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ABSOLUTELY STELLAR NOVEL! everything jn this novel just screams refreshing in the oversaturated cultivation genre. i absolutely love it when MCs can overcome stupendous odds by the slightest margins without obvious plot armor and this novel did a good job of it. the jokes are pretty funny and refreshing. cultivation system is awesome and it can contend with the best of japanese and korean novel's cultivation systems. and the upload frequency and quality is mind boggling. the writer can pump out a lot of originality with a frightening rate. not to mention that the novel has minimal plot holes, and the characters are pretty fleshed out. the only gripe i have is the unrealised potential in the novel. it became obvious that the writer's vision for this novel is extremely vast and would most likely tire out the writer therefore we would eventually see a downgrade in the quality. but i hoped that the author can push on, and i wish that more people would discover this novel and support the author.
One of my favourite reads on WN though I feel like the name of the novel needs to be abbreviated or something (although the name was also the only reason I picked this book up in the first place hahaha). The story is really interesting and I think that the author really shows that he has thought and planned out the plot and direction of the story far in advance. For me, the first part of the story started off pretty slow and I only really got hooked later on as I continued reading. Although this was one of the first web novels that I read, after reading quite a few more, it still stands out as being one that has a strong plot and good world building where the authors forethought really shows. Although I was originally quite concerned that because of Skullius’ circumstances, the story would be unable to allow for any development of side characters I am very glad about the introduction of YuYui and later occurrences in the story that change this otherwise I think this element would have very significantly hindered the quality of the story (at the same time, it takes quite a while before this actually occurs and although the apostles are interesting I didn’t feel like they would be enough to replace the benefit of fleshing out all other side characters). I really enjoy the story and I am very intrigued in the direction it will head towards. I can tell that the author has been introducing pieces to the board all to start connecting them all together. Now to discuss areas of improvement that I think would really help the novel. I think there are 3 core areas of improvement for the story: the grammar, the consistency of the humour and the power creep. While two of them are quite minor, I am personally finding one of them becoming more and more of an issue. Regarding the grammar, although the writing quality such as the vocabulary, sentence and paragraph structure or the writing is good, the proofreading is what I found to be lacking for a lot of the first few hundred chapters and still occasionally on the more recent ones. I would really recommend the author just run the finished chapters through some spell checker like Grammarly to correct any accidental mistakes. When I was reading through many of the earlier chapters I found grammatical issues or sentence structure issues that were very minor but served to blemish the quality of the writing. With how nicely written your chapters are, taking that extra step to add that final bit of polish to your writing would really step it to the next level with minimal effort. I can still recall a time where a typo really put me out of the moment when describing the destruction of a city (which shall not be named to avoid spoilers) and reading something along the lines of “three thirds” of it being destroyed. Although it was pretty apparent as to what you meant, small things like that or just typos or repeated sentences reduce the writing quality when the quality is already really good and only diminished by these small but easy to correct mistakes. Next, although not too big of an issue, I personally felt like the degree of humour isn’t really consistently felt in the writing. While the comedic element of the story was never an integral part of the experience for me, I just wanted to point out that the funnier moments don’t feel that consistently spaced out. Although, I understand that this is partially due to their being a heavier focus on the plot. For example, the novel starts with quite a bit of focus on the comedic aspect but we see it drop off quite a bit maybe 100 chapters in, another example would be YuYui where things are more comedic whenever she is involved but suddenly quite lacking when she is gone. Once again, I don’t think this is too big of an issue but I just wanted point that out. I get that a lot of the times it would be pretty hard to make certain scenarios where the plot is developing comedic and honestly, after so many chapters have already been written, a shift towards that would no longer be in the spirit of the story I think. Personally, if you have the time, I would totally recommend giving “A Will Eternal” a read. This was the first webnovel I ever read and it’s a translated Chinese web novel with cultivation themes and although it has its own share of problems (especially during the obvious big changing moment in the story) it is honestly the funniest book I’ve read and is great example of a book that manages to maintain its humour throughout the entire story even in situations you wouldn’t think would