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A good solid novel with a few issues here and there easily deserving 4.5 rating the reason I am giving such a low rating though is this is easily in my opinion one of the authors best novels yet like all the rest author drops without warning even when promising he won’t drop them
Disappointing, I loved Jeanne as a character from Fate and I believed you were going to pair her with Kufa when not only did you introduced her but whe Lancelot said he loves her as a sister but raised my hopes for nothing when I skipped and have her paired with him. Really, what’s the poin of introducing Jramen image from fate and causing greater dissatisfaction, might as well just have Jeanne be the dxd version and now that I’ done ranting, goodbye sucker and you need to improve your vocab a bit.
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Yes at start its good but later at the story its becoming annoying why tell us about the romance of others just whyyyyyy. We don't want to know about others lucky encounter we want our mc not them its the mc story
Very good story but when will you update again..............................................................................................
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at first very bad in character development, then it gets worse when the woman doesn't want to be a vampire, but instead becomes a fallen angel who is transformed by azasel, which means all women are slaves of azasel, she can use mc and now mc has no equal advantage once, uh, which I think is a woman's betrayal, meh is very stupid.
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With all due respect this is very pathetic, the MC is not dominated at all as has been said, the MC is a hypocrite who despite saying he "doesn't hate" Rias is belittling her and also saying that she is a bad leader since he no, it's also no big deal to be just a generic mama's boy without an ounce of authenticity. There's also no feeling in the characters, it's like they're just a bunch of alienated people walking around with no desires or goals.
One of the best DxD fanfics you can find in this cursed site hhhh Seriously, its well written, a good plot, and good PLOT hehehe good job author, you did a good job
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The novel is nice and I like it currently although sometimes I find the mc a little irrtiating but that's just my views and it is not necessary for you to share shame views as me and I hope you continue it in future and do not drop it halfway .
me gusto bastante me preguntaba porque no había visto este fanfic antes pero luego me di cuenta de que recién lo subió hace 6 días esto no tiene nada que ver con la reseña mi pregunta es saben cómo buscar fanfics de dxd no encuentro pocos de los buenos
Haven't read this yet but immensely enjoyed your hxh fanfics. BEFORE I read I must know if he is going to be put in a peerage, which I genuinely hope he does NOT. Cheer!
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Grammar is solid. Plot is good. Reading the authors note hoping for a manipulative mc, didn’t get that at all, I have not seen one person being manipulated so far, another point in authors note is that he would be ‘overpowered’ in hitting most people with one hit before down. Complete lies not one person has been beat down. He is also, you could say ‘tamed’ by her, even I. The story it says. ‘She has us whipped’. Not the good story I was hoping for, just not for me.
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Interesting fanfic, I’ve enjoyed reading it so far. The grammar is solid and the author seems to be updating this regularly. It feels like the fanfic is still in the setting building phase, and doesn’t yet have any main quest/goal other than getting allies. But there isn’t even 20 chapters yet, so there is still plenty of room to build the plot. I’ve got high hopes, and I’m looking forward to seeing where the author will go with this.
I went into this fanfic expecting something good from what i read in the synopsis.. I was wrong.. The story is dull and too serious for an ecchi/comedy world.. the character interactions are robotic at times and it feels like there is no life within the characters; like they're puppets, just going through the motions, and not interesting at all.. The so-called comedy within the story is so dry, you'd think you are a parched man dying from dehydration in the middle of a desert, so the humour is basically non-existent.. I mean, there is, it is just that, it isn't funny at all.. Idk, I gave this a chance, but it didn't meet my tastes so I guess I'll pass future chapters.. anyway this was my opinion/review on this ff.. WQ - 2/5 SOU - 5/5 SD - 1/5 CD - 1/5 WB - 3/5 Overall - 2.4/5
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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A good solid novel with a few issues here and there easily deserving 4.5 rating the reason I am giving such a low rating though is this is easily in my opinion one of the authors best novels yet like all the rest author drops without warning even when promising he won’t drop them
Disappointing, I loved Jeanne as a character from Fate and I believed you were going to pair her with Kufa when not only did you introduced her but whe Lancelot said he loves her as a sister but raised my hopes for nothing when I skipped and have her paired with him. Really, what’s the poin of introducing Jramen image from fate and causing greater dissatisfaction, might as well just have Jeanne be the dxd version and now that I’ done ranting, goodbye sucker and you need to improve your vocab a bit.
Revelar spoiler Yes at start its good but later at the story its becoming annoying why tell us about the romance of others just whyyyyyy. We don't want to know about others lucky encounter we want our mc not them its the mc story
Very good story but when will you update again..............................................................................................
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at first very bad in character development, then it gets worse when the woman doesn't want to be a vampire, but instead becomes a fallen angel who is transformed by azasel, which means all women are slaves of azasel, she can use mc and now mc has no equal advantage once, uh, which I think is a woman's betrayal, meh is very stupid.
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With all due respect this is very pathetic, the MC is not dominated at all as has been said, the MC is a hypocrite who despite saying he "doesn't hate" Rias is belittling her and also saying that she is a bad leader since he no, it's also no big deal to be just a generic mama's boy without an ounce of authenticity. There's also no feeling in the characters, it's like they're just a bunch of alienated people walking around with no desires or goals.
One of the best DxD fanfics you can find in this cursed site hhhh Seriously, its well written, a good plot, and good PLOT hehehe good job author, you did a good job
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The novel is nice and I like it currently although sometimes I find the mc a little irrtiating but that's just my views and it is not necessary for you to share shame views as me and I hope you continue it in future and do not drop it halfway .
me gusto bastante me preguntaba porque no había visto este fanfic antes pero luego me di cuenta de que recién lo subió hace 6 días esto no tiene nada que ver con la reseña mi pregunta es saben cómo buscar fanfics de dxd no encuentro pocos de los buenos
Haven't read this yet but immensely enjoyed your hxh fanfics. BEFORE I read I must know if he is going to be put in a peerage, which I genuinely hope he does NOT. Cheer!
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Grammar is solid. Plot is good. Reading the authors note hoping for a manipulative mc, didn’t get that at all, I have not seen one person being manipulated so far, another point in authors note is that he would be ‘overpowered’ in hitting most people with one hit before down. Complete lies not one person has been beat down. He is also, you could say ‘tamed’ by her, even I. The story it says. ‘She has us whipped’. Not the good story I was hoping for, just not for me.
Great fanfiction with some crossover ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Interesting fanfic, I’ve enjoyed reading it so far. The grammar is solid and the author seems to be updating this regularly. It feels like the fanfic is still in the setting building phase, and doesn’t yet have any main quest/goal other than getting allies. But there isn’t even 20 chapters yet, so there is still plenty of room to build the plot. I’ve got high hopes, and I’m looking forward to seeing where the author will go with this.
I went into this fanfic expecting something good from what i read in the synopsis.. I was wrong.. The story is dull and too serious for an ecchi/comedy world.. the character interactions are robotic at times and it feels like there is no life within the characters; like they're puppets, just going through the motions, and not interesting at all.. The so-called comedy within the story is so dry, you'd think you are a parched man dying from dehydration in the middle of a desert, so the humour is basically non-existent.. I mean, there is, it is just that, it isn't funny at all.. Idk, I gave this a chance, but it didn't meet my tastes so I guess I'll pass future chapters.. anyway this was my opinion/review on this ff.. WQ - 2/5 SOU - 5/5 SD - 1/5 CD - 1/5 WB - 3/5 Overall - 2.4/5
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.