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a pretty good translation and a good concept buuut it makes me feel like i want to die,with the girls always surrounding him,talking about how strong he is and yada yada yada
Yes and thats about it A nice waste of time tbh. For starters, it actually had a nice development but him becoming too strong too quickly without any real danger to his life becomes boring. The second ability is far too op and it doesn't even come with any consequences.
The protagonist is the most lolicon and pedophile there is, if this is what the translation is like, I can't imagine what the original must be like. These Chinese virgins and their frustrated sexual fantasies
really good story, for both the naruto and the one piece world, the spelling could be better, but its not a real problem just some minor spelling mistakes
bruh left naruto world without leaving a single children or confirm his relationship with any of the girls at all...
Honestly this is pretty good. There are a few errors with he/ she pronouns but it's more than readable in it's current state. it's definitely an op power creep story but honestly I didn't mind that. Solid read 8/10
From the Naruto Arc, to the One Piece Arc and even the halfway through the One Punch Man Arc, I enjoyed reading everything. However...the author might be a 'pervert' in a sense...
why did he have to go to one piece.This is what I hat about fanfics.The mc will just travel from one world to another.
Not bad, it wasn't slowphased as I expected but it wasn't that bad. it's readable, the mc certainly an op character and I like that it included different world aside from Naruto world. I'm certainly thrilled about Saitama vs Mc chapter. I Love that chapter.
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this is basically a wish fulfillment novel the mc is busted beyond belief he can already kill most kage level enemies at the age of 10 all the interactions he have with any female characters makes you wish to kill yourself for reading this novel but I have been skipping all his interactions with women so far all female characters are just throwing their selves at him and he is accepting at all so this is basically a harem novel tho that's something to be expected in a wish fulfillment novel the ability mc gets from system has already made him basically invincible the translator dunno the difference between he she him her so if you didn't know a new character from the anime you wouldn't know their gender lol overall pretty meh the idea is cool but it seems like one of those Chinese novels
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Easily one of the best Naruto fanfics in existence! The story is really good and the characters are enjoyable. It's a bit rushed in chap 100+ he is already Hokage level and the time skipped many times and you only learn it a few 10 chaps later. Also it's really annoying the author really can't use he, she , it , them , I , they etc correctly. So sometimes females are he and males are she. But overall the story it self is nice and I enjoy it a lot so far :)
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honestly, taking a break from this circa chapter 199 because its getting really old and annoying. im really tired of everyone always expressing their shock in full paragraphs all the time. its wasting my time. its also losing its power scaling that was never really faithful to the original anyways but now is getting more than a little bit annoying. Not only is it rushed but the developments have significantly dropped in quality and logic. what finally broke the camel's back though is messing with the main character of the original's backstory. probably going to drop this afterall, especially since after the naruto verse its one piece next just based on the chapter headings and the narutoverse story is both impossibly drawn out and rushed at the same time. I swear we could cut these chapters by 30% if we just took out everyone's pointless reactions to everything. my rating is only as high as it is because of the good performance from the author at the beginning.
por lo menos ya supero en capitulos a la otra traduccion en este sitio web, espero que lo completes ya que al parecer el autor esta volviendo a publicar capitulos (o eso creo, ya que se actualizo en mtlnovel con otros capitulos). asi que espero mucho de vos y que termines todo
I just want to know why if she's not going to have a harem and romance they didn't let rin marry Kakashi??.............,................................
This Review is based: 20 Writing - there are error but i got no problem with it as long as i understand it 4 ⭐ Story Development - A good story but slow pacing which I don't like 4 ⭐ Characters - The mc is smart but stupid sometimes, he decided to hide his power for years just to be revealed because of he decided to kill a dude that will be killed somehow... then all his trouble is vain Updating Stability - dc about this part 5 ⭐ World Background - no world background 2 ⭐ Evaluation - people who like mc dominating and take and do what he wants then this isn't for you For the author - i guess i like it but im not ganna continue it as it was long and i dont have much time for this
I read up to chapter 240. I liked it, but I am unsure if I will continue reading. First off, the translation is decent, about a 3.5/5. It's just put into google translate and then into Grammarly. It's not proofread, and you will see many errors. The overall story is average. It's a Chinese novel, so you already know what to expect. But it brought up some interesting, thought-provoking ideas, and the side characters were decent. I thought it did a good job on the political side. Overall, I am going to say it's an above-average novel. 3/5.
This Fanfic is extremely good, the best you can read, the story, the mc, the characters, the fml, everything is very good, the only bad thing is that the harem is a Japanese harem, it doesn't stay with any of them even though they all love it but even so the 1% of romance that there is is good.
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This is good fanfic novel and has a great plot but the jutsu are all in japanese. It would have been great if they were writte in English because i wouldn’ have to translate it in English though google. If it can be fixed it wou help a lot if not it’s still good 👍.
