trust. He literally treats everyone else in the novel like trash and then they all fall in love with him because he's strong even though he is a disgusting, abusive psychopath and they all admit it every so many chapters. Maybe I'm just worked up because chapter 216 brought this to a point for me, but either way, I can't keep reading.
First, this book still needs to be edited. The author keeps promising one, but I am past chapter 200 and it is still atrocious. Every paragraph has at least one typo. That’s not including the occasional weird, and nonsensical sentence structures, or the poorly identified conversations. It makes the book hard to read. The author does a good job with the story telling and world building. But, I am starting to see the errors in consistence that start to plaque many web novels. I am to the point I am not sure I will continue to invest my time in the story.
It's a good novel but all of the mistakes are making it hard for me to read. If you don't mind spelling and grammar mistakes then this is a good read.
this novel is just amazing. storyline, world building, characters everything. just one thing apart from the language problem is the MC's stats sheet. it's no longer consistent and confusing. I'm already lost because the rewards and stats after the rewards don't match especially towards the later parts
I just started reading this and was just so impressed at the quality. First chapter was so much more real than many others of the genre, writing is top notch with no unnecessary background garbage. Now several chapters in and the plot is still developing nicely at a fast pace.
An incredibly well build and dynamic story, with a great portrayal of the charachter's emotions and plans, while also making the game itself truly challenging and interesting
Very good, very well crafted world, a very interesting read, actually a breath of fresh air if you look at how repetitive novels nowadays are, I hope the work becomes famous
I won't do a true detailed review, because I have a doubt that consumes me after reading only 12 chapters of this work. And I hope someone can help me with this question... How is such a good work not known? No kidding. The writing is 5 stars. The plot is 5 stars. The character description is 5 stars. And the world-building and everything else is original and innovative. Well Okay, in the end I ended up giving a proper review because I got carried away hahaha But I really don't understand why this novel isn't up there in the ratings. Lately, I've been losing my trust in Webnovel, because they often promote bad stories while good stories like this end up unknown, being found by sheer luck.
I got through the 29 free chapters and by the end of them it was difficult to read due to the number of errors. The story has promise and could be a good one, but I can't see spending my fast passes or buying coins to unlock chapters if the quality is going to be the same as what I read. It is a shame as I think I could have enjoyed reading the novel if I could actually read the novel without thinking about the issues.
Man this is absolutely one of the best books on here truly sorry for what you have been going through but have strength and stay with it new chapters from you make my days worthwhile
Just caught up with this wonderful story. Writing Quality: Great writing but could use some passes before putting up. Nothing really bad, some wrong words, misspelling and wrong words, used here and there and using a different name for the MC which was sort of confusing. Stability of Updates: Just got caught up so I don't know the schedule for uploads. Story Development: Started off as simple VR-game with MC at a low point in his life. Then evolved with lots of mysterious undercurrents moving in the background that the MC is slowly figuring out as he progresses. Character Design: The MC has a past that he has to face, with all the past mistakes he has made. MC is a person who can look back at his past mistakes and realize that he messed up really bad. He also likes to play solo and doesn't like to play with people, trust issues. He loves his family. The other players act like players and do stuff that players would do. NPCs aren't truly NPCs, but that comes with the genre. The MCs family has a LOT of DRAMA. World Background: The real world is expansive and far into the future. The game world has unique levels, each with their own rules and laws. The people controlling the game have an agenda/goal that they want, but we don't know yet. Everything is bleeding over into the real world and the MC is trying to prepare.
I realy like it . but he always getting more and more skills and the writer doesn't explin about them at al and the one the explin are not always working like it should. like there is a skill the help him know everything in his 8 meter radios and somehow he always getting attacked by supisre
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I would have to say this is definitely captivating this far, I like the premise and the writing is not too full of pointless things.
I love the premise of this story and the writing style. The author is doing an amazing job with expressing both emotional and physical going-ons .Five star to take the drive far!
Hahaha 😅 I'm one of the few readers who rarely drop reviews. But don't get it twisted, cause when I do review, it means I actually appreciated such a Masterful piece of fine artwork that requires my time, thoughts and true in-depth feelings to be put down in words to describe to others that this novel here isn't like any other on this platform. Trust me... You are going to enjoy this.😁 Many thanks Author and keep up the good work.
It's surprising that this novel doesn't have much reviews, maybe because the video game genre(not popular) . Anyways this actually a solid novel with interesting story that keeps you wanting for the next chapter. The MC isn't shy of spilling "some" blood to reach his goal and he doesn't have any cheat, other that his decisiveness and wits. The other thing that I love about this story is the fights, they're very very exciting and rather easy to imagine. An important note:( SPOILER):🚫🚫 the powers that the players gain in the game can also be used in reality, and this is also one of the main reasons of why I like this novel.
