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One Piece: Rise Of The Foreign Ice Dragon
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He was reincarnated from Earth and lived for 17 years in a medieval world where there is no modern world entertainment and no modern world food, but the good point is that he became the Crown Prince of the Empire, Willian Bluewight, or as he is called on Continent-level, The Ice Prince, when he thought that his destiny had already been determined as the king of a medieval empire, a spatial portal appeared in his room to connect him with his dream world and rewrite his true destiny.
Note: The story begins with two worlds, the first is Dola it's OC world of my own creation, all the characters belonging to it are OC and the second is the world of One Piece, the initial plot will be shared between these two worlds until I decide to add more later.
Disclaimer: I do not own One Piece nor its characters, they are the property of their author, Oda, but I own Dola and all of its characters.
The loading of chapters will depend on the interaction the story receives.
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For those who ask, the main point of the novel is to build the kingdom and expand the lands.
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please no=NTR-dense/idiot/naive/betha MC-psycological ......i just wana having fun reading....i have bad rl.so.....
An amazing novel (among the best ones i've read) i like the characters, i like the background and i think this is going to be one of my favourites
Overall: good, could be better, but i had to stop reading this because the writing style kinda annoyed me. I don't want to get headache. Writing quality - 1* (because i put high importance in this. so, stricter than other criteria) Longwinded. Bad reading flow. Sometimes there's missing word and used bad choice of words making it awkward and harder to read. Other than that, it's good Mc is not braindead, that's a plus. Most new novels nowadays have below average iq mc resulting in many plotholes or forced plot. Well, if you have passion in writing and want to improve yourself better. you should read your old chapters and fix what needed to be fixed. This includes your other novels too.
I like the world and the crossing over parts , but there are some problems with the grammar , which you can easily gloss over... the main problem for me is the plot....well kinda....the dragon MC for no reason goes around killing animal kings after invading their territory....for 4 chapters now hes just fighting random monsters..... why u ask..... just cuz he can and wants to test his skills..... so he goes around beating and killing them.....
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This novel is HIGH-QUALITY STANDARDS. Second, its enjoyable to read and the mc knows what he wants and gets it. For those interested, the setting is 4 years before the start of one piece and it seems likely that it will turn into a multiverse later but i find thats overdoing it with the current setup. The mc "Homeworld" is literally on the medieval age without seemly any fantasy power, just good old fantasy setting and mc having a devil fruit, he already is the TOP dog in his homeworld and his word will be the law... Unless his homeworld is more than it seems. I say this because there will be no need to travel to other universes to conquer his home planet. He can already do so.
This is really a promising story you have here, author-san, keep up the good work, I hope to see a good connection of events between the two worlds and not make us wait too long for events in One Piece world❤️❤️❤️
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Really good novel I hope the author doesn't drop it .............................................................................................................
It's good. I'm just hoping this one won't be dropped. Most of the good one-piece fanfiction I've read till now are all either dropped or on hiatus. So, I hope you continue this.
It would be good if the updates are more often because the story so slow paced or the chapters are longer to make up for the slow story line. The story development should also fasten more because the author tells a story about what happened on a whole day for a chapter.
Sedang menunggu bab baru Kenapa bab baru sangat lama Aku suka cerita di novel ini terutama pencuriyan buah iblis yang di lakukan Aku berharap buah iblis milik kaido atau big mom bisa di curi juga
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FF keren please Don't Dropped oke?? Please Don't Dropped oke?? please Don't Dropped oke?? please Don't Dropped oke?? please Don't Dropped oke?? next chapter, next chapter, next chapter, next chapter, next chapter!!!
