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its good however it would be better if hashirama,madara and sealed him and later after 60 years he would break the seal and he would be legend like hashirama,madara however shun bigger legend that defeated Hashirama,Madara,Tobirama,Senju Clan Alone
Didn't read... I just hate ching chongs.....................................................................................................
Boring and many errors in the plot... It shows that the author does not reread and has a bad memory... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"...
All 5 ⭐ Character Design 1 ⭐ because the author just threw the previous personalities of the character out of the window and just came up with random personalities e.g Madara.
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Congratulations to the author, with this great success, a real villain, look at the amount of haters and haters of your fictional novel, don't care about them. More success, and make your novels more evil and unfair
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This, is exactly why I don't read Chinese novels...unless they are written by an expectionally gifted author like Gu Zhen Ren. Racism and sexism is something common to see in Chinese novels, whether that be due to their upbringing or traditions I am not aware of or desire to know of.
A real villain, I hope you will grow a villain like him in the world of doulou dalu because this world is full of events and possibilities with an evil character that will transcend the origin, good luck, cruel evil always reaps huge achievements in the end so go ahead and unleash your imagination
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Everything was just off. I expected a decent MC, but I got utter trash. There was a hole 180 flip in ideology and he I too reliable on the system.
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The character design is absolutely awful but other than that it's a great story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Its good but i think it would be more interesting of there were more slice of life but amezing stilll lol 🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡
so good continue!🧡💚 well it's 4.6 because of the updates stability everything else is perfect❤❤ so good continue!🧡💚 well it's 4.6 because of the updates stability everything else is perfect❤❤ so good continue!🧡💚 well it's 4.6 because of the updates stability everything else is perfect❤❤
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if I had to describe this story in one word then it would be CRINGE. the mc is a second rate madara wanna be to the point that Tobi would be better in acting as madara. I don't know how the author did it but he some how make the already existing character's design awful. like bru madara is the living incarnation of pride how in the world would he even say 'is that the battle of gods?" when they are only using fire style and water style jutsu? and Mito loves shun? are you for real? bru they have not even met yet. I suggest you rewatch naruto again heck you should watch boruto while your at it coz you badly need some research man.
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its good however it would be better if hashirama,madara and sealed him and later after 60 years he would break the seal and he would be legend like hashirama,madara however shun bigger legend that defeated Hashirama,Madara,Tobirama,Senju Clan Alone
Didn't read... I just hate ching chongs.....................................................................................................
Boring and many errors in the plot... It shows that the author does not reread and has a bad memory... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"... "Reverend Insanity"...
All 5 ⭐ Character Design 1 ⭐ because the author just threw the previous personalities of the character out of the window and just came up with random personalities e.g Madara.
Revelar spoiler Give me more. I love this fanfic!☆☆☆☆❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Congratulations to the author, with this great success, a real villain, look at the amount of haters and haters of your fictional novel, don't care about them. More success, and make your novels more evil and unfair
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This, is exactly why I don't read Chinese novels...unless they are written by an expectionally gifted author like Gu Zhen Ren. Racism and sexism is something common to see in Chinese novels, whether that be due to their upbringing or traditions I am not aware of or desire to know of.
A real villain, I hope you will grow a villain like him in the world of doulou dalu because this world is full of events and possibilities with an evil character that will transcend the origin, good luck, cruel evil always reaps huge achievements in the end so go ahead and unleash your imagination
♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ ♥️♥️♥️♥️ ♥️♥️♥️ ♥️♥️ ♥️
Everything was just off. I expected a decent MC, but I got utter trash. There was a hole 180 flip in ideology and he I too reliable on the system.
More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
The character design is absolutely awful but other than that it's a great story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Its good but i think it would be more interesting of there were more slice of life but amezing stilll lol 🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡
so good continue!🧡💚 well it's 4.6 because of the updates stability everything else is perfect❤❤ so good continue!🧡💚 well it's 4.6 because of the updates stability everything else is perfect❤❤ so good continue!🧡💚 well it's 4.6 because of the updates stability everything else is perfect❤❤
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if I had to describe this story in one word then it would be CRINGE. the mc is a second rate madara wanna be to the point that Tobi would be better in acting as madara. I don't know how the author did it but he some how make the already existing character's design awful. like bru madara is the living incarnation of pride how in the world would he even say 'is that the battle of gods?" when they are only using fire style and water style jutsu? and Mito loves shun? are you for real? bru they have not even met yet. I suggest you rewatch naruto again heck you should watch boruto while your at it coz you badly need some research man.
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The story line is too fast . The character is also not to my liking.