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Naruto: Root Ninja

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A young man is killed at the age of 20 and is reincarnated into the world of Naruto. But unlike other reincarnators, he didn't meet anyone, nor did he get any wishes or powers.

He wakes up in the body of a 3 year old kid. He looks around and finds a man with bandages covering one side.

He said to the three year old kid "From now on, you are Hakuto. Meet Kaze, he will be your brother from now on and the Root foundation, your home."

For the first time after writing 4 books, I have decided to go for NO HAREM!!!

I am going to try something new and the whole fan-fic is going to be in MC's POV. I know that I am bad at POV and that's why I would like to get some advices after you read a few chapters so that I can improve them in the future


Although I plan on making the MC go from weak to strong, I still don't know the power balance and that's what happened in the last fan-fics. I sometimes end up giving him some power that makes him way stronger than others.

I did say I wasn't going to write anymore, but I decided to write anyways. For those who already read something I wrote, would know that till date, I haven't completed even a single story. I am. not going to promise that I would finish this, but I will try to finish it.


I don't own the cover and got this from an episode. I also don't own anything other than my OC characters.

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SpoiledSecrets

Honestly, the idea is good but the execution is bad (like most other fanfics). Root ninjas have little to no emotions, yet every ninja in this story is expressing them? Every root ninja gets curse seals planted on them, yet the MC doesnt? MC shows talent but he doesn’t get mind controlled? The author seems to forget Root is an organization that trains suicidal murder machines.

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TruckkunJr

Interesting idea, although to me despite getting my attention, all thst matters is who the love interest is. Please no OC or sakura 🤞 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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AnotherAtlas

There are going to be some spoilers here so just warning in advance. First of all, he added romance and I promised a bad review if he did. Usually I avoid romance, so it just wasted time. This stuff also has cliches, despite having a somewhat decent idea. He leaves root extremely quick, so what's the point? Also, mc meets this dud just for him to die a few chapters later. Am I really supposed to care about this guy who was mentioned like 3 times in the novel? Well the mc does. It's not like he doesn't know what danzo is all about.

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Milk_Hunter

Thank you so much, for this wonderful piece of art! Really loving the story, I don't know the path this story will take but I'm very excited to find out!

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OmarKnowsDeath

not bad kid. not bad at all. a little op on the start because he is being trained by ambo . kakashi was only trained at the age of 12.[img=exp]

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Gabriel_Menard

Une très bonne histoire original. MC qui commence son histoire dans la Racine (root) est très original. L'auteur peut explorer des parties du monde de naruto rarement vu dans les fanfictions. Beaucoup de potentiel, hâte de voir la suite

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Black_Raven21

I have to say, I really love this story, it shows the realistic side of the shinobi world where nothing is sunshines and rainbows, and I love that you showed the monstrous growth of Hakuto properly, where he earned his strength, and not just bs his way to power, and now that he is in Kumogakure, not only is he safe from op villains, he can also train to his heart's content, excited to see him when he's older, hopefully he has a summoning and learned sage art by the time he's grown up, snake style or frog style, if a knuckle head like Naruto can do it in 1 week, I'm sure young Hakuto can do it as well, and training to evolve both byakugan and sharingan, I'm glad, because I haven't read a fic where the mc has both, can't wait to read more!!

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lycke
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

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hhhhz45
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no common sense to the tought process ....

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Human_Sinner

Started great but fell later on especially with the whole time skip, a lot. Lost interest because of the armor thingy. So you get 2 rating for picking my interest at the start but lost it on the way.

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Shreyansh_Jain_1027

Good concept but bad execution. Before the 8 years time skip is is pretty but after that it becomes bad like it sucks seriously there are soo many missing stuff I am out

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lycke
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others

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JohnSonic3

This story is wonderful! Really happy I managed to read it, also author, if you plan to update your story cover, might I suggest this wonderful image. (it ain't mine, just found it on google and thought it looked perfect for your story :D)

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CrowOfDeath

In my opinion it's pretty good so far and, I really hope the arthur continues the story................... I recommended reading this story.

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Gd_Sys

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