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MC in this novel is the stupidest of all the novels I have read. I don't know why author's always opt "low key" genre these days.
DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME AND READ THIS STORY. The author stopped writing at a cliffhanger not too far into the story and promised the continuation in another book but there's nothing even after more than half a year. Don't waste your time and money.
MC sucks waste of time MC is so it's already been 200 chapter and MC is still so weak weak weak weak MC weak
The grammar isn't the worst but there's a lot of foul language and the rhythm doesn't feel smooth. I don't like the world background not the characters either.
I really like this book and I think you will enjoy but I hated when the main character is not the most handsome it get me 😡 mad. The story is good your will like it. I have a question for the author the is the name of the next book. Plz🥹🥹🥹
I thought people were exaggerating in their comments but what's worse is the truth. MC acts very stupid for anyone who has lived in the cultivation world. Giving a gift to your brother (who wants to kill him), etc. Besides, 90% of the writing is not from the MC's vision.
So here I was enjoying this book when all of a sudden the author ended it on the most annoying cliffhanger ever! However it is a good read so I encourage people to read it and bully author-Chan to hurry up and write more. For the readers sanity.....(and author-chans safety). Before he gets kidnapped and forced to write more
Weirdly funny and op mc love the bookOk review ends here__________To the legendary human who is still reading __GO AND STUDY YOU LAZY BM
I wanted to say something memorial since after writing for nearly 2 years I've officially finished Book One. But I really couldn't find the words I was looking for. So I'll just say thank you to everyone who completed this sub-par book of mine, your true MEGACHAD. And don't forget to check out, 'The Growth of a Titan' in my profile[img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is an awesome book, with an enticing story plot. Don't mind any grammatical errors you find, and just enjoy the reading. You'll get hooked before you know it, and the money you spend would be worth it. Can't wait for Book 2💯
Ack i got baited again by those 5 stars reviews,come on dont just put fake 5 stars reviews like that,what a waste of time
I'm at chapter 154 and so far the book has been an enjoyable read. I can't speak much of the updating stability since I am a new reader to this book. But so far, it has been lovely for me.
Can someone tell me when the Mc stops acting low key. I don't mind the "hiding you strength" cliché but I dislike it when it's the annoying type where they hide everything they have and act like they are trash. He literally hid so much of his strength(99.99%) that I'm starting to find it difficult how it's going to be revealed(if that happens). Well I'm only going to stop reading this once I get to 300 chapters and he is still seen as a weakling so I guess this is just a rant and not a review
I have not gotten very far, but this is a rater interesting novel. I am excited to see how it develops
for the first 20 chapters it's basically, "blah, blah,blah". The story keeps on telling instead of showing. Because of that the mc is portrayed as an angst teenager, think typical anime protag. The situation is too familiar like ATG or TDG and it's not even doing a good job of it. everything seems contrived, you can actually see the author putting the situations on the mc, whereas others would try to mask it. The writing quality is good though, so it's good for beginner readers as an intro to cultivation novels. I really wanted to spend money on it but everything seems like its a mashup of the tropes of cultivation novels. ED, ATG, TDG, CD, etc, its a mix of their character traits which makes the mc unlikeable, until now im still confused on how I should view him. Its like "trying too hard" where the story became an awkward pacing, especially since the author likes telling instead of showing. Don't get me wrong, if I was the beginner reader that I was back then, I would have consumed this so fast but as you go through many novels you actually get very picky with stories you want to spend time with. so go ahead read it, at least you won't get brain mush trying to make sense of what the author wrote. Someone comment if i get it wrong somewhere down the line. but i probably wont see it.
someone please tell me this novel has only romance and no harem (it's fine if there is none)
great book so far, has drawn me into the world and characters. I love the story and can't wait to see where it goes!
its a well flowing stories been having more fun reading the later parts of the story the different types of Qi and the usage of them is what really keeps me hooked
Couldn't read more than 20 chapters!1) the author conveys the talent of ms is a cliche 2) problems are constantly being created out of the blue, this is a cliche of Chinese novels I can't stand 3) this is probably the most important thing why so much mash up one event for half a chapter you have to skip almost half a chapter
got my 5 stars for everything except writing quality 4s, there were times that I cant understand and had to reread it again, or Im just not doing well yesterday. Psss I hope someone with good heart, uploaded the lock chaps on internet....kekekeke. Sorry author 😂 coz its too good to wait hoard fp
As much i love this novel I’m going to drop it Author, honestly yang su’s character gets annoying as the chapters progresses and i dislike him at this point and constantly trying to give yang su the unnecessary cultivation protagonist plot while make the other non existent is just wrong it feels like you’re forcing us to have interest in him which is just not the move honestly everytime he gets mentioned or he shows up i just feel annoyed by him Secondly, mcs makes weird decisions that makes me question him but it’s all for character development i guess Honestly the main reason I’m dropping this is yang su and his constant dramas and the overall plot Somethings missing in the plot that makes it feel incomplete and hard to be invested in I’m really sorry for dropping this book but i just can’t wrap my head around some things happening in the novel especially yang su Top tier providence made the side characters more interesting because of their story and journey not because they were constantly shoved in front of our face to like them.