be funny or despite being a scenario critical for plot development. I think it would be a really good reference if you were to ever write a new series that was more focused on the comedic element of the story. Finally, on the most critical area of the story that I think could see the most improvement on, the power creep. Although I would say that for the first few hundred chapters this was not a big issue and I was able to easily follow along, I feel that ever since the recent chapters (after Skullius went through a ’perspective’ changing moment hahaha), I have begun having a lot more difficulty following exactly how strong Skullius and other characters are. While I know that a lot of WN series like to use UI systems that provide numerical values to stats and clearly illustrate abilities, it sort of becomes a big problem as characters actuslly start becoming powerful. More recently, I feel like both the attribute statistics as well as the number of abilities themselves have sort of skyrocketed and become pretty hard to follow. I almost feel as if I need to start screenshotting or taking down notes of the most up to date character stats because I literally cannot recall these numbers or find them again to be able to actually compare how one characters fares to another. At this point, it feels like the stats are actually making it harder for me to understand how strong characters actually are. Posting periodic chapters that are clearly named and easy to reference that just dump up to date stats is probably the only thing I can think of that would immediately help reduce this problem. Otherwise, implementing a core strength value would be pretty helpful such as a single stat that generalises someone’s power outside of their rank could also be really helpful. An example of this would be “Vile Evil Hides Under the Veil” totally different type of story that honestly has a really bad start but uses that stat summary method by implementing something called BP (battle power or something?) that generalises their strength based off their other values making it way easier to compare stats without having to deal with all those numbers. Furthermore, aside from this whole stat issue, I feel like the frequency in which Skullius is jumping in power seems to be rising. This also makes it quite a bit harder to follow because it feels like I have to re-remember everything he can do again. I think it would be a lot easier to follow if Skullius’ improvements were more gradually introduced and also at a slower frequency, introducing more and more new powers (while interesting and opening more avenues for combat) also makes things a lot harder to follow as even merging abilities together means I have to remember he has a new ability. I think introducing a smaller number but very flexible abilities might be the solution since you don’t have to keep updating them while still allowing characters to use them for many purposes and simplifying the whole thing. I.e something like “Shadow Slave” where Sunny also gets these sudden introductions of new abilities but at the same time it occurs rarely and doesn’t feel too overwhelming as he doesn’t have that many in total. Overall, Bro I’m Not and Undead is a really good book with a well fleshed out world and plot as well as good writing that I’m glad I managed to stumble upon and I look forward to continue following as it develops. However, I think a critical issue that has begun to emerge and needs to be solved is the power creep that is beginning to really make the story harder to follow. I think the story is beginning to build up to something really big and complex plot wise so simplifying the whole subject regarding the abilities and powers of the characters would be seriously beneficial in preventing any overload of info. Keep up the good work! 👍
loving it so far, really enjoyed the fact that the author several side characters their own chapters really helps enjoy the story more
Authors idea for story is good. Presentation was also good till what I read and that's not too far. But I just could not digest Mcs progression/evolution. So sorry its not my story. Too many Sung jin woo type of novels are going on.
Great novel. This novel is a great example of "in search of gold I found diamond".Seriously read it!!!.
I have read till chapter 540 and will still keep on reading this masterpiece of a novel. I really love how the author keeps things like rewarding stuff and the punishments and consequences of taking a path or road. Overall the action is great and the side characters have a great depth to them although they can still use some work. I would recommend anyone else to read this novel as its one of the hidden gems here. And i would love that the author completes his work and finishes it till end and not rush it. P.S: The pace has been great but a little faster wont bean issue as the power level stages are not that high from what ive seen so far into the story.
Now that there are no chapters, I think I have enough time to provide a review. As for the novel in general, I (from my purely personal opinion) classify it among the top 3 novels I have read (and believe me, I have read a lot) and it has the potential to compete for the title of best one if the challenge was not so unstable. One thing I want to comment on is the speed of events within the world due to the first and second death factors , but it is implicitly illogical for a character like Riblox, and Skoleus at some point. Other than that, I am grateful to you for writing this masterpiece. I'm behind you, just continue.
