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I dropped when mc suddenly got a cousin that looks like a twin of his. Thats just a boring twist. Also it was annoying to read mc be close to wendy when he clearly had celine
Good story development with detailed explanation that draws a clear picture of each setting. Nice progress and key moments that arouse reader's curiosity.
The story felt monotonous; the characters lacked depth and their interactions seemed mechanical. Each conversation was devoid of emotion, making it difficult to connect with their experiences.
This novel captures the true essence of those Chinese Urban novel with system, from annoying Young Masters to arrogant People and full of trash dialogs from Peanut Galleries. Sometimes I think the author of this novel is Chinese or at least have 90% Chinese blood in him.
The story is just awesome. I hope it will not take a long time for it to be updated.
To be honest, this work has a lot of potential. Genetic Lock is nothing new, but if used properly, it'll push a work up there to the top(Legendary Mechanic applied something similar if I remember correctly). The problem is that, there are some things that have been stated from the previous chapter, then all of a sudden the author went like "I forgot to talk about this and that so let's add it here", so you ended up with repeats, though rarely. The MC is stupid despite having his Brain enhanced/boosted by the system multiple times. The system is too sentient, making its presence too influential, and supernatural only started appearing 270 chapters despite setting up the world where there are various levels of humans.
The grammar is mediocre and the mc is just irrationally spending money. Why would he buy over a dozen Bentleys right after he opened his first store?
MC is like a small child with unlimited wealth and a full stop in his mental development. 99% happenings in this story has no logic/common sense/small bit of reality etc. (If you believe his every action=reality bending, then this story will make sense maybe.)
I've read dozens of face slapping novels with a similar rehashed plot...and could read a hundred more.
This is so bad. Sometimes i wonder if the writing is made by a 5 yo. I couldnt read more then 10 chapter..........................................................
braindead .......oh so braindead that i actually do not want to give it a review but fill this with a nearly braindead curse.just fill the review with the words braindead.... it might get taken down but I've seen worse reviews kept for a while. maybe they're all down now.... but this is braindead!!!!it's a terrible sign for good story expectations when the MC starts the story by buying a FLEET of Bentleys for a GROCERY STOREs employees...... want to read about being above everyone? ✔️want to read a story that engages? error 404.i hate this genre so call this a biased review if you will. but consider that that all good reviews couldn't be anything but biased
read up to chapter 340...good so far... but this kind of genre novel will mostly be good to read as long as they don't get too nationalistic or suddenly aliens or demons make their presence known and this turn into a cultivation novel.
Rather disappointing. The MC shows no skill of his own, completely depending on the system. That's often the case with system novels, but at least display some sort of sense. He knows that his siblings are scheming, yet "I called a taxi for you, and paid for it" and he can't be bothered trying to think what his sister may be plotting? The moment he gets the system, there's basically no point to anything. There's no sense of tension when he doesn't need to put in effort in order to profit. And whatever goal he has is unknown, at least to where I've read it (c35). The romance hasn't developed yet, but I doubt I would've cared either way, considering it's based on super love at first sight or something. The MC and FL seem to be obsessed with each other while knowing absolutely nothing about the other.
This novel propably is good and light pass time read for peoples starting with reading novels. For someone who have already read a few titles from this genre it's propably cliché novel not worth reading. If i would rate it from perspective of a person who just started reading it can have 4 stars. From the perspective of older reader it's 2.5-3.5 stars. depending on what someone likes. Rating it on chapter 134 i can say one thing. I don't know if author added MC's cousin who looks just like him according to plan or it was just cutting out his harem route but it destroyed whole story at this point. Honestly this whole topic with twin sisters and cousins just deserve for lowering ratings but let leave it without it. For me it's dropped from reasons like I Said before.
Decent novel. MC’s mother died and is disown by is father. Gets a system, tries to stay low key but has too much chinese bystander BS involvement. Not sure if mainland China Chinese are just super rude busybody in real life or just novels portraying them as such but it’s such a turn off reading it. I like the no harem and chill MC but this MC is almost too passively cool that he’s unrelatable whee we n reading. 3 Star dropping.
(Spoiler Alert) Great Story so far, i was amazed by how I got soo hooked up into this story, and i honestly love the interaction between Jack and Jonathan it's just too hilarious, they seem more like brothers than cousins, I also greatly liked the FL too, even though it may seem a bit cringe at the beginning, but the author managed to write their "fated" relationship soo well that the bit of cringeness can easily be forgotten. If I had to choose a Downside to this story, it would be the updating speed, don't get me wrong, the updating speed is very good compared to other novels I know, but as a fan I just can't wait until the next chapter update (i suppose it's the same for everyone out there). All in all, loved the story, you got all of my support author and I hope you will continue updating this story with high-quality chapters like you always you do. [PS : I would also like to know if there's a discord server of this novel cuz the link in the description doesn't seem to work, or for me at the very least and thanks]
Revelar spoiler
MC low iq. Author makes up numbers with no research even with the conversion he provided. I mean the Eurocopter is 150 mil aka 15 mil after conversion but hiring a pilot from a company for a year is 1 billion aka 100 million, absolutely makes no sense. He buys Bentleys first day of business to all his grocery store employees, no business sense what so ever. He has the biggest security company but he goes to fight a whole gang by himself with his plot armor. Dante family gives him big trouble and kidnaps his lover yet he forgives them because of George who should mean nothing to the MC as a delivery employee. He acts like a love stricken beta id-i-ot when looking at his 'fated lover' he tells her he stared at her for ten minutes straight, cant no one have a bit of dignity?
I'm back guys! Part two of this novel will be posted starting next month. The title of the novel is going to be: 'TWINS WITH SYSTEMS: COMPLETE THE MISSION'. See you guys then...
