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Personally, I really enjoy the detailed and feelings put into this novel. I do notice a lot of people putting simp as the description of the Mc but I feel like that applies to the Mc before he's in the magic world. As it seems (while unclear) to be more of a merge of personalities where the major parts of his past memeries are kept as knowledge/dream for the magic world Mc to remember but that's the main personality aka the child being influenced by the older memories. I think this story would have better takes as long as it was written clearer on that point bc it helps explains a lot of why he acts the way he does. Only reason I noticed is cuz he refers to his past memories as aku's memories not "his" memories. Other than that I'm enjoying this novel a lot and hope u keep up the good wrritings :)
I am currently in chapter 640 and will continue to read till the end. The story is enjoyable . Only problem is plot holes . I enjoyed the story and recommend it to give a try.Also Hevenly star nation arc was disappointing (this arc is short )
I was initially excited when I started reading this novel but it became unbearable at some point. The MC is a simp among simps. Also, the logic for so many things in this novel is so forced. Like when he insisted on getting whipped in front of everyone because of "loyalty" even though they told him he didn't need to get whipped at all, or how the girl who was a god was afraid of her abuser for most of the novel to the point of wanting Zoemi to defend her, all of a sudden killed the abuse. She could've done it from the start but the author used "trauma" to force a plotline around that fact and suddenly resolved her trauma without any proper development. Don't even get me started on the fact that around the 500s- 600s, the author literally reset the world and wrote things anew! Like I was just enduring the novel up to that point and I just threw it away after that.
Awesome series. Gets confusing at times but it mostly makes sense at the end!
I am have read up to chapter 205 so I will be rating it from there. This book has high potential, but it is very frustrating to read, there genuinely are good moments in this story,but you have to go through a mire of misunderstanding, clichés, and more BS. The characters are some of the most annoying parts of the story, the lack of communication is criminal half of the problem can be fixed with a reasonable talk or some common sense. If you want to read this you have to be able to wade through sooo much nonsense.
My personal review of this would be around 2 stars (if not using webnovel's calculator). Overall the story starts off pretty strong but as it goes on, I became more and more disinvested with everything, I do personally like harems and that was one of the tags that brought me to this novel and it honestly seems like it should be removed and replaced with the tragedy tag. I was reading this story because I enjoy becoming invested in characters and the relationships they develop especially if they are done well and the story gives off the illusion of doing that. The story hints on modern topics that some people might not like such as body dysmorphia and transitioning but does so in the least discomforting way for people who try to insert themselves into the MC by making the character friendly to the MC while being in a romance with another character. Some of the other characters that get fleshed our and developed over hundreds of chapters either get seemingly randomly killed off or their personality just becomes irrationaly stupid and disliked and eventually killed off. I say seemingly above because the author does use foreshadowing to hint at some of the plot devices that kill off those characters and some of the plot direction. By the chapter I reached after the author just killed off a majority of the side characters and sub-romantic interests, I no longer trust that the author would be able to deliver a satisfactory ending let alone an enjoyable journey. There is very little payoff on any of the relationships the MC has or seems to develop, so I would commend anyone who could finish the book but I for one find it too painful to continue on. (Which also means I will not read the authors other works since according to their comments, this is the type of style they enjoy writing with.) For anyone who bothered to read all the way through this review, I wouldn't suggest reading the story unless you have a lot of patience and someone who doesn't mind dropping a book at any point where it gets too frustrating.
