Reviews of Permanent Martial Arts by Shadow on the Moon - Webnovel

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Justine_Embiado

Wowww so mind blowing indeed.... i never expect That the story was so full of twist of fate. Thank you author for this very wonderful book.this kind of book are truly recommended to everyone.. have a nice reading

5mth
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Layla_Lapulapu

One of the "book to read" Just got confused by the ending🥴

6mth
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Amirido
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I have only read about 1000 cha but I really felt the need to write a review about this novel. Let me start with the world building, this is one of the best part about this novel although it is kinda cliche but it's actually great.(I don't wanna spoil too much so I won't give any details about the world) Now coming to Characters, they are bland and you get introduced to new characters really frequently and every character is kinda the same only. Our MC is considerate towards his family and friends but is really ruthless against his enemies. Till now the MC has cultivated really fast, he has reached cultivation realms in a few hundred years that took ordinary cultivators 100,000 years or more(in some cases millions of year).The plot armour is so ridiculous you as a living being will feel jealous, MC has not faced any harships at all but still author tries to make it look as the MC has suffered a lot. Although this novel has many flaws, its still enjoyable to people who have just started their novel reading journey or someone who likes to read Novels where MC doesn't face any hardship. This is my opinion regarding the novel, although the characters and the speed with which Lin Feng(MC) cultivates annoys me but I still wanna complete this novel because it's overall an good novel with nice world building

6mth
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ChaosD

Is there anyone who can tell me bout 161 chapter? i thought he could condensed 40 to 50 astral power in a day? (in hotel with dragon rider) But now author is telling 20 power a day? how?

7mth
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Mike_Rousi

I like it different than most cultivation novels with a different cultivation system and it has problably one of the highest scaling if not the highest

8mth
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pandu_nani

dear author...i still don't understand the difference between ultimate voidwalker and advance void walker and peak void walker...care to enlighten me ?

9mth
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RedKaizer

it is a very good story...I like it at the beginning and middle part of the story....but at the end...it just start to drag..

10mth
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Immortal_Cat_Sage

It's so very dumb. It's at the peak of dumbness. Nothing makes sense in this novel. Be it development, story line or even how the MC thinks if he thinks that it. Only the plot armour and plot line carries him.

1yr
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DaoistLhGEq5

It is not bad novel, but I have dejavu of the main plot. I think it has the same base plot as Swallowed Star - and SS is the better novel in all aspects - at least as far as I read this one (250ch). I will give it few more chapters, is not bad. but not something that I would miss much.

1yr
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systemwriterK

it's really good but why the end is so weird why stop the book see you

1yr
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GamerFTW

the is a copy If i remember correctly of Permanent martial arts

1yr
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Jack_n_off

I like the concept like the ability,world background but,too many tropes,it's making me cringe just reading it hope it improves in further chapters

1yr
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Tiff_Lin

So far so good, I am loving this novel. Except that in my point of view, the mc is a bit arrogant but that's all, definitely a must read.

1yr
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Chahed_Madridistas

A real trash..to avoid at all cost..Dumb beta Mc..with a stupid power system..

1yr
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Divine_rod

Fking trash garbage novel. Now delete this comment too author

1yr
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Goose_TO

679 chapters in: everything is good. Very structured, well written, good pace, stable character growth. Conclusion: so far it is worth it to spend your coins and invest your time on this novel. I always have to stop myself from getting even the extra five chapters because I always want to know what happens next.

1yr
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SenpaiKun121

I'm up to date ch 661 the novel is good but there is just so much filler and stuff that adds nothing to the story and it's generic powerful MC waits till the last second to save the day or watches till the last second basically making entire multiple chapters filler

1yr
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Judeecho

What is the point of having extraordinaryly large bodies i lost interest immediately

1yr
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Zackking

read up to date and the only problem I had with this is his fusion is gone after he becom sage and it become different story >_>

2yr
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Poisoncheaker

good story,I read it MTL.But after ch 630 he forget about his wife and family.As the story progresses there is not even mention of his family , even he comes to home,he just wants to seclusion than again new adventure .

