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the the story have re-read it a couple times just suck that the author stopped posting
I immensely enjoyed this story that I read it twice, the overall story and writing is fine but the character development(for the mc) in the first 30 chapters felt cringe and kind of chunibyo- no offense. I hope you start updating again.
I liked the story. It mostly gets better in the second arc with game of thrones. I think it got dropped around that point. well at least nothing was written for a year by now.
Tem mais?preciso de mais,muito mais,tipo,MUITO MAIS!!!preciso ver isso continuar, fanfics q tenham GOT são minhas favoritas,simplesmente li a obra até agora por causa disso,apesar de gostar do mundo de twd,vim por got,e preciso de maissssss!!!!!!
Amazing concept, Amazing execution, I have no complaints with the series at all. Maybe the only thing i can nitpick is the main character being a little bit edgy but in the walking dead universe it fits right in. I hope the author comes back to this series but it seems this maybe dropped.
Bored to death you will, as soon as start reading this novel. And the dumbest thing? Of course it's the system containing only inventory. No, author makes it look that system or its quests matters, but in reality he himself don't recognize how useless his system and power up is. And all mc uses is the inventory and makes his weapons pop and surprise his enemies, one trick pony for the whole story.
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Trully captured the voices of the characters.Solid grammar and synthax.It would be a shame if it never got updated.
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a great fanfiction our beloved author was unable to continue with his ideas because his studies prevented him, but he finished at least one of his arcs; just read it and you will know how wonderful this story is
the MC is totally stupid, he knows the show and yet he is agaist meeting important characters or leting the ones hes met develop, so in the end all that smartass atitude is not really helping anybody
J'ai lu cette fan fic d'une traite en 3 jour, j'ai aimé la direction de l'histoire est surtout l'intelligence des personnages ce qui est rare. Les points négatifs serait surtout la lenteur de l'histoire avant qu'il change de monde est aussi que l'auteur ne prend pas de risques en suivant la trame de l'original il ni à pas d'endroit nouveau ni de situation vraiment différentes apart sa je peux dire que j'ai aimé cette fan fic est que dommage j'ai rattraper l'histoire j'ai le seum.
L'histoire est bien, j'ai aimé l'arc TWD, ce n'est pas parfait, j'ai trouvé sur certains personnages trop OCC comme Shane, there's no way Shane would leave power to a teenager without a fight, we could put it down to the charm of the MC given by the system, like some sort of weak Imperio (HP) , But frankly, I loved it, I was afraid with this Harem story that the author lugs Maggie into the other world let's say that I don't like this one, too useless for my taste and it hangs around the back of Xénon like a lost puppy. My problem with Aragorn is that he looks too much like a Targaryen, it's gonna cause problems when he's on the other side of the wall, no matter if it's Targaryen or Baratheon era, it will be difficult for him to go unnoticed,If he has to steal King's landing during the rampage, he will be noticed, in short I can't wait to see the rest and I hope he won't be an idiot and trust to talk about his system or show his everything to anyone
Revelar spoiler I was not here when this was made but I just finished reading what he has and it was a great story and I hope he continues the story.
I say it's ok-well the only thing that's a pity is that the author doesn't update chapters more often...often...And that the novel ended when the 2world begins I mean why not!!
I must say that the series has a place at the top of the fanfic world. Definitely one of the best ff's I've ever read. but I don't know what will happen in the future. Especially if he is with different girls in different worlds and cheats on his girlfriends or sets up a harem in this way, my score will drop clearly. Please don't let this novel go like this. I'm also very curious about the world of got, I hope you continue to write.
Muy interesante como está abordado el sistema de MC en los mundos, en lo que respecta a los fondos de historia teniendo un trasfondo ya más o menos armado con los programas de televisión, esta bastante bien abordados con el personaje principal. Lo único me pareció un poco de golpe fue el cambio de mundos desde el primero al de Game of thones, siento que si se hubiera tratado con un poco más de desarrollo hubiera estado genial. Sin más que decir me gustó mucho la historia y espero poder seguir disfrutandola con más actualizaciones futuras.
