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Mc is insufferable, can stand him but the story/ plot and the world background looks good so far. Only 70 chapters in but I hope you merged them together or killed the idiot cause I will quit otherwise.
chapter 33 the mc talks to the system but the reply is not there I only see mc side of conversation where is the systems side of the conversation I feel like I'm reading only half the chapter
Alright, avoiding spoilers, this is just a great novel. Personally, I don’t understand why people hate the MC’s ‘wimpy’ side because I don’t see some average Joe construction working becoming a tyrant immediately.. Love villainous MCs in any case though, and it’s a pity that this novel stopped receiving updates.. Aside from this review, could anyone else suggest some other novels similar to this one?
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I really like the story and world building . The thing that is settim me off is the good side of the MC cause he's really annoying and it makes it difficult to read while is in charge. Can't the MC embrace the evil side and become one? Evil mc is a menace. keep up author 🫡
Haven't read it yet but I will now, I just want to say this here.... MC's background is similar to mine except the last 2...... 1. I don't live in an apartment, but my dad's house (May he rest in peace) And 2. I haven't had a girlfriend since I was 24 (I'm going 34)
PLEASE K*LL THE WIMPY GUY HE IS REALLY ANNOYING. THE EVIL HEART IS THE BEST. PLEASE MERGE OR K*LL THE WIMPY GUY. THERE IS NO CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT IN HIM
Sir I am fan of you work I support you own art but why mc like that even some kid got bully they fight back. Can you make more mature the mc like he almost killed by other only plot protect him. (sorry to my English).
I have read the first chapters and i have to say that they were enjoyable. Then i read the reviews and saw about the mc's presonality(most people dropped around chapt 80-90) can someone tell me if he changes cause im not sure if i should read or not...
everything would be okay about this novel, but the MC is so infuriating that i just can't read it anymore. when he's not using evil heart, he's just ughhh (trusts and helps whoever, would rather get killed than kill, can't make any smart choices or stand for himself) in short i recommend reading only by skipping chapters, otherwise you'll want MC dead all the time (I've read up to i think chapter 80)
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The main characters personality is absolutely unbearable. He gets taken advantage of consistently and for extended periods of time I have to drop it. The late 80s to early 90s chapters are what did it for me.
well hard to note this book cause you have two story. One with the dumb/should die mc that except for taking our money doesn't serve anything. I just skip all his parts. then you have the story with the real mc, that embrace the world. 0 stars for the parts with the thing that serve as the "good" more like retard but well, and 4stars for the part with the other one.
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I like the novel, something that bothers me is the mc's personality but I think it will change with the passing of the chapters, I just hope it doesn't take too long.
Hey author why did you make the mc so naive and idiot in chapters 80 - 90. It makes me way too angry to read the next chapters
Good story the start was terrible but do not drop it as it eventually gets better as mc's personality will change.I very much like these kind of stories I recommend you also read villain retirement it probably the best story with an evil mc on this platform.please give me story suggestions if you want.
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Just let the evil mc take over just cant bear to read the wimpy mc either merge them or just kill off the wimpy one ............................
Okay so the novel has a lot of potential. However, the mc is naive, weak and stupid as well as a pushover and when the host introduced his evil persona I thought the story would turn around but the it’s only temporary and after that it becomes really hard to read the chapters of the beta mc, I literally skimmed through the 90s cause the mc is over the level of idiocity. I see a little bit of character improvement but it’s too slow. I would suggest either merging the 2 or letting his evil self take over due to a trauma or something. Overall if it wasn’t for the free event on this novel I would have stopped reading after the beta mc returned from the trip to roselake town
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Great book but i don't like the wimp character i know you are trying to develop its character but for me it hinders the story from becoming more interesting after a few chaps with him i just skipped rest of his chapter it was that bad so please do something about that and please keep updating it regularly love this novel
The only problem I had with this novel is that Wimp personality of MC is annoying, even if you are going for character development it's too much. Just make the evil one permanent.
