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Hi readers! Author Rena~ So I know, I left this book for quite some time now due to personal reasons. But that doesn't matter, because it is a comeback[img=recommend]. To my old readers and supporters, who I kept waiting, I apologize and hope you read this book with a fresh mind. To my new readers, please support me as you read.
I must say, after reading the first few chapters, This grandaddy found the story intriguing. The plot is full of mysteries and dark secrets, and the protagonist seems to be fighting against her Twisted Fate with all her might. However, it's clear that her journey won't be easy as the secrets she's uncovered involve people of higher status, who happen to hold some power. Personally, this grandaddy believe the story could be even more captivating if it were to take a slower pace, allowing for a more in-depth exploration of the protagonist's emotions. By delving deeper into her psyche, you could really play with the reader's feelings and make the story all the more engaging. On the subject of update stability, this grandaddy noticed that you had started the story over a year ago but had only recently resumed posting chapters on a regular basis. Nonetheless, I appreciate the consistency in the recent updates, and it's good to know that the story is still ongoing. I must admit that these types of stories aren't usually my cup of tea. As someone who's more into Xianxia and Wuxia genres, this grandaddy was pleasantly surprised by how much I enjoyed this one. I'm genuinely curious to see how our lil protagonist will fight for her freedom and will definitely keep reading, albeit at my own pace. Overall, keep up the excellent work!
When a story is about the female lead gaining freedom or strength. I am always ready to read that novel. And the steamy chapters got me.[img=update][img=update]
Wow , just nice , I like the characters develop , I am on chapter 5 and I can’ stop reading and I don’ want to stop 🥰🥰🥰. Good good
Oh moo😲 Amazing first chapter. Nice and well-written descriptions of background settings... Hope it will hit the top 10
Nice book and loving the book. I recommend it .[img=golden ticket][img=Loving it] Try mine please Legend of the ancient gem :Love like the galaxy [img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
The story start with a really nice way and also different way. The story itself speak for the spark. The plot arrangement with the words flow was nice. Someone like me who loves crimes, mystery it is a perfect choice. I would love to see how FL will uncover dark secret of the elite class society. Definitely will read it to the end....
Honestly, I read the first few chapters without knowing what I'm getting myself into. However, as I read through, I slowly got more interested in their little interactions, hoping to know more. I mean, lying about memory loss? I'm in! Although there were parts that were hard to read, it was a fun experience overall. Great work!
Thrilling and mysterious. I love how the book progresses gradually revealing all the hidden secrets.
I was hooked from the beginning, Interesting characters, immersive plot, good pacing, you name it, it has it all... Great work Author, can't wait for more updates!!
Nicely done! I love your way of describing the scenes. It's catchy and it seems to convert some strong messages too....Best Wishes!
I am glad I am journeying with you as you joined the win-win mission, which everyday, a chapter will be released for a whole month. Take my coins[img=coins] author and keep writing. Kudos.
Pretty good start and it gets better. One thing I'd say is punctuation are not consistent. Overall quite a colorful way of writing, there is some intrigue and room left to guess
I enjoyed the premise of the story though at times it can seem a bit fast paced. I hope you continue the story and I’ll be supporting you
The story started really well and the story telling is perfect. A few errors but it doesn't affect anything with the story. It's nice to see that the writer is updating again.
The story has an intriguing start, it leaves you with curiosity and unanswered questions making want to know more. I hope to get all the answers soon though. Well done author 👍
The story is really interesting. Absolutely love the way you have narrated it. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter. Happy writing!
The writing quality is quite good . love the plot and the pacing of the story feels right . The story build is so intriguing that I am anticipating what come next The characters feels realistic . Even though they are fictional characters it easy to relate with them. overall it a great story .
I decided to say something on the book since I started reading. _Update more chapters at least two a day😭 _ It is really engrossing and interesting. Highly recommended.
interesting from the beginning. I'm curious and wanted to read more! The only thing is that the chapters are very short upload more chapters.
Its really not that bad, Its enjoyable and the story goes well with my cake A solid 4.6/5 because I have yet to near to the later parts
This is the amazing novel, the writing is totally good and i wanted to read more... it's a good new start to read
The characters are immediately interesting and grab you—the mystery, romance, and slight touches of comedy really stand out. Great for fans of romantic mysteries!
A refreshing beautiful story, the characters especially the FMC and mc are well written and feel like real-life characters. Highly suggest this to any fans of contemporary romance.
