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Now that 50 Chaps are up, I am updating my previous review. This is my first novel after reading webnovels for than 2 years, so except some grammatical mistakes. I would be happy to correct any mistakes if you readers point it out. The main reason MC is playing the VR game is for money. So, he doesn't have grand ambitions like be the top player, etc. The MC gradually becomes an OP character due to factors like future knowledge, some unexpected gains, etc. Everything he does, he plans it and takes no. of measures in case of failures taking full advantage of his perfect memory due to reason unknown. There are 3 main FL's that are really important characters. Yes, they will be in MC's harem. But, the harem matter won't happen for 200 some chapters and it won't be some stupid forced harem like collecting Pokémon. So, do give it a try even if you don't like harem. Some mysteries are there. And lastly, you can ask any question you would like to in here. I will answer all of them. Thanks For Reading My Novel.
I am up to the latest non-priv chapter, so here we go: Writing Quality: First of all English isn't my first language so this is from my point of view. There are some minor mistakes from time to time that the author fixes as soon as they are pointed out so I don't have problems in that department. Stability of Updates: 2 chapters per day is 5 stars as well. Nothing more to say here. Story Development: So far I like the where the story is heading, there are some twists and turns. I like what happened in the latest chapters (Don't want to spoil anything in the review so I will leave it here). Character Design: There is development in MC's character from the earlier chapters which is satisfactory for me, and from what I am seeing in the latest chapters he will evolve even more. There isn't a lot of focus on FLs in the early chapters so I think we will see more progress with them and side characters in the future. World Background: That's the only thing that is lacking in my opinion. All of the descriptions of empires, capital ciites and so on are kinda hollow for me, there could be more details later on to make the immersion greater. I will still rate it 5 stars so the review stays at 5 stars but the story is good enough to have overall 5 star rating.
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Honestly really liked it first 30 chapters but the moment it goes away from being just the Mc to the guild is when it becomes sloppy. The difference between the growth rate in power when he was alone and when he is with them is stupid. Another thing author was very focused on levels and details of the Mc but what happened after that nothing no show cased in level growth, 10*Exp potions never mentioned or used, which could easily give him a lead, another problem is he is a regress or but his knowledge doesn't seem oh so great.And lastly I feel that it was too rushed to introduce side characters as not alot of time was given to the Mc for us to develop a connection with so now if the Mc dies I wouldn't even care and could continue reading the story
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FIRST THING FIRST.!!!!!!! to any one that dont like multiple reincarnation then this is not for you cuz the mc is not the only ibe to reincarnate so with that out of the way this novel is alright not good, bad bad either if im to say 50/50..... the reason for this is i dont like multiple reincarnation novel. sigh... the author should put a multiple rencarnation warning
it's great but a chapter is too short ...................................... .,................................................. .............
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5 stars from me Truth be told i just randomly decided to read because i was bored and looking through some comments on an event and i saw this, and so i decided to read it. I wasn't really expecting much from the start and expecting it to be like most other vr games iwas actually quite shocked. Also another reason for me thinking the novel is good is because i took the time to search it click it and add to to library and thats not impressive idk what is.
I was just WOW-ed while reading this. As a noob in this genre, I want to praise the author for giving a detailed description that even someone like me can understand. The MC isn't OP from the start (just the way I like it), and I'm looking forward for his growth! Good job author-san! Keep up the good work! [img=recommend]
This is gonna be legen............................................ wait for it................................................................
Revelar spoiler
Go on and read it. ............................................................................................................................................
This is a really good novel, don't waste your time here, just go read it, kudos to the author on a job well done and i wish you all the best in the future.
it's a great novel ... quite a bit different from other vr novels ..thanks:) ...............................................................
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The moment I read Mario Bros and Mario something in the 2nd chapter I automatically stopped reading cause what the heck?😭. Anyways it's good but could be better tbh.
Good story so far, some grammar needs fixed. Keep up the good work i'm looking forward to you finishing it.-,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
The best way to describe this novel is: Potential. The first few chapters have laid a solid foundation for what could be a great novel. The only thing that could be done better would be grammar.
A good VR game novel. MC wasn't OP from the start, but I can see him become one. There's also some mystery. Author's writing is also improving gradually. I don't know if much of the concept in unique or not, but I am seeing some of them for the first time. And its really good. That's all for now. PS: Can't comment on FL as they haven't played much part till the latest chap yet. To Author: If you are gonna do harem, don't include more than 3 girls. Thank you.