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So far I am loving this series it's great and enjoyable for someone like me who just want to find a book perfect for casual reading. The storyline is great, characters are amazing and hilarious. All in all it was and still is a good read
I want to ask when will MCs face completely recover. I don't want MC to stay ugly 😩😔
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Don't enjoy seeing a warm hearted mc go through life without any thought for himself or what he wants in his future, villainess gets one or all male leads while mc seems like he'll be her butler until she goes and fulfills her life having kids and he'll just grow old and die 'happy' cause he gets to watch someone else be happy, i dont really see any other result from this..yep toooootally want to read that
I just want to say: "With each chapter you read you feel like the plot thickens." I'm at chapter 200s when writing this and boy there is so much mystery stuff going on. I honestly can't tell much about the whole world because the story still(I'm at chapter 208) takes place in the academy. I can't say much about character design but after reading this much they honestly creep me out sometimes. This story has quite a bit of focus on the feeling of OBSESSION(yes capital letters because daym you'll know when you read this story)
I had a lot of hope for this novel but unfortunately, it has really fallen below my expectations. My problems are similar to other peoples but truthfully, I wouldn't even mind a simp mc or dense mc. honestly, it would probably be an improvement. My main problem is how toxic their relationship is. it starts off as a typical well written Isekai romcom between the mc and the villainess he wants to protect. A few dozen chapters in though, it devolves into two borderline psychopaths locked in a toxic codependency that is uncomfortable to read about. The main character and heroine repeatedly have inner monologues about how little everything else matters and how they don't care about anyone but each other. Heroine at one point almost kills a girl for trying to talk to the mc and the mc stops her. Then thanks her for holding back (she didn't, he held her back.) And afterwards, tries to shift the blame and punishment to himself. The story basically becomes a few paragraphs of fluffy rom com interactions between mc and heroine followed by a few paragraphs of one of them being deplorable to random other characters and the other accepting or justifying it. Maybe it gets better but I'd rather leave it up to the imagination than continue to suffer through their toxic and hard to read interactions. the author certainly has talent but the story just isn't there.
At first I liked it, the first chapters were very entertaining. But, the protagonist is too dense (to the extreme) and that doesn't change him at all and the worst thing when he finally confesses to the villain, she practically becomes a secondary character (he rarely appears in the story if it weren't for the fact that the MC cares about her I would say she is an extra). Also, it is too frustrating to see that the MC makes the same mistakes, for this reason I think that the MC is not dense but stupid or autistic. (Use translator)
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I'm currently abt 180 chapters in and i would just like to ask when there is some actual romantic progress for the mc cuz if its a situation where he is eternally dense then it stops being funny and starts being annoying and i'm also seeing alot of simp this and simp that but i just don't get all the harsh words.
Can someone explain how this novel is and whether it is recommended to be read. I want to know whether there’s harem, any racist stuff, and superior complex like thinking that their are above everyone and his race is superior whiles others are straight up monkeys in human skin
Writing quality is goods, updates seem stable, story progression is a bit slow, character designs are good and so is the world background. Unfortunately I dropped after around 120 chapters since I don't it because the mc gets humiliated way too much and it's just brushed over, though it fits within the narrative so it isn't bad writing, it just becomes too frustrating to continue reading.
The novel doesn't deserve 5 stars but it's undervalued at the moment There could be more explanation about the white haired girl with the power of time I didn't understand because you explained some parts without going into details. ı like the novel especially the girl who is the main character in the otome is not like the typical story which is bad
he is basically a servant and he is reincarnation but he is happy as a slave I don't get it you know future but my master this my master that
Read this review that I took a picture of. This is the worst book that I have laid my eyes upon im starting to think that a otuku that couldn’t get a girlfriend made this. I mean this from the bottom of my heart because this is probably the second review I wrote after reading probably hundreds of novels I could I would give the character design a negative if I could
I think this novel is great, it's a really nice romance with some unique twists added. My boy is just trying to protect his girl, but he still remains faithful to his attendant nature. I would recommend this to people who are looking for a slower romance, with some action.
Writing Quality - 4/5 Story Development - 2/5 Character Design - 1/5 [for MC] Updating Stability - 5/5 WB - 3/5 I thought that you would improvise on MC's thinking but no. I quit after 107 chapters.... Sorry, But not my cup of tea.
