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Love the story, The chapters are truly big and detail. Thanks man for the effort you put in every chapter. keep the good work. [img=update]
One of the best web novels I've found. H ope you keep it up and that future works keep the same amazing standard of story.
This is the best book i have read in a very long time.😍..please don't drop this...i want to see Eclipse crippled with fear😁
Uma otima leitura para quem é fã de mass effect.The best fanfic i have read about the mass effect ever. From world building to character development, everything is really amazing.
I am now up to date with the FanFic and it's a very enjoyable read! One of the best if not the best I have read so far. The only thing missing is in my opinion would be to show a bit more of his slice of life side. I enjoyed the short segment of his one night stand or whatever that was with the Asari but I would like to get a bit more of this. Currently our MC seems more like a machine than a human being. He has close to no emotional needs and I think that takes a bit away from his character. Just display his emotional side a bit more and it should be fine. Maybe one dedicated chapter to a day off or something like that.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ++Very good job, I'm curious to see what happens next.++ ++++I just hope it doesn't end in some stupid way++++
Had high hopes for this one but plot took a change in direction I did not like plus mc always says he will learn from citadels, alliances and his own mistakes but never does still decent enough
one of the best written FF's on here... publish worthy if not for that pesky copyright one of the best written FF's on here... publish worthy if not for that pesky copyright
Kinda hard to follow the non-fighting scenes, but it's well constructed and covers many things.
Harika bir hayran kurgusu gereksiz saçmalık yok akıcı hikaye sağlam mantık devamını bekliyorum😁 ,.....,..,...,......,....,.........xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxzzzzzzzz
I hope this keeps updating since all the other ME fan fics are consistently dropped
I liked the way you wrote this, as well as the story line. Finally, someone who doesn't just run to Shepard. all in all, it's an amazing book. Please publish more...
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It's just great, full stop. ........................................................................................Filler.....................................................
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A very solid and interesting fanfiction. Few chapters but they are quite long contrary to most fic out there. We follow the mass effect story through the eye of a reincarnated person before even the first contact war. In a senss there is a bit of « kingdom building » but instead of developing his own country and becoming the super smart king in a fantasy world trope, here he builds up his own company invest in interesting part using his knowledge of the futur takes part in human development and politics to best prepare mankind, and probably Shepard done the line, for their survival against the reappers Overall the story is good, great even and quite original and refreshing to have the MC not be directly involved with missions on the Normandy, instead paving to pave the road for a futur human Specter as well as all of humanity. However there are some points which are annoying. With all his knowledge of the futur the Main character doesn’t seems to use the most of it and appear quite laid back sometime. This is disconcerting because he is also described as ruthless and do some pretty intense things… but when the story needs it he act like a carpet and let people walk all over him for drama and plotting other vilains and bother further down the line… which I find quite stupid and ridiculous. Overall good story, great world building, cool characters. I would love some more interaction with main characters of the story (so far they make guests appearances here and there) being more involved with Cerberus (either use is it for its ressource, or destroy it) the guy had more than a 10 year head start to build a freaking empire conglomerate and they still are a bother. Using his tech fully (secret development and base using their own technology to travel would appear self evident as they do not need relays), selling ships to quarians at a low price in exchange for their expertise in pretty much everything tech related perhaps would be intelligent as well… as well as being more active or outspoken… The story makes a point of the Main character being super charismatic and having a silver tongue in its very first chapter yet we never actually sees it. His dialogues arent really the best, he doesn’t rouse the masses with speeches, nor does appearance on TV for PR and the lot (it is sometime mentioned in a throwaway line that he did so for some employee, and yet he appears to have less loyalty and manpower than Cerberus and their goons…) which is weird cause it was hinted at being one of his main strength early on then never exploited… even Shepard had to do some camera works in the game come on! Anyway, read it, it’s good. Could be better but it’s is worth a solid 4point something out of 5 Rate of chapters are slow though but better quality over quantity is appreciated.
This fanfic is so good! It's so good that it looped from 5 stars back to 1. Author bit off more than he could chew.
