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JiHanLocalDemigod

Great story, I greatly enjoyed it. I am about to start the rewrite but I kinda wish it kept going from here. I hope the rewrite has the OC act in a similar way. Maybe bell wont be a dunce (even tho he was less so here than in the real series) Warning: Lots of H

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Corey_Hall_0942

can you please continue I love this story.

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Brokedepressed

I miss this story. Please don’t drop this

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Phoenix_Riser

This was a great story and I honestly hope the author continues this.

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Frog_God_Mentor

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

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For_Mambar

Low update?, Yes. I hope this fanfic can to fast update, should average for update in one chapture to others chapture is a 3-5 day, but that actually so low update............................................................... Just i hope a fast update for this fanfic...... I give a stone for this fanfic everytime I read this fanfic............. So so because this fanfic actually goods for a read

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Chaddts

Its a great story without a doubt one if the best danmachi fanfics... and that's my issue. It's not only a danmachi fanfic. He goes to other world far too much. Some are more well known and its ok enough, but others... its simply too much like FATE... not many people have read or watched fate... I certainly haven't. And since nothing is ever really explained I just dropped it there. I was completely lost in the sauce and since chapters are not titled at all I have no idea when he left the fate world so I'm not coming back. Its good for what it is ,but the world hopping will eventually hit a series you may know absolutely nothing about and have no interest in, which ruins the book for fans of this novel.

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Daoist_Dreamer0

Sigh... When is author going to update again? I really miss this FF. Please author kun, Update it at lesst once per week. [img=exp][img=exp][img=fp][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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borbking_chken

it is a good novel...mc did babysit bell at the beginning, but he stopped later in the novel................................................

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Diky_Maulana

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roderick12345

I really like the plot of the novel, but the writing is awful, I tried to keep reading but I just couldn't. if you can get this novel edited I would read it again

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TinyBookDragon

The story was pretty good up until around chapter 30. Then it goes completely off the rails and the MC's simp tendencies kick in hard. Hestia literally tricks him into impregnating Freya (the crazy yandere) and he's all like "oh well, I guess I'll just have to give her a spanking"... Insanity.

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

🥱😴 Danmachi is one of the most boring anime and useless characters that cause disgust. MC is Bell's dog. The fanfic is messy, there is no interesting and sequential plot. The development of the characters is... they are boring and also the MC is tremendously submissive and beta.

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BlkRabbit

All I'm gonna say is, don't be baited by the rating of this novel. The last time I checked, it was hovering in 3s. I would've rated this lower if not for the fact that the early chapters were actually kinda good. It went downhill pretty fast after MC enslaved Freya.

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AbsoluteLoliLover

The First Law of Fan Fiction: Every change which strengthens the protagonist requires a corresponding worsening of his challenges. Or, to put it plainly, you cannot make Harry Potter a Jedi without giving Lord Voldemort the Death Star. Read any book on writing and it will tell you that stories are all about conflict. A hero who is so strong that his conflicts are no longer problems is no longer in a story worth reading. The most fatal temptation of fan fiction is to think of how much easier your character's life would be if he was super-powered. We are naturally inclined to think of ways to solve our characters' problems for them. But first we much think of ways to make their lives more difficult. - Worldmaker.

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Byleth_Sothis

I hope you add Ais to them in future. If not for me seeing Arturia name by skipping a few chapters and then going back to ch.1 instantly to avoid more spoilers, i would have ditched this.

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StrikeCampione

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Thehighesthol1

good story, but I think she's a bit too open about choosing a partner like Freya who has dated thousands of men over the course of her life. well that's all I think. passion for writing stories

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Tiger_Prakash

the story was good when will MC go to bleach world [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Dao_Master_Penguin

I will be completely honest, I’ve read many fanfics and this one is one of the more fan service ones out. For one the MC isn’t really the MC, he puts too much focus on Bell and is most a babysitter. He doesn’t really do anything worthwhile for himself instead let’s Himself be dragged around by others. His ability to fuse is pretty op but he doesn’t use it for himself, his other ability isn’t really his own as finishing quests gives everyone in his “party” the same rewards. He is more of a support character than a main one. Plus once you hit the “freya” situation you’ll realize that the author doesn’t really understand danmachi, or the way the characters act. Everything is pretty forced, romance and plot wise, it still better than most fanfics though, sadly. I’m not bashing on the author, as they have gone far above what most writers do, but I think they would’ve been better off writing a original story than a fanfic.

