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Hello this review is for volume 1.(I can’t wait for volume 2 SQUUEE).Anyways,This story is amazing.I love the world building and how I am able to grasp the concepts of it and understand it.The author never fail to surprise me with the world .I love how the story progresses becuz at the end of every chapter you will keep wanting more of it! .Moreover,The author has mentioned about how the Mc is a coward in their author note.I do agree on that but there are times where I see his character development.Like how he gets out his comfort zone and try new things.I can’t wait to see his character development for volume 2! And yes this story does not fail to make me laugh 🤣🤣.I love the side characters especially our shapeshifter keke.I can’t wait to see how this story develops in volume 2.You should definitely give this novel a try I promise this is so good.I enjoyed reading this novel.Thank you author for creating and putting your effort into this masterpiece.I can’t wait for volume 2 squwwwllll!
Hello sir author I would like to ask that you do not use a special text type, indeed by reading with Google translations it becomes unreadable sincerely, a reader.
Hwat a wonderful story I really like the way the MC's confusion and hard time to adjust to changes has been portraid... atjo the first chapter is reallllyyyy confusing ad a lot is happeneing at once the story eventually takes a turn of events after reading a couple of more chaoters ahead. The Author did an amazing job describing the emeotions of the MC and the plot it self seems to fit in the best way... What a promising story 👏🏼👏🏼
Writing Quality: So far that I've read, I've enjoyed all bits of the chapters. I found it hard to come across any form of error, which meant you took your time to edit your work, producing neat and organized writing. Though I almost got lost with the tenses, sometimes past, other times, present. But all in all, I loved it so far. Stability of Updates: Quite up to date at promised time! Story Development: Your story's pacing was a bit slow at the beginning but luckily, I came across your remark at the comment section where you stated the pacing was done on purpose to give readers time to connect with the MC. That's quite thoughtful of you. Actions were moderately and impressively well written when necessary. The entailed details in your descriptions were also very nice. Character Design: You took your time creating these characters with relatable backgrounds. That's very professional of you. World Background: All necessary notes were detailed in your descriptions and it transported me to those exact times. This is a great piece of professional work. I loved it so far.
I have to say, for a novel that gestures the premise of being Fantasy, it felt more like I was watching an Isekai anime from the very first episode, truly a work of art. I enjoyed the startup and the progression of the reincarnated mc, definitely adding to my library for further immersion.
An amazing work, the story make me think of Lord of The Mysteries, not that it’s a bad thing. …………………………………………………….,………………………………..……………….………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
The discriptions are so sophisticated and yet very easy to understand. The story kicks off immediately and you quickly get the sense of wonder and mystery that the story provides. Its a well thoughtout story check it out!
First I saw that this novel has only 76 chapters out (although it seems like a lot, I see this as a fairly new novel). Next I checked how many collections it had and there were well over 500 collections. I found this odd because seeing a new novel with this many collections is rare but in some cases, contracted novels get promotions and they earn quite a lot of collections at once but this novel isn't contracted... (I'm 90% sure because you can't send it gifts). So I came to the conclusion that the collections must have been botted but I still began to read the novel to humour myself. ... That was when I realized that the the collections were not botted at all. The narration is phenomenal, the story, everything is just perfect. I went into this novel thinking it was overrated and now I'm convinced it is 100% underrated, this deserves so much more love!!!! (Sorry for the tangent in the beginning, I just wanted to express the rollercoaster of emotions I went through with this novel).
i've read the first 5 chapter, i'm a little disappointed because it doesn't have that thing that makes you wonder about what will be the plot of the future story, like it's just nothing.
i don't mean to offend anyone, i'm just asking, is this the same as Lord of The Mysteries?.................................... .............
All the books by this Author are amazing and this Author is really talented , keep it up Author love the characters and the plot was amazing keep it up 💯
Expert imagery and descriptions with a pretty good plot to boot. They're very well detailed and work great. We already have multiple questions brought to the table early on to keep things going the rest of the way. Only downside is the amount of grammatical errors there is sometimes. It's not anything too distracting, but I found it irking me a little. Props to the author and I hope you continue improving.
