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One of the few Lotm fics that are really good and to my liking. Looking forward to more of the chapters. Wonder how the MC will become Sequence 0 or Above of his path? And author please don't stop drop this.
I feel like the MC has little sense of presence, at first it was ok, but the more time passes, the more boring it gets. Klein appears too much, the plot of the tower built by Roselle is even more boring, the interaction with women is to get close without ever touching, the MC seems very Buddhist, Klein steals his things and he's ok, Klein steals his information and uses it to make money in front of him and he's ok, even the book that the MC asked the fool to check out was "censored" by Klein just because he used the relevant information to pretend at the tarot club, but the MC just shrugs it off without caring, the MC can get good things, like Creeping Hunger, but he just looks on without caring, overall he seems more like a passerby in his own story. Mc doesn't seem to have any desires or interests other than "participating" in the story as a passerby and advancing his own sequence.
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It's actually surprisingly good, as far as fanfiction goes. Even the raw mtl is surprisingly legible. I do have to agree with other posters though, that the sequence advancement is crazy slow. Ex. MC is seq. 9 at chapter 8, seq. 8 at chapter 27, seq. 7. at chapter 58, Sequence 6. at chapter 271, Sequence 5 at chapter 594, Sequence 4 at chapter 900, Sequence 3 at chapter 1077, and so on. It's definitely very drawn out.
I should've listent to other readers, this is just a frustrating read. MC is dumb, yea, thats the biggest problem with this novel. It stem from author lack of cannon knowledge and inconsistent plotline but it ends up making MC comes off as a dumb. Now, i wont have a problem if mc is a little dumb if it was typical xianxia plotline but here he choose the worse possible pathway thats related to knowledge and intelligence which ends up making the plotholes even more frustrating. Anyway, for new readers, only read this if you can turn off your brain and not think too deeply.
I've been enjoying it, but 250 chapters in and it should be called Lord of the Mysteries: Staying as a Detective. 50-ish chapters to go from nothing to sequence 7, only to sit there for 200+ chapters.
This is my favorite LOM FF so far. MC is just strong enough to keep the story interesting. And the author does his best to follow the style of the original story. Certain readers need to understand how immensely tempting it is for FF writers to make their MCs overpowered at every stop and turn. The fact that he hasn’t speaks volumes of his self control. In my opinion, a world building style that doesn’t break immersion because of ridiculous AU elements is what truly separates a good story from the rest of the garbage.
The best LOM Fanfic I have read up till now. The Reader pathway is really a interesting choice! Mr. Author if you are thinking about writing an additional LOM Fanfic, may I suggest writing a dark vigilante story where the MC gets contaminated with an beyonder characteristic of the Abyss pathway? I'd love for someone to struggle against becoming a monster while acting like the sequences demand it.
i love the story (though it might just be me missing TLOM) even though some of his actions could have gotten Klein killed but it goes to show how perfectly imperfect he is because if we had another MC as cunning as Klein then that'd be boring. i love the time spent on TLOM's lore and how his actions no matter how passive they were had invisible shockwaves on the characters and world as a whole. i love the world background and the writing quality (then again I'm no professional critic) i also love the fact that he used similar terms with cuttlefish which reminds us of and also makes us forget we're not really reading TLOM.
Весьма интересный фанфик, хотя мне не особо нравится происходящий здесь гарем но в целом терпимо, жаль что ГГ долго переваривает зелье. Ну в целом я могу сказать что это одно из лучших фанфиков по LOTM
Это было интересное путешествие, удачи автору и переводчику, я жду продолжения этой истории! ................................,........,................................ Сорян за короткий отзыв, я спать.) ......
Amazing i absolutely love reading it.This is basically one of my favorite lord of mysteries fanfictions,give it a try it is a good read.👍🏽
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I like it. Forget that LotM fanfiction is painfully rare, the interaction between MC and many of the other characters, especially Klein, is delightful. Its like watching a seasoned spy trying to maintain face while talking against a willing whistleblower acting like a acholar. Hilarious.