this is like the third review I've made on this novel, so trust me on being accurate. first off, trust me when I say that you will be getting chapters every 1 to 3 days, and considering the overall quality of this book, it's actually amazing. the world building is also amazing, from different churches and organizations being shown outside of the main protagonist's own POV, so you actually get to see the world itself. then there is character development... do I need to tell you more than the fact that a literal boar became a humanoid skeleton fighting off creatures while telling them ' stop right there for the crime of sexual harassment' (I'm wheezing as I'm making this.) and of course the overall riding quality is actually amazing. you might notice that the book is sprinkled with a bunch of flowery words, but not too much so it isn't an overabundance. now the main problem you might notice with this book is the overall power of the protagonist— until raider until later chapters. he isn't necessarily that strong when it comes to the overall progression of the world. but oh, does that change... (spoiler alert : the MC is currently going through a transformation that even literal divinities fear). along with that, the power system is straight up peak. it takes the normal ' ooga booga mana' and does quite amazing things with it, overall amazing concept. So yeah : basically just read. you will get addicted. I can't really say anything about the character designs since... it's my imagination.
Revelar spoiler
Not much to say other then this is a great story especially if your into system and nana based systems. It also throws in some other power concepts to really amp the story later on. It also helps that the chapter release is good. It’s nice not to have to wait for them
nah bro u are an undead tags:eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I'm in the 1, 200-ish chapters so Believe me when I say that this book is peak fiction. And before you even say anything about 'The MC isn't strong enough!', Long as you read enough you can actually see that there's a difference (All of the previous Commons staining this issue have been heard), other than that you can just read my other review and know what I actually think about this novel, so yea. have a great day.
"If you love epic tales that blend science and fantasy, 'E=MC²: The Etherium Equation' is a must-read. Prepare for an unforgettable adventure!"
Lemme just say that the synopsis is the funniest thing that I’ve seen all day, of course I’m gonna read it. I just want to write this before reading, Pahaha I’m excited good job author 💀👏🤣🤣🤣🤣
Started off good but went downhill for me after 20ch. Too many things that dont make sence, one of the main reasons is his ability to raise dead. they can turn on the MC and dont have to listen to MC's orders. others things like lucky charm monsters, well im dropping this
Arjuun....you MONSTER! not only is this book terrifyingly good, but It doesn't have the action tag....so...I CANT USE MY FP'S! ( really though you should read the novel! )
Love the story, love everything, my only critic point right now ( chapter 122) skullius gets pretty often thrown around because he is so weak, well it will probably fix itself in the future.
This is a breath of fresh air. I love it. Normally I'm over critical about grammar, but I think the story does a great job. I never expected to enjoy this that much. I laughed so hard at some of the sayings the undead used. there were also some pretty unexpected plot twists. Nice job!!
Big Fan,but why is it from 750-900 without Skullius.Why does He sleep for live 150 chapters?I have been skipping through the chapterd to find the point where He wakes up
havent read it yet because before i start reading, i always check on the reviews, especially the low star ones. and i like the author for being so transparent. he liked several low stars review and replied each of them if not all. apparently, the complains were problems that i can deal with or are no problem at all, such as long arcs and many side stories. i can deal with them as long as they are on a reasonable scale; i am even a fun of one such story, the lord of the mysteries. anyways, there were no unbearable problems that are the results of an unskilled author such as stupidly written plots, unbearable clichés, or a brain-dead mc.
This is hands down the most addicting novel I’ve read so far, and I have read every popular novel there is. The story starts off wonderful, and although it’s slow down for a lot of story building and character building If you stick with this novel you are bound to fall in love with it! This is one story I’m scared to see ending anytime soon.
Amazing through and through. It perfectly combines suble jabs at humor with amazing worldbuilding and power scaling. Truly amazing. One small inhibition/funny detail though, I was using the ai voice reader that webnovel offers, and the “Koten Machi” was read as “Cotton Mochi.” If this was intentional, props to you author, but if not, I genuinely thought it was Skullius’s bad naming sense for a good few chapters.
Revelar spoiler My favorite novel of all time and I have ready hundreds of novels to completion! I can stop thinking about this novel through the day I’m looking forward to new chapters !!!!
