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I am not a big fan of the mc's forgiving character towards enemies, simply because they are female. I mean, the first example of this is Nyx. She probably killed or destroyed the lives of countless innocent Devils. And guess what? She got off scot-free the moment she was captured, even though she is an Evil God. As you can imagine, her brother, Erebus who was also an Evil God. Got atomized like a pest the moment the mc made contact with him.
Please tell me that Yuri is not here????? I hate Yuri!!!!!!! If Yuri is here, I won't read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this I always like scientists mc and this is one of the best god job. Ps I complain directly to the admins on discord and it seems they are doing something now
Greatly Enjoy your novels have also noticed that someone else has reuploaded this work under the name of "The Daily Life of the Inventor in Another World" and then advertising their Patreon.
hey man love the book! BTW someone is copying your book under the tile of daily life of an inventor In another world or something similar!
what an amazing time, I typically don't like crafting novels with in-depth reviews of the crafting but I truly enjoy this novel I can't wait to see what's in the future,so gold star my friend keep up the hard work much love
____________________________________This perfect work, magnum opus fanfiction for DxD, I loved this fanfiction, please more updates chapter!!! ____________________________________
dragon-san probably you not care, after all you not update here anymore, but someone steal you work, is called: DxD: The Daily Life of the Inventor in another world, he copy and past you whole history and split in several small chapter and ask for patreon.
Well, I won't say this story is bad by any means because it can definitely scratch its particular itch, but... --- Basically, the MC is a broken shell of a person. He's a knockoff Tony Stark but without the charisma. He has no moral hinderances and doesn't have much of a personality. All he does is make stuff and go about life like a robot. Even when he spends time with his girls, it still feels like he's a glorified s*xbot rather than someone with emotions and desires. --- This story also feels like it makes the MC look smart by dumbing down the world itself. Yes, it's DxD, but instead of the author making the world more interesting and full of depth, it is instead thrown in a ditch and stepped on before being called incompetent. The MC never has a meaningful struggle or difficulty that actually means something, and it isn't all that satisfying unless the only thing you care about is the tech he comes up with. --- In the end, this story is devoid of any wonder or a true feeling of fantasy... but it does scratch that itch.
Revelar spoiler
The biggest allure: Smart-MC. amazingly portrait of so. The setback is to survive 25+ chapters (like surviving the first 100 pages of harry potter). Another amazing point is how out-of-the-ff-world this ff is, just amazingly so. Plot-holes? Barely 1 [MC supposed to be a tech-geek, but for some reason develop weapons nonstop? It's like the background-personality went null + created sub-holes, like the weird 'I love ppl using my tech' versus refusing developing anything for others] Author worthy of an original book of his own (I'm scared to say it in fear you'll stop writing this ff:) but I do adore this high-quality ff, and can honestly see you re-write it into an original novel owned by you (just soften the boring start and plot-hole, like - create a low-key company that you own and develop from the shadows?). ty.
i havent read the novel yet but just because it has honkai impact in it and also cause i heard from someone before, that kiana kaslana (along with her herrcher self) is a confirmed love interest im gonna be leaving a 5 stars in the novel.
Honestly I love all of dragons books, he stays in his good spots of writing and is good at them
it was a great story overall, but it's just stepping beyond boundaries of some a human should have mass killing, experimenting on living and non living, etc. when theirs so many better options for a genius. and his personality is just not my cup of tea. that's all but it's a good story.
Honestly it started to bore me, the writing feels almost as annoying as if it were a Chinese fanfic. At first you don't take it seriously, but the amount of praise is excessive, Salomon's alchemical knowledge is not consistent with the DxD world and the disdain for sacred gear is annoying, most of the chapters are about the protagonist treating them like trash or inferior things. I don't like it, I hope you enjoy it.
It'd be funny if he comes to worm and basically take every power there since shards are basically crystalline supercomputers. It'd be funnier if Scion finds out that he already solved negentrophy with his perpetual energy.
It was great before he started getting too involved with other people and mortals
It is a good work, it has a fantastic beginning, but as you progress you realize how power affects the protagonist, to the point of becoming tedious and too arrogant (Like a wuxia-style young master, but without the dialogues), I will wait Let's see how it ends :v
Una historia muy buena y espero que la continúes, me gusta el rumbo de todo esto No hagas caso a las malas críticas, tu historia es genial y muy buena de leer sigue así
I'm glad the author is back, I was sure this story was abandoned, I'll have to read it again from the beginning, I love the premise of a genius MC and inventor.