I actually love the original ending 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 so I don't need anything changed.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Story is pretty mild, MC is passive, many unecessary female character making it look like a harem but its really not. story will get pretty boring until you realized MC's butterfly effect already cause silent earthquake across the world in the background ever since he become sequence 8. His butterfly is large enough to fill the seats of tarot club. MC's pathway doesn't end with The White Tower or God Almighty, he doesnt want to be someone's king of angel and the pathway he chooses already has a god that's why story title is Mystery: "START" as a reader. theres a high chance he will change pathway.
It's a good fanfic, even if some of the plot can be questionable. I sadly dropped this novel, there are too many grammatical errors, phrases that confused me, mistakes like anternately calling a character "he" and "she" continually, this broke my flow of reading, like finding a bump on the road every few seconds.
I am a review like other reviews yay, happy face, sad face, 5 stars, more faces...
Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. I really appreciate the fact that you continue to work hard and post so thanks for your hard work and keep up thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters
I have enjoyed reading this, it's one of two LoM fanfiction I have found and this one still updates as of me writing this, the other one does not.
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this story is not about the mc going to be with klein , this story is the MC own adventures in the Lord if the mysterid. ... .. .. . . . ..
didnt get too far into the story because the MC is creating a mess of things and when he realizes what he did he just went and made an even bigger mess, he is basically a broadcast station for forbidden LOTM knowledge and cant seem to keep his mouth shut for even 1 day, but this is not surprising as he seems like a low key fanboy of the tarot club and fanboys are like puppies they are so excited to meet their owners they cant help but shit all over the carpet creating a mess for everyone 3 stars only cause stability of updates and word background (being a fanfic) with decent writing quality are saving it
One of the few Lotm fics that are really good and to my liking. Looking forward to more of the chapters. Wonder how the MC will become Sequence 0 or Above of his path? And author please don't stop drop this.
I feel like the MC has little sense of presence, at first it was ok, but the more time passes, the more boring it gets. Klein appears too much, the plot of the tower built by Roselle is even more boring, the interaction with women is to get close without ever touching, the MC seems very Buddhist, Klein steals his things and he's ok, Klein steals his information and uses it to make money in front of him and he's ok, even the book that the MC asked the fool to check out was "censored" by Klein just because he used the relevant information to pretend at the tarot club, but the MC just shrugs it off without caring, the MC can get good things, like Creeping Hunger, but he just looks on without caring, overall he seems more like a passerby in his own story. Mc doesn't seem to have any desires or interests other than "participating" in the story as a passerby and advancing his own sequence.
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It's actually surprisingly good, as far as fanfiction goes. Even the raw mtl is surprisingly legible. I do have to agree with other posters though, that the sequence advancement is crazy slow. Ex. MC is seq. 9 at chapter 8, seq. 8 at chapter 27, seq. 7. at chapter 58, Sequence 6. at chapter 271, Sequence 5 at chapter 594, Sequence 4 at chapter 900, Sequence 3 at chapter 1077, and so on. It's definitely very drawn out.
I should've listent to other readers, this is just a frustrating read. MC is dumb, yea, thats the biggest problem with this novel. It stem from author lack of cannon knowledge and inconsistent plotline but it ends up making MC comes off as a dumb. Now, i wont have a problem if mc is a little dumb if it was typical xianxia plotline but here he choose the worse possible pathway thats related to knowledge and intelligence which ends up making the plotholes even more frustrating. Anyway, for new readers, only read this if you can turn off your brain and not think too deeply.
I've been enjoying it, but 250 chapters in and it should be called Lord of the Mysteries: Staying as a Detective. 50-ish chapters to go from nothing to sequence 7, only to sit there for 200+ chapters.