Volumen 1 : One Piece/Empire War
- 1 A Wrong World! 2 years ago
- 2 Strange Portal! 2 years ago
- 3 Where Does The Portal Lead? 2 years ago
- 4 Spatial System! 2 years ago
- 5 Strange Fruit 2 years ago
- 6 A Devil Fruit? 2 years ago
- 7 One Piece World: Date and Location. 2 years ago
- 8 A Carp Jumping Above The Dragon Gate! 2 years ago
- 9 Flying Over The Island. 2 years ago
- 10 Which Path Will He Choose? 2 years ago
- 11 Fighting Monsters 2 years ago
- 12 The Predicament? 2 years ago
- 13 Ice Dragon Breath... Go! 2 years ago
- 14 Arriving To The Central Area From The Forest. 2 years ago
- 15 The Intense Fighting! 2 years ago
- 16 Monster Emperor's Wrath! 2 years ago
- 17 Back To Dola! 2 years ago
- 18 The Astonished Four Maids (Part 1) 2 years ago
- 19 The Astonished Four Maids (Part 2) 2 years ago
- 20 Selection Of Crew Members 2 years ago
- 21 The Five Churches 2 years ago
- 22 Getting ready for the first expedition to the strange world 2 years ago
- 23 Back to monster paradise, The new function! 2 years ago
- 24 Evolution: High Human! 2 years ago
- 25 Bear Emperor VS Ice Dragon 2 years ago
- 26 Ice Execution! 2 years ago
- 27 Conquering Monster Paradise Island 2 years ago
- 28 The Conquering Organization: Dragon King Beginning of the World 2 years ago
- 29 The dilemma of human emotions? 2 years ago
- 30 Delicious Fruit... What a cruel joke! 2 years ago
- 31 The Pirates World Truth! 2 years ago
- 32 Rocks Rocks no Mi 2 years ago
- 33 The Training 2 years ago
- 34 Entry of soldiers and security guards into the strange world 2 years ago
- 35 The expedition to the strange world begins. 2 years ago
- 36 The Army Generals! 2 years ago
- 37 Is that flying beast is His Highness? 2 years ago
- 38 Prince William become a dragon? 2 years ago
- 39 The Meeting 2 years ago
- 40 Rich intelligent life types in the pirates world! 2 years ago
- 41 A Wild Night In Pirates World {Part 1} [R-18] 2 years ago
- 42 A Wild Night In Pirates World {Part 2} [R-18] 2 years ago
- 43 Out of the island for the first time 2 years ago
- 44 Toroa Island 2 years ago
- 45 Searching for information about Demon Sheriff 2 years ago
- 46 Devil Eye! 2 years ago
- 47 Nico Robin! 2 years ago
- 48 Robin Joining! 2 years ago
- 49 Crush the guild chief 2 years ago
- 50 Getting Another Devil Fruit! 2 years ago
- 51 Return to monster paradise with Robin 2 years ago
- 52 Gracia's Innate Skill 2 years ago
- 53 Return To Diamond City 2 years ago
- 54 Declaring war on the princes 2 years ago
- 55 Dragon City construction begins! 2 years ago
- 56 The Poisons Testers! The Luxury Life! 2 years ago
- 57 Dragon City Areas! 2 years ago
- 58 Hunt the Pirates Again! 2 years ago
- 59 Confrontation with Donquixote family! 2 years ago
- 60 Willian VS Machvice 2 years ago
- 61 The Useful Uses Of The Spatial Portals! 2 years ago
- 62 Doflamingo's wrath! 2 years ago
- 63 Observation Haki Intermediate-Level! 2 years ago
- 64 Preparing For War! 2 years ago
- 65 The beginning of the emergence of the features of Dragon City! 2 years ago
- 66 The Mythical Zoan, Vermillion Bird! 2 years ago
- 67 Supernatural abilities of all kinds and shapes 2 years ago
- 68 Stopping an army of 80,000 knights alone! 2 years ago
- 69 Freezing the enemy's army! 2 years ago
- 70 A discovery the size of an iceberg 2 years ago
-Writing Quality: For me it is good and understandable, simple and has few errors, I'll give it 5/5 -Updating Stability: 13 chapters in three days since the fanfic was released so far is a very good thing deserves appreciation, I'll give it 5/5 -Story Development: Establishing a clear and explicit scenario for the story from the beginning sings the author and readers of the problems of progress and continuity of the story, because this story has really huge potential, I just hope that the author keeps up with the good work, the story has two main worlds in the beginning with the possibility of adding other worlds, MC is considered a host for a very powerful spatial system that can pick up the coordinates of the worlds and open a portal to move to them, this is a good and logical idea, it is clear that the system was designed to make its employer a global conqueror. Getting started in the world of One Piece is a great start, I look forward to seeing the world of the original protagonist that the author said was the OC. I'll give it 5/5 -Character Design: So far we have seen few characters beside the protagonist, the character design of the hero is good, he was reincarnated from the earth and lived for 17 years in a medieval world without any cheat but he was all lucky to be a crown prince in an empire, looks full of struggle and secret fighting between princes, the story is very good, as the protagoniste is very clever, as we saw how the author explained that the hero has already merged with the ideas of his new world. And we saw in the first chapter how cruel he is to test his food on a person before he eats it, and this is necessary to show his cruelty to others so that they do not overthrow him. Everything the protagonist is experiencing in his new world is very abnormal and I look forward to seeing more of him. I'll give it 5/5 -World background: Dolla's world, is the OC written by the writer, so far we've seen the diamond city where the hero lives, and the world of One Piece we've seen monsters island in the western blue, the organization is good so far and the background is great. I'll give it 5/5