I should rate in 4.8 but its alright because the translation is much better than the original [img=Speechless][img=Feeling it]
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This is without a doubt the best translation of this novel on the site to the point it’s not even comparable that being said let’s talk about the story it is one of the most satisfying naruto stories out there it has the same epicness as the godlike hokage fanfic where he gets the gura gura no mi and it leaves you wanting to read the next chap ASAP
A better translation than the other three or four translations. Love it. (＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)
The early chapters of this fanfic, show promise with an acceptable level of translation quality. However, this initial promise quickly deteriorates as the translation becomes increasingly sloppy. Pronouns are frequently mishandled, and the inconsistency in naming conventions leads to confusion. Jutsus, Techniques and entire Concepts are suddenly referred to by new names without any clear reason, which disrupts the reading experience and pulls the reader out of the narrative. From the outset, it is clear that this story is a wish-fulfillment fantasy. The protagonist is overwhelmingly powerful, facing little to no real risk throughout the narrative. The female characters in the side-cast seem to exist solely to extol his virtues, constantly praising his abilities and reinforcing his superiority. As the story progresses into war and the protagonist's extraordinary powers are showcased, any potential for tension evaporates. Every battle he enters is effortlessly won, making the outcomes predictable and stripping away any sense of suspense or danger. The concept of using "Time" as the protagonist's power is intriguing and holds significant potential. However, the execution falls flat as the character's abilities quickly render him omnipotent. This rapid escalation of power diminishes the excitement and complexity that a more balanced approach could have offered. It’s a missed opportunity to explore the intricacies and limitations of time manipulation, which could have added depth and richness to the story. The battles, a crucial element in any action-packed narrative, are disappointingly bland and monotonous. The lack of strategic thinking and clever use of jutsu leaves much to be desired. Fights are resolved with brute force and speed rather than ingenuity, resulting in a series of predictable and uninspiring confrontations. The absence of strategic depth in these battles fails to capture the essence of what makes combat in Naruto so engaging. It is noted in other reviews that the protagonist eventually ventures into other universes. However, having not reached that point in the story myself, I cannot speak to the quality or impact of these cross-universe adventures. This aspect could potentially add a new layer to the narrative, but given the issues present in the earlier parts of the story, I have a lot of skepticism about its execution.
a pretty good translation and a good concept buuut it makes me feel like i want to die,with the girls always surrounding him,talking about how strong he is and yada yada yada
Yes and thats about it A nice waste of time tbh. For starters, it actually had a nice development but him becoming too strong too quickly without any real danger to his life becomes boring. The second ability is far too op and it doesn't even come with any consequences.
The protagonist is the most lolicon and pedophile there is, if this is what the translation is like, I can't imagine what the original must be like. These Chinese virgins and their frustrated sexual fantasies
really good story, for both the naruto and the one piece world, the spelling could be better, but its not a real problem just some minor spelling mistakes
bruh left naruto world without leaving a single children or confirm his relationship with any of the girls at all...
Honestly this is pretty good. There are a few errors with he/ she pronouns but it's more than readable in it's current state. it's definitely an op power creep story but honestly I didn't mind that. Solid read 8/10
From the Naruto Arc, to the One Piece Arc and even the halfway through the One Punch Man Arc, I enjoyed reading everything. However...the author might be a 'pervert' in a sense...
why did he have to go to one piece.This is what I hat about fanfics.The mc will just travel from one world to another.
Not bad, it wasn't slowphased as I expected but it wasn't that bad. it's readable, the mc certainly an op character and I like that it included different world aside from Naruto world. I'm certainly thrilled about Saitama vs Mc chapter. I Love that chapter.
Revelar spoiler this is basically a wish fulfillment novel the mc is busted beyond belief he can already kill most kage level enemies at the age of 10 all the interactions he have with any female characters makes you wish to kill yourself for reading this novel but I have been skipping all his interactions with women so far all female characters are just throwing their selves at him and he is accepting at all so this is basically a harem novel tho that's something to be expected in a wish fulfillment novel the ability mc gets from system has already made him basically invincible the translator dunno the difference between he she him her so if you didn't know a new character from the anime you wouldn't know their gender lol overall pretty meh the idea is cool but it seems like one of those Chinese novels
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Easily one of the best Naruto fanfics in existence! The story is really good and the characters are enjoyable. It's a bit rushed in chap 100+ he is already Hokage level and the time skipped many times and you only learn it a few 10 chaps later. Also it's really annoying the author really can't use he, she , it , them , I , they etc correctly. So sometimes females are he and males are she. But overall the story it self is nice and I enjoy it a lot so far :)
Revelar spoiler honestly, taking a break from this circa chapter 199 because its getting really old and annoying. im really tired of everyone always expressing their shock in full paragraphs all the time. its wasting my time. its also losing its power scaling that was never really faithful to the original anyways but now is getting more than a little bit annoying. Not only is it rushed but the developments have significantly dropped in quality and logic. what finally broke the camel's back though is messing with the main character of the original's backstory. probably going to drop this afterall, especially since after the naruto verse its one piece next just based on the chapter headings and the narutoverse story is both impossibly drawn out and rushed at the same time. I swear we could cut these chapters by 30% if we just took out everyone's pointless reactions to everything. my rating is only as high as it is because of the good performance from the author at the beginning.
