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Escribe una reseñahmmm i think it's good but iIhope it's not harem and the mother of his three daughters is still alive
Revelar spoilerHonestly good story but there is a lot of just repeating actions such as his one daughter getting it trouble, the arrogant young master whines to his father and the mc beats up the father for over ten to twelve chapters with only about two to three chapters about story building and slice of life between the repeating fights
Revelar spoilerThe MC is a beta male. He is the definition of a feminine man, just constantly showering his daughters with love, but not disciplining them when needed, so they always cause trouble.
the ending was so forced. I enjoyed the story. It was pretty basic, but it was still entertaining. the ending just sucked though. MC just ate a pill that let him reach the peak of cultivation, so he jumped like 10 cultivation realms in an instant, and his long-lost wife showed up out of nowhere. It's easy to see that the author just gave up and decided to end the story out of nowhere.
Revelar spoilerthe most annoying book ever, it's so painful just getting past the chapters it's keeps going round in circles, extending boring conflicts by entire tens of chapters
The story looked like it copied the direction of a movie from thrusting us between the story. The characters are not interesting and there is emotional hold on the readers. Same old cliche story.
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it started off great then around chapters 150+, it became the typical xianxia, oh you founded mayor son and kill him and now the mayor wants to kill you etc. The ending was so terrible, you could tell the author no longer wanted to write anymore and just wanted to wrap it up asap, which I suppose I can respect them for at least write an ending, even if unsatisfactory
Not as bad as some reviews here make it out to be. It's a cliche chinese op mc story and if you exactly that then its fine. Dont expect much from it, but its definitely still readable with mostly good grammar and mediocre story.
You might go into this novel expecting some fun slice of life, but sadly there is literally nothing in this novel other than face slapping. It's garbage.
Started fine, middle was slow, then the ending rushed hard. Ending was very unsatisfying. Lots of stuff left unfinished really. Characters left behind for no reason really, felt bad for the old steward. MC was very out of character in like last ten chapters. It’s short and readable though for the most part. Give it a try.
is there only 210 chapters ? I liked this story and I don't want it to finish without seeing his daughters wreaking havoc after they become strong[img=faceslap]
the story was slow for 90% of the book and the protagonist was calm and restrained. while the enemies were pointless vile and increasingly murderous. narrative mostly repeated the slap in the face trope. However in the last location, the character radically changed and became irrationally blood thirsty. Story was a nice idea.
good concept, bad execution. there are 3 character type only, the MC, the daughter/side character identify as friend, and enemy. every enemy are the unreasonable courting dead type, (always) friend are character that was help by mc in some way. that is it, nothing unique or new at all. world background is standard xianxia trash.
Very good! 💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞
Unrealiable Dad ever. Why he is so stupid, can he not so loafty ig his strenght not enough. He souldnt go to higher city if he want low profile. He should just increase his power, before he moved out. Sigh.. I recomended another story with similiar setting. New Fathet: ..... You should know..
I vwry much hate Jiang Ping character. His mindaey still like modern people with peace mind. He has a syatem, this is his cheat. So why he cant be dominering. Stop being so peacefull, cause the world he lived in now not peacefull. This is where the strongs prey the weaks.
The characters are so shallow that I can predict how the novel ends. I went into this with high hopes, maybe the author can do something cool with the concept but he decided to make the ML a glorified janitor. Save your time reading it.
good story because thr character is so strong and character development is also good, i like this kind of story where the character is strong like this
The author makes the mc try to be low key, but he lets his daughters act high key. Why? so that when someone bullies his precious daughters he can pretend to be forced and start slapping faces. Plot? non-existent Characters? 1 dimensional Don't get me wrong though, I think it is an interesting premise. Just wish it was done better.
waste of time really. Complete Freaking waste of time ------------------- ------------------- ------------------- ------------------- ------------------
trashhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Started off fairly decent but when they started the auction part it became almost unbearable to read. There were whole chapters where only one bid would happen then they would waffle about gave the whole time and repeated this multiple times. Also this happened even after the auction ended and it just feels like the author is just copy and pasting to finish the chapter within a required word amount. Had good expectations but it was executed horribly especially too many face slapping scenes for a novel about a guy and his daughters
Revelar spoilerReview @ 85 ch: It is a slow easy going novel that talkes about a dad raising his kids, also the growth speed of the kids is a little stalled, it is expected since the world building itself is slow. The daughters actions are not that lame as it is stated. It is quite a good read that can really scale into a really nice thing to read. Spoiler down.. . . . . . . The things that causes the story to have potential are the following: System, daughters physic, who is their mother, and how will these kids develop. Things that are missing: Mc background, what he did when he arrived, what are the bounties he got, what is his physic.