Revelar spoiler
Работа понравилась, как понятно жду продолжения. Персонажи не картонные, есть обоснуй. Нет непонятных страданий, адекватный гг. Жаль конечно что довольно давно нет продолжение (((
I am in awe with how detailed and eventful this book is. I am enjoying every word and can’t wait for more!
I enjoyed the story you shared. You made the Walking Dead characters interesting. I like how you more or less pushed Rick to the side without demeaning the character. Starting ASOIAF North of the Wall is interesting and has good story potential, though i would prefer he not stay there too long. I would enjoy seeing more should you ever return to the tale.
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It’s Good story please keep write it i like very mush to see what coming next ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-
Evil mc? Cualquier cosa Pi la historia surge el capitulo se traduce como un retardado como se extiende a un no-muerto mecánica con una mano en el pasado año se extiende desde el mc Betty de mi e y siento que 7uuuprimer trabajó como yuju de un Jujuy la u la utu y me bu jjuuuuuui89jkkkjj yuju u77ujj que y no y no y me gustaría trabajó 6hjuuuujuujjjuujjj jjkkkkky me gustaría trabajó con el cambio genero ni 7j88j7j7
Revelar spoiler
This seems to be a bit of a tradition here on Webnovel, so here I am, shamelessly giving myself a 5 star review. This part will help you decide whether you should read this or not. 1- Is this a HAREM story? I understand this is a deal breaker for a lot of people. So I'll avoid wasting your time. I didn't add a HAREM tag because it's not a HAREM story just yet. However, if you are ABSOLUTELY against the very idea of Harems, I suggest you avoid reading this, because as the author I am open to the possibility. However, at no point will this become a story where the MC gets any girl he wants just because he looked their way. I wish to make the interactions as human as possible. Needless to say, with the system, it might tip the scale in his favor. 2- Is the MC OP? At the start? Nope. he is as ordinary as they come. I'm trying to maintain a balance in the story. if he can speed run the world, there is no point in writing about his adventures at all if he's already a god. he will EVENTUALLY be OP, but not right off the bat. 3- Does the MC get wishes? No. If you have more questions, ask me in the comment, I'll give you an answer as soon as I can.
the the story have re-read it a couple times just suck that the author stopped posting
I immensely enjoyed this story that I read it twice, the overall story and writing is fine but the character development(for the mc) in the first 30 chapters felt cringe and kind of chunibyo- no offense. I hope you start updating again.
I liked the story. It mostly gets better in the second arc with game of thrones. I think it got dropped around that point. well at least nothing was written for a year by now.
Tem mais?preciso de mais,muito mais,tipo,MUITO MAIS!!!preciso ver isso continuar, fanfics q tenham GOT são minhas favoritas,simplesmente li a obra até agora por causa disso,apesar de gostar do mundo de twd,vim por got,e preciso de maissssss!!!!!!
Amazing concept, Amazing execution, I have no complaints with the series at all. Maybe the only thing i can nitpick is the main character being a little bit edgy but in the walking dead universe it fits right in. I hope the author comes back to this series but it seems this maybe dropped.
Bored to death you will, as soon as start reading this novel. And the dumbest thing? Of course it's the system containing only inventory. No, author makes it look that system or its quests matters, but in reality he himself don't recognize how useless his system and power up is. And all mc uses is the inventory and makes his weapons pop and surprise his enemies, one trick pony for the whole story.
have you dropped this novel [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
Trully captured the voices of the characters.Solid grammar and synthax.It would be a shame if it never got updated.
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Ceritanya seru , saya berharap novel ini bisa terus update, semoga penulis diberi kesehatan , up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up
a great fanfiction our beloved author was unable to continue with his ideas because his studies prevented him, but he finished at least one of his arcs; just read it and you will know how wonderful this story is
the MC is totally stupid, he knows the show and yet he is agaist meeting important characters or leting the ones hes met develop, so in the end all that smartass atitude is not really helping anybody
J'ai lu cette fan fic d'une traite en 3 jour, j'ai aimé la direction de l'histoire est surtout l'intelligence des personnages ce qui est rare. Les points négatifs serait surtout la lenteur de l'histoire avant qu'il change de monde est aussi que l'auteur ne prend pas de risques en suivant la trame de l'original il ni à pas d'endroit nouveau ni de situation vraiment différentes apart sa je peux dire que j'ai aimé cette fan fic est que dommage j'ai rattraper l'histoire j'ai le seum.