por lo menos ya supero en capitulos a la otra traduccion en este sitio web, espero que lo completes ya que al parecer el autor esta volviendo a publicar capitulos (o eso creo, ya que se actualizo en mtlnovel con otros capitulos). asi que espero mucho de vos y que termines todo
I just want to know why if she's not going to have a harem and romance they didn't let rin marry Kakashi??.............,................................
This Review is based: 20 Writing - there are error but i got no problem with it as long as i understand it 4 ⭐ Story Development - A good story but slow pacing which I don't like 4 ⭐ Characters - The mc is smart but stupid sometimes, he decided to hide his power for years just to be revealed because of he decided to kill a dude that will be killed somehow... then all his trouble is vain Updating Stability - dc about this part 5 ⭐ World Background - no world background 2 ⭐ Evaluation - people who like mc dominating and take and do what he wants then this isn't for you For the author - i guess i like it but im not ganna continue it as it was long and i dont have much time for this
I read up to chapter 240. I liked it, but I am unsure if I will continue reading. First off, the translation is decent, about a 3.5/5. It's just put into google translate and then into Grammarly. It's not proofread, and you will see many errors. The overall story is average. It's a Chinese novel, so you already know what to expect. But it brought up some interesting, thought-provoking ideas, and the side characters were decent. I thought it did a good job on the political side. Overall, I am going to say it's an above-average novel. 3/5.
This Fanfic is extremely good, the best you can read, the story, the mc, the characters, the fml, everything is very good, the only bad thing is that the harem is a Japanese harem, it doesn't stay with any of them even though they all love it but even so the 1% of romance that there is is good.
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This is good fanfic novel and has a great plot but the jutsu are all in japanese. It would have been great if they were writte in English because i wouldn’ have to translate it in English though google. If it can be fixed it wou help a lot if not it’s still good 👍.
I should rate in 4.8 but its alright because the translation is much better than the original [img=Speechless][img=Feeling it]
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This is without a doubt the best translation of this novel on the site to the point it’s not even comparable that being said let’s talk about the story it is one of the most satisfying naruto stories out there it has the same epicness as the godlike hokage fanfic where he gets the gura gura no mi and it leaves you wanting to read the next chap ASAP
A better translation than the other three or four translations. Love it. (＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)(＠_＠;)
The early chapters of this fanfic, show promise with an acceptable level of translation quality. However, this initial promise quickly deteriorates as the translation becomes increasingly sloppy. Pronouns are frequently mishandled, and the inconsistency in naming conventions leads to confusion. Jutsus, Techniques and entire Concepts are suddenly referred to by new names without any clear reason, which disrupts the reading experience and pulls the reader out of the narrative. From the outset, it is clear that this story is a wish-fulfillment fantasy. The protagonist is overwhelmingly powerful, facing little to no real risk throughout the narrative. The female characters in the side-cast seem to exist solely to extol his virtues, constantly praising his abilities and reinforcing his superiority. As the story progresses into war and the protagonist's extraordinary powers are showcased, any potential for tension evaporates. Every battle he enters is effortlessly won, making the outcomes predictable and stripping away any sense of suspense or danger. The concept of using "Time" as the protagonist's power is intriguing and holds significant potential. However, the execution falls flat as the character's abilities quickly render him omnipotent. This rapid escalation of power diminishes the excitement and complexity that a more balanced approach could have offered. It’s a missed opportunity to explore the intricacies and limitations of time manipulation, which could have added depth and richness to the story. The battles, a crucial element in any action-packed narrative, are disappointingly bland and monotonous. The lack of strategic thinking and clever use of jutsu leaves much to be desired. Fights are resolved with brute force and speed rather than ingenuity, resulting in a series of predictable and uninspiring confrontations. The absence of strategic depth in these battles fails to capture the essence of what makes combat in Naruto so engaging. It is noted in other reviews that the protagonist eventually ventures into other universes. However, having not reached that point in the story myself, I cannot speak to the quality or impact of these cross-universe adventures. This aspect could potentially add a new layer to the narrative, but given the issues present in the earlier parts of the story, I have a lot of skepticism about its execution.