The only real negative is the upload speed, but that's only because the writing is so good.
************* Good Work! ************** **************************************** *************And I need more! ********* ****************************************
There aren't many chapters, but they are REALLY long, so dw about chapter count. Now onto the fanfic itself: I love it. It is a story of a man that doesn't have built in cheats of intelligence or strength, neither is he a combatant. No, our protagonist influences the world by joining the political structure of the 'nation' and influencing it from within. Now I have two questions, one to author (though I doubt he would answer, as up to now there were no comments from him): a) Any romance in the future? b) Fellow readers, do you know any other similar stories, and would recommend?
************* Good Work! ************** **************************************** *************And I need more! ********* ****************************************
loving this so far, very different from the usual soilder fanfic and focuses on developing humanity. Looking forward to reading more and see where the author takes it.
This story is absolutely amazing! On the first chapter I was hooked to reading it. The Author has an amazing mind to be able to write this story, the updating of new chapters is slow in theory, but every chapter is quite long and has impeccable grammer and plot. Thank you again for this amazing story.
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Çok iyi şimdiye kadarki okuduğum en iyi bilimkurgu fan kurgusu bile olabilir. Mass effect dünyasındaki sadece insanlara değil bütün uygarlıklar a yardım eden bir kahraman olursa dahada sevebilirim.
Congratulations to the author of the fanfic! The fanfic is just perfect to read. The construction of the MC is brilliant in my opinion, a kind of neutral chaotic, a simple human with a good head on his neck and who is fortunate enough to be in the right "universe", at the right time and with the right resources. hahahah I look forward to the next chapters! Um grande abraço para o autor!
Please contiune though you need to start ending loose ends like with the ancient ruins and the one doctor having an idea about a better genartor. Also can you make the chapters longer and not have like 3 povs just have a few mcs and leave the rest for narrator info dump
Only downside I see is Oscar is paragon elusive man. I would like cerebus to sort of be a from shadows ad astra renegade. It straight from imagination otherwise
Love the story, The chapters are truly big and detail. Thanks man for the effort you put in every chapter. keep the good work. [img=update]
One of the best web novels I've found. H ope you keep it up and that future works keep the same amazing standard of story.
This is the best book i have read in a very long time.😍..please don't drop this...i want to see Eclipse crippled with fear😁
Uma otima leitura para quem é fã de mass effect.The best fanfic i have read about the mass effect ever. From world building to character development, everything is really amazing.
I am now up to date with the FanFic and it's a very enjoyable read! One of the best if not the best I have read so far. The only thing missing is in my opinion would be to show a bit more of his slice of life side. I enjoyed the short segment of his one night stand or whatever that was with the Asari but I would like to get a bit more of this. Currently our MC seems more like a machine than a human being. He has close to no emotional needs and I think that takes a bit away from his character. Just display his emotional side a bit more and it should be fine. Maybe one dedicated chapter to a day off or something like that.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ++Very good job, I'm curious to see what happens next.++ ++++I just hope it doesn't end in some stupid way++++
Had high hopes for this one but plot took a change in direction I did not like plus mc always says he will learn from citadels, alliances and his own mistakes but never does still decent enough
one of the best written FF's on here... publish worthy if not for that pesky copyright one of the best written FF's on here... publish worthy if not for that pesky copyright
Kinda hard to follow the non-fighting scenes, but it's well constructed and covers many things.
Harika bir hayran kurgusu gereksiz saçmalık yok akıcı hikaye sağlam mantık devamını bekliyorum😁 ,.....,..,...,......,....,.........xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxzzzzzzzz
I hope this keeps updating since all the other ME fan fics are consistently dropped
I liked the way you wrote this, as well as the story line. Finally, someone who doesn't just run to Shepard. all in all, it's an amazing book. Please publish more...
Revelar spoiler It's just great, full stop. ........................................................................................Filler.....................................................