Great story and very interesting. One can't get voted even for a second. Everything is so well and it deserves a 5-star rating👍👍👍 Great work Author🤗 Waiting for more updates
Hi readers! Author Rena~ So I know, I left this book for quite some time now due to personal reasons. But that doesn't matter, because it is a comeback[img=recommend]. To my old readers and supporters, who I kept waiting, I apologize and hope you read this book with a fresh mind. To my new readers, please support me as you read.
I must say, after reading the first few chapters, This grandaddy found the story intriguing. The plot is full of mysteries and dark secrets, and the protagonist seems to be fighting against her Twisted Fate with all her might. However, it's clear that her journey won't be easy as the secrets she's uncovered involve people of higher status, who happen to hold some power. Personally, this grandaddy believe the story could be even more captivating if it were to take a slower pace, allowing for a more in-depth exploration of the protagonist's emotions. By delving deeper into her psyche, you could really play with the reader's feelings and make the story all the more engaging. On the subject of update stability, this grandaddy noticed that you had started the story over a year ago but had only recently resumed posting chapters on a regular basis. Nonetheless, I appreciate the consistency in the recent updates, and it's good to know that the story is still ongoing. I must admit that these types of stories aren't usually my cup of tea. As someone who's more into Xianxia and Wuxia genres, this grandaddy was pleasantly surprised by how much I enjoyed this one. I'm genuinely curious to see how our lil protagonist will fight for her freedom and will definitely keep reading, albeit at my own pace. Overall, keep up the excellent work!
When a story is about the female lead gaining freedom or strength. I am always ready to read that novel. And the steamy chapters got me.[img=update][img=update]
Wow , just nice , I like the characters develop , I am on chapter 5 and I can’ stop reading and I don’ want to stop 🥰🥰🥰. Good good
Oh moo😲 Amazing first chapter. Nice and well-written descriptions of background settings... Hope it will hit the top 10
Nice book and loving the book. I recommend it .[img=golden ticket][img=Loving it] Try mine please Legend of the ancient gem :Love like the galaxy [img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
The story start with a really nice way and also different way. The story itself speak for the spark. The plot arrangement with the words flow was nice. Someone like me who loves crimes, mystery it is a perfect choice. I would love to see how FL will uncover dark secret of the elite class society. Definitely will read it to the end....
Honestly, I read the first few chapters without knowing what I'm getting myself into. However, as I read through, I slowly got more interested in their little interactions, hoping to know more. I mean, lying about memory loss? I'm in! Although there were parts that were hard to read, it was a fun experience overall. Great work!
Thrilling and mysterious. I love how the book progresses gradually revealing all the hidden secrets.
I was hooked from the beginning, Interesting characters, immersive plot, good pacing, you name it, it has it all... Great work Author, can't wait for more updates!!
Nicely done! I love your way of describing the scenes. It's catchy and it seems to convert some strong messages too....Best Wishes!
I am glad I am journeying with you as you joined the win-win mission, which everyday, a chapter will be released for a whole month. Take my coins[img=coins] author and keep writing. Kudos.
Pretty good start and it gets better. One thing I'd say is punctuation are not consistent. Overall quite a colorful way of writing, there is some intrigue and room left to guess
I enjoyed the premise of the story though at times it can seem a bit fast paced. I hope you continue the story and I’ll be supporting you
The story started really well and the story telling is perfect. A few errors but it doesn't affect anything with the story. It's nice to see that the writer is updating again.
The story has an intriguing start, it leaves you with curiosity and unanswered questions making want to know more. I hope to get all the answers soon though. Well done author 👍
The story is really interesting. Absolutely love the way you have narrated it. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter. Happy writing!
The writing quality is quite good . love the plot and the pacing of the story feels right . The story build is so intriguing that I am anticipating what come next The characters feels realistic . Even though they are fictional characters it easy to relate with them. overall it a great story .
I decided to say something on the book since I started reading. _Update more chapters at least two a day😭 _ It is really engrossing and interesting. Highly recommended.
interesting from the beginning. I'm curious and wanted to read more! The only thing is that the chapters are very short upload more chapters.
Its really not that bad, Its enjoyable and the story goes well with my cake A solid 4.6/5 because I have yet to near to the later parts
This is the amazing novel, the writing is totally good and i wanted to read more... it's a good new start to read
The characters are immediately interesting and grab you—the mystery, romance, and slight touches of comedy really stand out. Great for fans of romantic mysteries!
A refreshing beautiful story, the characters especially the FMC and mc are well written and feel like real-life characters. Highly suggest this to any fans of contemporary romance.
Great story and very interesting. One can't get voted even for a second. Everything is so well and it deserves a 5-star rating👍👍👍 Great work Author🤗 Waiting for more updates