I'm not a professional when it comes to writing but this story is really entertaining, enough to actually write a review. It's obviously not the best, but besides not being a fan of the protagonist personality I don't have any serious complaint. The personality is not much of a problem, just don't like it
Love this as it’s a (mostly) true neutral scientist that only cares for the many things he can learn.
The only thing I would say is that the author loves to collect maids whether they are Goddesses, Heroic Spirits , Dragons, or even Ship girls
One of the Godly fanfiction 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️😍☺️😍☺️☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️☺️😍☺️😍😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️☺️😍😍☺️😍☺️☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍😍☺️☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍😍☺️
One of the best fanfic I've read. Writing quality, world background was very detail, the flow and pace of the plot was almost perfect, the power system, the ideas, etc., was fascinating. Perhaps the only problem with this is character of MC itself.. well, its true that DXD is a harem story, so it was expected for MC to get a harem himself but still it ruined the story honestly... Some of his decision also felt hasty, and yes I understand that it was because he was so OP so really didn't care about what those faction would do, but honestly, it mess up the story development...well, don't get me wrong, its not that I don't like it, but I'm thinking that if you introduce more OP characters, people that can pose a challenge to MC, it would be more exciting. Oh, by the way, I also wanted to see the Infinite soldier in action.🤤🤤 I'm also looking forward for the MC to turn his country into -Neutral Zone where killing is forbidden inside, also, all kinds of supernatural races and beings can enter and exit at will, which will give the MC more research material. Also, creating a dimensions for his own used is also good. Some Pantheon can do it so I think it should be easy for him too.
me ta bueno es entretenido y todo la forma en que es el personaje la forma vaga de ser siempre buscando ganancias .
This is just one of the greatest stories I have read, it is absolutely going into my G.O.A.T reading list. Great character development, very long chapters, extremely OP mc, he is really smart, just everything I would want from a story, I highly recommend reading this.
I am not a big fan of the mc's forgiving character towards enemies, simply because they are female. I mean, the first example of this is Nyx. She probably killed or destroyed the lives of countless innocent Devils. And guess what? She got off scot-free the moment she was captured, even though she is an Evil God. As you can imagine, her brother, Erebus who was also an Evil God. Got atomized like a pest the moment the mc made contact with him.
Please tell me that Yuri is not here????? I hate Yuri!!!!!!! If Yuri is here, I won't read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this I always like scientists mc and this is one of the best god job. Ps I complain directly to the admins on discord and it seems they are doing something now
Greatly Enjoy your novels have also noticed that someone else has reuploaded this work under the name of "The Daily Life of the Inventor in Another World" and then advertising their Patreon.
hey man love the book! BTW someone is copying your book under the tile of daily life of an inventor In another world or something similar!
what an amazing time, I typically don't like crafting novels with in-depth reviews of the crafting but I truly enjoy this novel I can't wait to see what's in the future,so gold star my friend keep up the hard work much love
____________________________________This perfect work, magnum opus fanfiction for DxD, I loved this fanfiction, please more updates chapter!!! ____________________________________
dragon-san probably you not care, after all you not update here anymore, but someone steal you work, is called: DxD: The Daily Life of the Inventor in another world, he copy and past you whole history and split in several small chapter and ask for patreon.
Well, I won't say this story is bad by any means because it can definitely scratch its particular itch, but... --- Basically, the MC is a broken shell of a person. He's a knockoff Tony Stark but without the charisma. He has no moral hinderances and doesn't have much of a personality. All he does is make stuff and go about life like a robot. Even when he spends time with his girls, it still feels like he's a glorified s*xbot rather than someone with emotions and desires. --- This story also feels like it makes the MC look smart by dumbing down the world itself. Yes, it's DxD, but instead of the author making the world more interesting and full of depth, it is instead thrown in a ditch and stepped on before being called incompetent. The MC never has a meaningful struggle or difficulty that actually means something, and it isn't all that satisfying unless the only thing you care about is the tech he comes up with. --- In the end, this story is devoid of any wonder or a true feeling of fantasy... but it does scratch that itch.
