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ngl this novel started really good. the translation or the grammar was okay at best however on the later chapters it got so bad.
this novel is 50-50 to be honest. Love intrest Tsunade. Translation is good btw . I really like the plot, it's very interesting . but that's it. The story progresses too slow. so I started to skip filler chapters. The MC'S personality is not good. he is cringe if you ask me. overall I only liked the plot, nothing else . The mid-high rating is because of good translation and amazing plot. even through I don't like how it turned out in After defecting Konoha.
This fic is awesome, even without The cheat initially, Mc's whole existence is a cheat in itself, love the character dynamics, Chinese is strong in this one but quality of fic is good IMO, Idk why it is not getting recognition lately
Отличный фанфик, не знаю почему у него общая оценка 3.9 но это отличный фанфик во всех аспектах, начиная от проработки мира, юмора, боевых сцен... Все сделано хорошо! Даже то что он повторяет фанфик про брата Какаши и остановку времени меня очень удивила и обрадовала, жаль что я так рано присоеденился когда у такого фанфика всего 400+ глав, такие фанфики не теряют интерес даже спустя 700 глав... Всем советую к прочтению, нету Дарк, нету манипуляций и прочего бреда, зато есть отличный юмор, адекватный гг и проработанный мир
both the author who wrote this and the translator who translates this are retards please don't read this all it will give you negative braincells
Revelar spoiler
everything was fine and quite entertaining, until the Senju - Uchiha conquest war over the Elemental Continent... I thought the story would be interesting... but unfortunately the original Chinese author just wanted to destroy the Naruto story too early...
is there any romance what so ever? or at least maybe a one night stand that leads to him having a kid or more importantly a legacy
author have some kind of brain damage. He keep introducing new plot device but never really do anything with it. His cheat is super OP but mc forgets about it for tens of chapters each time and barly even scrach the surface of its power. When he uses its as plotarmor to destroy ongoing plotline, theres also Mc jumping from one story line to another without brain, the whole hidden paradise island arc was unnecessary, and his writing style is frustrating mc always getting bullied left and right but do bare minimum without any satisfying ending. The whole return to konoha arc was the worse xianxia POS i've seen so far.
Please don't read this novel: while everything was going well and stroy develop smoothly, author spend 100 chapters establishing mc life in konoha, there's a sudden twist during 1st ninja war, when he get kidnapped by madara and suddenly time skipped for 14 fking years, everything mc build turn to ash, story developed as cannon and 100 chapters i read was meaningless. It's the wrose feeling ever. I dont i've ever felt so disgusted with any book i've read. this is worse than when a certain author decided end a really good in the middle of war with a single chapter of summary because he felt bored. PLS PLS stay awy for your own mental health and don't get emotionally invested in this.
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2-3-4-4-4 The translation is pretty bad, and the flow seems choppy. The Story Development is quite weak, the dialogues are funny at times though so I'll give them that. The Characters weren't as bad as I expected. World background, the timelines were quite accurate so far.
This story is a gem. Never thought a day would come when i would read a non Chinese fanfiction written in a chinese way and actually like it.I usually drop the moment I hear one, "your courting death!"The chinees feeling you get from reading this book doesn't dampen my mood to read the strory like I would in othet books, but makes me want to read it more.As for the storyline, it's really unique for a fanfiction. Such plot is something you usually get from an original story. At one point, there would be a plot twist that would get you going, "didn't see that coming."And I like how the story is not just based on konoha, but explores all the other nations as well.
I haven't started reading this novel yet. I'm kinda surprised to see that there are only about 1.7mil views on this and all the comments on the novel are 5 stars. Don't know if the author is deleting them or this is genuine.