The cover gives a good idea of the current main characters and even makes one intreaged for what is to come. Great details, and the story is definitely coming together. It's just the start, but the start of something great. Overall I don't have any complaints about any of the writing. Great story.
while I didn't read all the chapters yet, it is not bad so far. I really like your writing style, it is very deceptive. It paints a vivid picture in the reader's mind.
For starters, the story concept is amazing, much better than many other isekai plots. Description is neither little not much. Narration is easy to understand and follow. One thing that I gotta mention is your sense of humour can be seen in writer thoughts and replies, but they are surprisingly absent in the novel. Although comedy isn't the theme of the novel, your ability can use humour in a few places.
Your plot is good. But make it faster, you can combine two chapter in one chapter. I hope this story is not a cliché story. Hope for the best from author.
I actually love how detailed this novel is, great plot and great descriptions, overall a great novel. I will expect great things from both the author and the novel
The plot is good. There is a very detailed information about everything. The way of portraying the views or image of the protagonist is nicely done.
A beautiful story, not what I would normally read but it's a nice change of pace. I strongly recommend you read the story and I assure you that it won't be regretted.
the synopsis is very interesting, only in chapter one do I like the story so far. lots of information on the character, love that. I think it will be a good novel. I can't wait to read more!!
The synopsis so eye-catching, every words is well written... I love the cover with bunny 🐇 (✿ ♡‿♡)... The author tells the character very detailed even the first chapter already interesting... I'm admirer your beautiful story... Can't wait for next chapter updated... (*＾3＾)/～♡
Author’s Note!! To everyone who is reading this at this moment, thank you! There were a few things I would like to say before you start reading the actual story: 1. “The JOKER” was inspired by the “Lord of the Mysteries” by Cuttlefish that Loves Diving. But hold your horses people! When I say inspired, I don’t mean “copy”. Rest assured that there will be no arcana cards, tarot club, fights between deities, etc. In short, I won’t be copying LOTM’s plot, just the transmigration trope. It’s just that as soon as I finished reading LOTM, all the emptiness I never knew existed within me suddenly resurfaced all at once. I had a hard time moving on with that story that I read it over and over again. While in the midst of my painful wait for book 2, I was hit by a sudden flash of inspiration and thus, giving birth to this story. But seriously tho, why does it sound like a romantic confession? Anyway, moving forward. 2. This story is slow-paced, especially in the beginning chapters. But not slow to the point that you would want to slam your head onto the wall due to the lack of events and excessive turtle pacing. I just wanted Jack Miller (the protagonist) to be relatable and have proper motivations for why he’s doing what he's doing. I don’t want him to dive headfirst into action while we don’t even understand him as a human being. I wanted him to be relatable, not easily forgotten, and have realistic motivation. Don’t worry tho, it may be slow-paced but I don’t like putting fillers in my stories. So you can be sure that every chapter has its own purpose. (though they may be short) 3. Though I mentioned suicide in the synopsis, I wanted to clarify this to you guys. I AM NOT GLORIFYING SUICIDE. I wanted to show the effect it has on the living left behind. Also, though there will be violence in the future, the protagonist will not, and will never become a mindless murderer. If ever he actually killed someone, it is not without reason. 4. Lastly, I am not a native English speaker. But I love writing stories. It’s a form of release for me. So please don’t be disappointed if ever you see grammatical errors and punctuation misplacement every here and there. To be honest, I edit the chapter multiple times before posting them (but they become shorter whenever I do because I remove the wordy sentences). I also use Grammarly and I plan to go on premium once I become a little bit richer in the future. But for now, please bear with it guys. If you see any errors, please do a paragraph comment and tell me it needed fixing (if it’s not too much to ask). Anyway, that’s all I have to say. Thank you so much, everyone! – Your beloved bunnyrabbit.