hmmm i think it's good but iIhope it's not harem and the mother of his three daughters is still alive
Revelar spoilerHonestly good story but there is a lot of just repeating actions such as his one daughter getting it trouble, the arrogant young master whines to his father and the mc beats up the father for over ten to twelve chapters with only about two to three chapters about story building and slice of life between the repeating fights
Revelar spoilerThe MC is a beta male. He is the definition of a feminine man, just constantly showering his daughters with love, but not disciplining them when needed, so they always cause trouble.
the ending was so forced. I enjoyed the story. It was pretty basic, but it was still entertaining. the ending just sucked though. MC just ate a pill that let him reach the peak of cultivation, so he jumped like 10 cultivation realms in an instant, and his long-lost wife showed up out of nowhere. It's easy to see that the author just gave up and decided to end the story out of nowhere.
Revelar spoilerthe most annoying book ever, it's so painful just getting past the chapters it's keeps going round in circles, extending boring conflicts by entire tens of chapters
The story looked like it copied the direction of a movie from thrusting us between the story. The characters are not interesting and there is emotional hold on the readers. Same old cliche story.
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it started off great then around chapters 150+, it became the typical xianxia, oh you founded mayor son and kill him and now the mayor wants to kill you etc. The ending was so terrible, you could tell the author no longer wanted to write anymore and just wanted to wrap it up asap, which I suppose I can respect them for at least write an ending, even if unsatisfactory
Not as bad as some reviews here make it out to be. It's a cliche chinese op mc story and if you exactly that then its fine. Dont expect much from it, but its definitely still readable with mostly good grammar and mediocre story.
You might go into this novel expecting some fun slice of life, but sadly there is literally nothing in this novel other than face slapping. It's garbage.
Started fine, middle was slow, then the ending rushed hard. Ending was very unsatisfying. Lots of stuff left unfinished really. Characters left behind for no reason really, felt bad for the old steward. MC was very out of character in like last ten chapters. It’s short and readable though for the most part. Give it a try.
is there only 210 chapters ? I liked this story and I don't want it to finish without seeing his daughters wreaking havoc after they become strong[img=faceslap]
the story was slow for 90% of the book and the protagonist was calm and restrained. while the enemies were pointless vile and increasingly murderous. narrative mostly repeated the slap in the face trope. However in the last location, the character radically changed and became irrationally blood thirsty. Story was a nice idea.
good concept, bad execution. there are 3 character type only, the MC, the daughter/side character identify as friend, and enemy. every enemy are the unreasonable courting dead type, (always) friend are character that was help by mc in some way. that is it, nothing unique or new at all. world background is standard xianxia trash.
Very good! 💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💛💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚💚❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞
Unrealiable Dad ever. Why he is so stupid, can he not so loafty ig his strenght not enough. He souldnt go to higher city if he want low profile. He should just increase his power, before he moved out. Sigh.. I recomended another story with similiar setting. New Fathet: ..... You should know..
I vwry much hate Jiang Ping character. His mindaey still like modern people with peace mind. He has a syatem, this is his cheat. So why he cant be dominering. Stop being so peacefull, cause the world he lived in now not peacefull. This is where the strongs prey the weaks.
The characters are so shallow that I can predict how the novel ends. I went into this with high hopes, maybe the author can do something cool with the concept but he decided to make the ML a glorified janitor. Save your time reading it.
good story because thr character is so strong and character development is also good, i like this kind of story where the character is strong like this
The author makes the mc try to be low key, but he lets his daughters act high key. Why? so that when someone bullies his precious daughters he can pretend to be forced and start slapping faces. Plot? non-existent Characters? 1 dimensional Don't get me wrong though, I think it is an interesting premise. Just wish it was done better.
waste of time really. Complete Freaking waste of time ------------------- ------------------- ------------------- ------------------- ------------------
trashhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Started off fairly decent but when they started the auction part it became almost unbearable to read. There were whole chapters where only one bid would happen then they would waffle about gave the whole time and repeated this multiple times. Also this happened even after the auction ended and it just feels like the author is just copy and pasting to finish the chapter within a required word amount. Had good expectations but it was executed horribly especially too many face slapping scenes for a novel about a guy and his daughters
Revelar spoilerReview @ 85 ch: It is a slow easy going novel that talkes about a dad raising his kids, also the growth speed of the kids is a little stalled, it is expected since the world building itself is slow. The daughters actions are not that lame as it is stated. It is quite a good read that can really scale into a really nice thing to read. Spoiler down.. . . . . . . The things that causes the story to have potential are the following: System, daughters physic, who is their mother, and how will these kids develop. Things that are missing: Mc background, what he did when he arrived, what are the bounties he got, what is his physic.
very op with limited actual story. I did read it but it keeps getting offered for free.