It's a meh. If you like translated cultivation novels and such you might like it It reads completely like a cultivation novel. Even has things like myriad soul temples and such, not only that but more or less everything in it reads like one. Ancestory this, you are younger then me thus lower than me that. Plus it has some "born under the red flag" and a bit of nonce stuff here and there. So yeah, just so you know what you're getting into
the story starts like a typical chinese style writing and I was "oh, maybe another trash novel sigh... BUT as I kept reading I could not stop myself this,......this .....this novel is not a chinese style writing anymore this is much better than a whole lot of other english based naruto fanfic. WHY? because of the GENIUS plot ! Character development ! Did i not mentioned that the MC is very relatable like magic, every struggle the MC goes through as if I am in a VR experiencing it firsthand. I really felt like this fanfic has touched my very soul. ....................................Another GOOD naruto fanfic would be "child of chakra" which is also good to read. But compared this fanfic , I had only admiration for the author/translator for doing an amazing job. I am very excited for more chapters as I have read up to chapter 137 in this fanfic and it is a brilliantly made fanfic! i think this is the only fanfic on webnovel that I rated as 5 STAR on all category. - this fanfic is good because it probably wont have a harem nor a forced harem. I do not hate any harem tag. I just hate unjustifiable harem without any reasoning nor logic behind to support the story. A fanfic that has harem is very hard to also be a good fanfic most fanfic are forced harem of which i dislike( changing the behavior/essence of character unlike their original counterpart to be out of character is the definition of forced harem). -I also don't like to read a psychopath MC that is anti hero. Luckily this fanfic is not anti hero. example "naruto behind the scenes & Aokiji in naruto" are examples of a badly plan/written anti-hero. The best anti hero fanfic MUST take reference to "Lelouch the rebbelion" story where the MC is a villain but you cant help yourself to support and love the MC and every bad thing he does is forgiven.^^
I mean grammar could be better but that's all I guess other then that everything else is perfect story 👍 world background 👍 character design 👍
I was completely captivated by the novel. At first I was a little critical of the main character, but later I found him better and better. Especially when I read other Naruto ff, it is often common that the character has a god comlex, has a dramatic past or other psychological disorders. But here I found a main character who is human, which makes him very likeable. Then there are a lot of funny moments, that made me have a good time White reading. However, what I have to criticise is the bad language in some places. Apart from that I have to point out again how much I like the ff and I am really happy about how regular the updates are. My last wish is to be able to finish reading this masterpiece. So please keep up the good work author-san.
I really enjoy reading this and look forward to the next chapter the only problem I got is the update stability. if you gonna update every 2 days just say it so I don't have to keep looking. Overall I love the book
Good novel,........................................ Colmek..............................,................. Coli...................................................... Colek colek m...m...k
Revelar spoiler
Humor un poco tonto en algunos casos, aunque lo han corregido ya, pero está lento la verdad. El sistema o dedo dorado no sirve para nada, como dice el MC, su dedo dorado es la familia
Good work bro i love this its great keep up the work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤝🤝👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Me encanta esta historia, tengo grandes expectativas en ella. Su comedia y la forma de describirla es buena. Me gusta la interacción de los personajes, estan plasmados como si fueran de la trama original.
Thanks for publishing here but guys btw we have google translation just write name in chinese version and find finished book This have near 410 chapter naruto part then go other worlds
ngl this novel started really good. the translation or the grammar was okay at best however on the later chapters it got so bad.
this novel is 50-50 to be honest. Love intrest Tsunade. Translation is good btw . I really like the plot, it's very interesting . but that's it. The story progresses too slow. so I started to skip filler chapters. The MC'S personality is not good. he is cringe if you ask me. overall I only liked the plot, nothing else . The mid-high rating is because of good translation and amazing plot. even through I don't like how it turned out in After defecting Konoha.
This fic is awesome, even without The cheat initially, Mc's whole existence is a cheat in itself, love the character dynamics, Chinese is strong in this one but quality of fic is good IMO, Idk why it is not getting recognition lately
Отличный фанфик, не знаю почему у него общая оценка 3.9 но это отличный фанфик во всех аспектах, начиная от проработки мира, юмора, боевых сцен... Все сделано хорошо! Даже то что он повторяет фанфик про брата Какаши и остановку времени меня очень удивила и обрадовала, жаль что я так рано присоеденился когда у такого фанфика всего 400+ глав, такие фанфики не теряют интерес даже спустя 700 глав... Всем советую к прочтению, нету Дарк, нету манипуляций и прочего бреда, зато есть отличный юмор, адекватный гг и проработанный мир
both the author who wrote this and the translator who translates this are retards please don't read this all it will give you negative braincells
Revelar spoiler everything was fine and quite entertaining, until the Senju - Uchiha conquest war over the Elemental Continent... I thought the story would be interesting... but unfortunately the original Chinese author just wanted to destroy the Naruto story too early...
is there any romance what so ever? or at least maybe a one night stand that leads to him having a kid or more importantly a legacy
author have some kind of brain damage. He keep introducing new plot device but never really do anything with it. His cheat is super OP but mc forgets about it for tens of chapters each time and barly even scrach the surface of its power. When he uses its as plotarmor to destroy ongoing plotline, theres also Mc jumping from one story line to another without brain, the whole hidden paradise island arc was unnecessary, and his writing style is frustrating mc always getting bullied left and right but do bare minimum without any satisfying ending. The whole return to konoha arc was the worse xianxia POS i've seen so far.
