Improvise, Adapt, Evolve (Multiverse) (Now on DxD)

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PeaceBeforeImpact

I couldn't get through the first chapter. It just was below my bottom line for bad grammar and excessive long sentences. please take some pride in your work author.😭

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Arc_Deamon

actually the most potentially great fanfiction but he ruined it in the second chapter with his last wish and he earned the most hated author in My tags.☺️

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happy_sad

The grammar is pretty bad and i couldn't get through it so i can't say much about the story. if you dont care about the grammar then you're good

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KoRSito

Everything was fine, until the MC blocked his memories and created a curse that not only affected the MC (is it negative or will it help the MC?). Will a more powerful Draco Malfoy appear? Or could there be a more intelligent or envious Ron Wesleey? 😦🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔😦😦😦😦🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

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PrimordialMofu

I read this. hated it now gimme

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Concealment

A good novel, quite good in fact. It's just that I can't read it anymore even with the curse. Can't say the same as the others.........................

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_VOIDLESS_

It took me all my willpower to finish reading about HPverse that I am mentally tired just by looking at the title of the novel but overall it's a great novel once you get pasted the HP verse just hope DXD has a lot to offer

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cody_Scott

please finish this masterpiece of a story please continue it it's great

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pazonal

A wish fulfillment story thats honest. Enjoyed the read, though the grammar could be better. The training seal/. curse could be explained better - still don't understand everything about that. Thanks a lot for the story

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Goldenrod

I totally love it. .. The abstract concepts that others never thought of that you make use of are helping to make the story more interesting .... So yeah please mass release [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]