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Bruh I'm on Chapter 10 and so far there's only like 1 chapter's worth of content. Most of it is random stuff or polls. I don't know if you're allergic to writing content related to the actual fanfic or if this is just your style, but yeah it's not meant for me.
thank you for resuming this fanfic and please can you increase the release chapters like 7 chapters a week pretty please
An author who can't even write a story. Always distracted with unnecessary fillers, wiki explanations and harem for no reason at all. Don't bother, it's dropped anyway.
bro my honest opinion I didn't read the story but I'm going to read and going to reach it after reading your info bro I need happy ending for Happy Ending every story line he does miserable your summer take over his place give him is peaceful ending can anyone do this no one you guys are useless give an his peaceful ending a happy ending
absolutely awesome of a system the way and it's personality got me laughing and also got me interested if system is male or female i can't wait for the next update and wish you good luck and hope you update soon
Lanjutkan jika sudah jauh. Jangan sampai cerita nya di gantung hehe. Semangat update, sehat selalu, dan berbahagia. 😁 A a aa aa a a a a a aaaaaa
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it's very good compare to your other novel like mushoku or fate one mc is a bit sisy i still like it cuz i mean mc is reincarnated in aot world is total hellhole and story development is great i just hope you don't drop put on a break it'll really disappointing i hope you keep going and want to know what your gonna write in near future too also add some OTG and AZATHOTH moment for new template it's fun
I'm not reading it yet. But, this take my interest. So i'll give it a try. That's it....... ... .. ............. ....... ............ ..... ........... ...... .
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...................................................................................,..,.,..,...,..,..,.,.,..,.,..,.,...,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.My brother from another mother .... i like this novel very much. I am also called Rakesh and i imagine me being the mc in the novel
The story is really good but it could be cut in half. Way too much is written that's not about or related to the story and too many unnecessary/ needless character sheets
The story was readable but when you update every 10 days and half of the chapter is mc looking at his stats and talking to system it leaves only 500 or so word count of readable content ( which i have no problem with), i forget that I was even reading this novel and it's story so then i have to reread the novel with which your " author note " or the author chapter is not helping at all so i am dropping this , maybe i will come back in 100 or so chapters if you have not dropped it by then (of which i am pretty sure you will)
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well at first i want to give full of five star but your kinda slow update ruined dont misunderstand I'm loving it so good job author-san keep up the good work P.S I'm sorry English is not my first language P.P.S I'm not bot hahaha
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only thing i could wish for out of this is if there were more frequent chapter updates.................................................................
nice story bhai keep it up. ........., .....................................[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Vote of confidence ,i hope it will be multiversal fanfic it seems to be structure like one , i hope he will get a genius template they are fun, especially a batman one
good story :) ......................... ................................ ...................................... .......................................................
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Then I got tired. It seems pure nonsense, these 10 chapters have the same amount as a single chapter if the author had included fewer meaningless POVs and fewer comments from the author himself. Lots of dull humor for little content
Bruh I'm on Chapter 10 and so far there's only like 1 chapter's worth of content. Most of it is random stuff or polls. I don't know if you're allergic to writing content related to the actual fanfic or if this is just your style, but yeah it's not meant for me.
thank you for resuming this fanfic and please can you increase the release chapters like 7 chapters a week pretty please
An author who can't even write a story. Always distracted with unnecessary fillers, wiki explanations and harem for no reason at all. Don't bother, it's dropped anyway.
bro my honest opinion I didn't read the story but I'm going to read and going to reach it after reading your info bro I need happy ending for Happy Ending every story line he does miserable your summer take over his place give him is peaceful ending can anyone do this no one you guys are useless give an his peaceful ending a happy ending
absolutely awesome of a system the way and it's personality got me laughing and also got me interested if system is male or female i can't wait for the next update and wish you good luck and hope you update soon
Lanjutkan jika sudah jauh. Jangan sampai cerita nya di gantung hehe. Semangat update, sehat selalu, dan berbahagia. 😁 A a aa aa a a a a a aaaaaa
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it's very good compare to your other novel like mushoku or fate one mc is a bit sisy i still like it cuz i mean mc is reincarnated in aot world is total hellhole and story development is great i just hope you don't drop put on a break it'll really disappointing i hope you keep going and want to know what your gonna write in near future too also add some OTG and AZATHOTH moment for new template it's fun
I'm not reading it yet. But, this take my interest. So i'll give it a try. That's it....... ... .. ............. ....... ............ ..... ........... ...... .
.......................................................... .......................................................... ..........................................................
...................................................................................,..,.,..,...,..,..,.,.,..,.,..,.,...,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.My brother from another mother .... i like this novel very much. I am also called Rakesh and i imagine me being the mc in the novel
The story is really good but it could be cut in half. Way too much is written that's not about or related to the story and too many unnecessary/ needless character sheets
The story was readable but when you update every 10 days and half of the chapter is mc looking at his stats and talking to system it leaves only 500 or so word count of readable content ( which i have no problem with), i forget that I was even reading this novel and it's story so then i have to reread the novel with which your " author note " or the author chapter is not helping at all so i am dropping this , maybe i will come back in 100 or so chapters if you have not dropped it by then (of which i am pretty sure you will)
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well at first i want to give full of five star but your kinda slow update ruined dont misunderstand I'm loving it so good job author-san keep up the good work P.S I'm sorry English is not my first language P.P.S I'm not bot hahaha
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Harosh mujik harosh👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😉👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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only thing i could wish for out of this is if there were more frequent chapter updates.................................................................
nice story bhai keep it up. ........., .....................................[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Vote of confidence ,i hope it will be multiversal fanfic it seems to be structure like one , i hope he will get a genius template they are fun, especially a batman one
good story :) ......................... ................................ ...................................... .......................................................
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Great story Djddjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjddjjdjdjddjdjdjdjdjsjsjsjdjdjdjejejehejejehehheeheheheuehehdhdhhehehdhdheheheueueudeyeydhdhhdydydydydydyddyyrdyydydhdhdydueueyehdhdudhdudududududududhdhdhdhhh
Then I got tired. It seems pure nonsense, these 10 chapters have the same amount as a single chapter if the author had included fewer meaningless POVs and fewer comments from the author himself. Lots of dull humor for little content