Hello this review is for volume 1.(I can’t wait for volume 2 SQUUEE).Anyways,This story is amazing.I love the world building and how I am able to grasp the concepts of it and understand it.The author never fail to surprise me with the world .I love how the story progresses becuz at the end of every chapter you will keep wanting more of it! .Moreover,The author has mentioned about how the Mc is a coward in their author note.I do agree on that but there are times where I see his character development.Like how he gets out his comfort zone and try new things.I can’t wait to see his character development for volume 2! And yes this story does not fail to make me laugh 🤣🤣.I love the side characters especially our shapeshifter keke.I can’t wait to see how this story develops in volume 2.You should definitely give this novel a try I promise this is so good.I enjoyed reading this novel.Thank you author for creating and putting your effort into this masterpiece.I can’t wait for volume 2 squwwwllll!
Hello sir author I would like to ask that you do not use a special text type, indeed by reading with Google translations it becomes unreadable sincerely, a reader.
Hwat a wonderful story I really like the way the MC's confusion and hard time to adjust to changes has been portraid... atjo the first chapter is reallllyyyy confusing ad a lot is happeneing at once the story eventually takes a turn of events after reading a couple of more chaoters ahead. The Author did an amazing job describing the emeotions of the MC and the plot it self seems to fit in the best way... What a promising story 👏🏼👏🏼
Writing Quality: So far that I've read, I've enjoyed all bits of the chapters. I found it hard to come across any form of error, which meant you took your time to edit your work, producing neat and organized writing. Though I almost got lost with the tenses, sometimes past, other times, present. But all in all, I loved it so far. Stability of Updates: Quite up to date at promised time! Story Development: Your story's pacing was a bit slow at the beginning but luckily, I came across your remark at the comment section where you stated the pacing was done on purpose to give readers time to connect with the MC. That's quite thoughtful of you. Actions were moderately and impressively well written when necessary. The entailed details in your descriptions were also very nice. Character Design: You took your time creating these characters with relatable backgrounds. That's very professional of you. World Background: All necessary notes were detailed in your descriptions and it transported me to those exact times. This is a great piece of professional work. I loved it so far.
I have to say, for a novel that gestures the premise of being Fantasy, it felt more like I was watching an Isekai anime from the very first episode, truly a work of art. I enjoyed the startup and the progression of the reincarnated mc, definitely adding to my library for further immersion.
An amazing work, the story make me think of Lord of The Mysteries, not that it’s a bad thing. …………………………………………………….,………………………………..……………….………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
The discriptions are so sophisticated and yet very easy to understand. The story kicks off immediately and you quickly get the sense of wonder and mystery that the story provides. Its a well thoughtout story check it out!
First I saw that this novel has only 76 chapters out (although it seems like a lot, I see this as a fairly new novel). Next I checked how many collections it had and there were well over 500 collections. I found this odd because seeing a new novel with this many collections is rare but in some cases, contracted novels get promotions and they earn quite a lot of collections at once but this novel isn't contracted... (I'm 90% sure because you can't send it gifts). So I came to the conclusion that the collections must have been botted but I still began to read the novel to humour myself. ... That was when I realized that the the collections were not botted at all. The narration is phenomenal, the story, everything is just perfect. I went into this novel thinking it was overrated and now I'm convinced it is 100% underrated, this deserves so much more love!!!! (Sorry for the tangent in the beginning, I just wanted to express the rollercoaster of emotions I went through with this novel).
i've read the first 5 chapter, i'm a little disappointed because it doesn't have that thing that makes you wonder about what will be the plot of the future story, like it's just nothing.
i don't mean to offend anyone, i'm just asking, is this the same as Lord of The Mysteries?.................................... .............
All the books by this Author are amazing and this Author is really talented , keep it up Author love the characters and the plot was amazing keep it up 💯
Expert imagery and descriptions with a pretty good plot to boot. They're very well detailed and work great. We already have multiple questions brought to the table early on to keep things going the rest of the way. Only downside is the amount of grammatical errors there is sometimes. It's not anything too distracting, but I found it irking me a little. Props to the author and I hope you continue improving.