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I'm following the story more for the plot itself, because the protagonist is definitely a child in an adult body with all this obsession with concluding that everything will continue as in the game, instead of accepting that there are unpredictable constants in the real world. Anyway, I haven't seen any big developments in Zoemi yet, other than her desire to give Miriette her happy ending, but I know it will come soon, I hope a very good story, accompanied by an even better writing too 7/10
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love the novel the only I hate is that mc is kinda dense? I don't know how to say it... Anyway good novel ()()()()()()()()()((()()()()()()()
I'm really loving this novel, the authors righting style is unique and I love how the characters were developed currently at chap 90 and ngl this is another one of the few novels I really like since I hardly comment but keep up the good work😁
Personally, I really enjoy the detailed and feelings put into this novel. I do notice a lot of people putting simp as the description of the Mc but I feel like that applies to the Mc before he's in the magic world. As it seems (while unclear) to be more of a merge of personalities where the major parts of his past memeries are kept as knowledge/dream for the magic world Mc to remember but that's the main personality aka the child being influenced by the older memories. I think this story would have better takes as long as it was written clearer on that point bc it helps explains a lot of why he acts the way he does. Only reason I noticed is cuz he refers to his past memories as aku's memories not "his" memories. Other than that I'm enjoying this novel a lot and hope u keep up the good wrritings :)
I am currently in chapter 640 and will continue to read till the end. The story is enjoyable . Only problem is plot holes . I enjoyed the story and recommend it to give a try.Also Hevenly star nation arc was disappointing (this arc is short )
I was initially excited when I started reading this novel but it became unbearable at some point. The MC is a simp among simps. Also, the logic for so many things in this novel is so forced. Like when he insisted on getting whipped in front of everyone because of "loyalty" even though they told him he didn't need to get whipped at all, or how the girl who was a god was afraid of her abuser for most of the novel to the point of wanting Zoemi to defend her, all of a sudden killed the abuse. She could've done it from the start but the author used "trauma" to force a plotline around that fact and suddenly resolved her trauma without any proper development. Don't even get me started on the fact that around the 500s- 600s, the author literally reset the world and wrote things anew! Like I was just enduring the novel up to that point and I just threw it away after that.
Awesome series. Gets confusing at times but it mostly makes sense at the end!
I am have read up to chapter 205 so I will be rating it from there. This book has high potential, but it is very frustrating to read, there genuinely are good moments in this story,but you have to go through a mire of misunderstanding, clichés, and more BS. The characters are some of the most annoying parts of the story, the lack of communication is criminal half of the problem can be fixed with a reasonable talk or some common sense. If you want to read this you have to be able to wade through sooo much nonsense.
My personal review of this would be around 2 stars (if not using webnovel's calculator). Overall the story starts off pretty strong but as it goes on, I became more and more disinvested with everything, I do personally like harems and that was one of the tags that brought me to this novel and it honestly seems like it should be removed and replaced with the tragedy tag. I was reading this story because I enjoy becoming invested in characters and the relationships they develop especially if they are done well and the story gives off the illusion of doing that. The story hints on modern topics that some people might not like such as body dysmorphia and transitioning but does so in the least discomforting way for people who try to insert themselves into the MC by making the character friendly to the MC while being in a romance with another character. Some of the other characters that get fleshed our and developed over hundreds of chapters either get seemingly randomly killed off or their personality just becomes irrationaly stupid and disliked and eventually killed off. I say seemingly above because the author does use foreshadowing to hint at some of the plot devices that kill off those characters and some of the plot direction. By the chapter I reached after the author just killed off a majority of the side characters and sub-romantic interests, I no longer trust that the author would be able to deliver a satisfactory ending let alone an enjoyable journey. There is very little payoff on any of the relationships the MC has or seems to develop, so I would commend anyone who could finish the book but I for one find it too painful to continue on. (Which also means I will not read the authors other works since according to their comments, this is the type of style they enjoy writing with.) For anyone who bothered to read all the way through this review, I wouldn't suggest reading the story unless you have a lot of patience and someone who doesn't mind dropping a book at any point where it gets too frustrating.
