Immortal Evolution

LV 5

Matt_pike

Will there be romance?

LV 3

Madwriter_2377

World building is so good. Although there are some cliche parts it's still okay for me. Mc isn't winp. Worth reading

LV 11

The_Mad_Titan

I would dub this a good read for anyone interested in a cultivation based book. It has good world building and an interesting main character. It's a well developed story and although I noticed a few grammatical errors here and there, this was still a good read regardless. Kudos to the Author.

LV 2

Rainandstorm

Wow, just wow, am actually so speechless 😅😅, This is amazing 😊😊

LV 15

Dao_of_infinity

I am raring this 5 stars even though I have not read it yet. I have read the synopsis and I have a request about it. I think that it needs a better explanation because I don't think it's that interesting because of it. If you maybe added a paragraph from the book then it may seem more interesting in my opinion.

LV 4

Mattigician

nice stuff, good job.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

LV 11

Faechan

The authors world background is amazing and his grammar is good too. I like Vikram already, hope to see more of him

LV 4

jdbeue

Writing quality is pretty good. The story is set well with good world background, and the charactar is introduced really well. This is a pretty good read and a well needed twist on gates and dungeons, if you will. It finally changes the trope on what they are

LV 3

Tanmay_Sharma_8360

Great Plot start .. Best wishes to author

LV 15

manpapper

I liked the story so far. What kept me from reading it was the quality of the story. Sometimes sentences doesn't make senses. Which make it difficult to understand the story and what is happening. I also don't know if it's me but sometimes it seems like it lacks detail and explanation to understand everything