The cover gives a good idea of the current main characters and even makes one intreaged for what is to come. Great details, and the story is definitely coming together. It's just the start, but the start of something great. Overall I don't have any complaints about any of the writing. Great story.
while I didn't read all the chapters yet, it is not bad so far. I really like your writing style, it is very deceptive. It paints a vivid picture in the reader's mind.
For starters, the story concept is amazing, much better than many other isekai plots. Description is neither little not much. Narration is easy to understand and follow. One thing that I gotta mention is your sense of humour can be seen in writer thoughts and replies, but they are surprisingly absent in the novel. Although comedy isn't the theme of the novel, your ability can use humour in a few places.
Your plot is good. But make it faster, you can combine two chapter in one chapter. I hope this story is not a cliché story. Hope for the best from author.
I actually love how detailed this novel is, great plot and great descriptions, overall a great novel. I will expect great things from both the author and the novel
The plot is good. There is a very detailed information about everything. The way of portraying the views or image of the protagonist is nicely done.
A beautiful story, not what I would normally read but it's a nice change of pace. I strongly recommend you read the story and I assure you that it won't be regretted.
the synopsis is very interesting, only in chapter one do I like the story so far. lots of information on the character, love that. I think it will be a good novel. I can't wait to read more!!
The synopsis so eye-catching, every words is well written... I love the cover with bunny 🐇 (✿ ♡‿♡)... The author tells the character very detailed even the first chapter already interesting... I'm admirer your beautiful story... Can't wait for next chapter updated... (*＾3＾)/～♡
Author’s Note!! To everyone who is reading this at this moment, thank you! There were a few things I would like to say before you start reading the actual story: 1. “The JOKER” was inspired by the “Lord of the Mysteries” by Cuttlefish that Loves Diving. But hold your horses people! When I say inspired, I don’t mean “copy”. Rest assured that there will be no arcana cards, tarot club, fights between deities, etc. In short, I won’t be copying LOTM’s plot, just the transmigration trope. It’s just that as soon as I finished reading LOTM, all the emptiness I never knew existed within me suddenly resurfaced all at once. I had a hard time moving on with that story that I read it over and over again. While in the midst of my painful wait for book 2, I was hit by a sudden flash of inspiration and thus, giving birth to this story. But seriously tho, why does it sound like a romantic confession? Anyway, moving forward. 2. This story is slow-paced, especially in the beginning chapters. But not slow to the point that you would want to slam your head onto the wall due to the lack of events and excessive turtle pacing. I just wanted Jack Miller (the protagonist) to be relatable and have proper motivations for why he’s doing what he's doing. I don’t want him to dive headfirst into action while we don’t even understand him as a human being. I wanted him to be relatable, not easily forgotten, and have realistic motivation. Don’t worry tho, it may be slow-paced but I don’t like putting fillers in my stories. So you can be sure that every chapter has its own purpose. (though they may be short) 3. Though I mentioned suicide in the synopsis, I wanted to clarify this to you guys. I AM NOT GLORIFYING SUICIDE. I wanted to show the effect it has on the living left behind. Also, though there will be violence in the future, the protagonist will not, and will never become a mindless murderer. If ever he actually killed someone, it is not without reason. 4. Lastly, I am not a native English speaker. But I love writing stories. It’s a form of release for me. So please don’t be disappointed if ever you see grammatical errors and punctuation misplacement every here and there. To be honest, I edit the chapter multiple times before posting them (but they become shorter whenever I do because I remove the wordy sentences). I also use Grammarly and I plan to go on premium once I become a little bit richer in the future. But for now, please bear with it guys. If you see any errors, please do a paragraph comment and tell me it needed fixing (if it’s not too much to ask). Anyway, that’s all I have to say. Thank you so much, everyone! – Your beloved bunnyrabbit.