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When i started reading this story i didn’t expect much because of the quantity of negative reviews this novel has but i was pleasantly surprised when i got into the story, yes the mc starts as a beta whimp but he actually gets proper character development and the story is not as simple as it seems in the beginning, right now i’m being enjoying my reading experience with this novel but there are key problems that most be fix, first the grammar of the first chapters is awful to an extreme extent that way a very few number of new views will stick with the series if it is not fix, second the mc first wife who ngl i don’t like her, she got introduced into the story by force and her attitude is a huge problem and she doesn’t deserves that place, third no discord to give author feedback. Overall the story is really good but need some mayor improvement in those 3 aspects asap.
I font know what to say. I gave up after reading the first 10 chapters. The reasons are mainly the authors horrible choice of words or usage of metaphors he does not understand. The grammar is horrible. He and she is constantly mixed. Words are used in the wrong way. Statements become questions and vice versa. When I i scrolled through the chapters from 10 to the locked chapters i did not see any sign of the author learning or going through a learning process of making his writing better. Even the special world information chapter in chapter ~50 was full of mistakes and misuse of words. Also its called cultivation not culture. If you write a cultivation novel at least you should inow that word and how to use it. Thats my impression. I will move this novel from might be interesting into my trash quality bookmarking list.
author pls think about rewriting starting chapter,Mc of this story destroyed it much more than grammar...if you manage to create normal MC that goes through normal character development and not this pathetic excuse of a human this story would be one of the best[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
A nugget for the eyes; as always, thank you to making my day. [img=update][img=exp]
After reading all free chapters, here is my take : MC is depressed again and again, author did mentioned he started from weak. But i didnt like some of his actions. A lot of grammar errors like he/she used wrongly.. And author is cheaped on the free chapters..could have gone like 50 chapters free but chosed to do it lesser.(i have seen worst) So yeah, gonna stop reading this. if this book became free fr 24hrs, i would continue. In the mean time, i wont use any free pass/ads to unlock chapters because i cant read it in 1 go..
Someone tell me what chapter to start from - coz my brain is rotting from this ... .. . . .. .. .. .. . ... .. .. . .. . . .
Poorly written. Doesn't make much sense. MC is just a stupid brainless jerk I can't just keep reading This review just needs so many characters. Ugghhh!
even though the story is interesting but it has the most idiotic and trash MC ever. It's not like the mc is naive or something in the beginning which will get better after character development because character development is for mentaly sane people but the MC is mentally disabled with a brain of a donkey maybe even worse
Unbelievably stupid and pathetic MC. That's all I can say. its very hard to read especially the earlier chapters. i suggest you find other novel to read
I like the novel. However, there are some things that are very annoying. First, the bad grammar, which doesn't improve at all. 2. The choice of words at certain points in the story. 3. No attention is paid to which person is speaking at the time and so the pronouns are swapped.
Pretty good concept could be executed better for sure but the main problem is how it feels like a cheap knockoff translator was used to write the whole thing… Its so bad it makes you think it was done on purpose so yea extremely broken English borderline unreadable
the story was very interesting in the beginning but it was was ruined for me by character of the mc, if you can get over the initial 30 chapters it is a good novel but sadly its not for me
started good went to **** [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Honestly this novel is all over the place it makes no sense He reincarnates but even that part in Itself makes no sense the more you read. Its like rhey wrote the beginning and then just discarded it also timeline is confusing. had potential to be a good story but it was ruined
So the story would be an interesting read if someone more responsible wrote (not trying to be mean) because the Grammer is really bad. The author sometimes puts random words that don't even belong.
Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash
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A terrible book had so much potential but was ruined has nothing Madam plot armour unbelievable stupid despite having a mental age of someone in his 30s story is rushed
I sincerely hope that the author can fix the gramatical errors but the overall story is great.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A novel with a world background, and interesting and unpredictable characters. I am currently in my 150th chapter and I must say that I am more than surprised to have discovered such a rare pearl. The beginning is disorganized and contains several spelling errors that even a school novice will not be able to commit, but the author did not stop repeating them in the first ten chapters. But after being doubtful several times, I discovered what many people had missed! The mc that seemed stupid and harmless turned out to be more ruthless, more intelligent than ever! And spelling errors are no longer exists! If only he could correct them at the beginning, I'm sure this novel would become more popular than now! All this to wish him good luck and a big thank you for allowing me to appreciate such a novel, and to hope that he will continue in his work! This is the first time I have taken the time to give my opinion on a novel. I hope this will help other slaves of readings to appreciate like me.[img=recommend]
Revelar spoiler
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
it just like every other reincarnation story. More importantly stupid mc. He is incubus, so he should not be get play by around. An incubus who drools,gets played around. Does Author not know anything about.
Sigh I really dislike writers like you it's like your existence is for nothing more than to irritate people if was MC id probably crossover just to destroy you.
