Reviews of Tempting Fate by shentiments - Webnovel

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shentiments

Hello guys, thank you for reading my story hope that you can leave a comment or vote on the story. I know that I’m not good at English but I put effort into this story. Please disregard the grammar errors I'm continuing to correct. I know the grammar of my novel is weak, but I hope you can still try to read my story.

2yr
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_ali_b
LV 14 Badge

This is a great story! I loved the characters and the storyline. They always kept me interested! Thank you for sharing your talent with this creative story. The only negative would be that it often used the incorrect pronouns, i.e. he instead of she, which can be updated, and I was still able to follow your fabulous story. Thank you for sharing your creative story!

9mth
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Vanila_Michelle

I like your story, Author. Very interesting and amazing. [img=recommend][img=recommend] So, Emy is the queen and Reed is devil? Please follow my account by clicking red heart. Thank you

2yr
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fgumvlover

Reed is a hella devil im willing to be stepped on 🙈🔥🔥🔥 anyway the storyline characters world building were all well written and amzing! i love it

Revelar spoiler
2yr
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ACGray

I like the plot! The demon lost his power and he have a deal with an angel! I like this kind of story! I will witness how the demon become strong again and he will have an adventure on human realm!

2yr
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Egyptiangodess98

I really like the plot, style of writing, and the author’s attention to details. I could easily relate to Emy. Her frustrationat the beginning of the book is so well portrayed. The story is intriguing right from the very start

2yr
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MiriamRemi

adventures like this are easy, but adapting to situations aren't...he might find the lady, but at First, might find a fault in her, which might make his adventure slower....I know this because I've watched so many movies.... keep it up author ❤️❤️❤️

2yr
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Angelo_Hullana_2844

wow the story was so intriguing. I love how the story goes. The characters was so interesting. There's a lot of twists and turns Enjoy readjng everyone 😊❤️good job author!

2yr
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Aria_Dean

First of all, let me praise you for using our country and the native terms in your story! I'm not going to mention those because that could be a spoiler 😉 I'm not a fan of fantasy genre, but your book caught my interest. I'm okay with demons, humans, and angels concept, that's why. Your grammar and writing skills are fine. I didn't find or notice any mistakes at all (maybe because I was busy reading). I'm the type of person who doesn't like reading, but because your book is super interesting, I decided to give it a go. I only read books that deserve my views and attention. I also love it that you wrote in 3rd person POV! Please keep up the good work, you're making a change in this kind of genre with your uniqueness!

2yr
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Barrete_Marian

The premise is one thing but the following chapters really nailed it! I love the flow of the story that I am soooo wanting for more chapters. Good job, author![img=recommend]

2yr
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John_S_Karjono

the story about the devil is already written in a holy book, how about a story about the story of a creature called the devil and allied with humans, a story that is quite cool and interesting.

2yr
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VileX
LV 3 Badge

Well written, the plot is great, the Grammar Is okay, the characters are easy to understand especially the main characters, every arch in the novel is perfectly written. What else are you waiting for, this will definitely worth your time.

2yr
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Kokowrites

Emy❤️❤️❤️. It's been fun so far. I'm completely intrigued. A good recommendation for everyone. [img=recommend]. Good job to the author. I'm going back to reading.... What happens next? 😂

2yr
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bitterlouise

I rarely read this kind of genre but this one caught my attention. Will definitely read this in the future.😊 Author did great, congratulations!

2yr
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Ariel_x

After I patiently read the synopsis, it got me like... oh, really? Let's check the chapters then... I proceeded and found myself getting caught up with flipping through nonstop. The cliffhangers made me persist, such an intriguing read... I love it like!! don't hesitate to add to your library too🥰

2yr
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Splituniverse

Great novel. Hoping for more updates regularly. Love how author keys into the character and it's surrounding. In a nutshell, past decent world building.

2yr
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Frostbite_

Wow Just few chapters and I got glued to my screen. This is a masterpiece and I recommend to everyone out there. Keep up the good work author.

2yr
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IceFontana18

The premise is one thing but the first twenty chapters I read are already promising as it is. Though the pacing can be tricky, you did well with the scenes. I am more clinging to knowing the internal conflicts between the two and how they will overcome them together. Highly recommended, everyone!

2yr
Ver 2 respuestas
64pretty

Your work is really impressive with the way you portray your characters and the way your story goes with the background and everything. I love it keep up the good work.

