My Evil System

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rampa2510

Great plot. Start will be very slow because the author is introducing all the plot elements and the wimpy character side is very annoying but trust me it gets better within some time. Give it a try and you won't be disappointed.

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Rafi_Uddin_3519

Just let the evil mc take over just cant bear to read the wimpy mc either merge them or just kill off the wimpy one ............................

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Hacker_69

hello author 👋 when you said after chapter 20 he will be evil and it was true and it is so cool and I love it and also please make more because I really love it and some of us loved it too so please make more and don't over work your self and thank you

LV 3

Andrey_M

So inconsistent. The author keeps on contradicting themselves with their own words and many things make no sense. I kept on reading it because I thought 'At least this isn't as inconsistent as The Flash,' but then it became as inconsistent as The Flash. For example, why does the MC not do anything at all to help defeat the monsters when he's so overpowered and nice? And the Evil Heart has a duration that has to end before it gets reactivated, yet the author insists that the duration will never end?

LV 12

Ovierode_Igoru

This is a good novel with a great plot. Although the MC is winey at the start after chapter 20 he turns cold. all in all great novel so far. Hope author doesn't ruin it by adding a harem as they just slow the plot down and are badly written

LV 4

Iglirgus

A few bits of information if you even want to proceed with reading this novel : (-) MC is slow to adapt and he is a “wimp”, meaning if you came here for an actual villain this isn’t the novel you want or if you came here for an intelligent and calculating MC also do not read this book (+) The premise of the story is interesting where you get this fantasy world with Gods, Adventurers (Players), Classic ranking systems like Silver, Gold, Platinum (*) The characters are decent, the novel is set in first person and thus heavily relies on dialogue and interactions for you to know more about them which unfortunately means World Background takes a few points off despite an interesting setting due to the fact that it is strictly first person with lack of early-novel exploration events (*) Writing quality is decent for a webnovel nothing much to say though the main issues are typos which isn’t that bad ====••===••===••===••===••===••==== Writing Quality : 3.5/5 nothing crazy but not horrible Updating Stability : 5/5 its still updating with a good amount of chapters to read [Slow-Paced] Story Development : 3/5 its ok, the MC does get around to doing things but its nothing much and at the moment hes still within the starter area Character Design : 3/5 not a personal fan of the MC but it does make for more “danger” when it comes to him going out World Background : 4/5 unexplored for the most part but has a lot of potential ================================ Tips for the author : - It helps to switch between the MC and the people he has interacted with in order to develop characters and the world more easily and it also lets us take a break from prolonged firstperson view which can be exhausting and boring to read - Fix typos - Lots of world potential and character potential so capitalize on it

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kuuhh

well hard to note this book cause you have two story. One with the dumb/should die mc that except for taking our money doesn't serve anything. I just skip all his parts. then you have the story with the real mc, that embrace the world. 0 stars for the parts with the thing that serve as the "good" more like retard but well, and 4stars for the part with the other one.

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The_prezismoke

This is a masterpiece best system novel ever 😂😂😍😍😍

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DaoistlZjv6b

Hey author why did you make the mc so naive and idiot in chapters 80 - 90. It makes me way too angry to read the next chapters

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Shinoa_69

I just scroll through the wimpy mc part hahaha

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the_running_joker

PLEASE K*LL THE WIMPY GUY HE IS REALLY ANNOYING. THE EVIL HEART IS THE BEST. PLEASE MERGE OR K*LL THE WIMPY GUY. THERE IS NO CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT IN HIM

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Ramom

I like the novel, something that bothers me is the mc's personality but I think it will change with the passing of the chapters, I just hope it doesn't take too long.

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Zerus

sorry will definitely be a really good story but the mc is the first 7 chapters all the time just crying. I just can't read any more. The mc upsets me too much.

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Daoist_CloudySky

Read a few chapters. They were fun, i like this style. keep it up.

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The_prezismoke

We need more chaps boss [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Abyss_Edge

Haven't read it yet but I will now, I just want to say this here.... MC's background is similar to mine except the last 2...... 1. I don't live in an apartment, but my dad's house (May he rest in peace) And 2. I haven't had a girlfriend since I was 24 (I'm going 34)

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Smeezy

The main characters personality is absolutely unbearable. He gets taken advantage of consistently and for extended periods of time I have to drop it. The late 80s to early 90s chapters are what did it for me.

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Morningstars_Hell

First 20 ch sucks but after that [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]🤗🤗🤗