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Escribe una reseñaAll-around awesome story. I can only recommend it. Grammar almost flawless, pacing is great and the few characters I have seen are well fleshed out. Whats even better, the world-building looks well-thought out. The main character is likable and in "3D", not like the usual MC. He is plagued by endless curiosity, but is visibly held back by his innate laziness.
Great story, less filler both in word count and characters are well done, good grammar, and an exciting premise. The dialogue does a good job explaining the plot/setting the premise. The side characters do have depth to them, even with the few chapters uploaded. All in all, this is an excellently written xianxan novel. I want MOAR!!!
Up to chapter 6: I’m in a trance... I can say that this xianxia is probably the more “accomplished” story since I began reading Chinese novels. This story is incredible! After having read this story, I can only lament how bad, simple and childish are all the other xianxia. The storyline is incredibly deep, worked, and well written. The author knows where his story goes and he carries his work confidently. It's definitely a decent read.
All-around awesome story. I can only recommend it. Grammar almost flawless, pacing is great and the few characters I have seen are well fleshed out. Whats even better, the world-building looks well-thought out. The main character is likable and in "3D", not like the usual MC. He is plagued by endless curiosity, but is visibly held back by his innate laziness.
Great story, less filler both in word count and characters are well done, good grammar, and an exciting premise. The dialogue does a good job explaining the plot/setting the premise. The side characters do have depth to them, even with the few chapters uploaded. All in all, this is an excellently written xianxan novel. I want MOAR!!!
Up to chapter 6: I’m in a trance... I can say that this xianxia is probably the more “accomplished” story since I began reading Chinese novels. This story is incredible! After having read this story, I can only lament how bad, simple and childish are all the other xianxia. The storyline is incredibly deep, worked, and well written. The author knows where his story goes and he carries his work confidently. It's definitely a decent read.