2yr
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zigginah

Normally, I would prefer contemporary over fantasy but I like this story. To even start with the synopsis was quite catchy making me want to know what the writer had written about.

2yr
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RDA
LV 1 Badge

Love this work! We have the same taste of writing. I noticed some similarities between your ideas and mine. I really love to read it gain some insights😁😁

2yr
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zawkey

The story well explained. Out all of novel i review, this one here probably the one i love. All the stuff put in the good measurement, not to sketchy or to normal as a fantasy novel. Definitely will read more. But, for now, 5/5

2yr
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Elona_Alone

I read the blurb and find myself flipping through the chapters available . Woah! This book is a great masterpiece . And totally a must read. Good job author (θ‿θ)

2yr
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Leighn_1960

The story is getting more interesting. I am looking forward to more exciting chapters and daily updates. And more coins for me 😅 to collect

2yr
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Lee_Grace

Okay, I didn't read the synopsis before jumping to the first chapter. I'm already loving where the book is going. I can feel the FL being a brave and audacious kind which makes me more interested. I've not read much chapter but decided to leave a review because the book deserves it. I know I'd get hooked with the book. carry on author!

2yr
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XavierLee

The story becomes more interesting (for me) as I read the authors updated daily. Reed, the demon king has his weakness and his power limits because of the angel giving him a mission. Is Devin a villain?

2yr
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Love_Nation

this is a very interesting story. live the intro. well done writer. I'm already hooked. so far the suspense is rising, which is a good sign you're going on the right direction. I'm intrigued😎😎

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2yr
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Empzze
LV 12 Badge

Great work author, amazing introduction and interesting plot with well-written chapters and great character design, honestly I'm hooked even though I just started reading, I already find myself gushing over Reed and Emy, I feel so sorry for her but luckily her prince charming is around, keep up the good work author, I'm rooting for you.

2yr
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JordanLynde

The best novel I've ever read! Great storyline, and really cool character! Cheers to the author and please keep updating it....[img=recommend]

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Shadows_Pegasus

Wah chapters are locked. Why when the story is getting more interesting? I need coins. I'm hooked up to the story now. Need to save coins first

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2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Tyler_Devour

Since it's locked I need to collect coins first. the story is getting more interesting as the chapters are added. I think Reed is using power to keep Emy safe. 🥰

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
shentiments

Hello guys, thank you for reading my story hope that you can leave a comment or vote on the story. I know that I’m not good at English but I put effort into this story. Please disregard the grammar errors I'm continuing to correct. I know the grammar of my novel is weak, but I hope you can still try to read my story.

2yr
Ver 5 respuestas
_ali_b
LV 14 Badge

This is a great story! I loved the characters and the storyline. They always kept me interested! Thank you for sharing your talent with this creative story. The only negative would be that it often used the incorrect pronouns, i.e. he instead of she, which can be updated, and I was still able to follow your fabulous story. Thank you for sharing your creative story!

9mth
Ver 1 respuestas
Vanila_Michelle

I like your story, Author. Very interesting and amazing. [img=recommend][img=recommend] So, Emy is the queen and Reed is devil? Please follow my account by clicking red heart. Thank you

2yr
Ver 2 respuestas
fgumvlover

Reed is a hella devil im willing to be stepped on 🙈🔥🔥🔥 anyway the storyline characters world building were all well written and amzing! i love it

Revelar spoiler
2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
ACGray

I like the plot! The demon lost his power and he have a deal with an angel! I like this kind of story! I will witness how the demon become strong again and he will have an adventure on human realm!

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Egyptiangodess98

I really like the plot, style of writing, and the author’s attention to details. I could easily relate to Emy. Her frustrationat the beginning of the book is so well portrayed. The story is intriguing right from the very start

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
MiriamRemi

adventures like this are easy, but adapting to situations aren't...he might find the lady, but at First, might find a fault in her, which might make his adventure slower....I know this because I've watched so many movies.... keep it up author ❤️❤️❤️

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Angelo_Hullana_2844

wow the story was so intriguing. I love how the story goes. The characters was so interesting. There's a lot of twists and turns Enjoy readjng everyone 😊❤️good job author!

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Aria_Dean

First of all, let me praise you for using our country and the native terms in your story! I'm not going to mention those because that could be a spoiler 😉 I'm not a fan of fantasy genre, but your book caught my interest. I'm okay with demons, humans, and angels concept, that's why. Your grammar and writing skills are fine. I didn't find or notice any mistakes at all (maybe because I was busy reading). I'm the type of person who doesn't like reading, but because your book is super interesting, I decided to give it a go. I only read books that deserve my views and attention. I also love it that you wrote in 3rd person POV! Please keep up the good work, you're making a change in this kind of genre with your uniqueness!

