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LV 3

Author yoy need to fix your title cause that's the first thing a reader is going to see and because they see that your title is spelled wrong they get discouraged in reading your work. Feel free to delete this when you fixed the title.

2yr 9

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LV 1

Osborn123

Terrible story. No other way to describe it. Since the very begining the mc receives all kinds of good things that fall on his lap, just like that and without any reason. He becomes Lord Slithering, gets abilities from the basilisk after killing it, gets a fortune with a simple visit to Gringots, gets very convenient proof of people like Dumbeldore and some other about ignoring the last will of Harry's parents, gets convenient letters that tells him about the truth with Petigrew, he gets a bond with a 5X magical beast, he gets a library filled with all the books that ever entered into Hogwarts and whatever Slithering left behind, does some rituals on himself that transforms him into an adonis with very powerful magic, he finds a wandmaker in knocturn alley inside a cheap store that happened to be the greatest wandmaker in the world and makes Harry not one but two new wands with who knows how many cores, etc... Well, the story is just like that. Everything good that exists simply falls into the lap of the mc without even giving a proper explanation about why that happened. There is no real plot in the story, or perhaps one could say that the story is about how the whole world bends itself at the convenience of the mc.

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2yr 8

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LV 1

GHOSTRIdER37137

Change the TITLE and the PICTURE!!! continue your nice story [img=mise à jour][img=mise à jour][img=mise à jour][img=mise à jour][img=mise à jour]

2yr 3

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LV 14

druiseeker

While dubious of the story due to the tittle issues, I have to say I was absolutely shocked at how much I enjoyed the story. At the beginning of the story I was a little weary of the plot devices used like the basilisk venom and the familiar and their use in character development, I don't think they were overdone. Thank you to the author. I hope to continue seeing where this goes. It have to wonder if the user interface on the uploader/author's side allows for renaming. Does anybody know?

10mth 1

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LV 6

kinshi

the main character is really inteligent and thouthful which i really like. Of course the autor gives some power up to harry through the legacy.

10mth 1

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LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

Bad fanfic. Anti-spam [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

11mth 1

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LV 14

RoseAmber

So far I am liking this story. Yes he does seem to have some things just fall in his lap at the beginning, but overall it's a good story. But I really like the synopsis because so many don't have anything or no nothing written about the story, so thanks. 🌹💎

2yr 1

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LV 15

SirSmurf

I'm not caught up yet, but so far, I'm really enjoying it. Harry seems more serious about his power and his future, which I like.P.S. Author: I can make a book cover for free if you're interested. I can give u multiple options. Just tell me what you want it to look like, the general idea, or if you just want anything that relates uniquely to the story.

11mth

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LV 1

Aslanaust

It is good. Don't drop it. Pacing does feel slow, considering how many chapters are about the same thing. The characters are a bit narrow minded.

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1yr

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LV 15

Derek_Cunningham

Good storyline and character development.

1yr

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LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

A bad copy of the original story. The same situations but the protagonist chooses worse decisions... clarifying, supposedly Harry is super mega smart in this fanfic. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

2yr

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LV 6

Phoenix1998

More please. This is quite good. ..... ..... ..... ........... ..... ..... ........... ..... .....More please. This is quite good. ..... ..... ..... ........... ..... ..... ........... ..... ..... ...... ......