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oh one of the best tensura fanfic. definitly worth the read...........................................................................................................................................................
it was a fun read but u should have let evelyn his second it kinda sad to see her like that
First of all for context i read this fanfic till before the end of the first volume, the thing i really noticed is that you use timeskip too much that we didn't really get a feel about the chara feeling, emotion, relationship, etc so it didn't really make the story feel immersive enough, when MC parent died, i didn't really feel anything except okay... so he became an oprhan then when the truth about his teacher and friend come out i also didn't really care too much about it, even till a whole town and his friend died it didn't really make me feel anything. This is just my opinion but i think you should spent some time to make chapters about their relationship, you rushed too much with the timeskip, i won't ask about every single day in his life but at least make enough to make reader care enough about the chara especially if its OC since we didn't know their emotion enough to speculate, even with og chara in arc about training with true dragon you timeskipped it, especially the romance part with the true dragon, you rushed too much with the story.
Good book with an entertaining view. However, the rushing in the last tenma arc war killed it for me. it would have been better to go for a more comedic arc or trolling instead of the half assed take that the author took, especially considering that alaster was already op af. All the ending of the arc did was break his and a couple of other people's characters and offset all the character development that the author had provided for them. Seriously, half of the book was how he hates people who attack him or his family/friends because of what he went through, and yet during the final tenma arc, he did nothing when they attacked or threatened people he is close to or even how he says that he owes Veldanava and yet did nothing to at least salvage/stop the completely unnecessary war which he could have done easily. All in all, the arc was just a huge disappointment and ruined the book for me.
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hmmm .... what i can say is......mediocre just so so..........not 1 of the best but nice try...... just want to ask .... why parent are always dead in some novel???? Did u guys hate ur parent that much
There is no character development for mc...not even after his parents death , after he got to know his best friends secret ,after his supposed friends betrayal...
A estabilidade é boa, mas essa historia é um lixo, não se sacrifique como eu que ficou ate perto de acabar a história e continuou achando que em algum momento ia melhor. Ponto positivo, não tem harem,
the MC is great until his personality turns into a overly goofy disappointment. like how does having a child turn him into a dense over the top idiot.
great story, great character and good writing I love it ! DO NOT DROP THIS !!
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Author please don't drop this book I love it and I appreciate your work and please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 don't drop
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Not sure about updating stability as i have only just recently come across this story. But, this story is extremely well made, and has an actual plot, time, & effort put into It! So, If you’re looking for a non-harem fic this is your story. Want a gradually becomes Op oc? This fic fits the bill. Story that derails canon in some ways? Definitely here! Anyways, I’ve thoroughly enjoyed my read, and recommend 9.3/10
Прекрасно автор жду продолжения этого прекрасного фанфика и жду когда начнется канон Пишу просто так мне нужно 140 символом Рырклвдфжщуралсддяты плсдья ворщртвлышос к сшьривлдчливдф
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I quit like this story but my only problem is the veldora clone fight because he ’s way too strong. He fought against velgrnd and velzrad not to mention all the others when veldora is t one shot by velzard later on.
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I'm done with authors that think that only tragedies will make a great character development. I dont even care anymore about all those that have been killed throughout the first few chapters. They had no meaningful additions to the story that contributes in a good way that develops the mc's character development or even their own character development. Those side character are only there so that you the author have a reason to force the mc to become stronger. it such a shame though you had a good writing style. Though I'm wondering why most new authors don't understand that there are more ways to develop a character than them going through bad situation. I mean for example this fanfic the characters killed are only there to be killed and "develop" the mc. i mean what are you aiming for this fanfic, is it meant to be a power fantasy where he gets stronger than others? then why bother with useless side characters. if you meant for this to be a somewhat of a natural progression then why kill those useless characters than spending time to develop them more, make them more emotionally there and part of the overall story? i hope you improve, i love the way you write, and i hope you continue and be a great author in the future.
