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it is good short novel for reading something new while waiting for update 😀🐱
Loved the story. while there are spots that could use some editing, I don't believe it detracts from the story at all. I loved it. Great work Author!!!
2+2+2+5+2)/5=2.6 I would only recommend reading this for the three chapters while not bothering to look for a place to read the premium chapters. I would not recommend this at all grammar ain't the best. characterization is poor. so far, the favourite character of many readers is a body guard. not the mc or the other side characters. a body guard. the story is certainly braindeadish. there have been much worse. I just would not recommend.
The story is a bit more classic style with human interactions, being a little more loose and the need for suspension of disbelief, but I actually don’t mind that I like it brings me back to my earlier days of reading stories. The one thing is the author tries to explain things a little too fast and loose, making it easier to confuse the readers or possibly trip over his feet other than that I really like it
Reviews as of chapter 73..... Just another typical MC who loves to hide his real power/abilities so much that he looks for ways to make more clones of himself that he can give fake identities to, so that he never has to do anything with his real name/face.....With this MC's cheat he could have raised up a small army of op subordinates but that never seems to even cross the MC's thought.....Shallow Characters and world building doesn't help this novel either.
First half was good, then after ch 150 or so the avatars stopped being relevant at all. He basically never uses them or we dont get any updates on them. Also the translation quality became illegible.
If ever there was a story that a too rushed. This is it. Some novel rush the ending, so novel rush certain arcs. This one rushed the entire novel from the beginning to the very end. The entire story, excluding the ending time skip, occurred over a span of 2 years. So the MC took a little over a year and a half to reach the highest realm. A realm no one had reached prior in their entire life! Yes, the cheat he had was pretty OP to begin with, but the author does not let a moment pass before a new arc has already begun. It’s usually a span of half a month to a full month of gap between each arcs. No other characters get any importance or time to progress except the MC, that is until the last arc where they decide to give a little bit of improvement to a female side character. But even still she doesn’t play much of a role as by the time she does anything, the arc needs to be concluded and the next arc needs to begin. And in this while, the author also needs to show tue MC’s development. It was just chaos after chaos in the universe. Moving on from this, comes the point that this is a Chinese novel. So yes, the nationalism is pretty heavy and frankly too unreasonable. For example, every other organisation has good and bad people in it, while china or what they call “Construction Division” has only good people. Only this organisation is trying to make efforts to bring humanity back from the post apocalyptic times and back to its peak. And every other organisation is just trying to suppress them. Well, everyone except the “The Arctic Army”, *cough*Russia*cough*. They would team up with the other organisations in every single arc, and suppress China & Russia, only to be beaten back by China who would be well aware of the plot of these organisations because of the existence of the MC. Even the major plot reveal of the last arc was too bland. Took about a quarter of a chapter for the reveal! Soemthing that kept coming up throughout the entire novel was just done and dusted in a handful of paragraphs. Anyway. Could’ve done well, but yeah.🤷🏻♂️
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The plot Armor is so strong that i couldn't get past chapter 20. as soon as he needs something, it pops up. Transfer to a new district, purple blueprint. Terrible story progression.
It's a scam, don't read. It starts off amazing and fun but then around chapter 170 it turns into a Google translate translation and becomes unreadable. There's also no more paragraphs and becomes just one huge paragraph with no breaks. Pretty much just turns into a piece of garbage trying to rip you off and steal your money and time.
No direction as to where the character is going. mass upgrade with no reason and no change in situation. randomly taking money he doesn't need with no explanation, character has no idea what he is doing, just aimless power ups.
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Writing quality is Ok in my eyes. Story development is below average. Another lay low till you become invincible kind of guy. Always enter, get experience, mystic realm invasion, no character development. No emotions and characters feel one dimensional. Since I wasn't there when the book was being updated, update stability automatically gets a 5 🌟. World background is worse than anything else. So bland, so boring, I prefer astral apostle to this book any day.
whether it is the translation or the original story, it comes across as a very boring story. The MC is an extremely lazy character with minimal social skills. as such, it is pretty hard to get invested in either to keep reading this.
The end was very condensed but the development of the characters kept me obsessed to read until the end
From chapter 173 and onwards it becomes unreadable as they have decided to use an MTL. IMO not worth reading until this is fixed. But when it's fixed it could be a good read.
