In This Corner Of The Multiverse

LV 4

GoldFinger

Hello Everyone. Shameless author here, posting a shameless review. This is a decent technological story, and honestly, something I haven't seen done before. A story where the main character uses mostly technology and scheming to gain power. This will be a weak to strong story with a cunning and ruthless protagonist but don't expect him to be a murderhobo. He will kill, but only if he feels it necessary. This is a more realistic take on the multiverse fics that litter this site, which are by no means bad or anything, they are actually quite good, but few ever write about tech upliftment stories so here we are. Please give the story a try, you might just like it!

LV 6

Beefnator

There is only one word for this ... Good ...............................................................................................

LV 13

KapuFinest808

ThIs story is awesome, im really glad you Have Heroes(Tv) In your story. There isnt alot of fic about it, you definitely deserve a 5 star rating even if i havent read it yet

LV 5

Ballad

Ok so Only a couple Chappys but I'm enjoying this already. The MC is Cunning and Ruthless he's from what I'm seeing not playing Hero like a complete Moron I approve.

LV 13

The_Puffer

Mc is just an emotional wreckage. He tries to act like he doesnt cares but deep down he is just a little kid trying to act cool. Nearly everything in starwars could be prevented only if he forced his wife to talk a little. Or Just, I dont know, font aproach an enemy without double tapping? And his future self says wanda fixed him or something. Meaning that he Will be a Lil cry baby untill the marvel universe. Spoiler but might needed to know: And I dont know how to feel about his future self doing what he did to his Girls. I mean, I would be Fine if that parts were at the end of the fic Just so it can end in a good ending but it was a mistake to put it when our perspective was younger mc. It felt like he just got c*cked

LV 10

StarWriting

It’s just another typical story about an unfeeling psychopath going around murdering people and stealing their powers. That’s really about it.

LV 1

Nxgen_Snail_Kota

Looked at the Desc and read the story. All I can say is that the author delivered and I am pleased. The grammar was good and clean and the characters and worlds are interesting and well thought out. 4.8/5

LV 5

SpoiledSecrets

The story is ok, it’s nothing new or special. The problem I have with this is the villian tag. The MC is not a villain, a villainous protagonist is someone without morals or bottoms lines, someone without any sort of poison (children, remorse, romance). This MC is filled with poison, so yea at best a darker anti-hero.

LV 14

LongShlong

Great book but it needs someone who can summon cheese armor like susano but its pretty good overall not bad. .

LV 2

rodrigo_domingos

111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111

LV 14

dylan_pyle

a person that only copies but does not understand,if you want to read something that makes sense read Revered insanity (not a fanfic)

LV 2

SirRandom

The story is ok, but the mc had some of his braincells nuked right when the star wars arc started, he suddenly loses his ruthlessness, he is unable to kill people when in the previous arc he was able to kill innocent children. He makes the most stupid mistakes when in the prev arc he didn't make a single one, if you wanted to make him mistake prone you should of done so from the beginning, not make him nigh perfect and super calculating then nuke his IQ He completely loses the maniac vibe he gave off, the vibe I stayed for, his personality flip flops constantly and it gets annoying, everything else is good tho

LV 13

NoHaremSectElder07

Gets terrible around 300. Love the magicians part and have been trudging through all the adopting like 400 kids and getting wives like they’re Pokémon

LV 2

Huntsman

This is nice, and the Magician Arc has been awesome, though I might be biased since I loved Magician when the first season came out. The only problem is the MC's dickishness, is that a word? Meh, whatever. I just feel like there are several deaths in the series that could be avoided, and the MC's attempt at humiliating Panacea is just ridiculous. Sure, it's a response in line with his personality and actions thus far, but at the same time, Panacea wasn't obligated to help him, not to mention the possible repercurssions working on Offee's brain might as an untrained parahuman might have. It's already established in Worm that some people react poorly to brain-alteration and mind control. As for the next fic you'll write, I'm not telling you to do anything here, but I really hope it's the Magician fanfic. Jay's obssession with science makes the whole magic thing seem kinda redundant at this point, but I still think it's the best Arc. Alright, night.

LV 5

Goldenswiftreader

If you love good writing of the darkest kind this ones the book for you, with twists and turns you'll be surprised at what dark deeds the mc will go through to achieve his goals. It of course being so dark isn't for the faint of heart. The writing is so good I read way past my comfort zone. Unfortunately I couldn't continue maybe someday, probably not though, just too dam dark.