This is LucifurMorningstar on his alternate author acct. Reviewing his favorite cultivation webnovel at the moment. Something in particular that I like about this novel is how Li Shen builds his crew/faction like a combination of Nick Fury and Dom Torretto. Also these characters are not simply plot devices but organically have a role on the team. + 1 powerstone!!! p.s. If you could give my new webnovel, Rebirth of the Greatest Sorcerer , a chapter or two read and drop a review, it would be much appreciated.
Revelar spoiler
An excellent breath of fresh air in the xianxia cultivation webnovel space. For future webnovelists this is how you write a coming of age story in a cultivation setting. Li Xi Shen is an extremely lovable protag who u root for through all his trials and tribulations. The supporting characters all have endearing traits and interesting backstories. The villains will repulse you but their motivations are not merely black and white. The moral questions are tackled bbn with a maturity seldom seen on this platform. 10/10 Bravo TSETTH, Bravo. When my next two monthly golden tickets come in they are going to u.
something new in this book , even though qi cultivation is not new the author goes in different points from other novel that focuses on qi , mc is smart and has logical thinking, good story progress
‼️‼️This is Book 1- Meaning it ends with a Cliffhanger/open ending. (book2 or continuation is yet to be seen)‼️‼️ A bit decent to say the least. Still an Enjoyable read. ... You will see how the author is newbie writer while reading and no offense but I strongly feel that the author suffers from ADHD somehow. I read the whole thing and here's the truth... this one was a failed Xuanhuan rip off. The plot, the world building, characters and story progression were all over the place. I would say that the author would get a lot of hate for his writing as even I wants to curse him sometimes for ruining a seeming good plot, also the open ending(nah it's just disgusting Cliffhanger) and our "MC" Yang Su and squad were still lovable. (Li shen? who tf is that guy again?)
MC in this novel is the stupidest of all the novels I have read. I don't know why author's always opt "low key" genre these days.
DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME AND READ THIS STORY. The author stopped writing at a cliffhanger not too far into the story and promised the continuation in another book but there's nothing even after more than half a year. Don't waste your time and money.
MC sucks waste of time MC is so it's already been 200 chapter and MC is still so weak weak weak weak MC weak
The grammar isn't the worst but there's a lot of foul language and the rhythm doesn't feel smooth. I don't like the world background not the characters either.
I really like this book and I think you will enjoy but I hated when the main character is not the most handsome it get me 😡 mad. The story is good your will like it. I have a question for the author the is the name of the next book. Plz🥹🥹🥹
I thought people were exaggerating in their comments but what's worse is the truth. MC acts very stupid for anyone who has lived in the cultivation world. Giving a gift to your brother (who wants to kill him), etc. Besides, 90% of the writing is not from the MC's vision.
So here I was enjoying this book when all of a sudden the author ended it on the most annoying cliffhanger ever! However it is a good read so I encourage people to read it and bully author-Chan to hurry up and write more. For the readers sanity.....(and author-chans safety). Before he gets kidnapped and forced to write more
Weirdly funny and op mc love the bookOk review ends here__________To the legendary human who is still reading __GO AND STUDY YOU LAZY BM
I wanted to say something memorial since after writing for nearly 2 years I've officially finished Book One. But I really couldn't find the words I was looking for. So I'll just say thank you to everyone who completed this sub-par book of mine, your true MEGACHAD. And don't forget to check out, 'The Growth of a Titan' in my profile[img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is an awesome book, with an enticing story plot. Don't mind any grammatical errors you find, and just enjoy the reading. You'll get hooked before you know it, and the money you spend would be worth it. Can't wait for Book 2💯
Ack i got baited again by those 5 stars reviews,come on dont just put fake 5 stars reviews like that,what a waste of time
I'm at chapter 154 and so far the book has been an enjoyable read. I can't speak much of the updating stability since I am a new reader to this book. But so far, it has been lovely for me.
