Reviews of Avatar: Awakened Gamer by HolyJoker - Webnovel

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4.78

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IdontDream

Did he died in the war?? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

4mth
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Deathblab

Bro where are you pls I don’t have time today but tomorrow I will find out where you have vanished also the fanfic is really good just make it a little more challenging for the main character and it will be perfect

6mth
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ASUN
LV 2 Badge

Goodbye author rest in peace................................................................................................................................................................................................

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8mth
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Jerry_Magnuson

anyone know if the author is okay it's been a year now since the last update starting to worry

9mth
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David_Kretschmer

I love this story. perfect game mechanics, lovely character design. and the endless possibilities with the uncharted territory that Avatar has on its own makes me sad that this story is discontinued.....

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9mth
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RegalObscure

Very unlikeable MC. System works is moronic. This must be a crack fic.

9mth
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ActuallySatan

Amazing story work in regards to his Avatar fan fic however I am deeply saddened he dropped the story on a cliff hanger. He has many great works however the fact remains he might no update thus I wouldn’t recommend reading incomplete works of his.It’s like like watching a amazing movie before getting cut off half way due to budget cuts.

9mth
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EternalEden

A truly interesting and well-made story. A lot of attention was put into it, and it doesn't just follow the events of the show. The author isn't afraid to make their own events and does a great job with that. I definitely recommend this as a read. If I had some complaints it's that as the story goes on, the "darker" aspects of the story seem to become more and more forced. And doesn't feel as natural as it did before. It feels forced and a little cringy as the MC continually "wallows in his darkness". The idea of it is alright, but the execution is shaky. Later on, the author also struggles with the gamer system and keeping it balanced within the story. Because the system is so strong, the author has to go out of their way to nerf it...a LOT. All the points are put into luck because if they weren't, the MC would honestly just steamroll everything with no problems. The author tries to justify this by getting more spirits involved in the story and saying the luck is necessary and that only luck could solve it, but that is flimsy at best. Even after all this, the MC has like 30 different lucky draws he never uses, and the author had to come up with a pretty lackluster reason for him to stop leveling up so he doesn't just break the narrative.

9mth
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ZZZ85
LV 4 Badge

I read 62 chapters. and I will say there are a lot of loopholes and sometimes there is no logic. because in chapter 62 when the Faith Spirit comes to kill our Main character and you know how our main character survives he talks to him. come on man. and what he says. a lie anyone can tell that and I think the author just want to tell the audience that there are some spirit that can tell that our main character can change the faith

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10mth
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Saito_Ito

An excellent job! It's truly one of the finest stories I've read. The writing and character development are exceptional, captivating from start to finish.

10mth
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hasan_foraty

so story is good , too good actually but we hadnt get any update from Author for a year. and i don't think we will get any in future . story is unfinished , be warned

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11mth
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Aaron_Espinoza

soo... like are you just giving up on this story

11mth
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omiguh

I, honestly, didnt enjoy this a single bit. There's this huge problem that i have with gamer systems novels ever since this novel has been introduced to me. I literally struggle to read them, not because this one was so incredibly good that all the others will be left in the dust, but with how they did their attributes in this novel. They only leveled up luck which is so incredibly frustrating that i couldnt read it anymore. It literally turned into a plot armor story, I guess it's unique? by intentionally making your story revolve around plot armor but i just cant get into it.

1yr
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Deuteragonista

Estamos hablando de un reencarnado que toma posesión de un personaje secundario al cual le dan el sistema The gamer, y hace un mejor trabajo que el protagonista de la historia oficial, tanto que el mismísimo espíritu del Destino quiere detenerlo... Me parece que es una lastima que la historia no continúe. PD: El último capítulo subido actual es 105, finalizando el libro agua y comenzando el libro tierra.

1yr
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Animefan_1

Writing Quality- I felt not this writing quality was top notch man 10 out of 10. stable updates - I have no clue about this stable updates but it looks like he finished his story in a year so he uploaded 105 chapters in 12 months I don't know I can't tell how many words are in each chapter but I feel it was above 1000. character design - I felt his character was all over the place and that he did really have a definite personality he's calling ang for wanting to go save his best and only friend the next moment he wants to help all the children. I also think there was no moment where I could see him developed as character starting of the story he was cold by the end of this story he was still cold and manipulator maybe a bit kinder but I can't tell if that was even noticeable until he helped children and that to the second time he helped clean the slums was because of a quest. overall I don't think character design our character development was really well done . world background - I mean he didn't really build the world's it fanfic and avatar is always 10 out of 10.

1yr
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DaoistmkojQA

buena historia, espero que el autor siga actualizando.

1yr
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IamValenci

One of the best fanfiction stories I've ever read HolyJoker I wish you would come back, I miss your writing nobody can really compare to your style when it comes to avatar.