Bro, Everything is excellent but a small doubt...As of now from Book-1 we can observe that this universe is controlled (major powers in this verse) are mainly undead(undeath/null/voids)? But, will there be no major powers w.r.t mages/other species like dragons/some other power systems with live people or is universe is filled with dead socketholes?
I've only read the description, and all I can say is this : Bro, you're an undead. Undead = Body No Life. Living Being = Body Life
( I hope no one including the author is offended by my review ) - I just want to say this but most of the comments here who would say the story is somewhat bad are three star reviews ( 3/5 ) which is literally the lowest I have ever seen a review on this novel.... I think that explains enough how good this book actually is. although the main character power scaling is one of the main reasons most people don't like the book it is actually clearly explained in the prologue chapters that the book would be slow although not necessarily the main character be weak but in the current chapters he isn't necessarily that week at all. matter of fact I made a previous review stating this out and the author actually commented on it saying that he would try to make it up and that was over 3 months ago. I also think that the power system despite following the normal magic system is actually very diverse and unique including Aura, classes, the stages and everything else as well. although I wouldn't necessarily suggest reading this book if you don't like the main character not necessarily getting enough screen time at points and arcs however if you're interested in the side characters then this is the get to go book. Plus it almost seems like that every action has been planned out however at some points and time's arcs or explanations might get a little bit complex so I would just suggest skipping those.
This is good thanks for the novel author I hope you would have images for the characters, items or places.
I am on chapter 200 now and I am really enjoying this novel so far! It has the typical fantasy and action elements but my favorite part is the casual comedy. Thumbs up for author Bro 👍
good novel enjoyed it a lot, the protagonist has been nerfed a bit everything else is good👍👍
It's the humor for me. So unique that I just hooked from the beginning. Hahaha just thinking about it makes me feel crazy. Love your works author and will continue the support.
a very good story pros good writing quality good character design original story and not repetitive cons confusing power systembad world backgroundvery slow paced ( I don't mind it, tho but some times it gets very boring)and we need skullius !!!! bro enough with bright storm
i don't review Novels much but for this one I have to the story is amazing you'll get hooked on the first couple of chapters with the awesome plot and hilarious story with plenty of world building and character development I would 100% recommend reading
ABSOLUTELY STELLAR NOVEL! everything jn this novel just screams refreshing in the oversaturated cultivation genre. i absolutely love it when MCs can overcome stupendous odds by the slightest margins without obvious plot armor and this novel did a good job of it. the jokes are pretty funny and refreshing. cultivation system is awesome and it can contend with the best of japanese and korean novel's cultivation systems. and the upload frequency and quality is mind boggling. the writer can pump out a lot of originality with a frightening rate. not to mention that the novel has minimal plot holes, and the characters are pretty fleshed out. the only gripe i have is the unrealised potential in the novel. it became obvious that the writer's vision for this novel is extremely vast and would most likely tire out the writer therefore we would eventually see a downgrade in the quality. but i hoped that the author can push on, and i wish that more people would discover this novel and support the author.
One of my favourite reads on WN though I feel like the name of the novel needs to be abbreviated or something (although the name was also the only reason I picked this book up in the first place hahaha). The story is really interesting and I think that the author really shows that he has thought and planned out the plot and direction of the story far in advance. For me, the first part of the story started off pretty slow and I only really got hooked later on as I continued reading. Although this was one of the first web novels that I read, after reading quite a few more, it still stands out as being one that has a strong plot and good world building where the authors forethought really shows. Although I was originally quite concerned that because of Skullius’ circumstances, the story would be unable to allow for any development of side characters I am very glad about the introduction of YuYui and later occurrences in the story that change this otherwise I think this element would have very significantly hindered the quality of the story (at the same time, it takes quite a while before this actually occurs and although the apostles are interesting I didn’t feel like they would be enough to replace the benefit of fleshing out all other side characters). I really enjoy the story and I am very intrigued in the direction it will head towards. I can tell that the author has been introducing pieces to the board all to start connecting them all together. Now to discuss areas of improvement that I think would really help the novel. I think there are 3 core areas of improvement for the story: the grammar, the consistency of the humour and the power creep. While two of them are quite minor, I am personally finding one of them becoming more and more of an issue. Regarding the grammar, although the writing quality such as the vocabulary, sentence and paragraph structure or the writing is good, the proofreading is what I found to be lacking for a lot of the first few hundred chapters and still occasionally on the more recent ones. I would really recommend the author just run the finished chapters through some spell checker like Grammarly to correct any accidental mistakes. When I was reading through many of the earlier chapters I found grammatical issues or sentence structure issues that were very minor but served to blemish the quality of the writing. With