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LOLPLOSE

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201289

I don't like the way he travels to other worlds.

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8Mysterious8

This is a world traveler fanfic with danmachi as its base. I'm sure most people on here have, at any point in time, that one novel that drives you up the wall waiting for realeases, and this one is mine. It is not that the release rate is that bad, more that this book manages to be entertaining and funny while progressing the story at a good pace and keeping all characters interesting. I highly recommend as the only downfall that I have seen it the lack of chapters. But even with the number of chapters available, the story is incredibly engrossing. This is a story that is easily enjoyed chapter by chapter, not one that you have to wait for plot movement.

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Pacifist_Warrior

i don't know author but your style is hard to read fastly though written correctly ........ keep it improving...............................

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Cartus

Take this with a grain of salt as I can't stand to read even the first chapter completly. The writing quality for the first chapter is horrendous, I don't know if it gets better later but I plea that u stop using oly 'and' it literally make my brain hurt with how long the sentences are and how straining it is to decipher them. 1 star WQ From what I can see the stability of updates is good so that's a good thing. Please explain at least something in the first chapter like what the heck is that start to the chapter. I understand with the rant of the MC that he was unlucky but why are we suddenly bringing Freya in this??? I understood a little of the things since I watched Danmachi, but that was so long ago that I forgot most things and suddenly getting so much information trown at me with 0 explenation is so confusing. 3 stars SD Blond hair and Ocean green eyes, what else can u want?? I don't even care about his personality since it's fantasy after all. 4 stars CD World Background is 5 stars since it is Danmachi and I enjoyed it when I watched it.

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Blazing_1NS4N1TY

This is a world traveler fanfic with danmachi as its base. I'm sure most people on here have, at any point in time, that one novel that drives you up the wall waiting for realeases, and this one is mine. It is not that the release rate is that bad, more that this book manages to be entertaining and funny while progressing the story at a good pace and keeping all characters interesting. I highly recommend as the only downfall that I have seen it the lack of chapters. But even with the number of chapters available, the story is incredibly engrossing. This is a story that is easily enjoyed chapter by chapter, not one that you have to wait for plot movement.

2yr
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JiHanLocalDemigod

Great story, I greatly enjoyed it. I am about to start the rewrite but I kinda wish it kept going from here. I hope the rewrite has the OC act in a similar way. Maybe bell wont be a dunce (even tho he was less so here than in the real series) Warning: Lots of H

1yr
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Corey_Hall_0942

can you please continue I love this story.

1yr
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Brokedepressed

I miss this story. Please don’t drop this

1yr
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Phoenix_Riser

This was a great story and I honestly hope the author continues this.

1yr
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Frog_God_Mentor

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

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2yr
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For_Mambar

Low update?, Yes. I hope this fanfic can to fast update, should average for update in one chapture to others chapture is a 3-5 day, but that actually so low update............................................................... Just i hope a fast update for this fanfic...... I give a stone for this fanfic everytime I read this fanfic............. So so because this fanfic actually goods for a read

2yr
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valient_vicky

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Chaddts

Its a great story without a doubt one if the best danmachi fanfics... and that's my issue. It's not only a danmachi fanfic. He goes to other world far too much. Some are more well known and its ok enough, but others... its simply too much like FATE... not many people have read or watched fate... I certainly haven't. And since nothing is ever really explained I just dropped it there. I was completely lost in the sauce and since chapters are not titled at all I have no idea when he left the fate world so I'm not coming back. Its good for what it is ,but the world hopping will eventually hit a series you may know absolutely nothing about and have no interest in, which ruins the book for fans of this novel.

2yr
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Daoist_Dreamer0

Sigh... When is author going to update again? I really miss this FF. Please author kun, Update it at lesst once per week. [img=exp][img=exp][img=fp][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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borbking_chken

it is a good novel...mc did babysit bell at the beginning, but he stopped later in the novel................................................

2yr
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Kazuto_Yamada

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Diky_Maulana

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roderick12345

I really like the plot of the novel, but the writing is awful, I tried to keep reading but I just couldn't. if you can get this novel edited I would read it again

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TinyBookDragon

The story was pretty good up until around chapter 30. Then it goes completely off the rails and the MC's simp tendencies kick in hard. Hestia literally tricks him into impregnating Freya (the crazy yandere) and he's all like "oh well, I guess I'll just have to give her a spanking"... Insanity.

