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Rubbish. First few chapters and there are already inconsistencies and signs of padding for word count. Translation is somewhere between average to bad, characters are not described and the world background is generic xianxia.
great better than every other trial read i read this time . . . . . . ... . .... .. . . . . .. . .
Need more chapters now. I will support you. Common more chapters. Your novel is amazing. I love it. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Already in love with the summary😍 , , , , , , , , . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . D W W W X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X . . , , , , , , , , ,...................
Review time, 7 chapters. (For those who need it) I am honestly disappointed. The sypnosis seem interesting and well, it kinda disappointed me. Like the sypnosis said, the mc needs to create wonders. But it's just blueprints from the system. It automatically create auspicious effects. The only people who believe in it are his own sect disciples so there is no actual story behind everything. All what the mc need is materials and the system will create effects for the wonder he creates. Then because the disciples believe in him, the mc gains the abilities in the said wonder. Very disappointing. World background is the same as any cultivation novel. Translation Quality: 5* (as always) SoU: 5* (as always) Story Development: 2* Character Design: 2* World Background: 2* Overall score: 3.2 Personal score: 1.5
Loved it...but it just....the plot needs to be more original ...not the main plot but the sub plots...if you konw what i mean. and also the writing quality needs to be somewhat improve.
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Surname Lin, First name Feng with a tag of 'siglefemalelead' hmm now I'm interested. jjnnnwjwjjjjjjjjfillerfill34fillerfillerfillerfille5f
Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic. Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic.
Well I think it is the best one out of this batch .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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looks awesome but probaly wont get picked so people whats the raw before its gone?
Definitely has the potential to be a very interesting read. Hopefully it gets picked. .................................................................
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Rubbish. First few chapters and there are already inconsistencies and signs of padding for word count. Translation is somewhere between average to bad, characters are not described and the world background is generic xianxia.
great better than every other trial read i read this time . . . . . . ... . .... .. . . . . .. . .
Need more chapters now. I will support you. Common more chapters. Your novel is amazing. I love it. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Already in love with the summary😍 , , , , , , , , . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . D W W W X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X . . , , , , , , , , ,...................
Review time, 7 chapters. (For those who need it) I am honestly disappointed. The sypnosis seem interesting and well, it kinda disappointed me. Like the sypnosis said, the mc needs to create wonders. But it's just blueprints from the system. It automatically create auspicious effects. The only people who believe in it are his own sect disciples so there is no actual story behind everything. All what the mc need is materials and the system will create effects for the wonder he creates. Then because the disciples believe in him, the mc gains the abilities in the said wonder. Very disappointing. World background is the same as any cultivation novel. Translation Quality: 5* (as always) SoU: 5* (as always) Story Development: 2* Character Design: 2* World Background: 2* Overall score: 3.2 Personal score: 1.5
Loved it...but it just....the plot needs to be more original ...not the main plot but the sub plots...if you konw what i mean. and also the writing quality needs to be somewhat improve.
We're off to the good start....... ........... ........ .. ............. More............................. ............ .................[img=update]
Surname Lin, First name Feng with a tag of 'siglefemalelead' hmm now I'm interested. jjnnnwjwjjjjjjjjfillerfill34fillerfillerfillerfille5f
Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic. Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic.
Well I think it is the best one out of this batch .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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looks awesome but probaly wont get picked so people whats the raw before its gone?
Definitely has the potential to be a very interesting read. Hopefully it gets picked. .................................................................
raw please .................................................. ... .................................................. ....... ..............