Revelar spoiler The biggest allure: Smart-MC. amazingly portrait of so. The setback is to survive 25+ chapters (like surviving the first 100 pages of harry potter). Another amazing point is how out-of-the-ff-world this ff is, just amazingly so. Plot-holes? Barely 1 [MC supposed to be a tech-geek, but for some reason develop weapons nonstop? It's like the background-personality went null + created sub-holes, like the weird 'I love ppl using my tech' versus refusing developing anything for others] Author worthy of an original book of his own (I'm scared to say it in fear you'll stop writing this ff:) but I do adore this high-quality ff, and can honestly see you re-write it into an original novel owned by you (just soften the boring start and plot-hole, like - create a low-key company that you own and develop from the shadows?). ty.
i havent read the novel yet but just because it has honkai impact in it and also cause i heard from someone before, that kiana kaslana (along with her herrcher self) is a confirmed love interest im gonna be leaving a 5 stars in the novel.
Honestly I love all of dragons books, he stays in his good spots of writing and is good at them
it was a great story overall, but it's just stepping beyond boundaries of some a human should have mass killing, experimenting on living and non living, etc. when theirs so many better options for a genius. and his personality is just not my cup of tea. that's all but it's a good story.
Honestly it started to bore me, the writing feels almost as annoying as if it were a Chinese fanfic. At first you don't take it seriously, but the amount of praise is excessive, Salomon's alchemical knowledge is not consistent with the DxD world and the disdain for sacred gear is annoying, most of the chapters are about the protagonist treating them like trash or inferior things. I don't like it, I hope you enjoy it.
It'd be funny if he comes to worm and basically take every power there since shards are basically crystalline supercomputers. It'd be funnier if Scion finds out that he already solved negentrophy with his perpetual energy.
It was great before he started getting too involved with other people and mortals
It is a good work, it has a fantastic beginning, but as you progress you realize how power affects the protagonist, to the point of becoming tedious and too arrogant (Like a wuxia-style young master, but without the dialogues), I will wait Let's see how it ends :v
Una historia muy buena y espero que la continúes, me gusta el rumbo de todo esto No hagas caso a las malas críticas, tu historia es genial y muy buena de leer sigue así
I'm glad the author is back, I was sure this story was abandoned, I'll have to read it again from the beginning, I love the premise of a genius MC and inventor.
I'm not a professional when it comes to writing but this story is really entertaining, enough to actually write a review. It's obviously not the best, but besides not being a fan of the protagonist personality I don't have any serious complaint. The personality is not much of a problem, just don't like it
Love this as it’s a (mostly) true neutral scientist that only cares for the many things he can learn.
The only thing I would say is that the author loves to collect maids whether they are Goddesses, Heroic Spirits , Dragons, or even Ship girls
One of the Godly fanfiction 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️😍☺️😍☺️☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️☺️😍☺️😍😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️☺️😍😍☺️😍☺️☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍😍☺️☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍☺️😍😍☺️
One of the best fanfic I've read. Writing quality, world background was very detail, the flow and pace of the plot was almost perfect, the power system, the ideas, etc., was fascinating. Perhaps the only problem with this is character of MC itself.. well, its true that DXD is a harem story, so it was expected for MC to get a harem himself but still it ruined the story honestly... Some of his decision also felt hasty, and yes I understand that it was because he was so OP so really didn't care about what those faction would do, but honestly, it mess up the story development...well, don't get me wrong, its not that I don't like it, but I'm thinking that if you introduce more OP characters, people that can pose a challenge to MC, it would be more exciting. Oh, by the way, I also wanted to see the Infinite soldier in action.🤤🤤 I'm also looking forward for the MC to turn his country into -Neutral Zone where killing is forbidden inside, also, all kinds of supernatural races and beings can enter and exit at will, which will give the MC more research material. Also, creating a dimensions for his own used is also good. Some Pantheon can do it so I think it should be easy for him too.
me ta bueno es entretenido y todo la forma en que es el personaje la forma vaga de ser siempre buscando ganancias .
This is just one of the greatest stories I have read, it is absolutely going into my G.O.A.T reading list. Great character development, very long chapters, extremely OP mc, he is really smart, just everything I would want from a story, I highly recommend reading this.