Another novel where a stupid MC that lacks a highly functional brain gets a very OP system to help his rise to power. Nothing new tbh. The guy doesn't even maximize the use of his system and has a very lazy personality since he is completely reliant on his training avatars. The author and this novel is obviously among the many trash and generic chinese novels in this site that's just here to squeeze out some money.
What a sad, pathetic, cowardly waste, this MC is trash, what a waste of what could have been a decent story. Why do so many writers think this type of MC is enjoyable to read about, it's disguating.
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It was surprisingly good from the beginning, but due to power scaling issues the stakes quickly crumbled. Near the end it feels like the story was meant to continue BUT we instead get an exposition dump, followed by time jump, followed by not-so cliffhanger. (was held together well enough until the aftermath of the spy arc in my opinion)
The story is not bad. But I felt that it ended early. Good world background. The translation at the later chapters are messed up. Some names of places were changed, but still readable.
would give a high raiting if it wasnt for the deceptive monetization. you are forced to buy the entire book, but over half of it is mtl completely ruining the reading experience from ch 170 and forward.
From chapters 171 to 377, you will approach a quagmire of massive walls of text. It is suggested that you don't try to read it.
I was really into this novel, but you can't unlock 1 chapter at a time, you have to get the entire book at once when trying to read the novel via other sites from chapter 171 on its just 1 giant block of txt for each chapter making it almost unreadable. throughly disappointed with this novel.
Translatation was amazing till around 170 when the names of people and places were constantly messed up. But the story was amazing and very interesting! Definitely a good read. It’s actually pretty strange that I finished the whole book bc I feel like the books I read are never ending or I’m waiting for them to update every day so to read this finished novel was a great change of pace.
After cahper 171 you cannot understand anything. the translation is worse than mtl. I dont evn think there is a translator anymore. Dont even start it unless the chapters got fixed
From 171 onwards the quality took a dive and is comparable to mtl quality. Real trash that damages your brain cells. My opinion: Don't read it.
ur typical chinese novel to read when there's nothing else to do, just turn off ur brain and read.
it is good short novel for reading something new while waiting for update 😀🐱
Loved the story. while there are spots that could use some editing, I don't believe it detracts from the story at all. I loved it. Great work Author!!!
2+2+2+5+2)/5=2.6 I would only recommend reading this for the three chapters while not bothering to look for a place to read the premium chapters. I would not recommend this at all grammar ain't the best. characterization is poor. so far, the favourite character of many readers is a body guard. not the mc or the other side characters. a body guard. the story is certainly braindeadish. there have been much worse. I just would not recommend.
The story is a bit more classic style with human interactions, being a little more loose and the need for suspension of disbelief, but I actually don’t mind that I like it brings me back to my earlier days of reading stories. The one thing is the author tries to explain things a little too fast and loose, making it easier to confuse the readers or possibly trip over his feet other than that I really like it
Reviews as of chapter 73..... Just another typical MC who loves to hide his real power/abilities so much that he looks for ways to make more clones of himself that he can give fake identities to, so that he never has to do anything with his real name/face.....With this MC's cheat he could have raised up a small army of op subordinates but that never seems to even cross the MC's thought.....Shallow Characters and world building doesn't help this novel either.
First half was good, then after ch 150 or so the avatars stopped being relevant at all. He basically never uses them or we dont get any updates on them. Also the translation quality became illegible.