Can someone tell me when the Mc stops acting low key. I don't mind the "hiding you strength" cliché but I dislike it when it's the annoying type where they hide everything they have and act like they are trash. He literally hid so much of his strength(99.99%) that I'm starting to find it difficult how it's going to be revealed(if that happens). Well I'm only going to stop reading this once I get to 300 chapters and he is still seen as a weakling so I guess this is just a rant and not a review
I have not gotten very far, but this is a rater interesting novel. I am excited to see how it develops
for the first 20 chapters it's basically, "blah, blah,blah". The story keeps on telling instead of showing. Because of that the mc is portrayed as an angst teenager, think typical anime protag. The situation is too familiar like ATG or TDG and it's not even doing a good job of it. everything seems contrived, you can actually see the author putting the situations on the mc, whereas others would try to mask it. The writing quality is good though, so it's good for beginner readers as an intro to cultivation novels. I really wanted to spend money on it but everything seems like its a mashup of the tropes of cultivation novels. ED, ATG, TDG, CD, etc, its a mix of their character traits which makes the mc unlikeable, until now im still confused on how I should view him. Its like "trying too hard" where the story became an awkward pacing, especially since the author likes telling instead of showing. Don't get me wrong, if I was the beginner reader that I was back then, I would have consumed this so fast but as you go through many novels you actually get very picky with stories you want to spend time with. so go ahead read it, at least you won't get brain mush trying to make sense of what the author wrote. Someone comment if i get it wrong somewhere down the line. but i probably wont see it.
someone please tell me this novel has only romance and no harem (it's fine if there is none)
great book so far, has drawn me into the world and characters. I love the story and can't wait to see where it goes!
its a well flowing stories been having more fun reading the later parts of the story the different types of Qi and the usage of them is what really keeps me hooked
Couldn't read more than 20 chapters!1) the author conveys the talent of ms is a cliche 2) problems are constantly being created out of the blue, this is a cliche of Chinese novels I can't stand 3) this is probably the most important thing why so much mash up one event for half a chapter you have to skip almost half a chapter
got my 5 stars for everything except writing quality 4s, there were times that I cant understand and had to reread it again, or Im just not doing well yesterday. Psss I hope someone with good heart, uploaded the lock chaps on internet....kekekeke. Sorry author 😂 coz its too good to wait hoard fp
As much i love this novel I’m going to drop it Author, honestly yang su’s character gets annoying as the chapters progresses and i dislike him at this point and constantly trying to give yang su the unnecessary cultivation protagonist plot while make the other non existent is just wrong it feels like you’re forcing us to have interest in him which is just not the move honestly everytime he gets mentioned or he shows up i just feel annoyed by him Secondly, mcs makes weird decisions that makes me question him but it’s all for character development i guess Honestly the main reason I’m dropping this is yang su and his constant dramas and the overall plot Somethings missing in the plot that makes it feel incomplete and hard to be invested in I’m really sorry for dropping this book but i just can’t wrap my head around some things happening in the novel especially yang su Top tier providence made the side characters more interesting because of their story and journey not because they were constantly shoved in front of our face to like them.
This is LucifurMorningstar on his alternate author acct. Reviewing his favorite cultivation webnovel at the moment. Something in particular that I like about this novel is how Li Shen builds his crew/faction like a combination of Nick Fury and Dom Torretto. Also these characters are not simply plot devices but organically have a role on the team. + 1 powerstone!!! p.s. If you could give my new webnovel, Rebirth of the Greatest Sorcerer , a chapter or two read and drop a review, it would be much appreciated.
Revelar spoiler An excellent breath of fresh air in the xianxia cultivation webnovel space. For future webnovelists this is how you write a coming of age story in a cultivation setting. Li Xi Shen is an extremely lovable protag who u root for through all his trials and tribulations. The supporting characters all have endearing traits and interesting backstories. The villains will repulse you but their motivations are not merely black and white. The moral questions are tackled bbn with a maturity seldom seen on this platform. 10/10 Bravo TSETTH, Bravo. When my next two monthly golden tickets come in they are going to u.
something new in this book , even though qi cultivation is not new the author goes in different points from other novel that focuses on qi , mc is smart and has logical thinking, good story progress
‼️‼️This is Book 1- Meaning it ends with a Cliffhanger/open ending. (book2 or continuation is yet to be seen)‼️‼️ A bit decent to say the least. Still an Enjoyable read. ... You will see how the author is newbie writer while reading and no offense but I strongly feel that the author suffers from ADHD somehow. I read the whole thing and here's the truth... this one was a failed Xuanhuan rip off. The plot, the world building, characters and story progression were all over the place. I would say that the author would get a lot of hate for his writing as even I wants to curse him sometimes for ruining a seeming good plot, also the open ending(nah it's just disgusting Cliffhanger) and our "MC" Yang Su and squad were still lovable. (Li shen? who tf is that guy again?)