Now that 50 Chaps are up, I am updating my previous review. This is my first novel after reading webnovels for than 2 years, so except some grammatical mistakes. I would be happy to correct any mistakes if you readers point it out. The main reason MC is playing the VR game is for money. So, he doesn't have grand ambitions like be the top player, etc. The MC gradually becomes an OP character due to factors like future knowledge, some unexpected gains, etc. Everything he does, he plans it and takes no. of measures in case of failures taking full advantage of his perfect memory due to reason unknown. There are 3 main FL's that are really important characters. Yes, they will be in MC's harem. But, the harem matter won't happen for 200 some chapters and it won't be some stupid forced harem like collecting Pokémon. So, do give it a try even if you don't like harem. Some mysteries are there. And lastly, you can ask any question you would like to in here. I will answer all of them. Thanks For Reading My Novel.
I am up to the latest non-priv chapter, so here we go: Writing Quality: First of all English isn't my first language so this is from my point of view. There are some minor mistakes from time to time that the author fixes as soon as they are pointed out so I don't have problems in that department. Stability of Updates: 2 chapters per day is 5 stars as well. Nothing more to say here. Story Development: So far I like the where the story is heading, there are some twists and turns. I like what happened in the latest chapters (Don't want to spoil anything in the review so I will leave it here). Character Design: There is development in MC's character from the earlier chapters which is satisfactory for me, and from what I am seeing in the latest chapters he will evolve even more. There isn't a lot of focus on FLs in the early chapters so I think we will see more progress with them and side characters in the future. World Background: That's the only thing that is lacking in my opinion. All of the descriptions of empires, capital ciites and so on are kinda hollow for me, there could be more details later on to make the immersion greater. I will still rate it 5 stars so the review stays at 5 stars but the story is good enough to have overall 5 star rating.
lol I'm so into this novel 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Honestly really liked it first 30 chapters but the moment it goes away from being just the Mc to the guild is when it becomes sloppy. The difference between the growth rate in power when he was alone and when he is with them is stupid. Another thing author was very focused on levels and details of the Mc but what happened after that nothing no show cased in level growth, 10*Exp potions never mentioned or used, which could easily give him a lead, another problem is he is a regress or but his knowledge doesn't seem oh so great.And lastly I feel that it was too rushed to introduce side characters as not alot of time was given to the Mc for us to develop a connection with so now if the Mc dies I wouldn't even care and could continue reading the story
why did uploding stop why did uploding stopwhy did uploding stop[img=exp]why did uploding stop why did uploding stop why did uploding stop why did uploding stop why did uploding stop
FIRST THING FIRST.!!!!!!! to any one that dont like multiple reincarnation then this is not for you cuz the mc is not the only ibe to reincarnate so with that out of the way this novel is alright not good, bad bad either if im to say 50/50..... the reason for this is i dont like multiple reincarnation novel. sigh... the author should put a multiple rencarnation warning
it's great but a chapter is too short ...................................... .,................................................. .............
Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :) Keep it up :)
5 stars from me Truth be told i just randomly decided to read because i was bored and looking through some comments on an event and i saw this, and so i decided to read it. I wasn't really expecting much from the start and expecting it to be like most other vr games iwas actually quite shocked. Also another reason for me thinking the novel is good is because i took the time to search it click it and add to to library and thats not impressive idk what is.
I was just WOW-ed while reading this. As a noob in this genre, I want to praise the author for giving a detailed description that even someone like me can understand. The MC isn't OP from the start (just the way I like it), and I'm looking forward for his growth! Good job author-san! Keep up the good work! [img=recommend]
This is gonna be legen............................................ wait for it................................................................
Revelar spoiler Go on and read it. ............................................................................................................................................
This is a really good novel, don't waste your time here, just go read it, kudos to the author on a job well done and i wish you all the best in the future.
it's a great novel ... quite a bit different from other vr novels ..thanks:) ...............................................................
👍 To fill in word limit, just ignore the rest Jkfzdjbljsdfkbhgkggdxdinkygdaxglyiykungfexybknurd hkbunfexhbkj. Few you era unhindered iomhgrewcyihomrgwrcgoinyergwcumihfrqxeihkmkxejhnxwerfjhbjhnbkgrwecvknhjecercgunkhjcerghnjkwercgnbjkrcwefhbkjfwcer
The moment I read Mario Bros and Mario something in the 2nd chapter I automatically stopped reading cause what the heck?😭. Anyways it's good but could be better tbh.
Good story so far, some grammar needs fixed. Keep up the good work i'm looking forward to you finishing it.-,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
The best way to describe this novel is: Potential. The first few chapters have laid a solid foundation for what could be a great novel. The only thing that could be done better would be grammar.
A good VR game novel. MC wasn't OP from the start, but I can see him become one. There's also some mystery. Author's writing is also improving gradually. I don't know if much of the concept in unique or not, but I am seeing some of them for the first time. And its really good. That's all for now. PS: Can't comment on FL as they haven't played much part till the latest chap yet. To Author: If you are gonna do harem, don't include more than 3 girls. Thank you.