My New Marvel Life

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TheAligatorFam

the author doesn't know how to portray the character and is very naive.

LV 4

Player0Kun

Story is good. Abilities he wished for are also good. But, my main problem is that mc is taking all of this as way to light. I mean he told Thor all about himself just because he was his favorite character, dude for you fiction has just became real and you are giving away info about yourself to people you just meet for the first time in life. I don't like how mc thinks of world he lives in as comic.

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SaikoYonebayashi

it's nice, although you know the conversation is a little awkward and all ,but the idea of the tech and wishes is quite interesting , it's just if only there's more chapters .

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Celectra

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marquise816

The paragraphs are too large and blocky especially in the first few chapters. Other than the spacing everything else was ok, enough to pass the time.

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NeaCambelt

Le mc veut renaître à 18 ans et aller à midtown high mais c 16 ans midtown sale débile et c encore plus débile de commencer à 19 ans et pas comm nourrisson avec le net il peut ce préparer au menace futur facile et il a du temps C un fic marvel pourri je déconseille à quiconque

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Mia_amalie

очень классное произведение очень надеюсь продолжения не слушайте тех кто спамит плохие отзывы 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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LV 12

Orzechos

The story is inconsistent. At the age of 25 he suddenly ends up in high school then starts a company and makes millions. If you really like the Marvel world, this story may be for you. If you are looking for something that makes sense, skip!

LV 4

LastGod

main character starts becoming cool... then he duplicates himself now we hav multiple MC's.... lame. This way author dosent have to pick who MC interacts with in the MCU he can just have the MC interact with everyone.

LV 4

HersheyHeist

I really like the story so far and I'm on chapter 33 I believe. the only knock I have is the inconsistent updates otherwise it's a beautifully written story thus far. If you are looking for something that is not complete hogwash and a Mary Sue MC give it a try. It is a beautiful story because it is subtle and simplistic yet very profound.

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Seth_Eden_5432

"Have fun with your work, and comments can't hurt you physically, don't be afraid and grow" -HelpfulReader.

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ANANTA

To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Suit with best material with lots of best defense enchanments, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer,Medicine and Doctor etc.,) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne(BATMAN) can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! 2. Since your fanfic is mostly like the Mix of MCU and EARTH 616 - Make to MC to go back in the past in The Library Of Calegastro learn all the Magic there copy all those books distribute to Kamar Taj and copy for himself as well make him go to Mimir and Yggdrasil to gain more about Runes and Knowledge of Various ARTS(Magic, Combat, Tech-Magic or Etc., just make it up also make him do the works to influence people on Earth to save nature through Tech-Magic to save Earth Environment To Make the Qi, Ki, Chi , Mana Richer on Earth than any other place in the whole Multiverse) of the whole Universe or Multiverse. Make him a Grand-Master to teach all people and future heroes in Avengers Academy(Combining all Kamar Taj, Kun Lun and other hidden academy/Sects) Combat Arts and Magic Arts - ( Manupulation and uses of Chi, Ki , Qi and Mana into various Arts ) especially on Earth as his base operation. Also make him transport Asgard on Earth as a part of the planet. But before he do so make him change Earth into full pollution free planet in Rich nature energy( Combine with Ki, Chi, Mana, Cosmic Energy). *Bring Yao(Ancient One) Soul back from Dark Dimension also make her immortal and ageless, oly making her stronger over time. [Last, just a small suggestion make MC and Yao(Ancient One) fall in love and Married.] Thanks! - Reader.

LV 4

Jkxngxz

I love this fanfic, I’ve always wanted an mc with empathic mimicry from heroes. Please continue to upload more man, don’t give up on this fic