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

🥱😴 Danmachi is one of the most boring anime and useless characters that cause disgust. MC is Bell's dog. The fanfic is messy, there is no interesting and sequential plot. The development of the characters is... they are boring and also the MC is tremendously submissive and beta.

2yr
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BlkRabbit

All I'm gonna say is, don't be baited by the rating of this novel. The last time I checked, it was hovering in 3s. I would've rated this lower if not for the fact that the early chapters were actually kinda good. It went downhill pretty fast after MC enslaved Freya.

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AbsoluteLoliLover

The First Law of Fan Fiction: Every change which strengthens the protagonist requires a corresponding worsening of his challenges. Or, to put it plainly, you cannot make Harry Potter a Jedi without giving Lord Voldemort the Death Star. Read any book on writing and it will tell you that stories are all about conflict. A hero who is so strong that his conflicts are no longer problems is no longer in a story worth reading. The most fatal temptation of fan fiction is to think of how much easier your character's life would be if he was super-powered. We are naturally inclined to think of ways to solve our characters' problems for them. But first we much think of ways to make their lives more difficult. - Worldmaker.

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Byleth_Sothis

I hope you add Ais to them in future. If not for me seeing Arturia name by skipping a few chapters and then going back to ch.1 instantly to avoid more spoilers, i would have ditched this.

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StrikeCampione

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Thehighesthol1

good story, but I think she's a bit too open about choosing a partner like Freya who has dated thousands of men over the course of her life. well that's all I think. passion for writing stories

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Tiger_Prakash

the story was good when will MC go to bleach world [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Dao_Master_Penguin

I will be completely honest, I’ve read many fanfics and this one is one of the more fan service ones out. For one the MC isn’t really the MC, he puts too much focus on Bell and is most a babysitter. He doesn’t really do anything worthwhile for himself instead let’s Himself be dragged around by others. His ability to fuse is pretty op but he doesn’t use it for himself, his other ability isn’t really his own as finishing quests gives everyone in his “party” the same rewards. He is more of a support character than a main one. Plus once you hit the “freya” situation you’ll realize that the author doesn’t really understand danmachi, or the way the characters act. Everything is pretty forced, romance and plot wise, it still better than most fanfics though, sadly. I’m not bashing on the author, as they have gone far above what most writers do, but I think they would’ve been better off writing a original story than a fanfic.

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LOLPLOSE

GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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201289

I don't like the way he travels to other worlds.

2yr
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8Mysterious8

This is a world traveler fanfic with danmachi as its base. I'm sure most people on here have, at any point in time, that one novel that drives you up the wall waiting for realeases, and this one is mine. It is not that the release rate is that bad, more that this book manages to be entertaining and funny while progressing the story at a good pace and keeping all characters interesting. I highly recommend as the only downfall that I have seen it the lack of chapters. But even with the number of chapters available, the story is incredibly engrossing. This is a story that is easily enjoyed chapter by chapter, not one that you have to wait for plot movement.

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Pacifist_Warrior

i don't know author but your style is hard to read fastly though written correctly ........ keep it improving...............................

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Cartus

Take this with a grain of salt as I can't stand to read even the first chapter completly. The writing quality for the first chapter is horrendous, I don't know if it gets better later but I plea that u stop using oly 'and' it literally make my brain hurt with how long the sentences are and how straining it is to decipher them. 1 star WQ From what I can see the stability of updates is good so that's a good thing. Please explain at least something in the first chapter like what the heck is that start to the chapter. I understand with the rant of the MC that he was unlucky but why are we suddenly bringing Freya in this??? I understood a little of the things since I watched Danmachi, but that was so long ago that I forgot most things and suddenly getting so much information trown at me with 0 explenation is so confusing. 3 stars SD Blond hair and Ocean green eyes, what else can u want?? I don't even care about his personality since it's fantasy after all. 4 stars CD World Background is 5 stars since it is Danmachi and I enjoyed it when I watched it.

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Blazing_1NS4N1TY

This is a world traveler fanfic with danmachi as its base. I'm sure most people on here have, at any point in time, that one novel that drives you up the wall waiting for realeases, and this one is mine. It is not that the release rate is that bad, more that this book manages to be entertaining and funny while progressing the story at a good pace and keeping all characters interesting. I highly recommend as the only downfall that I have seen it the lack of chapters. But even with the number of chapters available, the story is incredibly engrossing. This is a story that is easily enjoyed chapter by chapter, not one that you have to wait for plot movement.

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