how nicely written your chapters are, taking that extra step to add that final bit of polish to your writing would really step it to the next level with minimal effort. I can still recall a time where a typo really put me out of the moment when describing the destruction of a city (which shall not be named to avoid spoilers) and reading something along the lines of “three thirds” of it being destroyed. Although it was pretty apparent as to what you meant, small things like that or just typos or repeated sentences reduce the writing quality when the quality is already really good and only diminished by these small but easy to correct mistakes. Next, although not too big of an issue, I personally felt like the degree of humour isn’t really consistently felt in the writing. While the comedic element of the story was never an integral part of the experience for me, I just wanted to point out that the funnier moments don’t feel that consistently spaced out. Although, I understand that this is partially due to their being a heavier focus on the plot. For example, the novel starts with quite a bit of focus on the comedic aspect but we see it drop off quite a bit maybe 100 chapters in, another example would be YuYui where things are more comedic whenever she is involved but suddenly quite lacking when she is gone. Once again, I don’t think this is too big of an issue but I just wanted point that out. I get that a lot of the times it would be pretty hard to make certain scenarios where the plot is developing comedic and honestly, after so many chapters have already been written, a shift towards that would no longer be in the spirit of the story I think. Personally, if you have the time, I would totally recommend giving “A Will Eternal” a read. This was the first webnovel I ever read and it’s a translated Chinese web novel with cultivation themes and although it has its own share of problems (especially during the obvious big changing moment in the story) it is honestly the funniest book I’ve read and is great example of a book that manages to maintain its humour throughout the entire story even in situations you wouldn’t think would be funny or despite being a scenario critical for plot development. I think it would be a really good reference if you were to ever write a new series that was more focused on the comedic element of the story. Finally, on the most critical area of the story that I think could see the most improvement on, the power creep. Although I would say that for the first few hundred chapters this was not a big issue and I was able to easily follow along, I feel that ever since the recent chapters (after Skullius went through a ’perspective’ changing moment hahaha), I have begun having a lot more difficulty following exactly how strong Skullius and other characters are. While I know that a lot of WN series like to use UI systems that provide numerical values to stats and clearly illustrate abilities, it sort of becomes a big problem as characters actuslly start becoming powerful. More recently, I feel like both the attribute statistics as well as the number of abilities themselves have sort of skyrocketed and become pretty hard to follow. I almost feel as if I need to start screenshotting or taking down notes of the most up to date character stats because I literally cannot recall these numbers or find them again to be able to actually compare how one characters fares to another. At this point, it feels like the stats are actually making it harder for me to understand how strong characters actually are. Posting periodic chapters that are clearly named and easy to reference that just dump up to date stats is probably the only thing I can think of that would immediately help reduce this problem. Otherwise, implementing a core strength value would be pretty helpful such as a single stat that generalises someone’s power outside of their rank could also be really helpful. An example of this would be “Vile Evil Hides Under the Veil” totally different type of story that honestly has a really bad start but uses that stat summary method by implementing something called BP (battle power or something?) that generalises their strength based off their other values making it way easier to compare stats without having to deal with all those numbers. Furthermore, aside from this whole stat issue, I feel like the frequency in which Skullius is jumping in power seems to be rising. This also makes it quite a bit harder to follow because it feels like I have to re-remember everything he can do again. I think it would be a lot easier to follow if Skullius’ improvements were more gradually introduced and also at a slower frequency, introducing more and more new powers (while interesting and opening more avenues for combat) also makes things a lot harder to follow as even merging abilities together means I have to remember he has a new ability. I think introducing a smaller number but very flexible abilities might be the solution since you don’t have to keep updating them while still allowing characters to use them for many purposes and simplifying the whole thing. I.e something like “Shadow Slave” where Sunny also gets these sudden introductions of new abilities but at the same time it occurs rarely and doesn’t feel too overwhelming as he doesn’t have that many in total. Overall, Bro I’m Not and Undead is a really good book with a well fleshed out world and plot as well as good writing that I’m glad I managed to stumble upon and I look forward to continue following as it develops. However, I think a critical issue that has begun to emerge and needs to be solved is the power creep that is beginning to really make the story harder to follow. I think the story is beginning to build up to something really big and complex plot wise so simplifying the whole subject regarding the abilities and powers of the characters would be seriously beneficial in preventing any overload of info. Keep up the good work! 👍
loving it so far, really enjoyed the fact that the author several side characters their own chapters really helps enjoy the story more
Authors idea for story is good. Presentation was also good till what I read and that's not too far. But I just could not digest Mcs progression/evolution. So sorry its not my story. Too many Sung jin woo type of novels are going on.