Revelar spoiler
A few bits of information if you even want to proceed with reading this novel : (-) MC is slow to adapt and he is a “wimp”, meaning if you came here for an actual villain this isn’t the novel you want or if you came here for an intelligent and calculating MC also do not read this book (+) The premise of the story is interesting where you get this fantasy world with Gods, Adventurers (Players), Classic ranking systems like Silver, Gold, Platinum (*) The characters are decent, the novel is set in first person and thus heavily relies on dialogue and interactions for you to know more about them which unfortunately means World Background takes a few points off despite an interesting setting due to the fact that it is strictly first person with lack of early-novel exploration events (*) Writing quality is decent for a webnovel nothing much to say though the main issues are typos which isn’t that bad ====••===••===••===••===••===••==== Writing Quality : 3.5/5 nothing crazy but not horrible Updating Stability : 5/5 its still updating with a good amount of chapters to read [Slow-Paced] Story Development : 3/5 its ok, the MC does get around to doing things but its nothing much and at the moment hes still within the starter area Character Design : 3/5 not a personal fan of the MC but it does make for more “danger” when it comes to him going out World Background : 4/5 unexplored for the most part but has a lot of potential ================================ Tips for the author : - It helps to switch between the MC and the people he has interacted with in order to develop characters and the world more easily and it also lets us take a break from prolonged firstperson view which can be exhausting and boring to read - Fix typos - Lots of world potential and character potential so capitalize on it
first 20 chapters were pretty Boeing after that 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
So inconsistent. The author keeps on contradicting themselves with their own words and many things make no sense. I kept on reading it because I thought 'At least this isn't as inconsistent as The Flash,' but then it became as inconsistent as The Flash. For example, why does the MC not do anything at all to help defeat the monsters when he's so overpowered and nice? And the Evil Heart has a duration that has to end before it gets reactivated, yet the author insists that the duration will never end?
Great plot. Start will be very slow because the author is introducing all the plot elements and the wimpy character side is very annoying but trust me it gets better within some time. Give it a try and you won't be disappointed.
Mc is insufferable, can stand him but the story/ plot and the world background looks good so far. Only 70 chapters in but I hope you merged them together or killed the idiot cause I will quit otherwise.
chapter 33 the mc talks to the system but the reply is not there I only see mc side of conversation where is the systems side of the conversation I feel like I'm reading only half the chapter
Alright, avoiding spoilers, this is just a great novel. Personally, I don’t understand why people hate the MC’s ‘wimpy’ side because I don’t see some average Joe construction working becoming a tyrant immediately.. Love villainous MCs in any case though, and it’s a pity that this novel stopped receiving updates.. Aside from this review, could anyone else suggest some other novels similar to this one?
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I really like the story and world building . The thing that is settim me off is the good side of the MC cause he's really annoying and it makes it difficult to read while is in charge. Can't the MC embrace the evil side and become one? Evil mc is a menace. keep up author 🫡
Haven't read it yet but I will now, I just want to say this here.... MC's background is similar to mine except the last 2...... 1. I don't live in an apartment, but my dad's house (May he rest in peace) And 2. I haven't had a girlfriend since I was 24 (I'm going 34)
PLEASE K*LL THE WIMPY GUY HE IS REALLY ANNOYING. THE EVIL HEART IS THE BEST. PLEASE MERGE OR K*LL THE WIMPY GUY. THERE IS NO CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT IN HIM
Sir I am fan of you work I support you own art but why mc like that even some kid got bully they fight back. Can you make more mature the mc like he almost killed by other only plot protect him. (sorry to my English).
