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A story involved not just with standard Isekai fare but actually contending and resolving the problems internal and external that the character may have because of their fantastical construction or convoluted relationships. This is explored by being more dark, gluttonous and lustful than some of PancakesWitch's other works and is all the better for it. Just don't expect to stay in one place too long, a time skip will quickly remedy any notion of a modernist daily life story being told.
I’m loving the story so far, I just wish there was a wiki for this. I like to spoil myself a little, like who does this character end up with?, what happened to that thing? When did they meet this person? Also can someone tell me how many people are in the harem so far?
This is for the people expecting yuri, as soon as the story started the MC started talking about hot men. And so I decided to look ahead a little bit and seems like it's a mixed harem, so not true yuri, if youre fine with it, great, but I'll personally be dropping it. Good luck to the author.
The author's stories are good. However, the love aspects are just awful to read. Partner is just as annoying as Aquarina, from another book of hers. Otherwise, the story is amusing to read, contains many anecdotes from well-known books/movies/games. It is not demanding and therefore very good for reading on the side. However, I do find it annoying that many of her books are not self-contained and so progress is very slow.
Author the book is pretty good so far and thank you so much for having 100 chapters free! That’s probably the most I’ve seen so far
Please proofread your chapters! In and On are not the same words and can't be used randomly. You also suddenly switched the name of a specific elf in the later chapters.Apart from that I love the story!
It's just amazing, absolutely amazing honestly, all your books are every one of themhaven't found one that is not good[img=Loving it]
I like all reincarnated or isekai novels and anime's and this one is actually pretty good!
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I’m loving the story so far! I’m not that far in but is there any romance? Just curious
It's an enjoyable novel if you don't mind the "cliché" structure/direction "reincarnated human as a monster" novels have. Idk if it's what the author wanted but when Maria starts to think about everything and loses the focus of the main problem/thing she was thinking about (sorry for the reiteration😓) the writing starts to feel dense or reiterative. I also liked the way the chapters are started. Overlapping a little bit with the end of the last one is a nice way to keep on track if the lector reads them at different times(?) (different days, hours, etc. I don't know if I said the correct expression). Although I like the feature, sometimes they are a copy of the last chapter, making it difficult to enjoy reading the same thing again, or they start before the ending of the last chapter, making it confusing to follow when little details change. I've only read the start of this adventure and I'm sure the author is improving (and will continue to improve) the quality of their writing.
Hey, its been bordering me SO I am asking, is this REBORN AS A GHOST is in the same world as that of EPIC OF ICE DRAGON but like in different continent or realm or are they in Midgard
I trust this is good. without even reading it yet. simply because, I admire your writing skills. five stars
Yow! for some like me that loves system novels your writings are my favorite and im reading 3 of your novel epic of caterpillar, living armor, and this so thanks for wonderful novels... but im just wondering is this novel about ghost connected at some point in the story of epic of caterpillar or in the same universe or plane of existence?
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This is a spoilery review that I'm making as of chapter 472, which is the latest as of now. I already made a regular review, but after catching up, I wanted to give some constructive criticism about what is probably the most underutilized and ignored part of this novel. The Job System. Maria and her party acquired jobs a long time ago, but she still has the same job she first took! Nothing has changed! And when Lucifer evolved into a Death Dragon, no job was listed on his status despite it being said that he had taken one! We also haven't heard anything about Maria using the Job Crystal to help the people of her village and her undead to get jobs and grow stronger! Did it not happen, or did it happen off screen? It feels like you added this in, but maybe didn't have a firm idea on how to make it work, so you just neglected it. Well, I have some ideas. It is an interesting concept of having equipable jobs that can be changed out at any time, but it feels like it is meant to be improved by the System Unique Skill at some point. I have some ideas on how to do that without throwing out the original idea of changeable jobs and having it devolve into something simple and unoriginal like a job leveling system. One idea is to have multiple unlockable equipable jobs that can give stat boosts and skills. Maybe new slots can be bought with system points or simply by evolving. This would allow Maria to work on multiple jobs at once and not be stuck with one single path of development. She has a lot if interesting jobs with interesting skills that could really make for a unique playstyle if she could only access them. Like her fortune manipulation, martial skills, or even the Chaos attribute that is present in her Pandora's Box spell. The second idea is to have each job have mastery levels for each aspect of it. We already know that you have to master a job to get a better one so maybe you could master each aspect of a job individually? Things like certain skills, some stat boosts from the job, comprehension of the job, etc. If she could master the skills from the job and then have them even without having that job equipped, it would give her a lot more reason to experiment! She would have to master a job completely to get a higher job, but she could still just master the skills then move on to another job to get as many skills as possible! That would be like most strategy rpgs like Tactics Ogre. You equip a job, then master it to use the skills in other jobs! You could even combine the two ideas together! I hope this idea gives you some inspiration!
