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I have read it up to 103, gonna say that as I read it, I felt disappointed as I continued. His powers are so random, his stats is so vague, mc being pushed around is so blatant, it is actually not my cup of tea. Of course as I read, I accepted everything with an opened mind but I have to give a review to let my feelings out. I have no qualms of the pacing of the story so far, that’s why I was able to read so far, I just don’t like the naming sense, the powers, dissapointment of a system, disappointment of an mc, the random fantasy elements, and the blatant luck. The impression I get is that its lacking a bit of depth and it’s just flat. So far the marvel characters, I give it a 3/5, its just normal, not bad, its just identical.
so as I was saying this boy Alex thinks that he has what it takes to be a hero...............😃😃
come on bro come back to us please you are one of the best author's that I know so please
Me gusta mucho el desarrollo de la historia... Quisiera que volvieran a actualizarlo para continuar la historia. Le doy 4 estrellas si vea que lo vuelven a actualizar le daré más.... Espero.
first of all everyone is racist or against a stereotype by nature. don't believe me? for example IF, I repeat IF ...If the MC is set as a pedophile/communist then people who dislike the idea of a pedophile MC will have a hard time reading the writing. So this type of writing will limit the range of audience who can read your story. like me I am really against putting a certain race/country as MC's background. It really hurts me to imagine a hero/villain that wobbles his head as means of communicating because this is almost a fact as 99% of Indians do that as it is their culture. When you as a writer decide to use a certain race/country that has a stereotype you must understand that 'stereotype' exist and how it can effect the reader's experience. Just imagine if the MC is transmigrate to bollywood universe and he is a half-vietnamese , where his father is indian but his Vietnamese mother is set as a control freak with traditions. I highly doubt that it will attract any in indian readers because of the difference in culture.
The best and most rational marvel fanfic. love the mc not too weak or op just right. And ... update the novel already[img=update]
To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer,Medicine and Doctor etc.,) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne(BATMAN) can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader. 2. To the author, since your fanfic is mostly like the Mix of MCU and EARTH 616 - Make to MC to go back in the past in The Library Of Calegastro learn all the Magic there copy all those books distribute to Kamar Taj and copy for himself as well make him go to Mimir and Yggdrasil to gain more about Runes and Knowledge of Various ARTS(Magic, Combat, Tech-Magic or Etc., just make it up also make him do the works to influence people on Earth to save nature through Tech-Magic to save Earth Environment To Make the Qi, Ki, Chi , Mana Richer on Earth than any other place in the whole Multiverse) of the whole Universe or Multiverse. Make him a Grand-Master to teach all people Combat Arts and Magic Arts - ( Manupulation and uses of Chi, Ki , Qi and Mana into various Arts ) especially on Earth as his base operation. Thanks! - Reader.
Well sorry Author but l do not like where it started from so bye .............................. ...........................................
I really loved the story and i love the basis. The mc powers are unique and i think it was a great fan fic. I really hope you pick this back up as the ending left a sour taste in my mouth and was abrupt.
The best MCU fanfic I have ever read. MC's System is really great. MC is not op but strong enough to fight on par with spiderman. I hope author continue to write this again
is it done because that was one heck of cliffhanger I mean come on plz attest wrap it up by giving a summary of the plot so it's not all baf
It's a shame the story has come to an end due to the circumstances of the author. Would love to see this being picked back up once things get better, hopefully with a rewrite of the final chapter so it's doesn't seem as rushed.
The mc is way too cringe or its just the story that makes him look cringe but either way Im dropping this, clown mc is ain't my cup of tea................
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Legalzin, espero que o autor volte a postar ou pelo menos termine esse volume direito ...,..,,...........,......,.,......................,......................
Ota getting worst and worst now he will just be a side kick ahhhhh BORINGGGGGGGGGG!! !!!!!!!!!!! ..................................................................................................................
it's really amazing............................................................................................................................................................
