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I am really enjoying this novel. I like the story and the world building is pretty good. The MC is not so overpowered that it's not just him mowing through opponents. He has his ups and downs that make the story more engaging. Keep up the good work author
This story actually includes everything in the title. The MC and all subsequent interactions fill the bill. I continue to look forward to reading each chapter.
The writing style is boring and makes you sleepy, I read and yawn. The beginning upset and disappointed me.I gave up and went to bed, woke up and tried again. The result was the same.
I’m quite interested in this system and fantasy magic, but I don’t like the idea that the protagonist time-travels at the age of 18, even though they awakened their magic at 12. The MC’s body was a useless “trash” without any magic power, wasting six whole years. Suddenly jumping to 18 and becoming strong so quickly from being powerless for six years feels suspicious. Someone might notice and find it strange, possibly even capturing the MC because of how unnaturally fast they gained power. After being a “trash” for six years without magic, a simple head injury suddenly turns them into a completely different person, and their previously nonexistent magic power increases. Anyone witnessing this would be suspicious. If the protagonist had traveled back as a baby or before turning 12, it would have been much better. No one would call them “trash,” no enemies would bully them for being powerless, and no powerful individuals would suddenly kidnap them out of suspicion. There would be no abrupt transformation from a weakling to a genius, making the progression feel more natural. I just don’t understand why they had to time-travel into a “trash” body when doing so at a younger age would have been far more advantageous.
The story is really good even tho it had errors in beginning. The author improved that, I really like this novel since beginning, it's just his inconsistency that I don't like. I myself know a several people who abandoned this novel 'cause of irregular updates, even after telling the author of his inconsistency he do have excuses. No matter how good you're at writing, if it's a webnovel you must update regularly to keep readers' interest. Be responsible before it's too late.
At first, it seems like the typical 18+ lust fantasy storylines! He starts out weak but then becomes really OP. However, here, the women characters may start or become weak, but they grow. The women are the incredible part of the story. In war-arch, he gets some fighting bros too! He's always a half-step away from death on so many occasions. I'm very surprised his heart doesn't break!
I started reading to pass the time and without much expectation, but I ended up being surprised by the quality of this story, the plot is incredible and I also liked the power system, highly recommended, read it.
the book would appeal to non thinking gooners, but personally i believe cucking your family is not right whatever the circumstances are, even if they aren't nice to you.
Amazing plot, great MC and character lineup. Completely addicted ! A definite must read.
the story is sadly pretty much just a pretense, and the girls fall down into his lap way too easily, the r18 is somehow lacking in emotions, not sure exactly why but it feels maybe mechanical ? the worldbackground is stated instead of presented naturally which is the final offense. So maybe read it, but dont hope much i guess.
ok everything is good but when that dead guy remarks about MC i knew that system is a switch for that guy revival and you want to increase more chapters.. you could just drop that remarks 🤦
Hi there, I absolutely loved the novel! Huge thanks to the author for creating this masterpiece; it truly played with my emotions throughout all the chapters. *Mind blown* Anyway, if you decide to read it, don't try to predict what's coming next. The author will continue to toy with your feelings chapter after chapter, but you'll understand it eventually. I don't want to spoil the story or ruin it for you. I just want you to enjoy the journey and not rush it from the start. Just read on, and you'll be surprised. Alright then. ⠀⠀⠀⡀⠀⠀⣀⠀⢀⣄⠀⣄⠀⢠⢀⠀⣠⡀⢀⠀⠀⣀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⠰⠺⡟⠁⣿⣤⣿⢠⣿⣽⣦⡟⣧⣾⢸⢿⡋⠀⠈⢷⡴⢋⡞⠙⣷⣾⠀⣶⠀ ⠀⠀⣧⠀⠿⠀⠻⠿⠀⠀⠿⠇⠘⠏⠟⠀⠻⠆⠀⠸⠇⠈⢧⣤⠟⣧⣠⠟⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣠⡤⠶⠒⠒⠒⠒⠲⠶⣤⡴⠚⠛⠶⣄⠀⠀⣞⢓⡆⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⣀⣀⢀⡴⠋⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠛⢠⡖⠲⡀⢹⡄⠀⠈⠉⠀⠀ ⠀⢠⡞⠁⣠⠏⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠙⠒⠀⣸⠃⡠⠠⣤⠤⣄ ⠀⠸⣆⢠⠏⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠚⣿⠀⢇⠀⠀⢳⡼ ⠀⠀⠙⡿⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⡆⠀⠑⠒⠊⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⢀⣀⠀⠀⢀⡀⠀⠸⣿⣷⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⠇⢏⣋⠆⡠⢁ ⠀⠀⠀⣿⠀⠐⢛⠓⢠⣸⣆⡤⠀⠈⡅⠀⠈⠢⠀⢀⠀⠀⣾⠀⠀⠀⡂⠐⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⣷⠀⠀⠀⠃⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠣⠀⡀⠄⣸⡉⠳⡚⣧⠀⠀⠀⡂⠀⠂ ⠀⠀⠀⠈⠳⣦⠾⢛⢦⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢠⡞⠉⠀⠀⢸⡏⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡏⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠸⣇⠀⠀⢀⡼⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢷⡀⠀⠀⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⠓⢺⣯⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀
most definitely worth the read this is one of my favorite novels on this app goodworld building and overall story layout the only thing I could possibly complain about is the release rate but blizzard has been making strides to continuously update and the chapters are well worth the wait I love this story
Till chapter 5 everything was progressing fine and well, but from there the grammar started having problems and a few inconsistencies started appearing. Also the story point of view changed constantly between first perspective to third perspective and then back, if the changes were done well I wouldn't complain, unfortunately they were not... Eventually I stopped reading at chapter 64 cuz the author was nerfing the MC too much by making him do stup*d things. For example having him train hard instead of harvesting Lust Points so he could be stronger faster, or having the MC train for 15 days with his Mana volume staying the same while his girlfriend trained for the same 15 days and broke through a level to 1 star mage... Could have been a nice story if the author had done a better job at structuring the MC power level in my opinion
Perfect balance in the flow of writing from scene to scene. Hate waiting for chapter releases.
not bad, but have many failures MC dumb and idiot drop chapt 226 your power very slow plot armour and drama QI 000 but is good bye ..
Pretty good book more intimate things then anything else but character is op and have challenges
Love this Novel. Amongst hundreds of novels i have read, this one is my all time favorite. I was really really saddened when author stopped updating chapters in the middle. Blizzard if you do that again I WILL KILL YOU! lol. Please keep up the good work. We want more chapter! MOAAAAAR chapters!
Love it Throughly a thoughtful question and answer throughout the course of the story
It's a great story, I recommend it, but I can already tell you that there are a lot of hot scenes, I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
Não sei se recomendo, é interessante de ler mas tem vários pontos problemáticos
Boring dude, mc is weak asf his enemies are real protagonists who can fight higher lvl opponents while mc easily losses to lower opponents. Mc only know s*x nothing else heck 70℅ of noval is only s*x sences. Well this review might be deleted by how ratings it has.
Bro pls upload. I'm dying here to see what will happen next? I can't watch no more 😩. It's so good. This is the 4th best novel I've read iml. So good that I'm counting like Shadow Slave chapters. Ughhh don't keep me waiting pwwssss 😭
Giving 5 stars cause I wanna see the author finish this book out to the very end! So I’m hoping any and all encouragement helps!
needs stability and regular updates, mc should not just pick up women and story needs a more better balanced plot
pace is way too slow for my taste , and i really hope it gets better , 100 chapters and mc is still in the 2 star realm after his first few quick advancements
This would have been a perfect 5-star review if the author had been persistent in updates; nevertheless, the author is now updating again, which I appreciate. Please don't do 2 chapters a month [img=update].
It is really boring that Mc is weak, unnecessary stuffing, not using the system well, the fights are very mediocre, but I will read it in the hope that the author will improve himself and the continuation of the novel will be better. remember, dear readers, no one is perfect, it will get better over time.
This is the kind of novel you get into for the *plot* , stay for the fun and keep reading for the plot. It has its ups and downs, but I still definitely recommend.