Revelar spoiler So far I am loving this series it's great and enjoyable for someone like me who just want to find a book perfect for casual reading. The storyline is great, characters are amazing and hilarious. All in all it was and still is a good read
I want to ask when will MCs face completely recover. I don't want MC to stay ugly 😩😔
Revelar spoiler Don't enjoy seeing a warm hearted mc go through life without any thought for himself or what he wants in his future, villainess gets one or all male leads while mc seems like he'll be her butler until she goes and fulfills her life having kids and he'll just grow old and die 'happy' cause he gets to watch someone else be happy, i dont really see any other result from this..yep toooootally want to read that
I just want to say: "With each chapter you read you feel like the plot thickens." I'm at chapter 200s when writing this and boy there is so much mystery stuff going on. I honestly can't tell much about the whole world because the story still(I'm at chapter 208) takes place in the academy. I can't say much about character design but after reading this much they honestly creep me out sometimes. This story has quite a bit of focus on the feeling of OBSESSION(yes capital letters because daym you'll know when you read this story)
I had a lot of hope for this novel but unfortunately, it has really fallen below my expectations. My problems are similar to other peoples but truthfully, I wouldn't even mind a simp mc or dense mc. honestly, it would probably be an improvement. My main problem is how toxic their relationship is. it starts off as a typical well written Isekai romcom between the mc and the villainess he wants to protect. A few dozen chapters in though, it devolves into two borderline psychopaths locked in a toxic codependency that is uncomfortable to read about. The main character and heroine repeatedly have inner monologues about how little everything else matters and how they don't care about anyone but each other. Heroine at one point almost kills a girl for trying to talk to the mc and the mc stops her. Then thanks her for holding back (she didn't, he held her back.) And afterwards, tries to shift the blame and punishment to himself. The story basically becomes a few paragraphs of fluffy rom com interactions between mc and heroine followed by a few paragraphs of one of them being deplorable to random other characters and the other accepting or justifying it. Maybe it gets better but I'd rather leave it up to the imagination than continue to suffer through their toxic and hard to read interactions. the author certainly has talent but the story just isn't there.
At first I liked it, the first chapters were very entertaining. But, the protagonist is too dense (to the extreme) and that doesn't change him at all and the worst thing when he finally confesses to the villain, she practically becomes a secondary character (he rarely appears in the story if it weren't for the fact that the MC cares about her I would say she is an extra). Also, it is too frustrating to see that the MC makes the same mistakes, for this reason I think that the MC is not dense but stupid or autistic. (Use translator)
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I'm currently abt 180 chapters in and i would just like to ask when there is some actual romantic progress for the mc cuz if its a situation where he is eternally dense then it stops being funny and starts being annoying and i'm also seeing alot of simp this and simp that but i just don't get all the harsh words.
Can someone explain how this novel is and whether it is recommended to be read. I want to know whether there’s harem, any racist stuff, and superior complex like thinking that their are above everyone and his race is superior whiles others are straight up monkeys in human skin
Writing quality is goods, updates seem stable, story progression is a bit slow, character designs are good and so is the world background. Unfortunately I dropped after around 120 chapters since I don't it because the mc gets humiliated way too much and it's just brushed over, though it fits within the narrative so it isn't bad writing, it just becomes too frustrating to continue reading.
The novel doesn't deserve 5 stars but it's undervalued at the moment There could be more explanation about the white haired girl with the power of time I didn't understand because you explained some parts without going into details. ı like the novel especially the girl who is the main character in the otome is not like the typical story which is bad
he is basically a servant and he is reincarnation but he is happy as a slave I don't get it you know future but my master this my master that
Read this review that I took a picture of. This is the worst book that I have laid my eyes upon im starting to think that a otuku that couldn’t get a girlfriend made this. I mean this from the bottom of my heart because this is probably the second review I wrote after reading probably hundreds of novels I could I would give the character design a negative if I could
I think this novel is great, it's a really nice romance with some unique twists added. My boy is just trying to protect his girl, but he still remains faithful to his attendant nature. I would recommend this to people who are looking for a slower romance, with some action.
Writing Quality - 4/5 Story Development - 2/5 Character Design - 1/5 [for MC] Updating Stability - 5/5 WB - 3/5 I thought that you would improvise on MC's thinking but no. I quit after 107 chapters.... Sorry, But not my cup of tea.
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I'm following the story more for the plot itself, because the protagonist is definitely a child in an adult body with all this obsession with concluding that everything will continue as in the game, instead of accepting that there are unpredictable constants in the real world. Anyway, I haven't seen any big developments in Zoemi yet, other than her desire to give Miriette her happy ending, but I know it will come soon, I hope a very good story, accompanied by an even better writing too 7/10
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Superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb superb. Ther is nothing more I can say about it.
love the novel the only I hate is that mc is kinda dense? I don't know how to say it... Anyway good novel ()()()()()()()()()((()()()()()()()
I'm really loving this novel, the authors righting style is unique and I love how the characters were developed currently at chap 90 and ngl this is another one of the few novels I really like since I hardly comment but keep up the good work😁