Please don't read this novel: while everything was going well and stroy develop smoothly, author spend 100 chapters establishing mc life in konoha, there's a sudden twist during 1st ninja war, when he get kidnapped by madara and suddenly time skipped for 14 fking years, everything mc build turn to ash, story developed as cannon and 100 chapters i read was meaningless. It's the wrose feeling ever. I dont i've ever felt so disgusted with any book i've read. this is worse than when a certain author decided end a really good in the middle of war with a single chapter of summary because he felt bored. PLS PLS stay awy for your own mental health and don't get emotionally invested in this.
Revelar spoiler 2-3-4-4-4 The translation is pretty bad, and the flow seems choppy. The Story Development is quite weak, the dialogues are funny at times though so I'll give them that. The Characters weren't as bad as I expected. World background, the timelines were quite accurate so far.
This story is a gem. Never thought a day would come when i would read a non Chinese fanfiction written in a chinese way and actually like it.I usually drop the moment I hear one, "your courting death!"The chinees feeling you get from reading this book doesn't dampen my mood to read the strory like I would in othet books, but makes me want to read it more.As for the storyline, it's really unique for a fanfiction. Such plot is something you usually get from an original story. At one point, there would be a plot twist that would get you going, "didn't see that coming."And I like how the story is not just based on konoha, but explores all the other nations as well.
I haven't started reading this novel yet. I'm kinda surprised to see that there are only about 1.7mil views on this and all the comments on the novel are 5 stars. Don't know if the author is deleting them or this is genuine.
It's a meh. If you like translated cultivation novels and such you might like it It reads completely like a cultivation novel. Even has things like myriad soul temples and such, not only that but more or less everything in it reads like one. Ancestory this, you are younger then me thus lower than me that. Plus it has some "born under the red flag" and a bit of nonce stuff here and there. So yeah, just so you know what you're getting into
the story starts like a typical chinese style writing and I was "oh, maybe another trash novel sigh... BUT as I kept reading I could not stop myself this,......this .....this novel is not a chinese style writing anymore this is much better than a whole lot of other english based naruto fanfic. WHY? because of the GENIUS plot ! Character development ! Did i not mentioned that the MC is very relatable like magic, every struggle the MC goes through as if I am in a VR experiencing it firsthand. I really felt like this fanfic has touched my very soul. ....................................Another GOOD naruto fanfic would be "child of chakra" which is also good to read. But compared this fanfic , I had only admiration for the author/translator for doing an amazing job. I am very excited for more chapters as I have read up to chapter 137 in this fanfic and it is a brilliantly made fanfic! i think this is the only fanfic on webnovel that I rated as 5 STAR on all category. - this fanfic is good because it probably wont have a harem nor a forced harem. I do not hate any harem tag. I just hate unjustifiable harem without any reasoning nor logic behind to support the story. A fanfic that has harem is very hard to also be a good fanfic most fanfic are forced harem of which i dislike( changing the behavior/essence of character unlike their original counterpart to be out of character is the definition of forced harem). -I also don't like to read a psychopath MC that is anti hero. Luckily this fanfic is not anti hero. example "naruto behind the scenes & Aokiji in naruto" are examples of a badly plan/written anti-hero. The best anti hero fanfic MUST take reference to "Lelouch the rebbelion" story where the MC is a villain but you cant help yourself to support and love the MC and every bad thing he does is forgiven.^^
I mean grammar could be better but that's all I guess other then that everything else is perfect story 👍 world background 👍 character design 👍
I was completely captivated by the novel. At first I was a little critical of the main character, but later I found him better and better. Especially when I read other Naruto ff, it is often common that the character has a god comlex, has a dramatic past or other psychological disorders. But here I found a main character who is human, which makes him very likeable. Then there are a lot of funny moments, that made me have a good time White reading. However, what I have to criticise is the bad language in some places. Apart from that I have to point out again how much I like the ff and I am really happy about how regular the updates are. My last wish is to be able to finish reading this masterpiece. So please keep up the good work author-san.
I really enjoy reading this and look forward to the next chapter the only problem I got is the update stability. if you gonna update every 2 days just say it so I don't have to keep looking. Overall I love the book
Good novel,........................................ Colmek..............................,................. Coli...................................................... Colek colek m...m...k
Revelar spoiler Humor un poco tonto en algunos casos, aunque lo han corregido ya, pero está lento la verdad. El sistema o dedo dorado no sirve para nada, como dice el MC, su dedo dorado es la familia
Good work bro i love this its great keep up the work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤝🤝👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Me encanta esta historia, tengo grandes expectativas en ella. Su comedia y la forma de describirla es buena. Me gusta la interacción de los personajes, estan plasmados como si fueran de la trama original.
Thanks for publishing here but guys btw we have google translation just write name in chinese version and find finished book This have near 410 chapter naruto part then go other worlds
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