1yr
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Elfantasma6347

Es una buena novela con buena trama y muy planificado enserio me entristece que se muera por mucho tiempo ojalá algún día vuelva después de todo no muchas usan la trama para mejorar o expandir las historias volviendo las repetitivas y sosas al menos está no la deja así haciendo fácil llamar la atención del lector

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1yr
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Apostle_of_Noice

Anyone know what happened to the author? As far as I can tell he went dark on everything. He's not active on his patreon, discord, here, or anywhere. Didn't even leave a warning I don't think. It's not the first time he stopped writing with no notice so I assumed he was fine, It's been a long time so idk.

1yr
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EditorBr0701

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1yr
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Hriday_Shah_0417

The story is actually really good but personally I didn't like the later parts because the mc now seems to be obsessed with being the best and getting everything regardless of the means. I still liked the story alot! Keep up the good work!

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1yr
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1yr
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Mohamed_Jemal

😀I like it. it's pretty much a story of epic success and adventure.👾😶

1yr
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DaoOfcrow

Have you dropped this fic, or has something else happened to you. Because I really enjoyed it. EXP EXPEXP EXPEXP EXPEXP EXPEXP EXPEXP EXPEXP EXPEXP EXPEXP EXP

1yr
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SaboItik

story is good did some thing happened to him he just stop comenting and stop writting ? RIP love your story and characters and buildup to your story

1yr
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Deadly_bananapeel

PEAK. I just love the mentality of holyjoker mcs and that his ffs are kinda connected rip to Bro or smth, cause he suddenly stopped writing, hope you ok bro

1yr
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SrFrederick

This novel its so NICE, im not have words for explain this, im waiting for author not dropped this novel!

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1yr
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Barukhant

Fue genial el transcurso aunque con las botas espaciales pienso que podrias apuñalar al señor del fuego, despues de todo no es un animal o espiritu, su instinto debe ser casi nulo. Lastima que no estes On. Descansa en paz RIP. Adios vaquero.

2yr
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BryndenRivers

Good story, I just hate how he gets powers from other worlds. He's already one of the best fighters in the world after like 2 weeks of getting his gamer powers. He also learns how to waterbend but keeps it a secret (and rarely uses it). I don't hate gamer stories but if Sokka keeps getting new skills that are not native to this world, and he learns other bending arts, then he will have to keep it a secret from everyone so there is no real point in him even getting them. This story could have been a LOT better and more fun to read if he was just a god with the spear and chi blocking. MAYBE he learns waterbending but the whole multidimensional chat function ruins the story.

2yr
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IdontDream

Did he died in the war?? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

4mth
Ver 1 respuestas
Deathblab

Bro where are you pls I don’t have time today but tomorrow I will find out where you have vanished also the fanfic is really good just make it a little more challenging for the main character and it will be perfect

6mth
Ver 0 respuestas
ASUN
LV 2 Badge

Goodbye author rest in peace................................................................................................................................................................................................

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8mth
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Jerry_Magnuson

anyone know if the author is okay it's been a year now since the last update starting to worry

9mth
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David_Kretschmer

I love this story. perfect game mechanics, lovely character design. and the endless possibilities with the uncharted territory that Avatar has on its own makes me sad that this story is discontinued.....

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9mth
Ver 0 respuestas
RegalObscure

Very unlikeable MC. System works is moronic. This must be a crack fic.

9mth
Ver 0 respuestas
ActuallySatan

Amazing story work in regards to his Avatar fan fic however I am deeply saddened he dropped the story on a cliff hanger. He has many great works however the fact remains he might no update thus I wouldn’t recommend reading incomplete works of his.It’s like like watching a amazing movie before getting cut off half way due to budget cuts.

9mth
Ver 0 respuestas
EternalEden

A truly interesting and well-made story. A lot of attention was put into it, and it doesn't just follow the events of the show. The author isn't afraid to make their own events and does a great job with that. I definitely recommend this as a read. If I had some complaints it's that as the story goes on, the "darker" aspects of the story seem to become more and more forced. And doesn't feel as natural as it did before. It feels forced and a little cringy as the MC continually "wallows in his darkness". The idea of it is alright, but the execution is shaky. Later on, the author also struggles with the gamer system and keeping it balanced within the story. Because the system is so strong, the author has to go out of their way to nerf it...a LOT. All the points are put into luck because if they weren't, the MC would honestly just steamroll everything with no problems. The author tries to justify this by getting more spirits involved in the story and saying the luck is necessary and that only luck could solve it, but that is flimsy at best. Even after all this, the MC has like 30 different lucky draws he never uses, and the author had to come up with a pretty lackluster reason for him to stop leveling up so he doesn't just break the narrative.

9mth
Ver 0 respuestas
ZZZ85
LV 4 Badge

I read 62 chapters. and I will say there are a lot of loopholes and sometimes there is no logic. because in chapter 62 when the Faith Spirit comes to kill our Main character and you know how our main character survives he talks to him. come on man. and what he says. a lie anyone can tell that and I think the author just want to tell the audience that there are some spirit that can tell that our main character can change the faith

Revelar spoiler
10mth
Ver 0 respuestas
Saito_Ito

An excellent job! It's truly one of the finest stories I've read. The writing and character development are exceptional, captivating from start to finish.