If ever there was a story that a too rushed. This is it. Some novel rush the ending, so novel rush certain arcs. This one rushed the entire novel from the beginning to the very end. The entire story, excluding the ending time skip, occurred over a span of 2 years. So the MC took a little over a year and a half to reach the highest realm. A realm no one had reached prior in their entire life! Yes, the cheat he had was pretty OP to begin with, but the author does not let a moment pass before a new arc has already begun. It’s usually a span of half a month to a full month of gap between each arcs. No other characters get any importance or time to progress except the MC, that is until the last arc where they decide to give a little bit of improvement to a female side character. But even still she doesn’t play much of a role as by the time she does anything, the arc needs to be concluded and the next arc needs to begin. And in this while, the author also needs to show tue MC’s development. It was just chaos after chaos in the universe. Moving on from this, comes the point that this is a Chinese novel. So yes, the nationalism is pretty heavy and frankly too unreasonable. For example, every other organisation has good and bad people in it, while china or what they call “Construction Division” has only good people. Only this organisation is trying to make efforts to bring humanity back from the post apocalyptic times and back to its peak. And every other organisation is just trying to suppress them. Well, everyone except the “The Arctic Army”, *cough*Russia*cough*. They would team up with the other organisations in every single arc, and suppress China & Russia, only to be beaten back by China who would be well aware of the plot of these organisations because of the existence of the MC. Even the major plot reveal of the last arc was too bland. Took about a quarter of a chapter for the reveal! Soemthing that kept coming up throughout the entire novel was just done and dusted in a handful of paragraphs. Anyway. Could’ve done well, but yeah.🤷🏻♂️
Revelar spoiler The plot Armor is so strong that i couldn't get past chapter 20. as soon as he needs something, it pops up. Transfer to a new district, purple blueprint. Terrible story progression.
It's a scam, don't read. It starts off amazing and fun but then around chapter 170 it turns into a Google translate translation and becomes unreadable. There's also no more paragraphs and becomes just one huge paragraph with no breaks. Pretty much just turns into a piece of garbage trying to rip you off and steal your money and time.
No direction as to where the character is going. mass upgrade with no reason and no change in situation. randomly taking money he doesn't need with no explanation, character has no idea what he is doing, just aimless power ups.
Revelar spoiler Writing quality is Ok in my eyes. Story development is below average. Another lay low till you become invincible kind of guy. Always enter, get experience, mystic realm invasion, no character development. No emotions and characters feel one dimensional. Since I wasn't there when the book was being updated, update stability automatically gets a 5 🌟. World background is worse than anything else. So bland, so boring, I prefer astral apostle to this book any day.
whether it is the translation or the original story, it comes across as a very boring story. The MC is an extremely lazy character with minimal social skills. as such, it is pretty hard to get invested in either to keep reading this.
The end was very condensed but the development of the characters kept me obsessed to read until the end
From chapter 173 and onwards it becomes unreadable as they have decided to use an MTL. IMO not worth reading until this is fixed. But when it's fixed it could be a good read.
Another novel where a stupid MC that lacks a highly functional brain gets a very OP system to help his rise to power. Nothing new tbh. The guy doesn't even maximize the use of his system and has a very lazy personality since he is completely reliant on his training avatars. The author and this novel is obviously among the many trash and generic chinese novels in this site that's just here to squeeze out some money.
What a sad, pathetic, cowardly waste, this MC is trash, what a waste of what could have been a decent story. Why do so many writers think this type of MC is enjoyable to read about, it's disguating.
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It was surprisingly good from the beginning, but due to power scaling issues the stakes quickly crumbled. Near the end it feels like the story was meant to continue BUT we instead get an exposition dump, followed by time jump, followed by not-so cliffhanger. (was held together well enough until the aftermath of the spy arc in my opinion)
The story is not bad. But I felt that it ended early. Good world background. The translation at the later chapters are messed up. Some names of places were changed, but still readable.
would give a high raiting if it wasnt for the deceptive monetization. you are forced to buy the entire book, but over half of it is mtl completely ruining the reading experience from ch 170 and forward.
From chapters 171 to 377, you will approach a quagmire of massive walls of text. It is suggested that you don't try to read it.
I was really into this novel, but you can't unlock 1 chapter at a time, you have to get the entire book at once when trying to read the novel via other sites from chapter 171 on its just 1 giant block of txt for each chapter making it almost unreadable. throughly disappointed with this novel.
Translatation was amazing till around 170 when the names of people and places were constantly messed up. But the story was amazing and very interesting! Definitely a good read. It’s actually pretty strange that I finished the whole book bc I feel like the books I read are never ending or I’m waiting for them to update every day so to read this finished novel was a great change of pace.
After cahper 171 you cannot understand anything. the translation is worse than mtl. I dont evn think there is a translator anymore. Dont even start it unless the chapters got fixed
From 171 onwards the quality took a dive and is comparable to mtl quality. Real trash that damages your brain cells. My opinion: Don't read it.
ur typical chinese novel to read when there's nothing else to do, just turn off ur brain and read.