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This book is funny with good pacing & world building. Absolutely in love with it and can’t reccomend it enough.
I really love the idea of this book I only just started but love it already!!!!
Wonderful story with amusing characters. I’m not far into it but I love it so far. Solid system and evolution mechanics. The writing is smooth and easy to get lost in. I look forward to more! [img=recommend]
Keep uo the good work Author !!. 😍❤✊👌 I am honestly just really in love with female lead system novels that are NOT YURI! I am somehow uncomfortable with this genre , so i would be ecstatic if the author confirmed it even if i can see that it's not mentioned , well anyhow i hope the FL get with a nice guy that is slightly jealous and protective .
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This author generally has good stories, the only bad things i can say are that there are a lot of incorrect words and severe misspellings. Overall pretty good though.
the story is good and the updating stability went skyrocket becuase close last month? It was only in 50 chapter now 210?. I wish the story development will not bad becuase the stability. But I recommend you this story because it was good!! The game element and the story development and all of them
Over 100k words? 100 chapters? Well, im jus saying, for a person like me, that's like a few hours at most..........let me post this Webnovel
Hello author!! I love your novel so far but I was wondering if you could possibly take time out of your day and answer my question 🙈is there going to be romance? But like with a male lead? Or will it be Yuri? Please reply. Thank you 😌
An undead ghost mommy "living" her new life to the fullest, protecting her friends and punishing the bad guys. I read almost a hundred chapters and I can't wait to see what her next move will be. XD Funny, heartwarming and with action, one of the best stories I've read here.
A story involved not just with standard Isekai fare but actually contending and resolving the problems internal and external that the character may have because of their fantastical construction or convoluted relationships. This is explored by being more dark, gluttonous and lustful than some of PancakesWitch's other works and is all the better for it. Just don't expect to stay in one place too long, a time skip will quickly remedy any notion of a modernist daily life story being told.
I’m loving the story so far, I just wish there was a wiki for this. I like to spoil myself a little, like who does this character end up with?, what happened to that thing? When did they meet this person? Also can someone tell me how many people are in the harem so far?
This is for the people expecting yuri, as soon as the story started the MC started talking about hot men. And so I decided to look ahead a little bit and seems like it's a mixed harem, so not true yuri, if youre fine with it, great, but I'll personally be dropping it. Good luck to the author.
The author's stories are good. However, the love aspects are just awful to read. Partner is just as annoying as Aquarina, from another book of hers. Otherwise, the story is amusing to read, contains many anecdotes from well-known books/movies/games. It is not demanding and therefore very good for reading on the side. However, I do find it annoying that many of her books are not self-contained and so progress is very slow.
Author the book is pretty good so far and thank you so much for having 100 chapters free! That’s probably the most I’ve seen so far
Please proofread your chapters! In and On are not the same words and can't be used randomly. You also suddenly switched the name of a specific elf in the later chapters.Apart from that I love the story!
It's just amazing, absolutely amazing honestly, all your books are every one of themhaven't found one that is not good[img=Loving it]
I like all reincarnated or isekai novels and anime's and this one is actually pretty good!
Revelar spoiler I’m loving the story so far! I’m not that far in but is there any romance? Just curious
It's an enjoyable novel if you don't mind the "cliché" structure/direction "reincarnated human as a monster" novels have. Idk if it's what the author wanted but when Maria starts to think about everything and loses the focus of the main problem/thing she was thinking about (sorry for the reiteration😓) the writing starts to feel dense or reiterative. I also liked the way the chapters are started. Overlapping a little bit with the end of the last one is a nice way to keep on track if the lector reads them at different times(?) (different days, hours, etc. I don't know if I said the correct expression). Although I like the feature, sometimes they are a copy of the last chapter, making it difficult to enjoy reading the same thing again, or they start before the ending of the last chapter, making it confusing to follow when little details change. I've only read the start of this adventure and I'm sure the author is improving (and will continue to improve) the quality of their writing.