Unlike many people, I liked mc's attitude overall, it's much better to be hero and good person than villain. But story became worse as it went on for other reasons. Basically this story just becomes another "system provides" story, he doesn't need to go on adventures, or use his knowledge or actions to get stronger, he just needs to use system. And secondly he doesn't use his marvel and future knowledge, he just goes with the flow without much agency. For example, he could pick some popular services/apps or whatnot from today and start an business to earn potentially billions, since he knows what would work. And secondly he could proactively look for superpowers like magic from Kamar-Taj or chi. And he could try to prevent disasters by providing information and warning to relevant people. Overall, mc just uses system, and goes to so disaster when it happens. That's pretty much it. Very boring, very lazy.
the protagonist is too weak. I'm only in chapter 24 but I understand that it's not worth continuing. The protagonist is pitiful and the system is useless. I understand that you want to give the protagonist a sense of danger but to make him almost lose a battle against mobs is exaggerated.
……..No just No……………………………… …………………………………………………….. I can honestly say I dislike the MC, I mean he makes bad choices, simps over spider man like he want to date him and acts like a child……………….. I’m done
Its mostly cringe and forced plot development. MC has much more speed, perception and strength than ordinary people, but can't defeat 2 ordinary thugs. He should know about shield but then shows his powers where surveillance is possible (Dude has a broken af system that gives him the ability to buy space to train himself). He conveniently has points when the author requires a plot armor without given explanation why pr how whatsoever. Its obviously better than most stories here but then you dont have any expectations from those types of stories anyways. You can read it if you can ignore the glaring contradictions in there.
This fanfic had such potential, it's a shame the author insists on nerfing his MC... The general idea at the beginning was very good and appealing however as the story progressed it became clear. The author too seemed to insist on doing boring stuff and uninteresting fights.. So I couldn't force myself to read past chapter 50 and just dropped it, maybe if the author decides to write another book fanfic of marvel I hope you can do it better.
Mc is stupid and naive. does he not know the risk of involving himself with shield, the shield is full of hydra lol. He was easy to be manipulated by Fury.
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cringe level high expectations supreme cliffhanger GODLIKE dangerously addictive NEED MOAAARRR
I was a bit skeptical picking up this novel but it was really an excellent read.I hope the author picks it up again. The MC is well developed and put together with the storyline.
I have read it up to 103, gonna say that as I read it, I felt disappointed as I continued. His powers are so random, his stats is so vague, mc being pushed around is so blatant, it is actually not my cup of tea. Of course as I read, I accepted everything with an opened mind but I have to give a review to let my feelings out. I have no qualms of the pacing of the story so far, that’s why I was able to read so far, I just don’t like the naming sense, the powers, dissapointment of a system, disappointment of an mc, the random fantasy elements, and the blatant luck. The impression I get is that its lacking a bit of depth and it’s just flat. So far the marvel characters, I give it a 3/5, its just normal, not bad, its just identical.
so as I was saying this boy Alex thinks that he has what it takes to be a hero...............😃😃
come on bro come back to us please you are one of the best author's that I know so please
Me gusta mucho el desarrollo de la historia... Quisiera que volvieran a actualizarlo para continuar la historia. Le doy 4 estrellas si vea que lo vuelven a actualizar le daré más.... Espero.
first of all everyone is racist or against a stereotype by nature. don't believe me? for example IF, I repeat IF ...If the MC is set as a pedophile/communist then people who dislike the idea of a pedophile MC will have a hard time reading the writing. So this type of writing will limit the range of audience who can read your story. like me I am really against putting a certain race/country as MC's background. It really hurts me to imagine a hero/villain that wobbles his head as means of communicating because this is almost a fact as 99% of Indians do that as it is their culture. When you as a writer decide to use a certain race/country that has a stereotype you must understand that 'stereotype' exist and how it can effect the reader's experience. Just imagine if the MC is transmigrate to bollywood universe and he is a half-vietnamese , where his father is indian but his Vietnamese mother is set as a control freak with traditions. I highly doubt that it will attract any in indian readers because of the difference in culture.