I am really enjoying this novel. I like the story and the world building is pretty good. The MC is not so overpowered that it's not just him mowing through opponents. He has his ups and downs that make the story more engaging. Keep up the good work author
This story actually includes everything in the title. The MC and all subsequent interactions fill the bill. I continue to look forward to reading each chapter.
The writing style is boring and makes you sleepy, I read and yawn. The beginning upset and disappointed me.I gave up and went to bed, woke up and tried again. The result was the same.
I’m quite interested in this system and fantasy magic, but I don’t like the idea that the protagonist time-travels at the age of 18, even though they awakened their magic at 12. The MC’s body was a useless “trash” without any magic power, wasting six whole years. Suddenly jumping to 18 and becoming strong so quickly from being powerless for six years feels suspicious. Someone might notice and find it strange, possibly even capturing the MC because of how unnaturally fast they gained power. After being a “trash” for six years without magic, a simple head injury suddenly turns them into a completely different person, and their previously nonexistent magic power increases. Anyone witnessing this would be suspicious. If the protagonist had traveled back as a baby or before turning 12, it would have been much better. No one would call them “trash,” no enemies would bully them for being powerless, and no powerful individuals would suddenly kidnap them out of suspicion. There would be no abrupt transformation from a weakling to a genius, making the progression feel more natural. I just don’t understand why they had to time-travel into a “trash” body when doing so at a younger age would have been far more advantageous.
The story is really good even tho it had errors in beginning. The author improved that, I really like this novel since beginning, it's just his inconsistency that I don't like. I myself know a several people who abandoned this novel 'cause of irregular updates, even after telling the author of his inconsistency he do have excuses. No matter how good you're at writing, if it's a webnovel you must update regularly to keep readers' interest. Be responsible before it's too late.
At first, it seems like the typical 18+ lust fantasy storylines! He starts out weak but then becomes really OP. However, here, the women characters may start or become weak, but they grow. The women are the incredible part of the story. In war-arch, he gets some fighting bros too! He's always a half-step away from death on so many occasions. I'm very surprised his heart doesn't break!
I started reading to pass the time and without much expectation, but I ended up being surprised by the quality of this story, the plot is incredible and I also liked the power system, highly recommended, read it.
the book would appeal to non thinking gooners, but personally i believe cucking your family is not right whatever the circumstances are, even if they aren't nice to you.
Amazing plot, great MC and character lineup. Completely addicted ! A definite must read.
the story is sadly pretty much just a pretense, and the girls fall down into his lap way too easily, the r18 is somehow lacking in emotions, not sure exactly why but it feels maybe mechanical ? the worldbackground is stated instead of presented naturally which is the final offense. So maybe read it, but dont hope much i guess.
ok everything is good but when that dead guy remarks about MC i knew that system is a switch for that guy revival and you want to increase more chapters.. you could just drop that remarks 🤦
Hi there, I absolutely loved the novel! Huge thanks to the author for creating this masterpiece; it truly played with my emotions throughout all the chapters. *Mind blown* Anyway, if you decide to read it, don't try to predict what's coming next. The author will continue to toy with your feelings chapter after chapter, but you'll understand it eventually. I don't want to spoil the story or ruin it for you. I just want you to enjoy the journey and not rush it from the start. Just read on, and you'll be surprised. Alright then. ⠀⠀⠀⡀⠀⠀⣀⠀⢀⣄⠀⣄⠀⢠⢀⠀⣠⡀⢀⠀⠀⣀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⠰⠺⡟⠁⣿⣤⣿⢠⣿⣽⣦⡟⣧⣾⢸⢿⡋⠀⠈⢷⡴⢋⡞⠙⣷⣾⠀⣶⠀ ⠀⠀⣧⠀⠿⠀⠻⠿⠀⠀⠿⠇⠘⠏⠟⠀⠻⠆⠀⠸⠇⠈⢧⣤⠟⣧⣠⠟⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣠⡤⠶⠒⠒⠒⠒⠲⠶⣤⡴⠚⠛⠶⣄⠀⠀⣞⢓⡆⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⣀⣀⢀⡴⠋⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠛⢠⡖⠲⡀⢹⡄⠀⠈⠉⠀⠀ ⠀⢠⡞⠁⣠⠏⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠙⠒⠀⣸⠃⡠⠠⣤⠤⣄ ⠀⠸⣆⢠⠏⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠚⣿⠀⢇⠀⠀⢳⡼ ⠀⠀⠙⡿⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⡆⠀⠑⠒⠊⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⢀⣀⠀⠀⢀⡀⠀⠸⣿⣷⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⠇⢏⣋⠆⡠⢁ ⠀⠀⠀⣿⠀⠐⢛⠓⢠⣸⣆⡤⠀⠈⡅⠀⠈⠢⠀⢀⠀⠀⣾⠀⠀⠀⡂⠐⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⣷⠀⠀⠀⠃⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠣⠀⡀⠄⣸⡉⠳⡚⣧⠀⠀⠀⡂⠀⠂ ⠀⠀⠀⠈⠳⣦⠾⢛⢦⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢠⡞⠉⠀⠀⢸⡏⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡏⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠸⣇⠀⠀⢀⡼⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢷⡀⠀⠀⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⠓⢺⣯⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀
most definitely worth the read this is one of my favorite novels on this app goodworld building and overall story layout the only thing I could possibly complain about is the release rate but blizzard has been making strides to continuously update and the chapters are well worth the wait I love this story
Till chapter 5 everything was progressing fine and well, but from there the grammar started having problems and a few inconsistencies started appearing. Also the story point of view changed constantly between first perspective to third perspective and then back, if the changes were done well I wouldn't complain, unfortunately they were not... Eventually I stopped reading at chapter 64 cuz the author was nerfing the MC too much by making him do stup*d things. For example having him train hard instead of harvesting Lust Points so he could be stronger faster, or having the MC train for 15 days with his Mana volume staying the same while his girlfriend trained for the same 15 days and broke through a level to 1 star mage... Could have been a nice story if the author had done a better job at structuring the MC power level in my opinion
Perfect balance in the flow of writing from scene to scene. Hate waiting for chapter releases.
not bad, but have many failures MC dumb and idiot drop chapt 226 your power very slow plot armour and drama QI 000 but is good bye ..
Pretty good book more intimate things then anything else but character is op and have challenges
Love this Novel. Amongst hundreds of novels i have read, this one is my all time favorite. I was really really saddened when author stopped updating chapters in the middle. Blizzard if you do that again I WILL KILL YOU! lol. Please keep up the good work. We want more chapter! MOAAAAAR chapters!
Love it Throughly a thoughtful question and answer throughout the course of the story
It's a great story, I recommend it, but I can already tell you that there are a lot of hot scenes, I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
Não sei se recomendo, é interessante de ler mas tem vários pontos problemáticos
Boring dude, mc is weak asf his enemies are real protagonists who can fight higher lvl opponents while mc easily losses to lower opponents. Mc only know s*x nothing else heck 70℅ of noval is only s*x sences. Well this review might be deleted by how ratings it has.
Bro pls upload. I'm dying here to see what will happen next? I can't watch no more 😩. It's so good. This is the 4th best novel I've read iml. So good that I'm counting like Shadow Slave chapters. Ughhh don't keep me waiting pwwssss 😭
Giving 5 stars cause I wanna see the author finish this book out to the very end! So I’m hoping any and all encouragement helps!
needs stability and regular updates, mc should not just pick up women and story needs a more better balanced plot
pace is way too slow for my taste , and i really hope it gets better , 100 chapters and mc is still in the 2 star realm after his first few quick advancements
This would have been a perfect 5-star review if the author had been persistent in updates; nevertheless, the author is now updating again, which I appreciate. Please don't do 2 chapters a month [img=update].
It is really boring that Mc is weak, unnecessary stuffing, not using the system well, the fights are very mediocre, but I will read it in the hope that the author will improve himself and the continuation of the novel will be better. remember, dear readers, no one is perfect, it will get better over time.
This is the kind of novel you get into for the *plot* , stay for the fun and keep reading for the plot. It has its ups and downs, but I still definitely recommend.