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Not a bad story but it does have it's fair share of Harry Potter cliches. Dumbledore is yet again evil, but in this story he's awfully more cartoony so it's more funny then annoying. The main character(Leo) takes the place of Quirell, this is very cool as I had yet to actually read any that did this so it was nice seeing. The main character does babysit the main cast which is annoying though, the excuses is to keep the plot somewhat the same which although I understand why I still find it distasteful. I can't wait for more chapters and to keep reading....
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It's great. I am a big fan of stories where the mc is a teacher of sorts. I personally like the cultivation type approach on magic for HP fanfictions, so I might be somewhat biased.
why the author not updating anymore. if the author see this please don't drop this .
Writing quality: 4 star Story development: 2 star Character design: 1 star World background: 0 star The story is a "copy and paste" of the original story, but a bad copy and with the addition of an MC - Si (Main Character- Self Insert). Mc is a secondary character, because Harry Potter is given more importance in the story; also Mc is the dog of the golden trio.
Still waiting for new chapters! Please update. .....................................................................................
This is a great novel but it has been so long Since the author has posted a new chapter I fear that this is just another dropped novel, It was going well until people started criticizing it because the MC was "babysitting" the golden trio. the MC is a teacher it was his job to teach and protect his students if that's babysitting then everyone here has gone though at least 12 years of said babysitting. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is a good one, I got hooked. Keep it up author, I have high hopes for this one. 😁😁😁 ....................................................................... .......................................................................
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Dude this is amazing. Love it. Take my powerstones and keep the chapters flowing [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The premise was interesting, I was worried if the system will ruin the novel but it was actually a decent system(not too overpowered). but, I personally don't like the writing style. it's just weird.
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Update, This book is great better than most I've see although there are others it was dropped or not updated for a long time[img=update][img=update][img=update]
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The story is wonderfully new. To be honest, out of hundreds of books, this is the first one I have read which has Quirrell as a main character. It is fun to read. But the writing quality is not up to the mark.
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It was really good 😍😍😍😍😍 thanks for the chapter author sama. don’t listen to other about how the mc is babysitting the golden trio cause He Is a teacher of course he would take care of his student he even make sure that no one gets petrified So don’t listen To others how mc is babysitiing golden trio cause he take care of everyone but it was mostly the golden trio cause they will always be at the center of the trouble. he Chose, Daphne, Luna, Neville, and cedric to be trained by him if he was babysitting the golden trio he would have chose the three of them cause the system only needs 5 student And he chose the 4. no favoritism at all.
Its definitely is an interesting story.......it is an enjoyable read too with his interactions with others. Ofcourse there is some recessing cliche in this story.......but if you can tolerate them it is one of the best Harry Potter ffs so far with a likable MC.
The story is built on a template, the bad manipulator Dumbledore, the idiot Ronnie, the bad Weasels, such stories are hundreds of thousands on the sites and are no longer of interest because they spit on the souls of Potter fans.
Great story—couldn’t put it down! Can’t wait for the next chapter. Loved it! Loved the main character. Loved the plot. Love this author. Another great book by a great author. I can’t wait to read the next chapter. So good I’ll probably read it again!
Thanks for the fic. 🥳🥳🤩🤩🙂🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🙂🤩🙂🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🥳🥳🤩🥳🥳🤩🥳🥳🤩🥳🥳🤩🥳🤩🤩🤩🥳🥳🤩🤩🥳🥳🤩🤩🤩🥳🥳🤩🤩🥳🥳🤩🤩🥳🥳🥳🤩🤩🥳🥳🥳🤩🤩🤩🥳🤩
Commenting here to hope for updates. Looking forward to reading more ........................................................................
Not a bad story but it does have it's fair share of Harry Potter cliches. Dumbledore is yet again evil, but in this story he's awfully more cartoony so it's more funny then annoying. The main character(Leo) takes the place of Quirell, this is very cool as I had yet to actually read any that did this so it was nice seeing. The main character does babysit the main cast which is annoying though, the excuses is to keep the plot somewhat the same which although I understand why I still find it distasteful. I can't wait for more chapters and to keep reading....
Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue. Please continue.
It's great. I am a big fan of stories where the mc is a teacher of sorts. I personally like the cultivation type approach on magic for HP fanfictions, so I might be somewhat biased.
why the author not updating anymore. if the author see this please don't drop this .
Writing quality: 4 star Story development: 2 star Character design: 1 star World background: 0 star The story is a "copy and paste" of the original story, but a bad copy and with the addition of an MC - Si (Main Character- Self Insert). Mc is a secondary character, because Harry Potter is given more importance in the story; also Mc is the dog of the golden trio.
Still waiting for new chapters! Please update. .....................................................................................
This is a great novel but it has been so long Since the author has posted a new chapter I fear that this is just another dropped novel, It was going well until people started criticizing it because the MC was "babysitting" the golden trio. the MC is a teacher it was his job to teach and protect his students if that's babysitting then everyone here has gone though at least 12 years of said babysitting. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is a good one, I got hooked. Keep it up author, I have high hopes for this one. 😁😁😁 ....................................................................... .......................................................................
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5 star review. 5 star review. 5 star review. 5 star review. 5 star review. 5 star review. 5 star review. 5 star review. 5 star review. 5 star review.
Good you guys should give it a try........ .......... ... ... ... .. .... ...m ..... ...mmm. ................ ..... . .. . . .. .
Dude this is amazing. Love it. Take my powerstones and keep the chapters flowing [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The premise was interesting, I was worried if the system will ruin the novel but it was actually a decent system(not too overpowered). but, I personally don't like the writing style. it's just weird.
exp..........................................................................................................................................
Update, This book is great better than most I've see although there are others it was dropped or not updated for a long time[img=update][img=update][img=update]
exp..........................................................................................................................................
The story is wonderfully new. To be honest, out of hundreds of books, this is the first one I have read which has Quirrell as a main character. It is fun to read. But the writing quality is not up to the mark.
Good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It was really good 😍😍😍😍😍 thanks for the chapter author sama. don’t listen to other about how the mc is babysitting the golden trio cause He Is a teacher of course he would take care of his student he even make sure that no one gets petrified So don’t listen To others how mc is babysitiing golden trio cause he take care of everyone but it was mostly the golden trio cause they will always be at the center of the trouble. he Chose, Daphne, Luna, Neville, and cedric to be trained by him if he was babysitting the golden trio he would have chose the three of them cause the system only needs 5 student And he chose the 4. no favoritism at all.
Its definitely is an interesting story.......it is an enjoyable read too with his interactions with others. Ofcourse there is some recessing cliche in this story.......but if you can tolerate them it is one of the best Harry Potter ffs so far with a likable MC.
The story is built on a template, the bad manipulator Dumbledore, the idiot Ronnie, the bad Weasels, such stories are hundreds of thousands on the sites and are no longer of interest because they spit on the souls of Potter fans.
Great story—couldn’t put it down! Can’t wait for the next chapter. Loved it! Loved the main character. Loved the plot. Love this author. Another great book by a great author. I can’t wait to read the next chapter. So good I’ll probably read it again!
Thanks for the fic. 🥳🥳🤩🤩🙂🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🙂🤩🙂🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🥳🥳🤩🥳🥳🤩🥳🥳🤩🥳🥳🤩🥳🤩🤩🤩🥳🥳🤩🤩🥳🥳🤩🤩🤩🥳🥳🤩🤩🥳🥳🤩🤩🥳🥳🥳🤩🤩🥳🥳🥳🤩🤩🤩🥳🤩
Commenting here to hope for updates. Looking forward to reading more ........................................................................