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This story has you constantly wishing for a happy ending but always kicking you in the balls. Also the way gods and other powerful beings keep watching him and manipulating fate against him just hurts so much. Other than that it still makes me keep reading and hoping for a happy ending. I hope at some point we get to see him take revenge against the world and other powerful beings that are manipulating him.
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well bro if you are a sadist who like to read this mc suffer. this novel is yours. first mc kill his mom second mc get his mom killed third mc grow edgy and start become a massive killing machine. fourth he nerfed everytime he get power. and he died like a loser. fifth summoned in Holygrail war. and then died.. but summoned again without his memories HE MAKE HIS WIFE A WIDOW!!! too boring for me. I could even foreseen than he will suffer more in future. heck with those miserable fate of him.
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The mc is constantly sad, whenever he gets up after something, dude immediately get beat down and cry on the floor. But for some reason i want to read more of this, to see the miraculous possible recover of his after brawling his eyes out for so long
Demasiado drama para mi gusto, no me gustan las historias donde el MC pierde la cordura...................................................................
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author is there Yuri or ntr in it I hope not also author will mc take the girls with him or not please tell me
this ff is amazing. in order to see if this ff is worth reading, I read the first few ch from fate/stay night arc, and it was well written. I hope that the author can add more chapters frequently and that he won't drop this book
I was enjoying the story, but i saw the author reply to someones comment on a chapter, talking about how itll be a huge harem of like 30 girls. Really man? That ruined the whole thing for me
I feel like a slow developing story, and a multiverse story is just a combination that doesnt mix well. Its almost impossible to implement multiple universes while giving them the same depth, and having a slow developing plot
Perfect ! I want the sequel ............................. ........................................................................................................;
I'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better over time and makes you identify with the MC I'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better over time and makes you identify with the MC, through I'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, to me I'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC.I'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, I think it's a good one.I'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, I feltI'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, II'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, it made meI'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, it made me I'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better over time and makes you identify with the MC, it made me lloI'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better over time and makes you identify with the MC, it made me lloI'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, it made meI'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, it made me I'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, It made me cry so it's something... I'm looking forward to more chapters
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Its one of the best Naruto fanfic..It does a very good job at making the side characters a lot more interesting my only complaint is that the MC is to emo in a antisocial broody kind of way.
как на русском называется оригинал? .......................................................................................................................................
Powiem tak jeden z lepszych powieści jakie czytałem z Universum Naruto fabuła dobra główną postać no co powiedzieć choć pokręcona to jest bardzo dobra czekam na więcej <3
The plot is a story spelled out well. Well, the mc looks too boring, I personally am not interested in reading about a hero on whom even Sasuke Uchiha looks like a Guru of social activity.
Very good story. It feels like a completely different story than the original Naruto because the way the author made the mc is so good we follow him through his journey and hardships. The emotions shown by the characters is also very good as I shed some tears while reading it.
I really do not understand the abrupt change of the protagonist, I mean, it doesn't make sense, what? In the end, will he also kill Ino and Hinata? Will it be redeemed? Or will you do the typical thing that they will love him even knowing all the wrong he has done?
Stamppot is prepared by boiling the vegetables and potatoes separately. Once done, the potatoes are added to the same pot as the vegetables and all are thoroughly mashed together. Rookworst, a type of smoked sausage, is the preferred piece of meat to be added to the dish in the Netherlands. Stamppot can also be made in a single pot. Potatoes and the vegetables or fruit of choice are placed in the pot. Water is added, and the mixture is left to boil. After the vegetables are cooked and drained, some milk, butter and salt are added, and the vegetables are mashed together. Sometimes the same pot is used to warm sausage as well, but those aren't mashed in. An example often cooked by this method is hutspot with carrots and onions as vegetables.
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It's a harem story by that I mean the author will bend reality and all common sense how to make a harem, but I know a lot of people like lazy writing as long as they can live out their fantasies of women liking them.
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Very good, it was really a good read GOOD GOOD GOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOOD
maaaaaaaaaaan what this awesoooome gem everything perfect 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 ..... .. . ... ..... . . .
mc is gebore in 'n clan wat ninja toerusting maak, maar na 30 pette is die enigste ding wat ek hom sien gebruik twee messe en ek weet nie eers of hy die een was wat dit geskep het nie, mc is slim, hy het 'n kunsmatige son geskep , en het die hele tyd spandeer om idees in sy notaboek te teken, maar tot dusver is die enigste ding wat hy geskep het 'n chakra-battery wat hy nie gebruik nie, in die 54 hoofstukke wat ek gelees het, het hy glad niks gebruik nie, selfs toe hy amper gesterf het.