This books looks very promising and deserves more recognition!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This books looks very promising and deserves more recognition!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!This books looks very promising and deserves more recognition!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!This books looks very promising and deserves more recognition!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I luckily found this novel by recently by chance and the more I read the more I loved it! The World Background and plot are awesome they have some similar elements with other novels but in the end is completely unique at the same time. My favorite part about the novel is how well the action scenes are written, I gotta be honest this novel has some of the best action scenes I've read, I can literally picture every part of the action that's going on. I see a lot of Authors struggle with Action scenes so it surprised me how great the action was regardless if it was with firearms, melee weapons, magic, or hand to hand its all written really well and descriptive. The author also mixes several genres together very smoothly with nothing forced from Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Gaming, VR, IRL, urban, Action.The MC is cool as well he is Alpha male not afraid of revealing his power he is a bit antihero but isn't a lame edge lord. I'm sure a lot more will come and honestly I can't wait for it. I recommend this novel to everyone I guarantee you will enjoy it. There are a few grammar issues but nothing that makes the reading difficult.
Amazing, one of the best novel I've read recently... been looking for novel where game powers transfer to the real world with a OP MC its cool, MC is OP but to a reasonable extent
i liked the story it was engaging. i stopped reading around chapter 200 & something. i didn't like the chick he was saddled with. i didn't like all the family drama & constant being led around by the nose & guilt because he chose not to be with the chick his family had chosen. i personally skipped a lot of the family parts. i was more focused on the game aspect. & when things came to the real world he should have just left earth to deal with everything on they own to a certain extent. there definitely was no need to marry or protect the ex he didn't choose. it's a great story flawed by MC trying to be captain save a ho. (like most of these stories).
Im at chapter 46, and it’s pretty interesting. Though I do hope this family bs will mostly clear up soon, as frankly, it isn’t what I’m here to read. It’s definitely unique, and so far extremely well written, but this isn’t “My Journey To Become A Crime Boss”, but “Titan Rising Online: World Breaker”. Either way, great story and a whole lot of potential, but I just hope the story doesn’t go down a emotional rabbit hole, but stays on track.
Revelar spoilerGood Novel Concept Especially The System But Ruined By Excessive Swearing And Cursing.... Every Paragraph And Chapter Is About Mc Cursing It To Annoying...Am Not Saying It But Excessive Swearing Out Of Nowhere Is Lame It Dragged The Novel....It Like Wanting To Read An Action Novel But Instead You Get Lame Comedy And Humour In Every Chapter It Will Get Annoying,Dull And Exhaust You While Trying To Read It The Same For This Novel..... The Novel Should Be Called I Curse Too Much
I want to be frank. I love this story. I have a little problem with the mc and his instability, but the biggest i have is that the writting is bad. For me, there is some miss in the text. But the story, and the world background is insane (in the good term). I really love this story. I just hope the author can rewrite the previous chapter because they are a bit missing. (I don't know who and when some character talk, it seems some info miss... i just want that text being more readable)
*I've written this review after finishing chapter 216.* I really enjoy the world and the idea of the story, but the characters involved ruin it for me. The mc is always saying that he's the strongest and he only uses some percentage of his power and in the next fight, he whines about being powerless. When he was supposed to have shown crazy power in a fight he immediately says that other people are catching up to him. He is also a mixed bag of emotions. One second he says that he doesn't need anyone and he can take on the world by himself and he hates everybody. The next he cries to one of the many ladies that throw themselves at him that he needs love and trust. He literally treats everyone else in the novel like trash and then they all fall in love with him because he's strong even though he is a disgusting, abusive psychopath and they all admit it every so many chapters. Maybe I'm just worked up because chapter 216 brought this to a point for me, but either way, I can't keep reading.
First, this book still needs to be edited. The author keeps promising one, but I am past chapter 200 and it is still atrocious. Every paragraph has at least one typo. That’s not including the occasional weird, and nonsensical sentence structures, or the poorly identified conversations. It makes the book hard to read. The author does a good job with the story telling and world building. But, I am starting to see the errors in consistence that start to plaque many web novels. I am to the point I am not sure I will continue to invest my time in the story.
It's a good novel but all of the mistakes are making it hard for me to read. If you don't mind spelling and grammar mistakes then this is a good read.
this novel is just amazing. storyline, world building, characters everything. just one thing apart from the language problem is the MC's stats sheet. it's no longer consistent and confusing. I'm already lost because the rewards and stats after the rewards don't match especially towards the later parts
I just started reading this and was just so impressed at the quality. First chapter was so much more real than many others of the genre, writing is top notch with no unnecessary background garbage. Now several chapters in and the plot is still developing nicely at a fast pace.