Trash..................................................................................................................... ...................................................... .............................. .......
here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse
When i started reading this story i didn’t expect much because of the quantity of negative reviews this novel has but i was pleasantly surprised when i got into the story, yes the mc starts as a beta whimp but he actually gets proper character development and the story is not as simple as it seems in the beginning, right now i’m being enjoying my reading experience with this novel but there are key problems that most be fix, first the grammar of the first chapters is awful to an extreme extent that way a very few number of new views will stick with the series if it is not fix, second the mc first wife who ngl i don’t like her, she got introduced into the story by force and her attitude is a huge problem and she doesn’t deserves that place, third no discord to give author feedback. Overall the story is really good but need some mayor improvement in those 3 aspects asap.
I font know what to say. I gave up after reading the first 10 chapters. The reasons are mainly the authors horrible choice of words or usage of metaphors he does not understand. The grammar is horrible. He and she is constantly mixed. Words are used in the wrong way. Statements become questions and vice versa. When I i scrolled through the chapters from 10 to the locked chapters i did not see any sign of the author learning or going through a learning process of making his writing better. Even the special world information chapter in chapter ~50 was full of mistakes and misuse of words. Also its called cultivation not culture. If you write a cultivation novel at least you should inow that word and how to use it. Thats my impression. I will move this novel from might be interesting into my trash quality bookmarking list.
author pls think about rewriting starting chapter,Mc of this story destroyed it much more than grammar...if you manage to create normal MC that goes through normal character development and not this pathetic excuse of a human this story would be one of the best[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
A nugget for the eyes; as always, thank you to making my day. [img=update][img=exp]
After reading all free chapters, here is my take : MC is depressed again and again, author did mentioned he started from weak. But i didnt like some of his actions. A lot of grammar errors like he/she used wrongly.. And author is cheaped on the free chapters..could have gone like 50 chapters free but chosed to do it lesser.(i have seen worst) So yeah, gonna stop reading this. if this book became free fr 24hrs, i would continue. In the mean time, i wont use any free pass/ads to unlock chapters because i cant read it in 1 go..
Someone tell me what chapter to start from - coz my brain is rotting from this ... .. . . .. .. .. .. . ... .. .. . .. . . .
Poorly written. Doesn't make much sense. MC is just a stupid brainless jerk I can't just keep reading This review just needs so many characters. Ugghhh!
even though the story is interesting but it has the most idiotic and trash MC ever. It's not like the mc is naive or something in the beginning which will get better after character development because character development is for mentaly sane people but the MC is mentally disabled with a brain of a donkey maybe even worse
Unbelievably stupid and pathetic MC. That's all I can say. its very hard to read especially the earlier chapters. i suggest you find other novel to read
I like the novel. However, there are some things that are very annoying. First, the bad grammar, which doesn't improve at all. 2. The choice of words at certain points in the story. 3. No attention is paid to which person is speaking at the time and so the pronouns are swapped.
Pretty good concept could be executed better for sure but the main problem is how it feels like a cheap knockoff translator was used to write the whole thing… Its so bad it makes you think it was done on purpose so yea extremely broken English borderline unreadable
the story was very interesting in the beginning but it was was ruined for me by character of the mc, if you can get over the initial 30 chapters it is a good novel but sadly its not for me
started good went to **** [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Honestly this novel is all over the place it makes no sense He reincarnates but even that part in Itself makes no sense the more you read. Its like rhey wrote the beginning and then just discarded it also timeline is confusing. had potential to be a good story but it was ruined
So the story would be an interesting read if someone more responsible wrote (not trying to be mean) because the Grammer is really bad. The author sometimes puts random words that don't even belong.
Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash,Trash
Trash ……………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… …………………… ……………………
A terrible book had so much potential but was ruined has nothing Madam plot armour unbelievable stupid despite having a mental age of someone in his 30s story is rushed
I sincerely hope that the author can fix the gramatical errors but the overall story is great.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A novel with a world background, and interesting and unpredictable characters. I am currently in my 150th chapter and I must say that I am more than surprised to have discovered such a rare pearl. The beginning is disorganized and contains several spelling errors that even a school novice will not be able to commit, but the author did not stop repeating them in the first ten chapters. But after being doubtful several times, I discovered what many people had missed! The mc that seemed stupid and harmless turned out to be more ruthless, more intelligent than ever! And spelling errors are no longer exists! If only he could correct them at the beginning, I'm sure this novel would become more popular than now! All this to wish him good luck and a big thank you for allowing me to appreciate such a novel, and to hope that he will continue in his work! This is the first time I have taken the time to give my opinion on a novel. I hope this will help other slaves of readings to appreciate like me.[img=recommend]
Revelar spoiler 1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
it just like every other reincarnation story. More importantly stupid mc. He is incubus, so he should not be get play by around. An incubus who drools,gets played around. Does Author not know anything about.
Sigh I really dislike writers like you it's like your existence is for nothing more than to irritate people if was MC id probably crossover just to destroy you.