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I was immediately drawn to the title of the novel, the prologue was also very interesting, all in all this can turn out to be the next best thing, hope to read longer chapters by this new and talented author <3
I am not sure how to start with this. My advice is that, try to be more detailed in explaining the whole scenario because for me as a reader, it seems lacking of some elements. It might be short but this novel has a potential. You just need to dive into on how you can explore more of what your story is into. Just keep writing and practicing. ^_^
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Im not even a real writer myself so i cant critque anything but ive read hundreds of books and some even like this and I have to say they are pretty intresting short stories were the mystery murder turns dangerous and they both fall in love. Not a lot of chapters to go off of yet but im looking forward to see how things progress.
Hello! Your shy author here, This is my first time writing a novel. I hope the readers will enjoy it. Please feel free to share your opinions and thoughts, thank you!
The story is complex enough to make you hooked and mystified by it. I can sense that this work was well thought out and I am happy to say that it has quality. The story also progresses nicely that I am thrilled to read chap to chap. Kudos for a job well done!
I was immediately drawn to the title of the novel, the prologue was also very interesting, all in all this can turn out to be the next best thing, hope to read longer chapters by this new and talented author <3
I am not sure how to start with this. My advice is that, try to be more detailed in explaining the whole scenario because for me as a reader, it seems lacking of some elements. It might be short but this novel has a potential. You just need to dive into on how you can explore more of what your story is into. Just keep writing and practicing. ^_^
Revelar spoiler Im not even a real writer myself so i cant critque anything but ive read hundreds of books and some even like this and I have to say they are pretty intresting short stories were the mystery murder turns dangerous and they both fall in love. Not a lot of chapters to go off of yet but im looking forward to see how things progress.
Hello! Your shy author here, This is my first time writing a novel. I hope the readers will enjoy it. Please feel free to share your opinions and thoughts, thank you!
The story is complex enough to make you hooked and mystified by it. I can sense that this work was well thought out and I am happy to say that it has quality. The story also progresses nicely that I am thrilled to read chap to chap. Kudos for a job well done!