2yr
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Shadowles_Immortal

This feels like swallow star same start of having a big bad about to kill earth and earth being closed off same cultivation style and also leaving earth and space cultivation being better then earths also promising the ai something also promising revenge for his “master” so many familiar stuff.

2yr
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Evadz
LV 14 Badge

:the only thing i hate about it is that concept that he needs to become super duper gigantic to become strong, like all the super powerful people in this novel like galactic organism or what ever the author calls it has a body so big it sounds stupid. literally bigger is better concept. if he author could have made a different kind of concept for the combat body and not just make it increase in,size to become stronger then the novel could have been so,good... anyway, i am dropping this coz i think its already impossible for author to change the cultivation method after making it like this

2yr
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ShamelessGengar

I am the bone of my sword Exp is my body and Exp is my blood I have created over a thousand Exp Unknown to Death, Nor known to Life. Have withstood pain to create many Exp Yet, those hands will never hold Exp So as I pray, Unlimited EXP Works.

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2yr
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timeawayfromstress

the author does not even look at the comments of the chapters. people criticize him too much, but the author does not even respond, the novel is literally mc without a brain.

2yr
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JPGodZ
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2yr
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Grimm_Reap3r

Love this hidden gem. Really good story line stays accurate to details mentioned previously. good grammar have had no problems trying to understand what the author is trying to convey. No boring unnecessary filler almost everything mentioned is important in one way or another. Keeps pulling me back in to read more and more. Considering I read this at work and only had 3 hours the last 2 days and caught up completely and have been waiting for more chapters tells you this is a great novel. Keep up the good work. :)

2yr
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Cemoi_3131

cemoi thinks this is an okay novel cemoi ratings: story Development: 4 good writing quality: 4 average character design: 3 average updating stability: 4 good world background: 3 average total rating: 3.6 pretty okay novel not bad,not good just average.

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2yr
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KaidoDLuffy

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2yr
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excalipr

It started with the calling MC trash nonsensical face slapping within the first few chapters. I’m not optimistic that it’ll get better. I’m pretty sure there’s better cultivation stories with genes as a system.

2yr
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BlurryBee

Its actually quite decent read a few of the raw chps nothing too new but id say its good if u dont have original novels to read [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

2yr
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Justine_Embiado

Wowww so mind blowing indeed.... i never expect That the story was so full of twist of fate. Thank you author for this very wonderful book.this kind of book are truly recommended to everyone.. have a nice reading

5mth
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Layla_Lapulapu

One of the "book to read" Just got confused by the ending🥴

6mth
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Amirido
LV 10 Badge

I have only read about 1000 cha but I really felt the need to write a review about this novel. Let me start with the world building, this is one of the best part about this novel although it is kinda cliche but it's actually great.(I don't wanna spoil too much so I won't give any details about the world) Now coming to Characters, they are bland and you get introduced to new characters really frequently and every character is kinda the same only. Our MC is considerate towards his family and friends but is really ruthless against his enemies. Till now the MC has cultivated really fast, he has reached cultivation realms in a few hundred years that took ordinary cultivators 100,000 years or more(in some cases millions of year).The plot armour is so ridiculous you as a living being will feel jealous, MC has not faced any harships at all but still author tries to make it look as the MC has suffered a lot. Although this novel has many flaws, its still enjoyable to people who have just started their novel reading journey or someone who likes to read Novels where MC doesn't face any hardship. This is my opinion regarding the novel, although the characters and the speed with which Lin Feng(MC) cultivates annoys me but I still wanna complete this novel because it's overall an good novel with nice world building

6mth
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ChaosD

Is there anyone who can tell me bout 161 chapter? i thought he could condensed 40 to 50 astral power in a day? (in hotel with dragon rider) But now author is telling 20 power a day? how?

7mth
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Mike_Rousi

I like it different than most cultivation novels with a different cultivation system and it has problably one of the highest scaling if not the highest

8mth
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pandu_nani

dear author...i still don't understand the difference between ultimate voidwalker and advance void walker and peak void walker...care to enlighten me ?

9mth
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RedKaizer

it is a very good story...I like it at the beginning and middle part of the story....but at the end...it just start to drag..