10mth
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hasan_foraty

so story is good , too good actually but we hadnt get any update from Author for a year. and i don't think we will get any in future . story is unfinished , be warned

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11mth
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Aaron_Espinoza

soo... like are you just giving up on this story

11mth
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omiguh

I, honestly, didnt enjoy this a single bit. There's this huge problem that i have with gamer systems novels ever since this novel has been introduced to me. I literally struggle to read them, not because this one was so incredibly good that all the others will be left in the dust, but with how they did their attributes in this novel. They only leveled up luck which is so incredibly frustrating that i couldnt read it anymore. It literally turned into a plot armor story, I guess it's unique? by intentionally making your story revolve around plot armor but i just cant get into it.

1yr
Ver 0 respuestas
Deuteragonista

Estamos hablando de un reencarnado que toma posesión de un personaje secundario al cual le dan el sistema The gamer, y hace un mejor trabajo que el protagonista de la historia oficial, tanto que el mismísimo espíritu del Destino quiere detenerlo... Me parece que es una lastima que la historia no continúe. PD: El último capítulo subido actual es 105, finalizando el libro agua y comenzando el libro tierra.

1yr
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Animefan_1

Writing Quality- I felt not this writing quality was top notch man 10 out of 10. stable updates - I have no clue about this stable updates but it looks like he finished his story in a year so he uploaded 105 chapters in 12 months I don't know I can't tell how many words are in each chapter but I feel it was above 1000. character design - I felt his character was all over the place and that he did really have a definite personality he's calling ang for wanting to go save his best and only friend the next moment he wants to help all the children. I also think there was no moment where I could see him developed as character starting of the story he was cold by the end of this story he was still cold and manipulator maybe a bit kinder but I can't tell if that was even noticeable until he helped children and that to the second time he helped clean the slums was because of a quest. overall I don't think character design our character development was really well done . world background - I mean he didn't really build the world's it fanfic and avatar is always 10 out of 10.

1yr
Ver 0 respuestas
DaoistmkojQA

buena historia, espero que el autor siga actualizando.

1yr
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IamValenci

One of the best fanfiction stories I've ever read HolyJoker I wish you would come back, I miss your writing nobody can really compare to your style when it comes to avatar.

1yr
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Elfantasma6347

Es una buena novela con buena trama y muy planificado enserio me entristece que se muera por mucho tiempo ojalá algún día vuelva después de todo no muchas usan la trama para mejorar o expandir las historias volviendo las repetitivas y sosas al menos está no la deja así haciendo fácil llamar la atención del lector

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1yr
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Apostle_of_Noice

Anyone know what happened to the author? As far as I can tell he went dark on everything. He's not active on his patreon, discord, here, or anywhere. Didn't even leave a warning I don't think. It's not the first time he stopped writing with no notice so I assumed he was fine, It's been a long time so idk.

1yr
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EditorBr0701

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1yr
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Hriday_Shah_0417

The story is actually really good but personally I didn't like the later parts because the mc now seems to be obsessed with being the best and getting everything regardless of the means. I still liked the story alot! Keep up the good work!

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1yr
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Dick_Wizard

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1yr
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Mohamed_Jemal

😀I like it. it's pretty much a story of epic success and adventure.👾😶

1yr
Ver 0 respuestas
DaoOfcrow

Have you dropped this fic, or has something else happened to you. Because I really enjoyed it. EXP EXPEXP EXPEXP EXPEXP EXPEXP EXPEXP EXPEXP EXPEXP EXPEXP EXP

1yr
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SaboItik

story is good did some thing happened to him he just stop comenting and stop writting ? RIP love your story and characters and buildup to your story

1yr
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Deadly_bananapeel

PEAK. I just love the mentality of holyjoker mcs and that his ffs are kinda connected rip to Bro or smth, cause he suddenly stopped writing, hope you ok bro

1yr
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SrFrederick

This novel its so NICE, im not have words for explain this, im waiting for author not dropped this novel!

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1yr
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Barukhant

Fue genial el transcurso aunque con las botas espaciales pienso que podrias apuñalar al señor del fuego, despues de todo no es un animal o espiritu, su instinto debe ser casi nulo. Lastima que no estes On. Descansa en paz RIP. Adios vaquero.

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
BryndenRivers

Good story, I just hate how he gets powers from other worlds. He's already one of the best fighters in the world after like 2 weeks of getting his gamer powers. He also learns how to waterbend but keeps it a secret (and rarely uses it). I don't hate gamer stories but if Sokka keeps getting new skills that are not native to this world, and he learns other bending arts, then he will have to keep it a secret from everyone so there is no real point in him even getting them. This story could have been a LOT better and more fun to read if he was just a god with the spear and chi blocking. MAYBE he learns waterbending but the whole multidimensional chat function ruins the story.

2yr
Ver 0 respuestas
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