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oh one of the best tensura fanfic. definitly worth the read...........................................................................................................................................................
it was a fun read but u should have let evelyn his second it kinda sad to see her like that
First of all for context i read this fanfic till before the end of the first volume, the thing i really noticed is that you use timeskip too much that we didn't really get a feel about the chara feeling, emotion, relationship, etc so it didn't really make the story feel immersive enough, when MC parent died, i didn't really feel anything except okay... so he became an oprhan then when the truth about his teacher and friend come out i also didn't really care too much about it, even till a whole town and his friend died it didn't really make me feel anything. This is just my opinion but i think you should spent some time to make chapters about their relationship, you rushed too much with the timeskip, i won't ask about every single day in his life but at least make enough to make reader care enough about the chara especially if its OC since we didn't know their emotion enough to speculate, even with og chara in arc about training with true dragon you timeskipped it, especially the romance part with the true dragon, you rushed too much with the story.
Good book with an entertaining view. However, the rushing in the last tenma arc war killed it for me. it would have been better to go for a more comedic arc or trolling instead of the half assed take that the author took, especially considering that alaster was already op af. All the ending of the arc did was break his and a couple of other people's characters and offset all the character development that the author had provided for them. Seriously, half of the book was how he hates people who attack him or his family/friends because of what he went through, and yet during the final tenma arc, he did nothing when they attacked or threatened people he is close to or even how he says that he owes Veldanava and yet did nothing to at least salvage/stop the completely unnecessary war which he could have done easily. All in all, the arc was just a huge disappointment and ruined the book for me.
Revelar spoiler hmmm .... what i can say is......mediocre just so so..........not 1 of the best but nice try...... just want to ask .... why parent are always dead in some novel???? Did u guys hate ur parent that much
There is no character development for mc...not even after his parents death , after he got to know his best friends secret ,after his supposed friends betrayal...
A estabilidade é boa, mas essa historia é um lixo, não se sacrifique como eu que ficou ate perto de acabar a história e continuou achando que em algum momento ia melhor. Ponto positivo, não tem harem,
the MC is great until his personality turns into a overly goofy disappointment. like how does having a child turn him into a dense over the top idiot.
great story, great character and good writing I love it ! DO NOT DROP THIS !!
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Author please don't drop this book I love it and I appreciate your work and please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 don't drop
Next men .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Not sure about updating stability as i have only just recently come across this story. But, this story is extremely well made, and has an actual plot, time, & effort put into It! So, If you’re looking for a non-harem fic this is your story. Want a gradually becomes Op oc? This fic fits the bill. Story that derails canon in some ways? Definitely here! Anyways, I’ve thoroughly enjoyed my read, and recommend 9.3/10
Прекрасно автор жду продолжения этого прекрасного фанфика и жду когда начнется канон Пишу просто так мне нужно 140 символом Рырклвдфжщуралсддяты плсдья ворщртвлышос к сшьривлдчливдф
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I quit like this story but my only problem is the veldora clone fight because he ’s way too strong. He fought against velgrnd and velzrad not to mention all the others when veldora is t one shot by velzard later on.
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I'm done with authors that think that only tragedies will make a great character development. I dont even care anymore about all those that have been killed throughout the first few chapters. They had no meaningful additions to the story that contributes in a good way that develops the mc's character development or even their own character development. Those side character are only there so that you the author have a reason to force the mc to become stronger. it such a shame though you had a good writing style. Though I'm wondering why most new authors don't understand that there are more ways to develop a character than them going through bad situation. I mean for example this fanfic the characters killed are only there to be killed and "develop" the mc. i mean what are you aiming for this fanfic, is it meant to be a power fantasy where he gets stronger than others? then why bother with useless side characters. if you meant for this to be a somewhat of a natural progression then why kill those useless characters than spending time to develop them more, make them more emotionally there and part of the overall story? i hope you improve, i love the way you write, and i hope you continue and be a great author in the future.
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one of the best tensura fanfic I ever read. would recommend