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The story was very interesting. I liked the different twists the story took. It's pretty clear that English is not our author's first learned language, but most of the story can be easily figured out. Very imaginative and interesting story with happy and sad moments to keep you drawn in.
The story is actually good and entertaining. Author just need to have the book edited as there are many grammatical errors and mispelled words. Also noticed naming inconsistency Lucy suddenly became Lisa.
Book covers get me hooked. Just like this book I am in love with the fl, i love her drama Kudos author I love the story development and as time goes on, i get more hooked I love this
So little editing, so many errors. Grammatical and typos like Ling Vials instead King Vilas and referring to the same character as cousin one minute and sister the next make the story confusing. The plot and world building is decent, the characters are solid. I’m interested and want to read to the end. But to spend more coins on something so frustratingly unedited seems like a waste of money. If it was free for a weekend I would read it all.
I really like this story so far, at least the amount I can understand. The extreme amount misspellings and grammatical errors make it hard to know if I’m understanding it correctly since I’m having to make guesses often. It makes it really hard to see worth spending coins to unlock chapters. So reader beware, it’s good but reminds me of a bad MTL translation of my favorite comic.
The characters are well-designed😍. The writing inside the book is of the highest caliber; it has excellent language and well-developed characters. This is my novel, please take a look here too, I hope you will like it.😋 "What was my mistake???"
I have really enjoyed this book I just wished there was more🥺❤❤❤❤it has action, history and so much more. PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The plot of the main story is really interesting and the side stories are nice to read as well. However, the chapters are overflowing with typos, grammatical mistakes and so on. It seems that in some parts the writer used a speech dictation program, so that words appear in phonetic form. Unedited, obviously not proofread, some parts are incomprehensible. It’s a mess, tbh.
The book is really nice and enjoyable to read for those so into the fantasy and history will love this.. I Just find myself loving reading about vampires and witches…,takes me to cloud nine🥹🥹😍😍😽😽📍📌📌author I so love this please❤️❤️😍📍
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the story is really good and interesting!! ihahaha i cant wait to read the next chapters! 😍😍😍😍😍🥰😘😘🥰😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😛😘😛😛😛😛😛😛😝
I started the book at night since the chapters were few and lost my sleep as I was to busy wondering what was going to happen next! beautiful story, interesting characters and apart from being a bit confusing for the first few chapters, the book is turning out to be a great read. hope the author will update more often.
The synopsis of the novel is catchy. As a fan of vampire stories, I would say that it is well done. I am looking forward to reading more chapters and I recommend it to anyone who loves beast-human love stories.
I'm always in for some good strong female character. And for handsome and vampire mlS, of course ;) The enemies-turned-lovers trope makes everything more dynamic, and one can't wait for the leads' next interaction! Good job, it's very entertaining :D
Great synopsis with interesting characters and keeps you on the edge of your seat even though it's just a synopsis, good work author! Kuddos to you!
The plotline seems promising with human-beast theme fused with dominant ML and a white lotus FL who's forced to marry him to save political limelight. However the plot is revenge - to- love and seems great! Although there are some blunders which most likely occurred because the author is non native. Such as 'your youngster's sister is getting married' which should've been (your youngest sister is getting married) similar thing goes for 'NoMan's land' which is a times capitalised while the rest times it's not.
Very nice read right from the start. The characters are intresting and the plot makes you want to read more. I will definitely keep reading <3
Hello everyone! Just to be little descriptive about the content, it would be mixture of the historical time with fantasy element❤ This novel will not drop, and please help the author by adding it to your library!🥺💘 As well, do show your support to win the contest as well🥰 Thank you so much!💯❣
Intriguing setup with the vampires as usual being the villains, except of course for the toothsome male lead. And Alice is a strong, intelligent female less.
The story was very interesting. I liked the different twists the story took. It's pretty clear that English is not our author's first learned language, but most of the story can be easily figured out. Very imaginative and interesting story with happy and sad moments to keep you drawn in.
The story is actually good and entertaining. Author just need to have the book edited as there are many grammatical errors and mispelled words. Also noticed naming inconsistency Lucy suddenly became Lisa.
Book covers get me hooked. Just like this book I am in love with the fl, i love her drama Kudos author I love the story development and as time goes on, i get more hooked I love this
So little editing, so many errors. Grammatical and typos like Ling Vials instead King Vilas and referring to the same character as cousin one minute and sister the next make the story confusing. The plot and world building is decent, the characters are solid. I’m interested and want to read to the end. But to spend more coins on something so frustratingly unedited seems like a waste of money. If it was free for a weekend I would read it all.
I really like this story so far, at least the amount I can understand. The extreme amount misspellings and grammatical errors make it hard to know if I’m understanding it correctly since I’m having to make guesses often. It makes it really hard to see worth spending coins to unlock chapters. So reader beware, it’s good but reminds me of a bad MTL translation of my favorite comic.
The characters are well-designed😍. The writing inside the book is of the highest caliber; it has excellent language and well-developed characters. This is my novel, please take a look here too, I hope you will like it.😋 "What was my mistake???"
I have really enjoyed this book I just wished there was more🥺❤❤❤❤it has action, history and so much more. PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The plot of the main story is really interesting and the side stories are nice to read as well. However, the chapters are overflowing with typos, grammatical mistakes and so on. It seems that in some parts the writer used a speech dictation program, so that words appear in phonetic form. Unedited, obviously not proofread, some parts are incomprehensible. It’s a mess, tbh.
The book is really nice and enjoyable to read for those so into the fantasy and history will love this.. I Just find myself loving reading about vampires and witches…,takes me to cloud nine🥹🥹😍😍😽😽📍📌📌author I so love this please❤️❤️😍📍
I like how it's going .. keep it up ![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
the story is really good and interesting!! ihahaha i cant wait to read the next chapters! 😍😍😍😍😍🥰😘😘🥰😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😛😘😛😛😛😛😛😛😝
I started the book at night since the chapters were few and lost my sleep as I was to busy wondering what was going to happen next! beautiful story, interesting characters and apart from being a bit confusing for the first few chapters, the book is turning out to be a great read. hope the author will update more often.
The synopsis of the novel is catchy. As a fan of vampire stories, I would say that it is well done. I am looking forward to reading more chapters and I recommend it to anyone who loves beast-human love stories.
I'm always in for some good strong female character. And for handsome and vampire mlS, of course ;) The enemies-turned-lovers trope makes everything more dynamic, and one can't wait for the leads' next interaction! Good job, it's very entertaining :D
Great synopsis with interesting characters and keeps you on the edge of your seat even though it's just a synopsis, good work author! Kuddos to you!
The plotline seems promising with human-beast theme fused with dominant ML and a white lotus FL who's forced to marry him to save political limelight. However the plot is revenge - to- love and seems great! Although there are some blunders which most likely occurred because the author is non native. Such as 'your youngster's sister is getting married' which should've been (your youngest sister is getting married) similar thing goes for 'NoMan's land' which is a times capitalised while the rest times it's not.
Very nice read right from the start. The characters are intresting and the plot makes you want to read more. I will definitely keep reading <3
Hello everyone! Just to be little descriptive about the content, it would be mixture of the historical time with fantasy element❤ This novel will not drop, and please help the author by adding it to your library!🥺💘 As well, do show your support to win the contest as well🥰 Thank you so much!💯❣
Intriguing setup with the vampires as usual being the villains, except of course for the toothsome male lead. And Alice is a strong, intelligent female less.