Great novel. This novel is a great example of "in search of gold I found diamond".Seriously read it!!!.
I have read till chapter 540 and will still keep on reading this masterpiece of a novel. I really love how the author keeps things like rewarding stuff and the punishments and consequences of taking a path or road. Overall the action is great and the side characters have a great depth to them although they can still use some work. I would recommend anyone else to read this novel as its one of the hidden gems here. And i would love that the author completes his work and finishes it till end and not rush it. P.S: The pace has been great but a little faster wont bean issue as the power level stages are not that high from what ive seen so far into the story.
Now that there are no chapters, I think I have enough time to provide a review. As for the novel in general, I (from my purely personal opinion) classify it among the top 3 novels I have read (and believe me, I have read a lot) and it has the potential to compete for the title of best one if the challenge was not so unstable. One thing I want to comment on is the speed of events within the world due to the first and second death factors , but it is implicitly illogical for a character like Riblox, and Skoleus at some point. Other than that, I am grateful to you for writing this masterpiece. I'm behind you, just continue.
this is like the third review I've made on this novel, so trust me on being accurate. first off, trust me when I say that you will be getting chapters every 1 to 3 days, and considering the overall quality of this book, it's actually amazing. the world building is also amazing, from different churches and organizations being shown outside of the main protagonist's own POV, so you actually get to see the world itself. then there is character development... do I need to tell you more than the fact that a literal boar became a humanoid skeleton fighting off creatures while telling them ' stop right there for the crime of sexual harassment' (I'm wheezing as I'm making this.) and of course the overall riding quality is actually amazing. you might notice that the book is sprinkled with a bunch of flowery words, but not too much so it isn't an overabundance. now the main problem you might notice with this book is the overall power of the protagonist— until raider until later chapters. he isn't necessarily that strong when it comes to the overall progression of the world. but oh, does that change... (spoiler alert : the MC is currently going through a transformation that even literal divinities fear). along with that, the power system is straight up peak. it takes the normal ' ooga booga mana' and does quite amazing things with it, overall amazing concept. So yeah : basically just read. you will get addicted. I can't really say anything about the character designs since... it's my imagination.
Revelar spoiler Not much to say other then this is a great story especially if your into system and nana based systems. It also throws in some other power concepts to really amp the story later on. It also helps that the chapter release is good. It’s nice not to have to wait for them
nah bro u are an undead tags:eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I'm in the 1, 200-ish chapters so Believe me when I say that this book is peak fiction. And before you even say anything about 'The MC isn't strong enough!', Long as you read enough you can actually see that there's a difference (All of the previous Commons staining this issue have been heard), other than that you can just read my other review and know what I actually think about this novel, so yea. have a great day.
"If you love epic tales that blend science and fantasy, 'E=MC²: The Etherium Equation' is a must-read. Prepare for an unforgettable adventure!"
Lemme just say that the synopsis is the funniest thing that I’ve seen all day, of course I’m gonna read it. I just want to write this before reading, Pahaha I’m excited good job author 💀👏🤣🤣🤣🤣
Started off good but went downhill for me after 20ch. Too many things that dont make sence, one of the main reasons is his ability to raise dead. they can turn on the MC and dont have to listen to MC's orders. others things like lucky charm monsters, well im dropping this
Arjuun....you MONSTER! not only is this book terrifyingly good, but It doesn't have the action tag....so...I CANT USE MY FP'S! ( really though you should read the novel! )
Love the story, love everything, my only critic point right now ( chapter 122) skullius gets pretty often thrown around because he is so weak, well it will probably fix itself in the future.