The best and most rational marvel fanfic. love the mc not too weak or op just right. And ... update the novel already[img=update]
To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer,Medicine and Doctor etc.,) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne(BATMAN) can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader. 2. To the author, since your fanfic is mostly like the Mix of MCU and EARTH 616 - Make to MC to go back in the past in The Library Of Calegastro learn all the Magic there copy all those books distribute to Kamar Taj and copy for himself as well make him go to Mimir and Yggdrasil to gain more about Runes and Knowledge of Various ARTS(Magic, Combat, Tech-Magic or Etc., just make it up also make him do the works to influence people on Earth to save nature through Tech-Magic to save Earth Environment To Make the Qi, Ki, Chi , Mana Richer on Earth than any other place in the whole Multiverse) of the whole Universe or Multiverse. Make him a Grand-Master to teach all people Combat Arts and Magic Arts - ( Manupulation and uses of Chi, Ki , Qi and Mana into various Arts ) especially on Earth as his base operation. Thanks! - Reader.
Well sorry Author but l do not like where it started from so bye .............................. ...........................................
I really loved the story and i love the basis. The mc powers are unique and i think it was a great fan fic. I really hope you pick this back up as the ending left a sour taste in my mouth and was abrupt.
The best MCU fanfic I have ever read. MC's System is really great. MC is not op but strong enough to fight on par with spiderman. I hope author continue to write this again
is it done because that was one heck of cliffhanger I mean come on plz attest wrap it up by giving a summary of the plot so it's not all baf
It's a shame the story has come to an end due to the circumstances of the author. Would love to see this being picked back up once things get better, hopefully with a rewrite of the final chapter so it's doesn't seem as rushed.
The mc is way too cringe or its just the story that makes him look cringe but either way Im dropping this, clown mc is ain't my cup of tea................
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Revelar spoiler Legalzin, espero que o autor volte a postar ou pelo menos termine esse volume direito ...,..,,...........,......,.,......................,......................
Ota getting worst and worst now he will just be a side kick ahhhhh BORINGGGGGGGGGG!! !!!!!!!!!!! ..................................................................................................................
it's really amazing............................................................................................................................................................
Unlike many people, I liked mc's attitude overall, it's much better to be hero and good person than villain. But story became worse as it went on for other reasons. Basically this story just becomes another "system provides" story, he doesn't need to go on adventures, or use his knowledge or actions to get stronger, he just needs to use system. And secondly he doesn't use his marvel and future knowledge, he just goes with the flow without much agency. For example, he could pick some popular services/apps or whatnot from today and start an business to earn potentially billions, since he knows what would work. And secondly he could proactively look for superpowers like magic from Kamar-Taj or chi. And he could try to prevent disasters by providing information and warning to relevant people. Overall, mc just uses system, and goes to so disaster when it happens. That's pretty much it. Very boring, very lazy.
the protagonist is too weak. I'm only in chapter 24 but I understand that it's not worth continuing. The protagonist is pitiful and the system is useless. I understand that you want to give the protagonist a sense of danger but to make him almost lose a battle against mobs is exaggerated.
……..No just No……………………………… …………………………………………………….. I can honestly say I dislike the MC, I mean he makes bad choices, simps over spider man like he want to date him and acts like a child……………….. I’m done
Its mostly cringe and forced plot development. MC has much more speed, perception and strength than ordinary people, but can't defeat 2 ordinary thugs. He should know about shield but then shows his powers where surveillance is possible (Dude has a broken af system that gives him the ability to buy space to train himself). He conveniently has points when the author requires a plot armor without given explanation why pr how whatsoever. Its obviously better than most stories here but then you dont have any expectations from those types of stories anyways. You can read it if you can ignore the glaring contradictions in there.
This fanfic had such potential, it's a shame the author insists on nerfing his MC... The general idea at the beginning was very good and appealing however as the story progressed it became clear. The author too seemed to insist on doing boring stuff and uninteresting fights.. So I couldn't force myself to read past chapter 50 and just dropped it, maybe if the author decides to write another book fanfic of marvel I hope you can do it better.
Mc is stupid and naive. does he not know the risk of involving himself with shield, the shield is full of hydra lol. He was easy to be manipulated by Fury.
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cringe level high expectations supreme cliffhanger GODLIKE dangerously addictive NEED MOAAARRR
I was a bit skeptical picking up this novel but it was really an excellent read.I hope the author picks it up again. The MC is well developed and put together with the storyline.