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LV 4

8ightbit

I honestly don't know how to describe this.. The story progression is extremely slow and longwinded.. Like for example, MC goes on his first mission, at chapter 28.. The comedy is practically non-existent and dry to the point that you'd find more moisture on the crusty feet of your 95 year old grandmother.. The story is extremely dull and there's no progression, quite literally.. Like one moment MC is just a normal guy, then suddenly decides to becomes a cannibal that drinks blood willingly without batting an eye, and even takes great pleasure from it.. it is just disgusting and weird.. Like what sane person would do that, MC was normal???? idk what author is doing with this story tbh, I feel like, he wants the MC personality to be "cool" "baddass" or "mysterious" ..... unless, your a immature little brat, that thinks frowning or doing the duckface when you're getting your picture taken is cool, it is none of those.. I can only describe MC as; "Ughh".. yes, that's how I describe it folks.. ^^ MC is not interesting, and that is basically a fanfic killer, because, If your MC isn't good or interesting then, why would anyone read this? There's no planning or structure to the story, it is too serious, a smidge of darkness and basically boring.. and this story wasn't meant to be those things, It is about traveling the omni-verse where characters of fiction come alive! It is about MC having fun in basically infinite worlds.. It is none of that and a disappointment.. so yeah.. this is my review.. If you found it helpful you're welcome for the time saved.. Writing Quality - 2/5 Stability of Updates - 3/5 Story Development - 1/5 Character Design - 1/5 World Background - 2/5 Overall/total - 1.8 / 5

LV 13

kezeth_

I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to sleep, nor known to reality. I have withstood Cliff-Kun to create many reviews. Yet, these hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray ... Unlimited Exp Works! [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

LV 5

akasuna123

mc is a cannibal and drinks blood also he somehow unlocks blood dragon slayer magic by being a cannibal. ... .... .... .... .... .... .... ...

LV 3

nurarihyon_godking

So stupid The protagonist gathers every woman he sees How to develop relationships is not well narrated one question? Why was Kanae absorbed by MC as soon as he was revived? Or why Kei decided to become Ryuu's wife and why Nezuko or the other kids show no reaction

LV 1

Abysschan

Story is interesting for me.I will give it a five stars but because i think that mc will think with his lower body i will give it three and maybe a four if mc do not destroy the story.And i dont know what to say but is a great story for passing time.

LV 4

Marianne_de

This was not that entertaining as the FF was generic and mc was just plain and normal. I know that this is the whole point of the FF(normal guy gets a group chat and collects girls) but this is getting repetitive, almost every FF out there is the same.

LV 2

Authority_

Drop in chapter 28, The MC is an insufferable hypocrite, but what made me drop was the nerf to the system when he goes on a mission to another world. The nerf is unacceptable, it reduces the whole story to a ridiculous joke.

LV 3

ThisNovelSucksBro

Countless chapters of the MC hiding power, being nerfed and continuously simping women when they disrespect him only for the author to drop. Pathetic.

LV 10

DaoistAXe9PI

Ótima fan-fic, muito boa 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 6

LostThe50_50

dead.....its just dead, the words character development and world building is non-existent. They just dont exist, not to mention.....the dry overused jokes that most people dont get or just isnt funny.......its just cringe....😖😖😖 whatever, i hope you well wishes on your writing.

LV 4

Darksideoftheworld

I read up to chapter 20. In the first few chapters, the The protagonist gets almost everything you need at the start he gets $10 billion (gamers mine )(gamers body) and a system. A few chapters later he gets blood manipulation and it turned into dragon slayer blood manipulation and the only expression the author gave was Fairy Tail Dragon slayer magic is stupid.

LV 1

Javier_Martinez_8341

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LV 13

Hazito

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LV 1

Diky_Maulana

Yah untuk saat ini saya akan kasih bintang 5 untuk novel ini. Saya cuma berharap author tidak terlalu memaksakan sekali Harem yang mengumpulkan para wanita seperti mengumpulkan pokemon. Jujur jangan sampai jadinya ceritanya ini persis seperti novel sebelah,jadi ngeri saya membaca halusinasi si pengarang melebihi ekspektasi si pembaca 😂

LV 5

Ulescu_Mihai

Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍

LV 14

MIR_Sajeeb

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LV 13

Hazito

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Yr itna bda kon pdhe yr mere paas attack on titan dekhne ka tym ni h to isko kon pdhe yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy. Bbbbb b. B. B.

LV 5

Shurasik

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