I have read the first chapters and i have to say that they were enjoyable. Then i read the reviews and saw about the mc's presonality(most people dropped around chapt 80-90) can someone tell me if he changes cause im not sure if i should read or not...
everything would be okay about this novel, but the MC is so infuriating that i just can't read it anymore. when he's not using evil heart, he's just ughhh (trusts and helps whoever, would rather get killed than kill, can't make any smart choices or stand for himself) in short i recommend reading only by skipping chapters, otherwise you'll want MC dead all the time (I've read up to i think chapter 80)
Revelar spoiler The main characters personality is absolutely unbearable. He gets taken advantage of consistently and for extended periods of time I have to drop it. The late 80s to early 90s chapters are what did it for me.
well hard to note this book cause you have two story. One with the dumb/should die mc that except for taking our money doesn't serve anything. I just skip all his parts. then you have the story with the real mc, that embrace the world. 0 stars for the parts with the thing that serve as the "good" more like retard but well, and 4stars for the part with the other one.
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I like the novel, something that bothers me is the mc's personality but I think it will change with the passing of the chapters, I just hope it doesn't take too long.
Hey author why did you make the mc so naive and idiot in chapters 80 - 90. It makes me way too angry to read the next chapters
Good story the start was terrible but do not drop it as it eventually gets better as mc's personality will change.I very much like these kind of stories I recommend you also read villain retirement it probably the best story with an evil mc on this platform.please give me story suggestions if you want.
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Just let the evil mc take over just cant bear to read the wimpy mc either merge them or just kill off the wimpy one ............................
Okay so the novel has a lot of potential. However, the mc is naive, weak and stupid as well as a pushover and when the host introduced his evil persona I thought the story would turn around but the it’s only temporary and after that it becomes really hard to read the chapters of the beta mc, I literally skimmed through the 90s cause the mc is over the level of idiocity. I see a little bit of character improvement but it’s too slow. I would suggest either merging the 2 or letting his evil self take over due to a trauma or something. Overall if it wasn’t for the free event on this novel I would have stopped reading after the beta mc returned from the trip to roselake town
Revelar spoiler Great book but i don't like the wimp character i know you are trying to develop its character but for me it hinders the story from becoming more interesting after a few chaps with him i just skipped rest of his chapter it was that bad so please do something about that and please keep updating it regularly love this novel
The only problem I had with this novel is that Wimp personality of MC is annoying, even if you are going for character development it's too much. Just make the evil one permanent.
Revelar spoiler A few bits of information if you even want to proceed with reading this novel : (-) MC is slow to adapt and he is a “wimp”, meaning if you came here for an actual villain this isn’t the novel you want or if you came here for an intelligent and calculating MC also do not read this book (+) The premise of the story is interesting where you get this fantasy world with Gods, Adventurers (Players), Classic ranking systems like Silver, Gold, Platinum (*) The characters are decent, the novel is set in first person and thus heavily relies on dialogue and interactions for you to know more about them which unfortunately means World Background takes a few points off despite an interesting setting due to the fact that it is strictly first person with lack of early-novel exploration events (*) Writing quality is decent for a webnovel nothing much to say though the main issues are typos which isn’t that bad ====••===••===••===••===••===••==== Writing Quality : 3.5/5 nothing crazy but not horrible Updating Stability : 5/5 its still updating with a good amount of chapters to read [Slow-Paced] Story Development : 3/5 its ok, the MC does get around to doing things but its nothing much and at the moment hes still within the starter area Character Design : 3/5 not a personal fan of the MC but it does make for more “danger” when it comes to him going out World Background : 4/5 unexplored for the most part but has a lot of potential ================================ Tips for the author : - It helps to switch between the MC and the people he has interacted with in order to develop characters and the world more easily and it also lets us take a break from prolonged firstperson view which can be exhausting and boring to read - Fix typos - Lots of world potential and character potential so capitalize on it
first 20 chapters were pretty Boeing after that 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
So inconsistent. The author keeps on contradicting themselves with their own words and many things make no sense. I kept on reading it because I thought 'At least this isn't as inconsistent as The Flash,' but then it became as inconsistent as The Flash. For example, why does the MC not do anything at all to help defeat the monsters when he's so overpowered and nice? And the Evil Heart has a duration that has to end before it gets reactivated, yet the author insists that the duration will never end?
Great plot. Start will be very slow because the author is introducing all the plot elements and the wimpy character side is very annoying but trust me it gets better within some time. Give it a try and you won't be disappointed.