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Capítulo 18: Notice

This chapter is getting horrible reviews so far I just want to let everyone know this. This ff wasn't originally supposed to be a comedy but a lot of people liked when it was so I made it like that. I'm just confused because he obviously learned dangerous and deadly spells I am not going to write about a spell and have the mc never use it. It's pointless and useless.

The mc is a thief sometimes a gentleman thief and sometimes not. did you expect the MLE to just be like 'cool yeah take this really old artifact

bro no worries'. Like the wizards aren't going to watch him to a big performance and just sit there and do nothing.

Stealing shit from wizards is hard because of all of the wards and protective mechanisms.

I am not going to re write this chapter but I do like the feedback and I just wanted to make this to show that it is noted and I will improve in the future chapters. I never expected this ff to literally go crazy with views and stuff but I appreciate it.


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