This is a breath of fresh air. I love it. Normally I'm over critical about grammar, but I think the story does a great job. I never expected to enjoy this that much. I laughed so hard at some of the sayings the undead used. there were also some pretty unexpected plot twists. Nice job!!
Big Fan,but why is it from 750-900 without Skullius.Why does He sleep for live 150 chapters?I have been skipping through the chapterd to find the point where He wakes up
havent read it yet because before i start reading, i always check on the reviews, especially the low star ones. and i like the author for being so transparent. he liked several low stars review and replied each of them if not all. apparently, the complains were problems that i can deal with or are no problem at all, such as long arcs and many side stories. i can deal with them as long as they are on a reasonable scale; i am even a fun of one such story, the lord of the mysteries. anyways, there were no unbearable problems that are the results of an unskilled author such as stupidly written plots, unbearable clichés, or a brain-dead mc.
This is hands down the most addicting novel I’ve read so far, and I have read every popular novel there is. The story starts off wonderful, and although it’s slow down for a lot of story building and character building If you stick with this novel you are bound to fall in love with it! This is one story I’m scared to see ending anytime soon.
Amazing through and through. It perfectly combines suble jabs at humor with amazing worldbuilding and power scaling. Truly amazing. One small inhibition/funny detail though, I was using the ai voice reader that webnovel offers, and the “Koten Machi” was read as “Cotton Mochi.” If this was intentional, props to you author, but if not, I genuinely thought it was Skullius’s bad naming sense for a good few chapters.
Revelar spoiler My favorite novel of all time and I have ready hundreds of novels to completion! I can stop thinking about this novel through the day I’m looking forward to new chapters !!!!
Bro, Everything is excellent but a small doubt...As of now from Book-1 we can observe that this universe is controlled (major powers in this verse) are mainly undead(undeath/null/voids)? But, will there be no major powers w.r.t mages/other species like dragons/some other power systems with live people or is universe is filled with dead socketholes?
I've only read the description, and all I can say is this : Bro, you're an undead. Undead = Body No Life. Living Being = Body Life
( I hope no one including the author is offended by my review ) - I just want to say this but most of the comments here who would say the story is somewhat bad are three star reviews ( 3/5 ) which is literally the lowest I have ever seen a review on this novel.... I think that explains enough how good this book actually is. although the main character power scaling is one of the main reasons most people don't like the book it is actually clearly explained in the prologue chapters that the book would be slow although not necessarily the main character be weak but in the current chapters he isn't necessarily that week at all. matter of fact I made a previous review stating this out and the author actually commented on it saying that he would try to make it up and that was over 3 months ago. I also think that the power system despite following the normal magic system is actually very diverse and unique including Aura, classes, the stages and everything else as well. although I wouldn't necessarily suggest reading this book if you don't like the main character not necessarily getting enough screen time at points and arcs however if you're interested in the side characters then this is the get to go book. Plus it almost seems like that every action has been planned out however at some points and time's arcs or explanations might get a little bit complex so I would just suggest skipping those.
This is good thanks for the novel author I hope you would have images for the characters, items or places.
I am on chapter 200 now and I am really enjoying this novel so far! It has the typical fantasy and action elements but my favorite part is the casual comedy. Thumbs up for author Bro 👍
good novel enjoyed it a lot, the protagonist has been nerfed a bit everything else is good👍👍
It's the humor for me. So unique that I just hooked from the beginning. Hahaha just thinking about it makes me feel crazy. Love your works author and will continue the support.
a very good story pros good writing quality good character design original story and not repetitive cons confusing power systembad world backgroundvery slow paced ( I don't mind it, tho but some times it gets very boring)and we need skullius !!!! bro enough with bright storm
i don't review Novels much but for this one I have to the story is amazing you'll get hooked on the first couple of chapters with the awesome plot and hilarious story with plenty of world building and character development I would 100% recommend reading