An incredibly well build and dynamic story, with a great portrayal of the charachter's emotions and plans, while also making the game itself truly challenging and interesting
Very good, very well crafted world, a very interesting read, actually a breath of fresh air if you look at how repetitive novels nowadays are, I hope the work becomes famous
I won't do a true detailed review, because I have a doubt that consumes me after reading only 12 chapters of this work. And I hope someone can help me with this question... How is such a good work not known? No kidding. The writing is 5 stars. The plot is 5 stars. The character description is 5 stars. And the world-building and everything else is original and innovative. Well Okay, in the end I ended up giving a proper review because I got carried away hahaha But I really don't understand why this novel isn't up there in the ratings. Lately, I've been losing my trust in Webnovel, because they often promote bad stories while good stories like this end up unknown, being found by sheer luck.
I got through the 29 free chapters and by the end of them it was difficult to read due to the number of errors. The story has promise and could be a good one, but I can't see spending my fast passes or buying coins to unlock chapters if the quality is going to be the same as what I read. It is a shame as I think I could have enjoyed reading the novel if I could actually read the novel without thinking about the issues.
Man this is absolutely one of the best books on here truly sorry for what you have been going through but have strength and stay with it new chapters from you make my days worthwhile
Just caught up with this wonderful story. Writing Quality: Great writing but could use some passes before putting up. Nothing really bad, some wrong words, misspelling and wrong words, used here and there and using a different name for the MC which was sort of confusing. Stability of Updates: Just got caught up so I don't know the schedule for uploads. Story Development: Started off as simple VR-game with MC at a low point in his life. Then evolved with lots of mysterious undercurrents moving in the background that the MC is slowly figuring out as he progresses. Character Design: The MC has a past that he has to face, with all the past mistakes he has made. MC is a person who can look back at his past mistakes and realize that he messed up really bad. He also likes to play solo and doesn't like to play with people, trust issues. He loves his family. The other players act like players and do stuff that players would do. NPCs aren't truly NPCs, but that comes with the genre. The MCs family has a LOT of DRAMA. World Background: The real world is expansive and far into the future. The game world has unique levels, each with their own rules and laws. The people controlling the game have an agenda/goal that they want, but we don't know yet. Everything is bleeding over into the real world and the MC is trying to prepare.
I realy like it . but he always getting more and more skills and the writer doesn't explin about them at al and the one the explin are not always working like it should. like there is a skill the help him know everything in his 8 meter radios and somehow he always getting attacked by supisre
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Revelar spoilerHave you ever thought about using Patreon? Many authors of this platform use it. MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
Just keep up the good work my friend...more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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I would have to say this is definitely captivating this far, I like the premise and the writing is not too full of pointless things.
I love the premise of this story and the writing style. The author is doing an amazing job with expressing both emotional and physical going-ons .Five star to take the drive far!
Hahaha 😅 I'm one of the few readers who rarely drop reviews. But don't get it twisted, cause when I do review, it means I actually appreciated such a Masterful piece of fine artwork that requires my time, thoughts and true in-depth feelings to be put down in words to describe to others that this novel here isn't like any other on this platform. Trust me... You are going to enjoy this.😁 Many thanks Author and keep up the good work.
It's surprising that this novel doesn't have much reviews, maybe because the video game genre(not popular) . Anyways this actually a solid novel with interesting story that keeps you wanting for the next chapter. The MC isn't shy of spilling "some" blood to reach his goal and he doesn't have any cheat, other that his decisiveness and wits. The other thing that I love about this story is the fights, they're very very exciting and rather easy to imagine. An important note:( SPOILER):🚫🚫 the powers that the players gain in the game can also be used in reality, and this is also one of the main reasons of why I like this novel.
This books looks very promising and deserves more recognition!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This books looks very promising and deserves more recognition!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!This books looks very promising and deserves more recognition!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!This books looks very promising and deserves more recognition!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I luckily found this novel by recently by chance and the more I read the more I loved it! The World Background and plot are awesome they have some similar elements with other novels but in the end is completely unique at the same time. My favorite part about the novel is how well the action scenes are written, I gotta be honest this novel has some of the best action scenes I've read, I can literally picture every part of the action that's going on. I see a lot of Authors struggle with Action scenes so it surprised me how great the action was regardless if it was with firearms, melee weapons, magic, or hand to hand its all written really well and descriptive. The author also mixes several genres together very smoothly with nothing forced from Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Gaming, VR, IRL, urban, Action.The MC is cool as well he is Alpha male not afraid of revealing his power he is a bit antihero but isn't a lame edge lord. I'm sure a lot more will come and honestly I can't wait for it. I recommend this novel to everyone I guarantee you will enjoy it. There are a few grammar issues but nothing that makes the reading difficult.