Hey, its been bordering me SO I am asking, is this REBORN AS A GHOST is in the same world as that of EPIC OF ICE DRAGON but like in different continent or realm or are they in Midgard
I trust this is good. without even reading it yet. simply because, I admire your writing skills. five stars
Yow! for some like me that loves system novels your writings are my favorite and im reading 3 of your novel epic of caterpillar, living armor, and this so thanks for wonderful novels... but im just wondering is this novel about ghost connected at some point in the story of epic of caterpillar or in the same universe or plane of existence?
Revelar spoiler This is a spoilery review that I'm making as of chapter 472, which is the latest as of now. I already made a regular review, but after catching up, I wanted to give some constructive criticism about what is probably the most underutilized and ignored part of this novel. The Job System. Maria and her party acquired jobs a long time ago, but she still has the same job she first took! Nothing has changed! And when Lucifer evolved into a Death Dragon, no job was listed on his status despite it being said that he had taken one! We also haven't heard anything about Maria using the Job Crystal to help the people of her village and her undead to get jobs and grow stronger! Did it not happen, or did it happen off screen? It feels like you added this in, but maybe didn't have a firm idea on how to make it work, so you just neglected it. Well, I have some ideas. It is an interesting concept of having equipable jobs that can be changed out at any time, but it feels like it is meant to be improved by the System Unique Skill at some point. I have some ideas on how to do that without throwing out the original idea of changeable jobs and having it devolve into something simple and unoriginal like a job leveling system. One idea is to have multiple unlockable equipable jobs that can give stat boosts and skills. Maybe new slots can be bought with system points or simply by evolving. This would allow Maria to work on multiple jobs at once and not be stuck with one single path of development. She has a lot if interesting jobs with interesting skills that could really make for a unique playstyle if she could only access them. Like her fortune manipulation, martial skills, or even the Chaos attribute that is present in her Pandora's Box spell. The second idea is to have each job have mastery levels for each aspect of it. We already know that you have to master a job to get a better one so maybe you could master each aspect of a job individually? Things like certain skills, some stat boosts from the job, comprehension of the job, etc. If she could master the skills from the job and then have them even without having that job equipped, it would give her a lot more reason to experiment! She would have to master a job completely to get a higher job, but she could still just master the skills then move on to another job to get as many skills as possible! That would be like most strategy rpgs like Tactics Ogre. You equip a job, then master it to use the skills in other jobs! You could even combine the two ideas together! I hope this idea gives you some inspiration!
Revelar spoiler This book is funny with good pacing & world building. Absolutely in love with it and can’t reccomend it enough.
I really love the idea of this book I only just started but love it already!!!!
Wonderful story with amusing characters. I’m not far into it but I love it so far. Solid system and evolution mechanics. The writing is smooth and easy to get lost in. I look forward to more! [img=recommend]
Keep uo the good work Author !!. 😍❤✊👌 I am honestly just really in love with female lead system novels that are NOT YURI! I am somehow uncomfortable with this genre , so i would be ecstatic if the author confirmed it even if i can see that it's not mentioned , well anyhow i hope the FL get with a nice guy that is slightly jealous and protective .
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Revelar spoiler This author generally has good stories, the only bad things i can say are that there are a lot of incorrect words and severe misspellings. Overall pretty good though.
the story is good and the updating stability went skyrocket becuase close last month? It was only in 50 chapter now 210?. I wish the story development will not bad becuase the stability. But I recommend you this story because it was good!! The game element and the story development and all of them
Over 100k words? 100 chapters? Well, im jus saying, for a person like me, that's like a few hours at most..........let me post this Webnovel
Hello author!! I love your novel so far but I was wondering if you could possibly take time out of your day and answer my question 🙈is there going to be romance? But like with a male lead? Or will it be Yuri? Please reply. Thank you 😌
An undead ghost mommy "living" her new life to the fullest, protecting her friends and punishing the bad guys. I read almost a hundred chapters and I can't wait to see what her next move will be. XD Funny, heartwarming and with action, one of the best stories I've read here.