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It would do alot better if it had an editor, unfortunately it's basically mtl quality.
author makes the MC a yes man,that blames others for being weak willed and trying help people.And tried to turn him into hero.IF reading this author you suck even more then the cultivation novel where MC can't resist talking about rightness are post to be indifferent then have to save a lady or repay debt.I really hate you authors
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One chapter is enough to see that this novel is garbage stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid
The main character is a crybaby, he can't solve his problems by himself. He needs the help of other people to solve his problems...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I Love when Sakatomo Decided to kill everyone, this story is quite amazing for me. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] Keep it up,
Hahaha..... it's great that Aleister died at the hands of Arzlan, this story is quite good. I will support, continue to work with author so that I am more enthusiastic to reading.
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How will this story end..... hmmm I'm really curious about what will happened, It might get even more interesting at the end of this story..
I'm curious about the female figure at the beginning of the story who is said to be a mysterious figure who invites Sakamoto, what she said sounded very suspicious
Quite interesting, but the depiction of the characters in my opinion is quite lacking. Stay positive...................................................................
It's really interesting, it's a good work, author's continued your work............................................... ...............................................
It's likely that the Demon Lord Later will use a method that is quite cunning to win the battle. But who knows, I'm waiting for the next sequel.
Very Interesting, this story makes readers can imagine quite well. Continue your work, I'll still be waiting for the continuation of this story. Characters inside this story are quite strong
Very Extraordinary, Sakamoto's life is really colored by suffering. The way the author designs the characters is amazing. Keep writing, fire...
The story is good, the depiction of the characters is also unique. This story must continue. Don't give up, keep working until the story gets more interesting.
I like this story, I hope the author will continue to be enthusiastic in his work. Sakamoto has quite an image of my life in the past and is very inspiring ...
I think this book has great potential and the story seems great but the grammar can really use some work as it makes the book hard to read.
It would do alot better if it had an editor, unfortunately it's basically mtl quality.
author makes the MC a yes man,that blames others for being weak willed and trying help people.And tried to turn him into hero.IF reading this author you suck even more then the cultivation novel where MC can't resist talking about rightness are post to be indifferent then have to save a lady or repay debt.I really hate you authors
Revelar spoiler One chapter is enough to see that this novel is garbage stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid
The main character is a crybaby, he can't solve his problems by himself. He needs the help of other people to solve his problems...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I Love when Sakatomo Decided to kill everyone, this story is quite amazing for me. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] Keep it up,
Hahaha..... it's great that Aleister died at the hands of Arzlan, this story is quite good. I will support, continue to work with author so that I am more enthusiastic to reading.
Revelar spoiler How will this story end..... hmmm I'm really curious about what will happened, It might get even more interesting at the end of this story..
I'm curious about the female figure at the beginning of the story who is said to be a mysterious figure who invites Sakamoto, what she said sounded very suspicious
Quite interesting, but the depiction of the characters in my opinion is quite lacking. Stay positive...................................................................
It's really interesting, it's a good work, author's continued your work............................................... ...............................................
It's likely that the Demon Lord Later will use a method that is quite cunning to win the battle. But who knows, I'm waiting for the next sequel.
Very Interesting, this story makes readers can imagine quite well. Continue your work, I'll still be waiting for the continuation of this story. Characters inside this story are quite strong
Very Extraordinary, Sakamoto's life is really colored by suffering. The way the author designs the characters is amazing. Keep writing, fire...
The story is good, the depiction of the characters is also unique. This story must continue. Don't give up, keep working until the story gets more interesting.
I like this story, I hope the author will continue to be enthusiastic in his work. Sakamoto has quite an image of my life in the past and is very inspiring ...
I think this book has great potential and the story seems great but the grammar can really use some work as it makes the book hard to read.