10mth
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Immortal_Cat_Sage

It's so very dumb. It's at the peak of dumbness. Nothing makes sense in this novel. Be it development, story line or even how the MC thinks if he thinks that it. Only the plot armour and plot line carries him.

1yr
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DaoistLhGEq5

It is not bad novel, but I have dejavu of the main plot. I think it has the same base plot as Swallowed Star - and SS is the better novel in all aspects - at least as far as I read this one (250ch). I will give it few more chapters, is not bad. but not something that I would miss much.

1yr
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systemwriterK

it's really good but why the end is so weird why stop the book see you

1yr
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GamerFTW

the is a copy If i remember correctly of Permanent martial arts

1yr
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Jack_n_off

I like the concept like the ability,world background but,too many tropes,it's making me cringe just reading it hope it improves in further chapters

1yr
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Tiff_Lin

So far so good, I am loving this novel. Except that in my point of view, the mc is a bit arrogant but that's all, definitely a must read.

1yr
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Chahed_Madridistas

A real trash..to avoid at all cost..Dumb beta Mc..with a stupid power system..

1yr
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Divine_rod

Fking trash garbage novel. Now delete this comment too author

1yr
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Goose_TO

679 chapters in: everything is good. Very structured, well written, good pace, stable character growth. Conclusion: so far it is worth it to spend your coins and invest your time on this novel. I always have to stop myself from getting even the extra five chapters because I always want to know what happens next.

1yr
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SenpaiKun121

I'm up to date ch 661 the novel is good but there is just so much filler and stuff that adds nothing to the story and it's generic powerful MC waits till the last second to save the day or watches till the last second basically making entire multiple chapters filler

1yr
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Judeecho

What is the point of having extraordinaryly large bodies i lost interest immediately

1yr
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Zackking

read up to date and the only problem I had with this is his fusion is gone after he becom sage and it become different story >_>

2yr
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Poisoncheaker

good story,I read it MTL.But after ch 630 he forget about his wife and family.As the story progresses there is not even mention of his family , even he comes to home,he just wants to seclusion than again new adventure .

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Shadowles_Immortal

This feels like swallow star same start of having a big bad about to kill earth and earth being closed off same cultivation style and also leaving earth and space cultivation being better then earths also promising the ai something also promising revenge for his “master” so many familiar stuff.

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Evadz
LV 14 Badge

:the only thing i hate about it is that concept that he needs to become super duper gigantic to become strong, like all the super powerful people in this novel like galactic organism or what ever the author calls it has a body so big it sounds stupid. literally bigger is better concept. if he author could have made a different kind of concept for the combat body and not just make it increase in,size to become stronger then the novel could have been so,good... anyway, i am dropping this coz i think its already impossible for author to change the cultivation method after making it like this

2yr
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ShamelessGengar

I am the bone of my sword Exp is my body and Exp is my blood I have created over a thousand Exp Unknown to Death, Nor known to Life. Have withstood pain to create many Exp Yet, those hands will never hold Exp So as I pray, Unlimited EXP Works.

img
2yr
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timeawayfromstress

the author does not even look at the comments of the chapters. people criticize him too much, but the author does not even respond, the novel is literally mc without a brain.

2yr
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JPGodZ
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2yr
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Grimm_Reap3r

Love this hidden gem. Really good story line stays accurate to details mentioned previously. good grammar have had no problems trying to understand what the author is trying to convey. No boring unnecessary filler almost everything mentioned is important in one way or another. Keeps pulling me back in to read more and more. Considering I read this at work and only had 3 hours the last 2 days and caught up completely and have been waiting for more chapters tells you this is a great novel. Keep up the good work. :)

2yr
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Cemoi_3131

cemoi thinks this is an okay novel cemoi ratings: story Development: 4 good writing quality: 4 average character design: 3 average updating stability: 4 good world background: 3 average total rating: 3.6 pretty okay novel not bad,not good just average.

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KaidoDLuffy

typical chinese🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱

2yr
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excalipr

It started with the calling MC trash nonsensical face slapping within the first few chapters. I’m not optimistic that it’ll get better. I’m pretty sure there’s better cultivation stories with genes as a system.

2yr
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BlurryBee

Its actually quite decent read a few of the raw chps nothing too new but id say its good if u dont have original novels to read [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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