Firstly, I am grateful to the author for having a Spanish version of this Fic. The story catches you throughout its development and entertains, a bit of OC or that does not appear in the canon but it gives an interesting touch to the story. Romantic interests are good and few, luckily it's not the typical Huge Harem. Although the beginning can be a bit confusing and you get a little annoyed by the lifeless attitude of the MC, at least it is developed a little for the better. In conclusion, I recommend it.
hey author when are you correcting the genderbended words like when you are talking about MC you will sometimes use 'she/her' and when talking about girl character you use 'he/his'
Good novel, the grammar is good too. I just don't understand, how can you mess up pronouns so badly. And it's not a one time thing, the pronouns are messed up in every single sentence. At this rate I will have no choice but to change my gender.... That's how bad it is.
this is really good ..... ........................................................................................................................
Meatballs 1 pound ground beef ½ pound ground veal ½ pound ground pork 2 cloves garlic, minced 2 eggs 1 cup freshly grated Romano cheese 1 ½ tablespoons chopped Italian flat leaf parsley salt and ground black pepper to taste 2 cups stale Italian bread, crumbled 1 ½ cups lukewarm water 1 cup olive oil Directions Step 1 Combine beef, veal, and pork in a large bowl. Add garlic, eggs, cheese, parsley, salt and pepper. Step 2 Blend bread crumbs into meat mixture. Slowly add the water 1/2 cup at a time. The mixture should be very moist but still hold its shape if rolled into meatballs. (I usually use about 1 1/4 cups of water). Shape into meatballs. Step 3 Heat olive oil in a large skillet. Fry meatballs in batches. When the meatball is very brown and slightly crisp remove from the heat and drain on a paper towel. (If your mixture is too wet, cover the meatballs while they are cooking so that they hold their shape better.)
This story has you constantly wishing for a happy ending but always kicking you in the balls. Also the way gods and other powerful beings keep watching him and manipulating fate against him just hurts so much. Other than that it still makes me keep reading and hoping for a happy ending. I hope at some point we get to see him take revenge against the world and other powerful beings that are manipulating him.
Revelar spoiler well bro if you are a sadist who like to read this mc suffer. this novel is yours. first mc kill his mom second mc get his mom killed third mc grow edgy and start become a massive killing machine. fourth he nerfed everytime he get power. and he died like a loser. fifth summoned in Holygrail war. and then died.. but summoned again without his memories HE MAKE HIS WIFE A WIDOW!!! too boring for me. I could even foreseen than he will suffer more in future. heck with those miserable fate of him.
Revelar spoiler The mc is constantly sad, whenever he gets up after something, dude immediately get beat down and cry on the floor. But for some reason i want to read more of this, to see the miraculous possible recover of his after brawling his eyes out for so long
Demasiado drama para mi gusto, no me gustan las historias donde el MC pierde la cordura...................................................................
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this ff is amazing. in order to see if this ff is worth reading, I read the first few ch from fate/stay night arc, and it was well written. I hope that the author can add more chapters frequently and that he won't drop this book
I was enjoying the story, but i saw the author reply to someones comment on a chapter, talking about how itll be a huge harem of like 30 girls. Really man? That ruined the whole thing for me
I feel like a slow developing story, and a multiverse story is just a combination that doesnt mix well. Its almost impossible to implement multiple universes while giving them the same depth, and having a slow developing plot
Perfect ! I want the sequel ............................. ........................................................................................................;
I'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better over time and makes you identify with the MC I'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better over time and makes you identify with the MC, through I'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, to me I'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC.I'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, I think it's a good one.I'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, I feltI'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, II'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, it made meI'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, it made me I'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better over time and makes you identify with the MC, it made me lloI'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better over time and makes you identify with the MC, it made me lloI'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, it made meI'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, it made me I'll just say that at the beginning the MC had a lot of inconsistencies when it came to relating and things like that, and then that he recovers the memories of his past life one would think that his character would improve, but no, although his development has gone well although slow, the MC doesn't understand what he wants or know his feelings well, It's like a newborn child, but killing everyone it gets in its way... But it's a very good read that gets better with time and makes you identify with the MC, It made me cry so it's something... I'm looking forward to more chapters
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Its one of the best Naruto fanfic..It does a very good job at making the side characters a lot more interesting my only complaint is that the MC is to emo in a antisocial broody kind of way.
