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It's the best Hollywood novel i have read. I laughed a lot with certain situations and comments. The main character is fun, but only inside his mind, and this is where i find my problem. The main character is indifferent to all human interaction. There was a little character development, but it was rolled back with the apperance of a second friend. He has twoo 11 year old girls with very warped view of reality, and abussive mothers, with him most of the time. Talking to the little by little and helping them find more balanced peronalities could be a great conduit to help him open up to the people close to him. I know the author doesn't like dialogs much, but this kind of thing can be narrrated in aa single paragraph without wasting much time. Because the more the story advanced and people get close to him and he remains indifferent and quiet, the more the whole thing just warps into something surreal and annoying. And of the closest people to him has shown him that she was basically r#ped when she was 10 years old. The situation that lead her there remains, including her mentality. But still he says nothing and does nothing. The three girls arounf him became accesories that he just ignores. Incliding the secretary, He took a great actress out of he path, but she's just there to deliver papers. Also the author was two conflicted desires that led to a terrible situation, He wants to take time with the novel and detail the projects over the years, no problem with that the narration is fun. But he also wants the Mc to have beautiful girls around and have sexy times. That leaves us in the very awkward situation of reading about 12 year olds sexual experiences. And even worse, the guy is mentally 50. And as long as he's not willing to talk to people, or care enough to help them. He has no business having a girlfriend, not even friends.
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Everything was great except the pace, 400+ chapters in and the mc was still only 12 year old…….
story of creed on road to become pirate king . interesting story from 1st chapter to up-to-date chapters . pacing and writing quality is also good which is an bonus . would definitely recommend for interested .as per author request have to keep the trend of 1 star.....⭐
I super love the novel. Good Grammar, good pacing above all, love the Creeds. Thanks Author 😹😹.P.S. Hoping for more chapters meow!
I really want to give this 5 stars so more people can read this, and write more stories like this, but I've gotta do this for the author who's given us a great story.
In honour of the authors wishes i give one star, but know this this story deserves recognition from not only its great exposition but the humbleness of its author to know what he writes may not be up to his standard tommorow and lets us know what possibilities lie ahead, to all fellow readers know THIS IS AWESOME
1/1, honestly I'm thankful for that random guy in a comment section for mentioning this 1/1 work
best realistic novel and it is great read. This one Does take you to another world when reading it. Definitely recommend it.
A little crazy that some joker hasn’t come in here and put up a five star review.
Me gustó mucho la historia. 😍😍😃😍😍👍😍😍👍😍😍👍😍😍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩👍👍👍👍👍🤩🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩🤩👍👍👍👍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Oh i didn't know this was a child protagonist novel sad that it is. Aldo the way write is weird author it feels like a chinese person wrote the story.
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This is very good, the story is interesting, the only flaw of this novel is how slow it is since I honestly don't want to read a child for more than 400 chapters.
If I wasn't deliberately looking for entertainment-themed books, I would never have found this book, it's like finding a treasure. -----------------
This contains my long rant and explanation as to why I ask for one star reviews and hope to keep my overall rate to '1' as I can. The main reason for '1' is the fact that it is the lowest rating and I honestly don't think that my work should amount to anything more. The trashiest '1' is to not set my self up for disappointment and write as I see fit. I don't have to trouble myself with pleasing 5-star reviewers or be disturbed by the annoying fluctuations of reviews that only serve to leave authors second guessing. I also don't have to pressure myself with the need to stay up a certain high standards. Low standards are all I need to keep going with my writing hobby. So, I ask everyone who want to leave reviews to not be funny men. Any reviews with a rating above '1' shall be deleted. If you want to leave a decent review, just write it through proper words, criticism, and praise. Honestly, this sites review system is just a mess and this '1' standard is my way of bracing myself through it. Hope you all understand and leave only leave 1 star reviews if you ever thought of leaving my story a review.
It's the best Hollywood novel i have read. I laughed a lot with certain situations and comments. The main character is fun, but only inside his mind, and this is where i find my problem. The main character is indifferent to all human interaction. There was a little character development, but it was rolled back with the apperance of a second friend. He has twoo 11 year old girls with very warped view of reality, and abussive mothers, with him most of the time. Talking to the little by little and helping them find more balanced peronalities could be a great conduit to help him open up to the people close to him. I know the author doesn't like dialogs much, but this kind of thing can be narrrated in aa single paragraph without wasting much time. Because the more the story advanced and people get close to him and he remains indifferent and quiet, the more the whole thing just warps into something surreal and annoying. And of the closest people to him has shown him that she was basically r#ped when she was 10 years old. The situation that lead her there remains, including her mentality. But still he says nothing and does nothing. The three girls arounf him became accesories that he just ignores. Incliding the secretary, He took a great actress out of he path, but she's just there to deliver papers. Also the author was two conflicted desires that led to a terrible situation, He wants to take time with the novel and detail the projects over the years, no problem with that the narration is fun. But he also wants the Mc to have beautiful girls around and have sexy times. That leaves us in the very awkward situation of reading about 12 year olds sexual experiences. And even worse, the guy is mentally 50. And as long as he's not willing to talk to people, or care enough to help them. He has no business having a girlfriend, not even friends.
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Awesome work 👌 ..............................................................................................................................
Everything was great except the pace, 400+ chapters in and the mc was still only 12 year old…….
story of creed on road to become pirate king . interesting story from 1st chapter to up-to-date chapters . pacing and writing quality is also good which is an bonus . would definitely recommend for interested .as per author request have to keep the trend of 1 star.....⭐
I super love the novel. Good Grammar, good pacing above all, love the Creeds. Thanks Author 😹😹.P.S. Hoping for more chapters meow!
I really want to give this 5 stars so more people can read this, and write more stories like this, but I've gotta do this for the author who's given us a great story.
In honour of the authors wishes i give one star, but know this this story deserves recognition from not only its great exposition but the humbleness of its author to know what he writes may not be up to his standard tommorow and lets us know what possibilities lie ahead, to all fellow readers know THIS IS AWESOME
1/1, honestly I'm thankful for that random guy in a comment section for mentioning this 1/1 work
best realistic novel and it is great read. This one Does take you to another world when reading it. Definitely recommend it.
A little crazy that some joker hasn’t come in here and put up a five star review.
Me gustó mucho la historia. 😍😍😃😍😍👍😍😍👍😍😍👍😍😍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩👍👍👍👍👍🤩🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩🤩👍👍👍👍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Oh i didn't know this was a child protagonist novel sad that it is. Aldo the way write is weird author it feels like a chinese person wrote the story.
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This is very good, the story is interesting, the only flaw of this novel is how slow it is since I honestly don't want to read a child for more than 400 chapters.
If I wasn't deliberately looking for entertainment-themed books, I would never have found this book, it's like finding a treasure. -----------------
This contains my long rant and explanation as to why I ask for one star reviews and hope to keep my overall rate to '1' as I can. The main reason for '1' is the fact that it is the lowest rating and I honestly don't think that my work should amount to anything more. The trashiest '1' is to not set my self up for disappointment and write as I see fit. I don't have to trouble myself with pleasing 5-star reviewers or be disturbed by the annoying fluctuations of reviews that only serve to leave authors second guessing. I also don't have to pressure myself with the need to stay up a certain high standards. Low standards are all I need to keep going with my writing hobby. So, I ask everyone who want to leave reviews to not be funny men. Any reviews with a rating above '1' shall be deleted. If you want to leave a decent review, just write it through proper words, criticism, and praise. Honestly, this sites review system is just a mess and this '1' standard is my way of bracing myself through it. Hope you all understand and leave only leave 1 star reviews if you ever thought of leaving my story a review.