I dropped when mc suddenly got a cousin that looks like a twin of his. Thats just a boring twist. Also it was annoying to read mc be close to wendy when he clearly had celine
Good story development with detailed explanation that draws a clear picture of each setting. Nice progress and key moments that arouse reader's curiosity.
The story felt monotonous; the characters lacked depth and their interactions seemed mechanical. Each conversation was devoid of emotion, making it difficult to connect with their experiences.
This novel captures the true essence of those Chinese Urban novel with system, from annoying Young Masters to arrogant People and full of trash dialogs from Peanut Galleries. Sometimes I think the author of this novel is Chinese or at least have 90% Chinese blood in him.
The story is just awesome. I hope it will not take a long time for it to be updated.
To be honest, this work has a lot of potential. Genetic Lock is nothing new, but if used properly, it'll push a work up there to the top(Legendary Mechanic applied something similar if I remember correctly). The problem is that, there are some things that have been stated from the previous chapter, then all of a sudden the author went like "I forgot to talk about this and that so let's add it here", so you ended up with repeats, though rarely. The MC is stupid despite having his Brain enhanced/boosted by the system multiple times. The system is too sentient, making its presence too influential, and supernatural only started appearing 270 chapters despite setting up the world where there are various levels of humans.
The grammar is mediocre and the mc is just irrationally spending money. Why would he buy over a dozen Bentleys right after he opened his first store?
MC is like a small child with unlimited wealth and a full stop in his mental development. 99% happenings in this story has no logic/common sense/small bit of reality etc. (If you believe his every action=reality bending, then this story will make sense maybe.)
I've read dozens of face slapping novels with a similar rehashed plot...and could read a hundred more.
This is so bad. Sometimes i wonder if the writing is made by a 5 yo. I couldnt read more then 10 chapter..........................................................
braindead .......oh so braindead that i actually do not want to give it a review but fill this with a nearly braindead curse.just fill the review with the words braindead.... it might get taken down but I've seen worse reviews kept for a while. maybe they're all down now.... but this is braindead!!!!it's a terrible sign for good story expectations when the MC starts the story by buying a FLEET of Bentleys for a GROCERY STOREs employees...... want to read about being above everyone? ✔️want to read a story that engages? error 404.i hate this genre so call this a biased review if you will. but consider that that all good reviews couldn't be anything but biased
read up to chapter 340...good so far... but this kind of genre novel will mostly be good to read as long as they don't get too nationalistic or suddenly aliens or demons make their presence known and this turn into a cultivation novel.
Rather disappointing. The MC shows no skill of his own, completely depending on the system. That's often the case with system novels, but at least display some sort of sense. He knows that his siblings are scheming, yet "I called a taxi for you, and paid for it" and he can't be bothered trying to think what his sister may be plotting? The moment he gets the system, there's basically no point to anything. There's no sense of tension when he doesn't need to put in effort in order to profit. And whatever goal he has is unknown, at least to where I've read it (c35). The romance hasn't developed yet, but I doubt I would've cared either way, considering it's based on super love at first sight or something. The MC and FL seem to be obsessed with each other while knowing absolutely nothing about the other.
This novel propably is good and light pass time read for peoples starting with reading novels. For someone who have already read a few titles from this genre it's propably cliché novel not worth reading. If i would rate it from perspective of a person who just started reading it can have 4 stars. From the perspective of older reader it's 2.5-3.5 stars. depending on what someone likes. Rating it on chapter 134 i can say one thing. I don't know if author added MC's cousin who looks just like him according to plan or it was just cutting out his harem route but it destroyed whole story at this point. Honestly this whole topic with twin sisters and cousins just deserve for lowering ratings but let leave it without it. For me it's dropped from reasons like I Said before.
Decent novel. MC’s mother died and is disown by is father. Gets a system, tries to stay low key but has too much chinese bystander BS involvement. Not sure if mainland China Chinese are just super rude busybody in real life or just novels portraying them as such but it’s such a turn off reading it. I like the no harem and chill MC but this MC is almost too passively cool that he’s unrelatable whee we n reading. 3 Star dropping.
(Spoiler Alert) Great Story so far, i was amazed by how I got soo hooked up into this story, and i honestly love the interaction between Jack and Jonathan it's just too hilarious, they seem more like brothers than cousins, I also greatly liked the FL too, even though it may seem a bit cringe at the beginning, but the author managed to write their "fated" relationship soo well that the bit of cringeness can easily be forgotten. If I had to choose a Downside to this story, it would be the updating speed, don't get me wrong, the updating speed is very good compared to other novels I know, but as a fan I just can't wait until the next chapter update (i suppose it's the same for everyone out there). All in all, loved the story, you got all of my support author and I hope you will continue updating this story with high-quality chapters like you always you do. [PS : I would also like to know if there's a discord server of this novel cuz the link in the description doesn't seem to work, or for me at the very least and thanks]
Revelar spoiler MC low iq. Author makes up numbers with no research even with the conversion he provided. I mean the Eurocopter is 150 mil aka 15 mil after conversion but hiring a pilot from a company for a year is 1 billion aka 100 million, absolutely makes no sense. He buys Bentleys first day of business to all his grocery store employees, no business sense what so ever. He has the biggest security company but he goes to fight a whole gang by himself with his plot armor. Dante family gives him big trouble and kidnaps his lover yet he forgives them because of George who should mean nothing to the MC as a delivery employee. He acts like a love stricken beta id-i-ot when looking at his 'fated lover' he tells her he stared at her for ten minutes straight, cant no one have a bit of dignity?
I'm back guys! Part two of this novel will be posted starting next month. The title of the novel is going to be: 'TWINS WITH SYSTEMS: COMPLETE THE MISSION'. See you guys then...