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Barrete_Marian

The premise is one thing but the following chapters really nailed it! I love the flow of the story that I am soooo wanting for more chapters. Good job, author![img=recommend]

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
John_S_Karjono

the story about the devil is already written in a holy book, how about a story about the story of a creature called the devil and allied with humans, a story that is quite cool and interesting.

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
VileX
LV 3 Badge

Well written, the plot is great, the Grammar Is okay, the characters are easy to understand especially the main characters, every arch in the novel is perfectly written. What else are you waiting for, this will definitely worth your time.

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Kokowrites

Emy❤️❤️❤️. It's been fun so far. I'm completely intrigued. A good recommendation for everyone. [img=recommend]. Good job to the author. I'm going back to reading.... What happens next? 😂

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
bitterlouise

I rarely read this kind of genre but this one caught my attention. Will definitely read this in the future.😊 Author did great, congratulations!

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Ariel_x

After I patiently read the synopsis, it got me like... oh, really? Let's check the chapters then... I proceeded and found myself getting caught up with flipping through nonstop. The cliffhangers made me persist, such an intriguing read... I love it like!! don't hesitate to add to your library too🥰

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Splituniverse

Great novel. Hoping for more updates regularly. Love how author keys into the character and it's surrounding. In a nutshell, past decent world building.

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Frostbite_

Wow Just few chapters and I got glued to my screen. This is a masterpiece and I recommend to everyone out there. Keep up the good work author.

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
IceFontana18

The premise is one thing but the first twenty chapters I read are already promising as it is. Though the pacing can be tricky, you did well with the scenes. I am more clinging to knowing the internal conflicts between the two and how they will overcome them together. Highly recommended, everyone!

2yr
Ver 2 respuestas
64pretty

Your work is really impressive with the way you portray your characters and the way your story goes with the background and everything. I love it keep up the good work.

2yr
Ver 2 respuestas
zigginah

Normally, I would prefer contemporary over fantasy but I like this story. To even start with the synopsis was quite catchy making me want to know what the writer had written about.

2yr
Ver 2 respuestas
RDA
LV 1 Badge

Love this work! We have the same taste of writing. I noticed some similarities between your ideas and mine. I really love to read it gain some insights😁😁

2yr
Ver 2 respuestas
zawkey

The story well explained. Out all of novel i review, this one here probably the one i love. All the stuff put in the good measurement, not to sketchy or to normal as a fantasy novel. Definitely will read more. But, for now, 5/5

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Elona_Alone

I read the blurb and find myself flipping through the chapters available . Woah! This book is a great masterpiece . And totally a must read. Good job author (θ‿θ)

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Leighn_1960

The story is getting more interesting. I am looking forward to more exciting chapters and daily updates. And more coins for me 😅 to collect

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Lee_Grace

Okay, I didn't read the synopsis before jumping to the first chapter. I'm already loving where the book is going. I can feel the FL being a brave and audacious kind which makes me more interested. I've not read much chapter but decided to leave a review because the book deserves it. I know I'd get hooked with the book. carry on author!

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
XavierLee

The story becomes more interesting (for me) as I read the authors updated daily. Reed, the demon king has his weakness and his power limits because of the angel giving him a mission. Is Devin a villain?

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Love_Nation

this is a very interesting story. live the intro. well done writer. I'm already hooked. so far the suspense is rising, which is a good sign you're going on the right direction. I'm intrigued😎😎

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2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Empzze
LV 12 Badge

Great work author, amazing introduction and interesting plot with well-written chapters and great character design, honestly I'm hooked even though I just started reading, I already find myself gushing over Reed and Emy, I feel so sorry for her but luckily her prince charming is around, keep up the good work author, I'm rooting for you.

2yr
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JordanLynde

The best novel I've ever read! Great storyline, and really cool character! Cheers to the author and please keep updating it....[img=recommend]

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Shadows_Pegasus

Wah chapters are locked. Why when the story is getting more interesting? I need coins. I'm hooked up to the story now. Need to save coins first

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2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
Tyler_Devour

Since it's locked I need to collect coins first. the story is getting more interesting as the chapters are added. I think Reed is using power to keep Emy safe. 🥰

2yr
Ver 1 respuestas
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