L'histoire est bien, j'ai aimé l'arc TWD, ce n'est pas parfait, j'ai trouvé sur certains personnages trop OCC comme Shane, there's no way Shane would leave power to a teenager without a fight, we could put it down to the charm of the MC given by the system, like some sort of weak Imperio (HP) , But frankly, I loved it, I was afraid with this Harem story that the author lugs Maggie into the other world let's say that I don't like this one, too useless for my taste and it hangs around the back of Xénon like a lost puppy. My problem with Aragorn is that he looks too much like a Targaryen, it's gonna cause problems when he's on the other side of the wall, no matter if it's Targaryen or Baratheon era, it will be difficult for him to go unnoticed,If he has to steal King's landing during the rampage, he will be noticed, in short I can't wait to see the rest and I hope he won't be an idiot and trust to talk about his system or show his everything to anyone
Revelar spoiler I was not here when this was made but I just finished reading what he has and it was a great story and I hope he continues the story.
I say it's ok-well the only thing that's a pity is that the author doesn't update chapters more often...often...And that the novel ended when the 2world begins I mean why not!!
I must say that the series has a place at the top of the fanfic world. Definitely one of the best ff's I've ever read. but I don't know what will happen in the future. Especially if he is with different girls in different worlds and cheats on his girlfriends or sets up a harem in this way, my score will drop clearly. Please don't let this novel go like this. I'm also very curious about the world of got, I hope you continue to write.
Muy interesante como está abordado el sistema de MC en los mundos, en lo que respecta a los fondos de historia teniendo un trasfondo ya más o menos armado con los programas de televisión, esta bastante bien abordados con el personaje principal. Lo único me pareció un poco de golpe fue el cambio de mundos desde el primero al de Game of thones, siento que si se hubiera tratado con un poco más de desarrollo hubiera estado genial. Sin más que decir me gustó mucho la historia y espero poder seguir disfrutandola con más actualizaciones futuras.
Revelar spoiler Работа понравилась, как понятно жду продолжения. Персонажи не картонные, есть обоснуй. Нет непонятных страданий, адекватный гг. Жаль конечно что довольно давно нет продолжение (((
I am in awe with how detailed and eventful this book is. I am enjoying every word and can’t wait for more!
I enjoyed the story you shared. You made the Walking Dead characters interesting. I like how you more or less pushed Rick to the side without demeaning the character. Starting ASOIAF North of the Wall is interesting and has good story potential, though i would prefer he not stay there too long. I would enjoy seeing more should you ever return to the tale.
Revelar spoiler It’s Good story please keep write it i like very mush to see what coming next ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-
Evil mc? Cualquier cosa Pi la historia surge el capitulo se traduce como un retardado como se extiende a un no-muerto mecánica con una mano en el pasado año se extiende desde el mc Betty de mi e y siento que 7uuuprimer trabajó como yuju de un Jujuy la u la utu y me bu jjuuuuuui89jkkkjj yuju u77ujj que y no y no y me gustaría trabajó 6hjuuuujuujjjuujjj jjkkkkky me gustaría trabajó con el cambio genero ni 7j88j7j7
Revelar spoiler 
This seems to be a bit of a tradition here on Webnovel, so here I am, shamelessly giving myself a 5 star review. This part will help you decide whether you should read this or not. 1- Is this a HAREM story? I understand this is a deal breaker for a lot of people. So I'll avoid wasting your time. I didn't add a HAREM tag because it's not a HAREM story just yet. However, if you are ABSOLUTELY against the very idea of Harems, I suggest you avoid reading this, because as the author I am open to the possibility. However, at no point will this become a story where the MC gets any girl he wants just because he looked their way. I wish to make the interactions as human as possible. Needless to say, with the system, it might tip the scale in his favor. 2- Is the MC OP? At the start? Nope. he is as ordinary as they come. I'm trying to maintain a balance in the story. if he can speed run the world, there is no point in writing about his adventures at all if he's already a god. he will EVENTUALLY be OP, but not right off the bat. 3- Does the MC get wishes? No. If you have more questions, ask me in the comment, I'll give you an answer as soon as I can.