This is my favorite LOM FF so far. MC is just strong enough to keep the story interesting. And the author does his best to follow the style of the original story. Certain readers need to understand how immensely tempting it is for FF writers to make their MCs overpowered at every stop and turn. The fact that he hasn’t speaks volumes of his self control. In my opinion, a world building style that doesn’t break immersion because of ridiculous AU elements is what truly separates a good story from the rest of the garbage.
The best LOM Fanfic I have read up till now. The Reader pathway is really a interesting choice! Mr. Author if you are thinking about writing an additional LOM Fanfic, may I suggest writing a dark vigilante story where the MC gets contaminated with an beyonder characteristic of the Abyss pathway? I'd love for someone to struggle against becoming a monster while acting like the sequences demand it.
i love the story (though it might just be me missing TLOM) even though some of his actions could have gotten Klein killed but it goes to show how perfectly imperfect he is because if we had another MC as cunning as Klein then that'd be boring. i love the time spent on TLOM's lore and how his actions no matter how passive they were had invisible shockwaves on the characters and world as a whole. i love the world background and the writing quality (then again I'm no professional critic) i also love the fact that he used similar terms with cuttlefish which reminds us of and also makes us forget we're not really reading TLOM.
Весьма интересный фанфик, хотя мне не особо нравится происходящий здесь гарем но в целом терпимо, жаль что ГГ долго переваривает зелье. Ну в целом я могу сказать что это одно из лучших фанфиков по LOTM
Это было интересное путешествие, удачи автору и переводчику, я жду продолжения этой истории! ................................,........,................................ Сорян за короткий отзыв, я спать.) ......
Amazing i absolutely love reading it.This is basically one of my favorite lord of mysteries fanfictions,give it a try it is a good read.👍🏽
it's good ......................................................................................................................................
IT HAS ITS FLAWS . ... . .... .. .. .. .. .. ... . .. .. ... .. .. . . ... .. .. .. ... .. .. .. . ..... .
I like it. Forget that LotM fanfiction is painfully rare, the interaction between MC and many of the other characters, especially Klein, is delightful. Its like watching a seasoned spy trying to maintain face while talking against a willing whistleblower acting like a acholar. Hilarious.
I actually love the original ending 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 so I don't need anything changed.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Story is pretty mild, MC is passive, many unecessary female character making it look like a harem but its really not. story will get pretty boring until you realized MC's butterfly effect already cause silent earthquake across the world in the background ever since he become sequence 8. His butterfly is large enough to fill the seats of tarot club. MC's pathway doesn't end with The White Tower or God Almighty, he doesnt want to be someone's king of angel and the pathway he chooses already has a god that's why story title is Mystery: "START" as a reader. theres a high chance he will change pathway.
It's a good fanfic, even if some of the plot can be questionable. I sadly dropped this novel, there are too many grammatical errors, phrases that confused me, mistakes like anternately calling a character "he" and "she" continually, this broke my flow of reading, like finding a bump on the road every few seconds.
I am a review like other reviews yay, happy face, sad face, 5 stars, more faces...
Great story and great chapters so keep up with new chapters and updates and don't drop this story. I really appreciate the fact that you continue to work hard and post so thanks for your hard work and keep up thanks for your hard work and hope you continue to update and post new chapters
I have enjoyed reading this, it's one of two LoM fanfiction I have found and this one still updates as of me writing this, the other one does not.
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this story is not about the mc going to be with klein , this story is the MC own adventures in the Lord if the mysterid. ... .. .. . . . ..
didnt get too far into the story because the MC is creating a mess of things and when he realizes what he did he just went and made an even bigger mess, he is basically a broadcast station for forbidden LOTM knowledge and cant seem to keep his mouth shut for even 1 day, but this is not surprising as he seems like a low key fanboy of the tarot club and fanboys are like puppies they are so excited to meet their owners they cant help but shit all over the carpet creating a mess for everyone 3 stars only cause stability of updates and word background (being a fanfic) with decent writing quality are saving it