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A very solid and interesting fanfiction. Few chapters but they are quite long contrary to most fic out there. We follow the mass effect story through the eye of a reincarnated person before even the first contact war. In a senss there is a bit of « kingdom building » but instead of developing his own country and becoming the super smart king in a fantasy world trope, here he builds up his own company invest in interesting part using his knowledge of the futur takes part in human development and politics to best prepare mankind, and probably Shepard done the line, for their survival against the reappers Overall the story is good, great even and quite original and refreshing to have the MC not be directly involved with missions on the Normandy, instead paving to pave the road for a futur human Specter as well as all of humanity. However there are some points which are annoying. With all his knowledge of the futur the Main character doesn’t seems to use the most of it and appear quite laid back sometime. This is disconcerting because he is also described as ruthless and do some pretty intense things… but when the story needs it he act like a carpet and let people walk all over him for drama and plotting other vilains and bother further down the line… which I find quite stupid and ridiculous. Overall good story, great world building, cool characters. I would love some more interaction with main characters of the story (so far they make guests appearances here and there) being more involved with Cerberus (either use is it for its ressource, or destroy it) the guy had more than a 10 year head start to build a freaking empire conglomerate and they still are a bother. Using his tech fully (secret development and base using their own technology to travel would appear self evident as they do not need relays), selling ships to quarians at a low price in exchange for their expertise in pretty much everything tech related perhaps would be intelligent as well… as well as being more active or outspoken… The story makes a point of the Main character being super charismatic and having a silver tongue in its very first chapter yet we never actually sees it. His dialogues arent really the best, he doesn’t rouse the masses with speeches, nor does appearance on TV for PR and the lot (it is sometime mentioned in a throwaway line that he did so for some employee, and yet he appears to have less loyalty and manpower than Cerberus and their goons…) which is weird cause it was hinted at being one of his main strength early on then never exploited… even Shepard had to do some camera works in the game come on! Anyway, read it, it’s good. Could be better but it’s is worth a solid 4point something out of 5 Rate of chapters are slow though but better quality over quantity is appreciated.
This fanfic is so good! It's so good that it looped from 5 stars back to 1. Author bit off more than he could chew.
The only real negative is the upload speed, but that's only because the writing is so good.
************* Good Work! ************** **************************************** *************And I need more! ********* ****************************************
There aren't many chapters, but they are REALLY long, so dw about chapter count. Now onto the fanfic itself: I love it. It is a story of a man that doesn't have built in cheats of intelligence or strength, neither is he a combatant. No, our protagonist influences the world by joining the political structure of the 'nation' and influencing it from within. Now I have two questions, one to author (though I doubt he would answer, as up to now there were no comments from him): a) Any romance in the future? b) Fellow readers, do you know any other similar stories, and would recommend?
************* Good Work! ************** **************************************** *************And I need more! ********* ****************************************
loving this so far, very different from the usual soilder fanfic and focuses on developing humanity. Looking forward to reading more and see where the author takes it.
This story is absolutely amazing! On the first chapter I was hooked to reading it. The Author has an amazing mind to be able to write this story, the updating of new chapters is slow in theory, but every chapter is quite long and has impeccable grammer and plot. Thank you again for this amazing story.
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Çok iyi şimdiye kadarki okuduğum en iyi bilimkurgu fan kurgusu bile olabilir. Mass effect dünyasındaki sadece insanlara değil bütün uygarlıklar a yardım eden bir kahraman olursa dahada sevebilirim.
Congratulations to the author of the fanfic! The fanfic is just perfect to read. The construction of the MC is brilliant in my opinion, a kind of neutral chaotic, a simple human with a good head on his neck and who is fortunate enough to be in the right "universe", at the right time and with the right resources. hahahah I look forward to the next chapters! Um grande abraço para o autor!
Please contiune though you need to start ending loose ends like with the ancient ruins and the one doctor having an idea about a better genartor. Also can you make the chapters longer and not have like 3 povs just have a few mcs and leave the rest for narrator info dump
Only downside I see is Oscar is paragon elusive man. I would like cerebus to sort of be a from shadows ad astra renegade. It straight from imagination otherwise