как на русском называется оригинал? .......................................................................................................................................
Powiem tak jeden z lepszych powieści jakie czytałem z Universum Naruto fabuła dobra główną postać no co powiedzieć choć pokręcona to jest bardzo dobra czekam na więcej <3
The plot is a story spelled out well. Well, the mc looks too boring, I personally am not interested in reading about a hero on whom even Sasuke Uchiha looks like a Guru of social activity.
Very good story. It feels like a completely different story than the original Naruto because the way the author made the mc is so good we follow him through his journey and hardships. The emotions shown by the characters is also very good as I shed some tears while reading it.
I really do not understand the abrupt change of the protagonist, I mean, it doesn't make sense, what? In the end, will he also kill Ino and Hinata? Will it be redeemed? Or will you do the typical thing that they will love him even knowing all the wrong he has done?
Stamppot is prepared by boiling the vegetables and potatoes separately. Once done, the potatoes are added to the same pot as the vegetables and all are thoroughly mashed together. Rookworst, a type of smoked sausage, is the preferred piece of meat to be added to the dish in the Netherlands. Stamppot can also be made in a single pot. Potatoes and the vegetables or fruit of choice are placed in the pot. Water is added, and the mixture is left to boil. After the vegetables are cooked and drained, some milk, butter and salt are added, and the vegetables are mashed together. Sometimes the same pot is used to warm sausage as well, but those aren't mashed in. An example often cooked by this method is hutspot with carrots and onions as vegetables.
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Revelar spoiler It's a harem story by that I mean the author will bend reality and all common sense how to make a harem, but I know a lot of people like lazy writing as long as they can live out their fantasies of women liking them.
Revelar spoiler Very good, it was really a good read GOOD GOOD GOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOOD
maaaaaaaaaaan what this awesoooome gem everything perfect 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 ..... .. . ... ..... . . .
mc is gebore in 'n clan wat ninja toerusting maak, maar na 30 pette is die enigste ding wat ek hom sien gebruik twee messe en ek weet nie eers of hy die een was wat dit geskep het nie, mc is slim, hy het 'n kunsmatige son geskep , en het die hele tyd spandeer om idees in sy notaboek te teken, maar tot dusver is die enigste ding wat hy geskep het 'n chakra-battery wat hy nie gebruik nie, in die 54 hoofstukke wat ek gelees het, het hy glad niks gebruik nie, selfs toe hy amper gesterf het.
Firstly, I am grateful to the author for having a Spanish version of this Fic. The story catches you throughout its development and entertains, a bit of OC or that does not appear in the canon but it gives an interesting touch to the story. Romantic interests are good and few, luckily it's not the typical Huge Harem. Although the beginning can be a bit confusing and you get a little annoyed by the lifeless attitude of the MC, at least it is developed a little for the better. In conclusion, I recommend it.
hey author when are you correcting the genderbended words like when you are talking about MC you will sometimes use 'she/her' and when talking about girl character you use 'he/his'
Good novel, the grammar is good too. I just don't understand, how can you mess up pronouns so badly. And it's not a one time thing, the pronouns are messed up in every single sentence. At this rate I will have no choice but to change my gender.... That's how bad it is.
this is really good ..... ........................................................................................................................
Meatballs 1 pound ground beef ½ pound ground veal ½ pound ground pork 2 cloves garlic, minced 2 eggs 1 cup freshly grated Romano cheese 1 ½ tablespoons chopped Italian flat leaf parsley salt and ground black pepper to taste 2 cups stale Italian bread, crumbled 1 ½ cups lukewarm water 1 cup olive oil Directions Step 1 Combine beef, veal, and pork in a large bowl. Add garlic, eggs, cheese, parsley, salt and pepper. Step 2 Blend bread crumbs into meat mixture. Slowly add the water 1/2 cup at a time. The mixture should be very moist but still hold its shape if rolled into meatballs. (I usually use about 1 1/4 cups of water). Shape into meatballs. Step 3 Heat olive oil in a large skillet. Fry meatballs in batches. When the meatball is very brown and slightly crisp remove from the heat and drain on a paper towel. (If your mixture is too wet, cover the meatballs while they are cooking so that they hold their shape better.)